babescape-its back--c pg 11..

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi ppl…..got bored of studin……so I thot I wud write a small lil fic….so I came to rf and after reading sindhus fic…I was like…after reading this who wud wanna read my fic……..new ways is bechari par thoda sa daya kar ke read mine……..i knoe its crap……..but phir bhi……

Unlike my other fics it has no complex characters or plot…….infact it's a chota sa nanha sa sweet sa fic……I am not continuing my tory fic presently coz its too dark and depressin and iin this dark time of my life (please read 'dark' as chem. Ka equations,history ka dates, physics ka formulae,maths ka geometry,geography ka maps,bio ka diagrams) neways so I thot Ill write something funny and cute…hope u guys like it…nd if it is crap just say that please……………..

Maurya,6:00 am—room no 9

Three beds…..and silence…..a sweet girl sleeps on one of the beds neatly covered by a blanket……her arms around her teddy bear…..and in her sleep muttering about not giving shyla her new pink dress…….

Maurya;6:15—room no 15

Three beds …..and silence….oh ok the scenes is totally different…..pillows on the floor…blanket half hangin from the bed ….a girl with red hair covering her beautiful face…..her hand clutches a book….named "return of the blood devil"or something to that effect……..wait a second……wats on the third bed???????ok nothing much…..just a heap of clothes…..which shud have been sent to the laundary about year back

Maurya;6:30----room no ???

Three beds….on one a handsome looking guy sleeps….on his face an angelic smile…..on his bed side is a picture of an elderly person..i presume its his dad….wait…hmmm…intrestin under a book lies a hidden a girls picture…hmmm the girl is pretty…I wonder y is it hidden????

Maurya;6:45---who cares Abt the room no (as if u r gonna go)

Three beds…the walls are plastered with well..ahem….lets just put it as some exetremely beautiful pictures of girls…..wait a sec….who s that???????a boy with messy shoulder length hair sits on the floor guitar in one hand…..and strumming it softly….on his face is far away look …..i wonder wat is it that he is thinking abt??????????

Maurya;7:30,school hall

Everyone wide and awake

It was just a normal day in maurya……..

1.Shyla and tia had fight…..shyla went on with her pseudo American accent and her wa-ow

2.tia threatened to murder ashi if she called her a timbo again

3.tia called ranveer a camel for the 46987th time that week

4. ashi and uv tried to kill each other…..(I really thot this time one of them wud die)

5.vrinda tried to calm everyone down and restored the peace

6.sid fell in love again for the …..mmmm..sry lost count

7.syla tried to seduce ranveer but he ran away….

8.pri had only 8 burgers(her new record)

9. debashis mitra(devil dushman) made some new rules…..(no sharing of pencils in class){ashi :next he ll say no goin to the loo…..if its urgent then do it here if u don't do it here then its not urgent….thus no need to got to the loo}

10.devil mitra ….(frnd of the devil) made a few scholarship students life hell

ya….that it I guess….just a normal day in maurya….nothing great….nothing good….nothing bad….just borin……wait a second….do u think I am a timbo??????huh??????y wud I want to tell u about a plain simple maurya day???????huh????well u see I said it was a usual borin DAY I did not mention about the night did I now???????????????
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Posted: 20 years ago
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fate i reallyt hink u rd betstet wirters durng studies too love dsi fic yaar
im w8ing for tori but dis is a gud subsitute 😆loved it soo much cnat explain wanted to comment each n every line but dat wud b too long w8ing for d nite very much now my nite wont b done until rea ur nite
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😆 😆 😆
i luved it its anything but crap lol 😛
👏 👏 👏
ya continue if u can na puhhhleeeaseee 😃

btw LUVED the way u described the word "dark"........in ur intro to the fic 😆 😆 i completely n totally agree on tht 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
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please read 'dark' as chem. Ka equations,history ka dates, physics ka formulae,maths ka geometry,geography ka maps,bio ka diagrams-----gt d meaning of dark nicely😆
……her arms around her teddy bear…..and in her sleep muttering about not giving shyla her new pink dress…….
soo sweetly described
…who cares Abt the room no (as if u r gonna go)
the walls are plastered with well..ahem….lets just put it as some exetremely beautiful pictures of girls--dis is soo true😆
1.Shyla and tia had fight…..shyla went on with her pseudo American accent and her wa-ow

2.tia threatened to murder ashi if she called her a timbo again

3.tia called ranveer a camel for the 46987th time that week

4. ashi and uv tried to kill each other…..(I really thot this time one of them wud die)

5.vrinda tried to calm everyone down and restored the peace

6.sid fell in love again for the …..mmmm..sry lost count

7.syla tried to seduce ranveer but he ran away….

8.pri had only 8 burgers(her new record)

9. debashis mitra(devil dushman) made some new rules…..(no sharing of pencils in class){ashi :next he ll say no goin to the loo…..if its urgent then do it here if u don't do it here then its not urgent….thus no need to got to the loo}

10.devil mitra ….(frnd of the devil) made a few scholarship students life hell

U GT ME SPILTS IN DIS PART MY MOM THINKS I HAVE GT SOME FITS TURNING MAD DAY BY DAY FELL FRM D CHAIR HIT MY TABLE TOP ITS PAINNG BUT CANT STOP LAUGHING me turning really mad 😆oww now my tsomachs hurting badl😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😆 o god dis is gr8 yaar tia 😆 😆 😆

tia called ranver a camel 46987th time 😆

ashi and yuvi tried 2 kill each other 😆

but the best part was shyla trying 2 seduce ranver and he ran away 😆 wish dis happens in remix 2 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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it's soo kool tia
pls write more
this fic rocks!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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ohh.so this is the sweet fic u were talkin abt...n guess wat..u were ritee...it is sweet..
specially the part abt messy haired guy strummin a guitar 😳

tiaa..u write awesumly....few ppl can write humour as well as pyschic fiction
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: hellraiser

ohh.so this is the sweet fic u were talkin abt...n guess wat..u were ritee...it is sweet..
specially the part abt messy haired guy strummin a guitar 😳

tiaa..u write awesumly....few ppl can write humour as well as pyschic fiction


yes sindhu

fates a very versatile writer much better than all of us
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Posted: 20 years ago
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shes an allrounder writer hey wanna xchange a lil brain i wanna write dat well too!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Tia 😆 😆 Awesum dude. 😆 👏 👏 . it was hillarious and perfect. 😆 😉 . Keep it up. I really luved it. 😳

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