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neha mehra

@rinku4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

i knw frnds now d story is taking good shape but i have something to say!!! as always criticisms 1st my style!!!

1.how can we say now dat dh. is not influenced bu sia???

dh. thot of torturing shramiks after sia approved? sory i didnt get a good word & in same situation which happened when sia came to aryanagar!!! dis time dh. supported sia??

are saagars making dh.s character -ve

or de r making base dat when veer ret, 2 aryanagar & sees P&S killed he suspects DH. & den dh has nothing to say!!!

2.frm 2 des epi. i thnk sia is not +ve at all i personally didnt like so much rift betw DV

3.but atleat dh felt something for veer for a sec but dat was also crushed by Sia

now somewat compliments:

4.4 a moment i thot saakshi was changed

5.nivs as always was good for few sec also

6.sheras & veers eye expressive looks were fab. it was understood both of dem felt something 4 each other

7.veer was happy with sheras wit infront of dh

may be:

8.nivs gets killed by Jai (chances r 1000%)

a. if pari sends nivs for aarti

b.todays dialogue(ek ma to uske paas rahegi)

c. if nivs comes 2 knw abt jai plan she wiil go & save pari!!

wat say????

Edited by nehamehra - 17 years ago

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urbangel_1591

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Posted: 17 years ago

even i think nivs will save pari..and even i thght tht maybe nivs may die saving pari ...but lets hpe tht does not happen..veer is aldready suffering too much...anyway they are not makin dharam -ve....he is just doin wht a king wud do.....sia had just given her opinion it was a coincidence tht dharam had also thgt the same...and its not sia fault as such....dharam wud hve anyway thght of it sooner or later...he had thght of doin tht before also....

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aanyakunat

@aanyakunat

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Posted: 17 years ago

i dont want nivi to die... 😭

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Jyoti

@Silver_Lining

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

Neha.. 😊

Dharam was not thinking of torturing Shramiks.. he just thought of his dialogue and think for a while that Sia and He has something in common..

at least for now.. Dharam is not influenced by Sia.. 😃 and he didn't supported Sia..

How come Sia will change without proper reasoning.. abhi last week voh jaisi thi .. vaise he Monday ke episode mai hogi nah yaar.. don't u follow the story.. ??? it's only been a week since Sia returned.. Shera was behind Dharam's life for weeks.. before she became freinds with DV.. Sia bhi toh kuch time legi.. 😛

we like it or not.. rift between DV is unavoidable..

Dharam felt for Veer..and crushed by Sia??? when ?? how ?? where?? whatever DV are doing to each other.. because of other reasons.. uss mai Sia kanha se aa gayi bich mai.. Veer is hiding something from Dharam.. and Dharam is trying to find out..

I don't think JV will kill Niviriti.. at the most he will kill Aaryvardhan.. so that blame will fall upon Veer.. and then Dharam will start hating him..

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neha mehra

@rinku4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

i why saagars are making us think like dis !!! nivs & veer sare xcellent chem. & we also hoped dat veer will save shera & bla bla but!!!

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aanyakunat

@aanyakunat

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Silver_Lining

Neha.. 😊

Dharam was not thinking of torturing Shramiks.. he just thought of his dialogue and think for a while that Sia and He has something in common..

at least for now.. Dharam is not influenced by Sia.. 😃 and he didn't supported Sia..

How come Sia will change without proper reasoning.. abhi last week voh jaisi thi .. vaise he Monday ke episode mai hogi nah yaar.. don't u follow the story.. ??? it's only been a week since Sia returned.. Shera was behind Dharam's life for weeks.. before she became freinds with DV.. Sia bhi toh kuch time legi.. 😛

we like it or not.. rift between DV is unavoidable..

Dharam felt for Veer..and crushed by Sia??? when ?? how ?? where?? whatever DV are doing to each other.. because of other reasons.. uss mai Sia kanha se aa gayi bich mai.. Veer is hiding something from Dharam.. and Dharam is trying to find out..

I don't think JV will kill Niviriti.. at the most he will kill Aaryvardhan.. so that blame will fall upon Veer.. and then Dharam will start hating him..

hmmmmn... thats still ok... 🤔 but not nivi... omg!!!! i shudnt say that.... he's my future sasur ji... 😳

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aanyakunat

@aanyakunat

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Silver_Lining

Neha.. 😊

Dharam was not thinking of torturing Shramiks.. he just thought of his dialogue and think for a while that Sia and He has something in common..

at least for now.. Dharam is not influenced by Sia.. 😃 and he didn't supported Sia..

How come Sia will change without proper reasoning.. abhi last week voh jaisi thi .. vaise he Monday ke episode mai hogi nah yaar.. don't u follow the story.. ??? it's only been a week since Sia returned.. Shera was behind Dharam's life for weeks.. before she became freinds with DV.. Sia bhi toh kuch time legi.. 😛

we like it or not.. rift between DV is unavoidable..

Dharam felt for Veer..and crushed by Sia??? when ?? how ?? where?? whatever DV are doing to each other.. because of other reasons.. uss mai Sia kanha se aa gayi bich mai.. Veer is hiding something from Dharam.. and Dharam is trying to find out..

I don't think JV will kill Niviriti.. at the most he will kill Aaryvardhan.. so that blame will fall upon Veer.. and then Dharam will start hating him..

dharam's certainly not influenced by sia... 😲😲😲 whatever's goin on in his mind is his own thoughts...

and i dont want sia to suddenly become nice... ab use aisa dikhaya hain toh they shud show a nice and slow transformation in her thoughts and behaviour... 😃

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Jyoti

@Silver_Lining

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nehamehra
i why saagars are making us think like dis !!! nivs & veer sare xcellent chem. & we also hoped dat veer will save shera & bla bla but!!!

tumhre bolane tak toh maine aisa socha bhi nahi.. 😆😆😆 so sagars at least not making me think like this..

Nivi can't die.. Veer tut jayega.. 😭

don't worry.. Agar nivi gayi toh DV ke bich ki link tut jayegi.. which is not good for the story.. 😃

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@ImmaculateDream

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

ermmm no i dun think nivi will die ... i think it woud be saakshi... or pari .. but pari is with nivi .. so chances of her being murderd are slim ... as no one knows na k she is there with nivi ...

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neha mehra

@rinku4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: Silver_Lining

Neha.. 😊

Dharam was not thinking of torturing Shramiks.. he just thought of his dialogue and think for a while that Sia and He has something in common..

at least for now.. Dharam is not influenced by Sia.. 😃 and he didn't supported Sia..

How come Sia will change without proper reasoning.. abhi last week voh jaisi thi .. vaise he Monday ke episode mai hogi nah yaar.. don't u follow the story.. ??? it's only been a week since Sia returned.. Shera was behind Dharam's life for weeks.. before she became freinds with DV.. Sia bhi toh kuch time legi.. 😛

we like it or not.. rift between DV is unavoidable..

Dharam felt for Veer..and crushed by Sia??? when ?? how ?? where?? whatever DV are doing to each other.. because of other reasons.. uss mai Sia kanha se aa gayi bich mai.. Veer is hiding something from Dharam.. and Dharam is trying to find out..

I don't think JV will kill Niviriti.. at the most he will kill Aaryvardhan.. so that blame will fall upon Veer.. and then Dharam will start hating him..

ok one by one ok:

1.siver, i knw dat u also thnk dat 2de 1 % to sia ko support kia hai !!! & yeh sab shayad base (created by saagars)hai to make veer hate dharam varna socha same situation mei ek hi insaan do tarah kaise behave karr sakta hai!!??? & when dh loves veer so much ek baar to sia ko rokh na hi chahiye tha!!! hai naa??? (maana k dh veer se rootha hua hai & vice versa fir bhi??)

2." shramik o pe dabao dalo " agar sia nehi kehti shayad dh doosre tarike se sochta hai naa!!!???

situation to yatra se pehle issi battar tha tab agar dh stayed so cool den now???? boss sia to instigate karr rahi hai!!! compelling dh to hate veer (in every scene its clear) hai naa???

3 shera was abt to tek dh s life but she didnt insult him & i knw that sia is diff moofat hai but veer ko kabhi dh, k khilaf nehi kia & dint try also after knwing everything

4. woh scene jaha dh veer se rooth ke ooth jata hai i felt dh still feels for veer but d nxt moment!!!!

dnt get angry silver but influence to dikh rahi hai!!! someway or other!!

& PLS PLS PLS dnt kill nivs we all love her!!!