16th October Written Update[Detailed]

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16th October Written Update[Detailed]


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Saksham decides to inaugrate Shubh's memorial at the Ranawats' new resort.

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For those who do not have the time/energy/wish to go thru' such a long-winded update , you can check out the Quick Highlights : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1059681

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*Today*

At the resort

Vanraj uncovers the red-cloth covered memorial while the Ranawats and some staff members of the Ranawat Group are also present.

Everyone is surprised to see the statue which is an extraordinary likeness of Shubh .Shubh's torso is seen above the main stand of the statue and the statue's eyes are closed.

A two-minute silence is held for Shubh during which Mahen is glaring at Shubh .After this , the family members go inside but Mahen stays behind , staring at the statue.

Mahen (angrily) : *raises his hand and points it at the statue* Shubh! You cant do anything to me now! I am going to remove this notion of mine from my head , that I have seen you ! See , you cant do anything to me now ! I have turned you into stone...dont play games with me , I am a VERY experienced player....I planeed out this entire thing so carefully !....I raped Shilpa! I pushed her off the terrace! I put the blame onto you deliberately! And what can you do to me now , nothing!

Mahen turns and is about to leave when the statue opens it eyes and says "Mahen..." [So you see its actually Shubh , coated with plaster , who is having a sort of hangover of Hrithik from Dhoom2 ....remember where Hrithik stole that diamond by masquerading as a statue? Well , its the same here!]

Mahen turns back to see the statue looking at him.Shubh flexes his hand , emerges from the stand and comes out.

Shubh : Now that you are in front of me....chhodoonga nahin main tumhe!

Shubh starts beating him to a pulp [Mission Smash-Up Mahen : Phase I - Successful!]

[Mera hero!!!! Come on girls , lets have some cheerleading , GOOOOOOOOO Shubh!!!]



Veeru comes and tries to stop Shubh.

The family members come out on hearing the commotion and are shocked to see Shubh [ more to see him alive , or to see him coated in plaster , I dunno!]

Vanraj : Shubh....tum!

Shubh : Haan Dad...Main zinda hoon...meri maut sirf ek naatak thi!

Saksham : Lekin yeh naatak karne ki tumhe kya zaroorat thi Shubh??!!

Shubh : Zaroorat thi bhaiya! Shilpa ke gunehgaar tak pahunche ke liye mujhe marne ka naatak karna pada!

Anu : Yeh kya keh rahe ho Shubh ? Aastha ne khud Veeru ko doshi theraaya , aur ab tum kaun sa kahaani sunaane ja rahe ho ?

Aastha : Just as Shubh's death was a trick , so was veery's confession! Somebody else was the real culprit!

Anu : And so you know how much trouble and pain you have caused to all the family members by doing this !???

Aastha [completely enraged] : And what about the culprit ? The one who destroyed my sis Shilpa? The one who separated Shubh and me ? I have tolerated a lot ! and now I am not going to be quiet ! I will scream and tell everyone...that the real culprit is...Mahen!!!

[As if we didnt know]

Everyone is shocked.


Aastha catches hold of Mahen's shirt and slaps him twice or thrice.


[Mission Smash-Up Mahen : Phase II - Successful!]


She screams : It was because of you that my sister's life was destroyed! Because of you my mother died!Because of you my Shubh is now a criminal in the eyes of the world! Tell me , why? why did you do this???


Deepa comes and drags Mahen away from Aastha

Deepa [crying bitterly] : Why are all of you after Mahen? Why are you putting all the blame on him ? My Mahen could never have done this! Never!

Veeru [angry] : Your Mahen!!! Your Mahen tried to separate Shubh and Aastha! He was the one responsible!

Deepa to Mahen [crying bitterly] : Tell them Mahen....tell everyone that you didnt do all this....tell them!!!

Veeru [holds up a videocam] : Do so Mahen...and then I'll show everyone what I've recorded....all the things you said to Shubh

Mahen is shocked

Mahen [shouts] : Yes I have done this!!! I have raped Shilpa! I falsely implicated Shubh in her rape ! I did this! I pushed her off the terrace!

Everyone is shocked.

Deepa slaps Mahen and starts crying .


[Mission Smash-Up Mahen : Phase III - Successful!]

Deepa [sobbing ] : Why Mahen? Why did you do this ? Why ?

Mahen : I did this....because Shubh is responsible for my sister's death.

More shocked-ness.

Shubh : Yeh kya bakwaas kar rahe ho!

Mahen : Yes you are responsible! My sis used to study with him in London....she was mad about him and used to love him like hell....she told him about her love too...but he! He turned her down with cruelty and refused to marry her! Then he came here and married Aastha bhabhi!...She lost control of herself after that...I tried to console her ...but she had taken leave of her senses...and one day [sadly] she left the world!

Shubh : Look Mahen! I didnt love Sheetal , so why would I marry her? After returning from London , where she was , with whom , how , why , I knew nothing! Sheetal is the one responsible for her death...and you! Your baseless hatred for me led you to forget that you loved Deepa!Why did you hurt her? Why did you make her head bow with shame?!!

Mahen[angrily] : Meri behen ke maut ka zimedaar hai...tu!I wanted to see you hanged! So I did all this!But then..when Veery said he was guilty , I thought it was a trap to catch me...so I pushed her off the terrace!But even then you escaped from jail....then I hired the assasin to kill you !!!

The police arrive and take him away

Deepa cries with her head on Shubh's shoulder and Aastha also consoles her.

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*Precap*





Link : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1059796


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Updaters' Note No 1. : I know that the TellyBuzz article said that Mahen raped Shilpa as he had been attracted to her for long , but there was nothing like that in the episode.Mahen's reason for doing all this was his hatred for Shubh - as Shubh was , according to Mahen , responsible for his sister's death.So please do not think I have made it up.

Note No.2 . : If you have commented , or have hit the thank you button , for you :



If you have read the update , but not bothered to comment/thank , for you



Psst...dont get offended...its just a joke!



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Edited by Shubh_Aastha - 16 years ago


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eshaaax3. thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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m cant wait to see tmoro's episode, and this was not the way i expected mahen to be caught............... but im happy hes gone.now whats gonna happen to deepa????................

thx for the wonderful update di!!!!!!!!!!!!1

loved it.the smiley with the slapping thing is so cute..........


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shubh_astha4eva

m cant wait to see tmoro's episode, and this was not the way i expected mahen to be caught............... but im happy hes gone.now whats gonna happen to deepa????................

thx for the wonderful update di!!!!!!!!!!!!1

loved it.the smiley with the slapping thing is so cute..........




Cute isnt it ? I had anticipated sum slapping thing in 2day's epi so I had already kept that ready....

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Posted: 16 years ago
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quik question is shilpa still alive .if so who do they keep saying was pushed off the terrace???????
eshaaax3. thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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they keep saying that , cuz he( mahen) was the one who did it, not shubh.... well basically clear things up.. and yeah shilpa is alive..........

hope that helps!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thnkx So Much
Ur Updates Are So Decorative Nd Fun To Read
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank you for the update! 😊
Good job!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks a lot :)
Awesomeeeee detailed update !
Greatt=D
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you for such a wonderful update! I loved the last parts :))
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i didnt expect another girl to be in love with shubh before astha. the article did say mahen used to like shilpa, i was kinda confused about mahen's motives

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