FF: Will True Love Win?update pt-24/pg-18

"Hi All... I am restarting this ff... earlier I had written it under the userid kpadhy_2002 as i had lost this id...Since i got it back so i wanted to continue with my old id..."

I know many of us feel that KS has lost its charm' Maybe but for me
KS Forum on IF has maintained the chemistry of Jai-Bani for me'

The amazing FFs that I still get a chance to read attract me
to this forum..

So I decided to try and write one too..

I am outlining the story for you guys.. Do tell me if you guys like
it or not...

If you guys like it then I would like to continue with it..
Waiting for your comments..

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Character Sketch:

Jai Walia: 29 yr old.. Loved his family.. Was a business tycoon...
And after his father joining his father he took their business
i.e. Walia Groups of Industries.. to the heights of success.

Uday Walia: Jai's Father... 50 yr old...

Krishna Walia: Jai's Mom... 48 yr old...

Jigyasa Walia: 23 yr old.. Jai's sister.. A nice person by heart
and very protective about her family won't leave the person
would try to hurt her family.. she was pursuing her
graduation in 2^nd yr..

Ranveer Walia: 27 yr old.. Jai's brother.. A good natured but
a reserved and shy person.. He also worked in WGI.. He is very close
to his brother..

Bani Dixit: Daughter of Late Nishikant Dixit.. 26 yr old.. A sweet
natured person.. Has a good business sense.. and yet a very
homely person.. She is worked at DGI (Dixit Groups of Industries..)

Aditya Dixit: 28 yr old.. Bani's brother.. loves his sister
very dearly..

Rano Dixit: 21 yr old.. Bani's sister.. A good natured person..she was pursuing her graduation in 1^st yr.. Very studious...

Pia Dixit: 23 yr old's Bani's sister..
Jigyasa and Pia were best of friends.. she is pursuing her
graduation in 2^nd yr...

Tarun Shlok: Jai and Aditya's best friend and a very famous lawyer... 28 yr old...

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Storyline:

Jai and Bani's family had been friends for the past 25 years...

Nishikant and Kiran Dixit died in a car accident when Bani
was 24 yr old.. After them she and Aditya had made it a point
that Pia and Rano never felt their absence..

Jai and Aditya were best of friends.. And work together..

Ranveer and Bani are best friends.. Only Bani could pass through
his reserved and shy nature..

Bani has hero-worshipped Jai from the age of 10.. And loved
him very dearly.. For Jai
she was a great friend and a very caring person and his
best friend's younger sister.. Ranveer is the only one who
know sabout Bani's feeling..

They were also neighbors..

Bani always took life as it came and is very fun-loving...
To her the past is past you can't change it
so why remember it..

Whereas Jai was a hard cookie to crack but only very few people
knew the actual fun-loving, musical Jai.. He had a past..
A past that had made him bitter and he has lost trust in love..

Fate brings them together in a situation which changes their
destiny.. Will Bani be able to change Jai's notion
about love.. Will Jai ever come to know about Bani's
feelings for him..?

So do you guys think I should continue... If yes please
leave your comments...

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Hi

PART 1'

Both the Walias and Dixits were having dinner at
Walia Mansion.
Every day the two families had dinner together.

Uday: Aditya beta, I am very pleased with the
way you and Jai have handled the New York deal...
I had lost hope for it' Good job son'

Aditya: Thank you, Bade Pa'

Uday: I was thinking ki'

Krishna: Come on Uday; please don't discuss
business at dinner table'
This is the only time when we sit together
as a family and her also you have started
discussing business' Not done'Aur waise bi
I wanted to discuss something important with
you and Adi and Jai

Uday: Sorry Baba' My mistake' and gave her an
affectionate smile'

Krishna: But where is Jai' He knows that
I don't like him missing family dinner'
Uff this boy naa'

Bani: Badi Ma' He had a call from London'
tho he is attending that'

Krishna smiled at her and said: You look after
us so well'what will we do when you leave us'

Bani was a bit confused: Leave you' But
where am I going'

Jai came and took his seat at the dinner
table and said: Who is going where Maa'

Krishna: I wanted to talk abt this to you guys only'
Today a very good alliance came for Bani'
These people are well established,
and are from our business circle only'
I am talking about Saxena's'

Ranveer looked at bani and saw her
shocked expression' He knew what she was
thinking and deeded to say something...

Ranveer: Maa whats the hurry in Bani's marriage'

Krishna: Aaare the marriage proposal is good'
These people are nice'Tho whats the problem'

Uday: What you said I also agree with you
Krishna' And I also know them'
They are nice people' What do you have to say
Aditya beta'

Aditya: whatever you think is right' I know
you always wish good for her'

Krishna: Woh Vishal Saxena hai na' He was with
you in college na Jai' What sort of a person
is he'

Jai: Vishal is a nice person' What do you have
to say Aditya'

Aditya: No harm in meeting once'

Bani had already finished her dinner' She got
up n excused herself
saying she would go and check the desserts'

Jai: Ma did you ask Bani about this'Because
from her expression
I think she also was surprised' We should
atleast know na what
she has to say'.After all its her life'?

Krishna: No but I will ask after dinner

Ranveer: Maa don't mind par I will talk with Bani'

Krishna: ok'

Everyone retired to their own work'Dixits went to
their house' Ranveer decided to go and have a word
with Bani'

Bani was sitting in her balcony and staring at the moon'

Ranveer: Bunny'. And put his hand on her shoulder and
turned her around'

Bani's eyes were filled with tears'

Ranveer: Let me talk to Ma'. And tell her that the girl
she likes so much and considers the family lucky into which
she will go as daughter in law' actually loves her elder son so
dearly' Just say yes once Bani I will manage everything
for you'

Bani: He doesn't loves me Veer' For him I am just Adi
Bhaiya's sister' And a very good friend' In the past 3 yrs
we have become great friends'
I may not share the same bond of friendship that I share with
you but yet I hold Jai's and my friendship very dear to my heart'.
And moreover it's not necessary that if we love someone he
should love u also' And I don't want to lose his friendship'
Anyways everyone seems happy with this marriage proposal'
So let it be naa'I will meet them tomorrow' Promise me Veer
you won't tell anyone anything'

Ranveer was disheartened' He had hoped he would convince her' But
she was as stubborn as his brother' His brother wasn't willing to
let go of past and move ahead and Bani wasn't willing to confess
her love for him' Maybe faith had something stored for them'
Thinking this he said good night to Bani and went home'.

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Please do leave your comments' Did you like it or not'''

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Will Jai come to know about Bani's feeling for him'?

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Part 2:

Ranveer was very disappointed after hearing no from Bani' He had hoped that
he would convince her and that she would express her feelings to Jai' With this
disappointment in heart he went back to his home n decided to find a solution for
it in the morning'

When he reached his room his mother was waiting for him there'

Ranveer: Aare Maa' You are still awake'

Krishna: Actually I was very curious to know as to what Bani had to say'.
She is such a nice kid' I want her to settle down'

Ranveer came and sat near his mothers and laid his head in her lap'
Krishna soon realized that something was bothering him'.

Krishna: Whats it son' Is everything okie'

Ranveer: Maa' If u find Bani so nice n gud then why cant u make her ur Bahu(daughter
in law)'.

Krishna lifted his head n looked at him n said: I thought you were just friends' I didn't
knew you liked her'.

Ranveer shocked at being misunderstood hurriedly tried to make his
mother understand:
Maa' I said Bahu' Not my wife'I mean Bunny and Jai Bhai'

Krishna: But'.

Ranveer: Maa' Bunny loves Jai Bhai'. From childhood' n as far as
Jai Bhai is concerned'

Krishna: Do u think Jai has also developed feelings for her'

Ranveer: I don't know Maa' But I know that he values her friendship and
cares for her a lot'

Ranveer kneeled down near her and said: Maa' Just think if anyone can
bring back happiness to Bhai's life it has to be a person like Bunny'
who would love unconditionally' care unconditionally' She will make his life
worthwhile' n we will get back Jai Bhai as he was 3 yrs back before that Roshini
came into his life'.

Krishna: I know what you say is right and its not that the thought hasn't crossed
my mind to tell you the truth' but what if things don't go as we plan'

They will Badi Maa'.

Both Ranveer and Krishna turned around to see who it was'.

Rano was standing at doorsteps of Ranveer's room'

Krishna: Rano beta, you are still awake'

Rano: I had come to give Pia's notes to Jigyasa di' Badi Maa if you try maybe
Jai Bhaiya and Di might come together'.

Krishna: You also knew about Bani's feelings for Jai'

Rano: Yes'

Ranveer: Maa cant you cancel tomorrow's programming' Atleast lets give it a try'

Krishna: There is no program for tomorrow' They called and said that they had
a urgent trip to make to their ancestor house' n they wont be back before 2 months'.

Rano all delighted: Yeapy that means we have 2 months to try something'.

Ranveer: Ssshhhh' not so loudly'.

Krishna: And if you both help me' we will get them together'

Ranveer n Rano in unison: Yessssssssss'..

Have u all gone mad'

All three were stunned and turned around to look at the speaker'

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What will the trio's first step will be to get JB together' ?
What happens next'? Who was the speaker' ?

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hi all...
i was not able to update earlier as my papers were going on...
so i have written two parts...
here comes the next one...

do tell me how u like both of them...

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Part 3:

Krishna: Uday aap'

Uday : Haan' I heard what you three were planning' What is wrong with you all'
Rano' Bani is your sister and Ranveer she is your best friend isn't she' Aur
Krishna tum' They are kids but how can you even think of going ahead with
such a absurd plan'

Krishna: Uday' Please listen to me' I only want our kids happiness' Do you
even for a second doubt that Bani wont keep Jai happy'

Uday: No' I don't' But what about Bani' Krishna' Even if she loves Jai'
Do you think she can be happy if Jai wont give her the love and respect
which she would deserve as his wife' Bolo Krishna' Answer me'

Krishna: Uday'

Uday: No, Krishna I wont let you three play with that child's future' and tell
me what will you do when she comes to know what you three have planned behind
her back' Leave her' What will you do if Jai ever comes to find out about it'

Ranveer: Nothing will go wrong Papa' And trust me everything will be okie'
once they are married'

Uday: Ranveer are you out of your mind' Marriage... is it a child's play'

Ranveer: No papa' but just think about it if they both are married Bunny will be
able to bring back the Jai bhai we knew' And together they both will bring happiness in
to not only each others life but ours also'

Rano: Bade Papa' I know you think that what we are doing is wrong' But we
only want their happiness' And that is only possible if they are together'

Krishna approached Uday and said: Uday trust me' Nothing will go wrong' I just
want their happiness' And I need your support in that' Aap and Nishikant Bhaiya also wished for this alliance I know' You both didn't say anything' that's a separate issue'

Uday: I know what you saying is right Krishna' But'

Ranveer: No buts papa' Please say yes'

Uday: Fine' But what are you guys planning to do'

Ranveer: Papa' Bunny and Jai Bhai have a weakness'

Rano: Bade Papa'

Ranveer smiled: Right' Papa'

Krishna: But why will they listen to him'

Uday: Because doctor has said so'.

Everyone looked at him and then it dawn on Krishna'

Krishna: You mean'

Uday: Yes'' I am sure they will have to agree'

Rano: But there is still one problem'

Everyone turned and looked at her'

Krishna: What beta'

Rano: Actually Badi Ma' two' Adi Bhaiya' he will never agree to this' and the Saxena's'

Krishna: The Saxena's are no problem' I will tell them what we will tell Jai,
Adi and the rest' That its Uday's wish'

Uday: Right' Now its high time you were in bed young lady' Ranveer go and
leave Rano at her place' And we will do the needful in the morning'

Rano: Ji Bade Papa' Gud nite Bade papa ' Gud nite Badi maa'

What happens next'? Will the four of them be able to convince Jai and Bani'? Stay tuned'!!!

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