FF:Love Forever-Part31-Pg 141(July 4th '09)

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Hello my dear friends,this is the banner for my FF
Credit goes to Liana..My sincere thanks to her for all her efforts and for giving this beautiful banner for my FF.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys I hav read so many ffs os thought to write 1 too
Well this is my first 1.So please forgive my mistakes. And please do comment.I am not providing any character sketch but will introduce the characters as the story unfolds.😊
Part 1
The sun's golden rays fell on her beautiful face,enhancing the beauty of those soft lips and beautiful locks playing on her face. She woke up with a start.'Oh my god!! I'm gonna be late'she thought.Heer hurriedly dressed up and rushed to the firm where she was doing a part time job as a typist.

'you're late honey' said Veera with a smile.She worked as the receptionist there and she really liked this sweet girl who was like a friend to her.'Sorry dear I overslept' Heer went off.Veera looked sadly at the door through which Heer had gone.She was such a sweet girl.But life was unfair to her.

Heer's life was a total mess.She was the eldest daughter of a happy family.A few months a go, her parents Balraj and Teji Mann and her sister Meher met with an accident.That was when all the happiness went out of her life.While her parents died her sister was struggling in the hospital.The doctors had lost all hope of her walking again.Heer was desperately trying to make some money to pay off the hospital bills and to treat her sister.Balraj hadn't thought it necessary to take up any insurance policy.Desperate to get money,Heer sold their house.But still it was not enough.She now lives in a stingy house as a paying guest.Eventhough it has no facilities,it provides her with a shelter.Heer was a student ofABC college(couldn't get a name).With a natural flair for business,she was one of the top students of the college. Jai Malhotra,Balraj's friend since childhood, had offered to pay all their expenses.But Heer had turned down his offer.Jai desperately wanted to help them and was in the state to do so.But Heer would hear none of it.She firmly believed in solving her problems on her own(a little bit stubborn)

Prem was standing at the window,looking at the traffic through his cabin,but seeing nothing.His full sleeved blue shirt rolled upto his elbows,he was unaware of the beautiful picture he made.He was trying to concentrate on what his PA Ashlesha was saying for the umpteenth time.He finally gave up and asked her to go.She looked at him pitifully.

Prem runs a company of his own.He had borrowed money from an old man and under Prem's guidance the company had flourished and was rising to the tops.Now the old man has died and his son Rishab Rampal was demanding the money.Prem had saved it.But yesterday his employee had cheated him and had left with the money.Now he had only 1 week to make the money.Otherwise Rishab would take over his company.Prem was not in the least worried about himself.He can still survive He was worried about his employees.All of them depended on him and many were in the hard phases of their lives.Aur Jai uncle tho'

Prem clearely remembered each and every moment of the talk he had with Jai uncle.Even the memory of it brought all the frustration back.Jai uncle was his deceased father's brother and natuarally had turned to him in his hour of need.But Jai uncle had other ideas.

'Oh I am always there for you Prem beta.I will surely lend you the money.And you can take as much time as you want to pay me back. But..'

'But what uncle?'''Oh nothing really'There is this girl'My friend's daughter..She is desperately in need of money'but won't accept it from me..So,if you stay married to her for 1 year,I can give you the money'

'What? Are you out of your mind uncle? Marry a girl for 1 year just to get money from you?'Prem was fuming with anger..'Yes beta,from this both you and she will benifite.You will get your money and she will get hers.See, she will be payed for staying married to you for 1 year ,which ofcourse will be indirectly payed by me .The marriage ofcourse will be a marriage of convenience''..'And how do you suppose she will agree to marry me?' asked Prem.'Oh she will agree.It is her earned money.Its not awailable freely..'''Wow! what policy! She cannot accept charity,but she can marry for money!'fumed Prem'.'Hey none of that from you.You will treat her with respect.''''Oh you don't have to worry about that..because I am not going to marry her and I don't want any money.Let Rishab have his feast any take over my company!''Even the memory of that meeting made his blood boil.The nerve of his uncle! Where did he get his ideas from?

Prem stood up to go out of his cabin.He opened the door.All of his staff where there,discussing the current trouble their company was facing.Trouble was etched on their face.If their boss couldn't pay Rishab,then Rishab will take over and they were sure that Rishab will fire them all''Oh what the heck!!'saying this Prem re-entered the cabin.

Jai Malhotra was seated in his cabin.The phone rang.He smiled to himself.He knew Prem.He won't let anything happen to his staff.He picked up the phone.'Hello uncle'.what is her name and where can I meet her?'..

After the conversation with Prem,Jai grinned naughtily.He had seen Heer and had seen Prem and had thought it a pity that they were not together.One look at them and he had known that they were made for each other.Now if all goes right'.

So guys....dats it...please do comment





Edited by ashpush - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice idea do write ur first part soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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he he he...dat was my 1st part...forgot 2 write 'part 1'😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey!
That was a fantastic part!
Loved it!!
Do continue soon!
?xXx?
Sunayna
I loved the part about her not accepting charity but marrying for money..LOL!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome loved it totally!!
a totally different concept from what i have read till now...
do continue soon cant wait to read what happnes next
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi,

It's a very interesting story.......liked the ' Contract marriage ' idea.

Makes a good read.

Hope you'll update soon.


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Posted: 17 years ago
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whoa..totally different..beautiful..I didn't even realise when the first part got over..wanted to read more..pls update whenever time permits..and I really can't believe it's ur first FF ever..not bad for a beginner(hope I got it right)..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Hey!
That was a fantastic part!
Loved it!!
Do continue soon!
?xXx?
Sunayna
I loved the part about her not accepting charity but marrying for money..LOL!
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awwwww thanx a lot dear..will try 2 uodate soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: @nup@m@

awesome loved it totally!!

a totally different concept from what i have read till now...
do continue soon cant wait to read what happnes next

thax dear....will try 2 update soon

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