22nd September 2008 Written Update

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello people and I am back with yet another update. My apologies for last week as there was a problem with my net.🀒 😑

REQUEST:- Please do comment after reading my update as i really need to know your views. It helps me to write better updates. Thanks alot.😊 😊 😊 😊

First the recaps:-

Veer surrenders himself to release the kids from the kaaragaar.

Veer saves the girl who was thrown by Agni and gets injured really badly while doing so. (Nahin!!!! So much blood loss) 😭 😭

Veer tells the girl to go home and gives her a kiss on the forehead (Oh!!!!!!!!!!!! If only I was in that girls place, i would have given as much retakes as possible even if the shot was right. That would have been every RTbies dream) (*Ahem Ahem*)😳 😳 😳 😳

Firstly recaps are so horrible, why did they have to make this one so painful as well?😭

Veer tries to get up from where he was sitting with great difficulty. Just then Shyam comes and tells Veer that he wants to help Veer. Looking at Veer today, Shyam was reminded of Veer's father who would do anything for his people. Veer accepted his help. Shyam said that he knows a way to get into the kaaragar without the guards knowing.

Jaivardhan was sitting inside the kaaragaar when one of the kids asked where his sister was. Jaivardhan told him that if he wanted to survive he better keep his mouth shut. (Oh please!!! That wasn't even scaryπŸ˜†) Agni said that he would put some medicine on Jaivardhan wounds. Hearing this he slapped Agni (That wasn't even 1% surprising but it was very satisfactory.πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†) jai told Agni that the more the wound pains the more he will seek of taking revenge against Dharam and Veer.

Shyam takes Veer to a river and tells him that they can go to the other end without the guards knowing. Veer was about to go when Shyam stopped him saying that not everyone can hold such a long time in this water and also Veer has gotten hurt so it would be more difficult for him. Veer said that he has to go to save the kids. Shyam said that he would go first and see how far away it is. Shyam goes to the other side and looks out for the guards. He takes a rope lying nearby and ties it to a pillar. He goes back to Veer and tells him to go to the other end holding this rope. Shyam told Veer to pull the rope when reached the other side. Veer went into the water. Veer didn't surface for a long time. Shyam was getting worried. (If you think that he was getting worried, you should have seen me. I was biting my nails so hard that I don't have to cut them anymore. 😲 😲)

Shyam was waiting for some kind of sign. Just then he saw Veer shirt floating in the water. Shyam got scared and went into the water where Veer's shirt was lying. Just then Veer surfaced and was heading to the kaaragar. (What???????????? He isn't shirtless????πŸ˜• πŸ˜• Shee yaar!!!!πŸ˜• Kya expect kiya aur kya ho gaya.πŸ˜† En sagarwalo ne pura expectation par pani pher diya. Unka kya problem hain? Veer ka at least ek shirtless scene dikhana chahiye naa. Let him flaunt his washboard abs.😳 😳 😳 *Ahem* Ab se mein expectation he nahin rakhungi.)

The guards saw that Shyam was entering the water and shot arrows at him. Shyam swam to the other side. Seeing that Shyam was injured Veer swam towards him and helped him out of the water. Veer brought Shyam inside the kaaragar and told him to wait while he got the kids. Shyam wanted to come was unable to get up. Veer told him to stay where he was. He took a khanjar and went towards where the kids were trapped.

Dharam was in the kaaragar and was thinking about whatever Nivriti told him about his so called bravery plan of catching Veer. Dharam told Jaivardhan that its time that they release the kids. His war is with Veer and not the kids. Jai told him not to worry and that nothing would happen to the kids. Besides the kids are happy here and they are getting alot to eat. Maybe they don't even want to go home. Dharam looked at the kids for their approval. Looking at Jai the kids nodded in approval. (Firstly these kids are really dumb. Comeon Dharam. Everyone knows that you are not stupid. Why are you proving them wrong?)πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Veer is heading towards the cellar and was attacking all the guards who were coming in his way. He was slashing everyone in his path. (I have to admit, Veer looks exceptionally hot when he is in such a violent streakπŸ˜† 😳 😳 *Ahem*) There were some special guard wearing black costumes also. One of the special guards went towards Dharam and told him that Veer has entered the kaaragar and is attacking the guards. (Hey!! I know that voice. Its Veer. No amount of voice modulation can change my perception towards his voice.πŸ˜‰ 😊)

Dharam, Jai and Agni headed towards where Veer would supposedly be. Veer removes his mask. Seeing Veer the guards come and attack him. With only a single slash of his sword, Veer wipes out all the 4 guards. (OMG. That was such a cool move by Veer. Encore!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘) Veer tells the kids to move quickly. As Dharam was running, he stumbles on Veer's clothes and understood everything.

Veer, Shyam and the kids are in the jungle. Veer tells Shyam to take the kids to safety. Shyam says that he can't leave Veer alone. Veer tells him that this is a war between Dharam and Veer. When it a matter of the shramiks freedom then Veer would definitely take his help.

Dharam is walking on the bridge when Veer approaches him with a sword.

D:- Aaj tum bachkar nahin jaa sakte Veer.

V:- Main yahaan apne aap ko havaale karne aaya hoon Dharam. Main kabhi soch bji nahin sakta tha kit um itne gir jaaoge. Mujhe pakadne ke liye tumne maasoom bachchoon ko kaid kar diya Agar mujhe pakadna he tha, to mujse keh diya hota. Main khud chalkar aata tha. Main tumhe itne neeche girte hue nahin dekh sakta Dharam. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Hearing this Dharam was definitely feeling guilty conscious.

Veer knelt down towards Dharam and gave his sword saying that he surrenders.

What?????????????😑 Thats it.😑 Yeh aada ghanta kab khatam hua??????????πŸ˜• The agony of waiting till tomorrow. Nahin................................😭 😭 😭

Well thats it for me

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ANUSHAπŸ€—

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Posted: 17 years ago
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fantastic update............hope to see more of it.the last part was exactly the same...........πŸ‘πŸ₯³
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Originally posted by: rosefaree

fantastic update............hope to see more of it.the last part was exactly the same...........πŸ‘πŸ₯³

thanks alot. i am happy that you appreciated it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: anushababli

Hello people and I am back with yet another update. My apologies for last week as there was a problem with my net.🀒 😑 awwww dear πŸ€— it also happenes to me many a times πŸ˜†

REQUEST:- Please do comment after reading my update as i really need to know your views. It helps me to write better updates. Thanks alot.😊 😊 😊 😊 ur welcomeπŸ€— and also thank u for lovely updates πŸ˜³πŸ˜†

First the recaps:-

Veer surrenders himself to release the kids from the kaaragaar.

Veer saves the girl who was thrown by Agni and gets injured really badly while doing so. (Nahin!!!! So much blood loss) 😭 😭 😭

Veer tells the girl to go home and gives her a kiss on the forehead (Oh!!!!!!!!!!!! If only I was in that girls place, i would have given as much retakes as possible even if the shot was right. That would have been every RTbies dream) (*Ahem Ahem*)😳 😳 😳 😳 πŸ˜† omg kitne retakes k baad aap..santusht hoti anu ji πŸ˜•πŸ˜†

Firstly recaps are so horrible, why did they have to make this one so painful as well?😭

Jaivardhan was sitting inside the kaaragaar when one of the kids asked where his sister was. Jaivardhan told him that if he wanted to survive he better keep his mouth shut. (Oh please!!! That wasn't even scaryπŸ˜†) Agni said that he would put some medicine on Jaivardhan wounds. Hearing this he slapped Agni (That wasn't even 1% surprising but it was very satisfactory.πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†) jai told Agni that the more the wound pains the more he will seek of taking revenge against Dharam and Veer.

Veer went into the water. Veer didn't surface for a long time. Shyam was getting worried. (If you think that he was getting worried, you should have seen me. I was biting my nails so hard that I don't have to cut them anymore. 😲 😲)πŸ˜†mooh band karo varna macchar chala jayega πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† i hope nakhun bache hai πŸ˜•πŸ˜†

Shyam was waiting for some kind of sign. Just then he saw Veer shirt floating in the water. Shyam got scared and went into the water where Veer's shirt was lying. Just then Veer surfaced and was heading to the kaaragar. (What???????????? He isn't shirtless????πŸ˜• πŸ˜• Shee yaar!!!!πŸ˜• (oh shittttttttttt tumhre aur Rtbies k sare expectations pe pani fer diya πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†) Kya expect kiya aur kya ho gaya.πŸ˜† En sagarwalo ne pura expectation par pani pher diya. Unka kya problem hain? Veer ka at least ek shirtless scene dikhana chahiye naa. Let him flaunt his washboard abs.😳 😳 😳 *Ahem* Ab se mein expectation he nahin rakhungi.) good girl πŸ‘πŸ‘ do not expect then u get whatever u want πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Veer is heading towards the cellar and was attacking all the guards who were coming in his way. He was slashing everyone in his path. (I have to admit, Veer looks exceptionally hot when he is in such a violent streakπŸ˜† 😳 😳 *Ahem*) oye ahem ahem likhna band karπŸ˜† ab veer jo bhi karta hai ekdum hatke aur....jabardast hota haiπŸ˜† There were some special guard wearing black costumes also. One of the special guards went towards Dharam and told him that Veer has entered the kaaragar and is attacking the guards. (Hey!! I know that voice. Its Veer. No amount of voice modulation can change my perception towards his voice.πŸ˜‰ 😊)πŸ˜†πŸ˜†yeah veer ki aawaz toh hum kahi se bhi pehechan sakte hai kyun πŸ˜³πŸ˜†

Dharam, Jai and Agni headed towards where Veer would supposedly be. Veer removes his mask. Seeing Veer the guards come and attack him. With only a single slash of his sword, Veer wipes out all the 4 guards. (OMG. That was such a cool move by Veer. Encore!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘) πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Dharam is walking on the bridge when Veer approaches him with a sword.

D:- Aaj tum bachkar nahin jaa sakte Veer.

V:- Main yahaan apne aap ko havaale karne aaya hoon Dharam. Main kabhi soch bji nahin sakta tha kit um itne gir jaaoge. Mujhe pakadne ke liye tumne maasoom bachchoon ko kaid kar diya Agar mujhe pakadna he tha, to mujse keh diya hota. Main khud chalkar aata tha. Main tumhe itne neeche girte hue nahin dekh sakta Dharam. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ this shows that he still loves his brother n best friend 😳 me proud of u veer πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ itz onlu circumstances because of which he had to take such a decision to support shramiks...it was his kartavya..πŸ‘πŸ‘ veer go for it πŸ‘

Hearing this Dharam was definitely feeling guilty conscious. πŸ˜• yup he is guilty..n all this is because of that bloody plan of jai n agni 😑😑

Veer knelt down towards Dharam and gave his sword saying that he surrenders. πŸ‘πŸ‘ good step.... but donno what would they show next πŸ˜•

What?????????????😑 Thats it.😑 Yeh aada ghanta kab khatam hua??????????πŸ˜• The agony of waiting till tomorrow. Nahin................................😭 😭 😭 πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†oyeeeee kal fir se aayega next epi πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† so don't b sad 😳 πŸ€—

BTW anu...
muahhhhhhhh for lovely update...
with those vishesh tippaniyan...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
πŸ€—
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanku for replying rashi. mujhe lagte hain ki infinite retakes ke baad bhi main santusht nahin houngi rashiji.

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