HEER'S FEELINGS

Hi friends .......from the past two weeks i have been trying to think how heer will react to prems sudden death......how will her life change.......so i am trying to put ahead some feelings of heer...i know there are no words to depict her grief and loneliness...but i just hope that you connect to it....do reply if you connect somewhere with her emotions.......

HEER sitting in the balcony......staring at the moon ....tears flowing from her eyes continuously.....just thinking what destiny has in store for her...... PREMs shirt in her hand and the flowing wind giving her the feeling of presence of PREM and his warmth ...as if he is whispering in her ears. .....HEER HEER !!!.........

The wind is making the pages of diary, lying near HEER to turn as if the wind is reading each and every emotion and mourning with her .............Without PREM ..... she has started writing her feelings in a diary as if he will come back one day for her and she will tell him everything .....how much she loves him and how difficult it was for her to take every single breath.......she imagines him everywhere ,all the time.....calling her, talking to her....... her life has almost come to a stand still without PREM ........

its been long since she had a peaceful sleep .....all her eyes know is ,to wait and shed tears ....she is sure that PREM will come and this time she will not hide her face from him and ask him to leave and they will talk through the night and pour their hearts out ......

she knows that he is watching her somewhere from the heaven and is praying for her ,to give her all the courage to stay alive without him.........otherwise she would not have been alive......she knows that the day she completes all PREMS and her responsibilities towards their families, her heart on its own ,will stop beating .....and again it will beat with PREMs heart in the heaven ....TOGETHER....PREMEER FOREVER!!!!!

wonderfully written its really fabuloussssssssssssssss👏
i loved each and every bit of heer's feelings
there are realy no words to express her grief , but you expressed them in your own way
its really awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

she knows that he is watching her somewhere from the heaven and is praying for her ,to give her all the courage to stay alive without him.........otherwise she would not have been alive......she knows that the day she completes all PREMS and her responsibilities towards their families, her heart on its own ,will stop beating .....and again it will beat with PREMs heart in the heaven ....TOGETHER....PREMEER FOREVER!!!!!

i liked this sentence a lot,after heer completing all prem's responsibilities , her heart will beat with prem in heaven
dono ka dil swarg mein hain
ya premeer forever and everrrrrrrrrrrr

very well written....jus loved the way u wrote abt her feelings....instead of showing all the craps, the creatives should show these kinds of scenes now....

beautifully written....i felt so sad when i read it because i'm also worried about wat heer will do when she finds out.....

Wonderfully written, lets hope that one of Ektas spies are reading this and decide to use your idea, i'm sure it is better than whatever they have in mind

very nice!!! Especially the end! 😊

i think ekta is building up heer's reaction to the max ... but wat if her stupid creatives can't live upto all these expectations and show us ordinary crying ... am sure additi will do justice to heer's character but i don't trust the creatives to deliver

Originally posted by: pinks86

i think ekta is building up heer's reaction to the max ... but wat if her stupid creatives can't live upto all these expectations and show us ordinary crying ... am sure additi will do justice to heer's character but i don't trust the creatives to deliver

I totally agree with you............... they have really increased our expectations.....while watching heer sitting in the ambulance with prems body i almost skipped my heartbeats.........