ff the DEAL pt 1 pg 1

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Posted: 16 years ago
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the deal hey guys well um srry 😭coz i did not complete this ff well i did not coz i was jus getting a bit to lazy 🥱or was getting 2 buzy reading other gr8 ff's 😆 well i promise this time i will continue😊😊
part 1
sitting alone on the hosp bed tears streaming down her face,as she remembered the time she spent with him her love her life but know after that one incident her life was destroyed will he ever love her??? why did this always happen with her she lived her childhood in loneliness and now ?? wat?? starying into space she remembered the past 2yrs
~FLASHBACK~
she was standing in the gallery her gallery she always dreamt
of opening her own art gallery after living in the orpanage in loneliness she wanted a change if this went write she would be rich livin a happy life with loved ones....not that the sisters in the orpanage did not love her but sumthing was missing
'RIDDHIMAAAAAA'
coming out of her thouights she saw her best friendz atul and angie standing in front of her
R 'hey guys, thaznx for cuming early help me put these paintings na?'
AA'ya sure'
angie'ridzi uk so happy fr u 2day ur dream will cum true'
atul'ya ridz same as angie um also very happy for u'
angie'atul(very sweetly)'
atul'ya angie'
angie'SHUTUP!!'
ridz 'HA HA sooooooo chweet'
angie'OMG look at the time no more talking start the wrk we have
only 1/2 an hour more'
atul'wat?'
ridz'cum on hurry up'
sum other place.........
rahul enters a very messy room filled with magsines of bikes and gals
and chips all over and clothes and books all overr the place and in the middle in a huge kingsize bed lay a hot hunk rahul sighs and goes over to the bed
rah'yaar armaan ut na get up'pulling the sheet of him
armi'wat happened baby'pulling rahul with him in bed
rah'WTF!! armaan i am rahul!!!!'
armi'huh?? huh? wat are u doing with me in bed??'
rah'u pulled me in!!! and ur "BABY" left in the morming when u called her ria'
armi'then wat does she want me to call her TIA???'
rah'ya coz thats her name now get ur ass of the bed and get ready'
armi'ya ya but for wat??'
rah'therez a new ART GALLERY AND I WANT TO GO!!!!'
armi 'ya sure but when did u get u start going to exbitions'
rah 'woh...um..i.i.mein...mein..mein'
armi'ok watever um going to change till then u think wat u want to tell me ok..........mothergoat'
rah'ya ya ...wat did u say?//WTF ...armi cum here'
armi 'too bad um in the bathroom'
rah'i'll see u'
armi'ya ya'
10 mnin later....
armi comes dressed in old blue jeans and a white transperent shirt loosking hot they left on the way..........
armi'sooooooooo now why we goin there'
rah'well ...i....um...a...'
armi'RAHUUUL!!!!'
rah'k...kk...well a muski is comin'
armi'ha ha ha u actually like haer '
rah'ya'
oki lets go as they set out for a journey that wuld change their lives for eva..............
plz plz pl z comment i wuld cont only if i get max 6 comments

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great Work. Iliked armaan character as mastikhor n dude. Pls continue, anpine me when u update it i loved it
Richa
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice But FF should Open In Fan Fiction Section Not In General Discussion Section..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ram*

Nice But FF should Open In Fan Fiction Section Not In General Discussion Section..



GOOD YAAR PLS CONTINUED


-Crimson- thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#5
hey it is very nice
pls continue
-Crimson- thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#6
plss continue
ur idea is very nice
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Posted: 16 years ago
#7
great ff 😊 ! please update fast ...............😉

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