Jabse

Just my 2nd try at Shayri😳 (the first try's in my siggy below😳)

Jabse mohabbat hui aap se,

Hum apne hosh hi kho behte.

Jabse chaha aapko,

Hum bhool hi gaye saari duniya ko.

Jabse mille app se,

Hum khood hi kho gaye.

Jabse yaad karna shuru kiya aapko,

Hum bhool hi gaye apne aap ko.

Love,

Sumra

PS: Criticisms are accepted as well.😳

nice 😊 sumra keep writing

Thanks Nikki........



......and now I know why you must have said what you said at CC under that khel khel topic 😳


Love,
Sumra

ITS UR OWN WORDINGS? IF IT IS ..ITS JUST AWSUM MAN....

Originally posted by: Neetaldesai

it's nice 👏

thanks so much😊

Originally posted by: taurasgal

ITS UR OWN WORDINGS? IF IT IS ..ITS JUST AWSUM MAN....

thx so much....and yes it is in my own words😳

lol....you won't find THAT anywhere on the internet😉😳.........sach mein humne woh likhi hai.....lekin pata nahin tha kaise hogi😳.....aap sab keh rahi ho that it's nice and it's awesome and so on..........it's hard to believe that my 2nd try was that good😳..................

honestly.....dil se😳.......all of your comments mean a lot to me😳😊..........thank you everyone....😊

Love,

Sumra

very nice shayari sumra...👏 👏
keep it up...

u r a awesome writer sumra itz really nyc keep writtin all the best👍🏼

this onez great too 😃
keep it upp 👏

TFS

this one is a little better . 😊

Best thing abt it,
it is original.
so it is a good try in that sense. 👏

but u have to edit it a little more.

Very Nice Dear Friend Sumra, Great Shayari !! Keep It Up !! 👏 !!