Create ur own story - with SaJan n MayUr # 2

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Apoorva

@0o.Leah.o0

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Posted: 17 years ago

heya all !!!!

We have come to the secong thread for Create ur own story !!!

Plz note - This CUOSWSM has no relation to the prev one...

The starting theme -

We srt were the creatives left --

Samrat enters Gunjan's room to try and make her sing for the talent parade....

Mayank's mom is teasing Mayank with Nupur....go ahead guys !

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Apoorva

@0o.Leah.o0

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Posted: 17 years ago

NOTE ----

Plz make the story REALISTIC.....and whenever you r posting ur part of the story plz use the names instead if only their starting letters ( s, gu, m....etc ) and plz leave a line after each dialouge...

Thankz.

@p00rv@

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Melissa

@Melissa

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Posted: 17 years ago

This is my first time writing a story or to be more specific a part of the story......so please bear with me. I am not that creative or romantic.😆 As I hardly ever saw SaJan scene so I will go on with just MayUr part............

Mayank leaves the drawing room, while his mom is smiling teasingly behind him watching DMG. Mayank goes to his room and shuts the door to study...........He takes out the book and while taking out contents to start with the project, he thinks of calling Nupur and ask her how she is getting along with the project.

Here Nupur falls asleep over her book........and she has a dream............

Dream sequence...........
Nupur and Mayank starts to walk towards Nupur's home from the beach chatting happily.......

Mayank: how is your mood now???
Nupur: By God Mayank, I can't thank you enough for bringing me to this beautiful place......everything was just great!!!!!
Mayank: Good......now you can go home and try to talk with Gunjan again..........
Nupur: Yeah, I do have to apologise to Gunjan......

Suddenly Gunjan's face appeared from nowhere and she said 'bike pe.......'

The next instant a bike was standing infront of her with Mayank sitting on it. Mayank invited Nupur to sit behind him.........and giving it a minutes thought Nupur sat behind Mayank on the bike. As the bike started to move on........Nupur suddenly realised that it wasn't Mayank that she was sitting behind......the face changed into what looked like Benji's face...............😆😆

Dream end

Nupur got up with a jerk, saying 'Mayank'...............to realise that the phone was ringing...........

Edited by Melissa - 17 years ago

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Meera Patel

@meera2

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Posted: 17 years ago

That was really good 😊

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Apoorva

@0o.Leah.o0

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Posted: 17 years ago

HEY tht was too good !!!

lolz...BENJI !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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sonia

@miss.sonia

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Posted: 17 years ago

whahahahaaha 🤣

benji

good part some one connnntiue

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jia kapoor

@hrhr

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Posted: 17 years ago

On the phone

Mayank-hi mayank here

nupur-han mayank bolo

mayank-nupur mujhe tumhe invite karna tha

nupur-invite??????? Par kis liye

mayank-vo actually meri mom ki surprise bday party ke liye

nupur-wah tumhari mom ka ajj bday hai

mayank-han aur ajj raat ko hi hai maine sari tayarian kar li hai

bas??..

nupur-bas kya kuch help chaiye to bolo

mayank-han vo sammy ko tm bol dogi

nupur-le ye bhii koi baat hai

bol doongi

mayank-k bye

nupur-bye

nupur thinks about getting ready and

nupur-gunjan gunjan gunjan

gunjan-kya hua di

nupur-yehi to abhi kuch nahi hua

abhi tayar hona hai

hey bhagwan maine to kapde bhi nahi soche ki daloongi kya

gunjan-kahin jana hai?????

nupur-han mayank ke ghar uski mom ki bday party par

gunjan-mayank ki mom ka bday hai

nupur-han aur hume bulaya hai tu bhi tayar ho ja

jaldi aur han no bahana

dekh gunjan usne hame bade pyar se bulaya hai

aur hume jana chaiye

gunjan-ok di

nupur-aur han ye message samrat ko bhi de dena

gunjan-main doo???????

nupur-han plz itna to kar de na

gunjan-par di suno to

nupur-jaldi kar

gunjan calls sammy

gunjan-hello samrat

samrat-han bol raha hoon aap kaun

gunjan-main gunjan

samrat-oh gun jan

kaisi ho

gunjan-app ko ek message dena tha

samrat-ek kya lakh do banda sun raha hai

gunjan-ajj mayank ki mom ki bday party hai vahan appko unhone bulaya hai

samrat-bhai main to tumhare liye aaonga

gunjan-ji

samrat-maine kaha ji main appke liye aaonga

gunjan-bye

samrat-bye ji

in the hotel

gunjan?s dress

and nupur

sammy

and mayank

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kiran

@kiranheer

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey u written soooooooooo much nice hrhr👏

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jia kapoor

@hrhr

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Posted: 17 years ago

In the hotel

Mayank brings his mom and then lights turn

On and everybody clapped wishing her bday

Mayank-happy bday mom

I am using mm for mayank's mom

mm-ye sab tune kiya par kab

mayank-3 din se laga hua hoon

aur apko laga ki mujhe yaad hi nahi

mm-mera bday aur tujhe yaad na ho its impossible

m-acha ma ab jaldi se cake kato

all clapped

after some time

mayank-nupur aao main tumhe apni mom se milvata hoon

mayank-maa ye nupur

mm-oh nu pur

nupur-namaste aunty

mm-namaste beta

bahut suna hai tumhare bare main mayank se

badal ke rakh diya hai tumne mere bete ko

nupur-jeeeeee

mm-han ise pata chal gaya hai ki kitabon ke ilawa bhi duniya main kuch hai

nupur-bahut sahi kaha aunty apne

by god aap to bilkul mere type ki ho varna ye ye to bolne main bhi apne shabad bacha ke rakhta hai unhe dekh dekh kar nikalta hai

jaise ki iske bolne par tax lagta ho

sara din bas projrct ,padai aur assignments yehi pata hai ise

meri vajah se thoda dance karna shuru kiya hai

nahi to ab bhi vaisa hi hota

lekin ab jab ye life ka maza lena shuru kar dega to app dekhna

ye ekdum meri tarah mast life jiega

mayank-maa agar disprin ki zaroorat ho to mere se mang lena

main hamesha rakhta hoon 😆

nupur-kya kya kaha tumne zara ruko to

anty main ek mint aayi

mm-smiling -esi hi ladki thik hai mere mayank ke liye

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devilofkindness

@devilofkindness

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Posted: 17 years ago

#10

ok here's the next part....

mayank : arrey ye toh meri jaan ke peeche pad gayi

naupur : accha tumhari yeh himmat !

then mayank spots the staircase.....and hides somewhere before the staircase area

nupur hasn't noticed the steps.......oh no....she goes n is about to fall....i mean tumble down the steps....

just then gunjan spots her falling....and shouts : arrey koi nupur di ko bachao....plz jaldi koi usse bachao....varna di ko chot lag jayegi....

mayank thinks gunjan's joking....but samrat's there in time to subside gunjan dear's worry.....he shouts....mayaank....mayannk....jao nupur ko bachao !

mayank speeds up like a Rajdhani Express .....and goes down the fleet of steps and saves nupur from getting hurt......both thier eyes meet........

mayank : nupur tum theek to ho na ? tumhe kuch hua toh nahi ?

nupur : woh.... ( she's unable to speak anything as sh'e lost in mayank's eyes )