~~~story taking a good shape~~~ !!! - Page 2

Originally posted by: kunataanya

u better not say such things.. nahi toh Maharaj Dharam tum ko aaryanagar se tadipaar kar denge.. 😛

aare meri halat socho jabbhi koi situation / character aachha lagta hai saagars fatak se usko hatha deta hai!!! kya yaar saagars ko samjhao nivs & veer chem is rockkkkkkkkkkkkking!!!

Originally posted by: nehamehra

& PLS PLS PLS dnt kill nivs we all love her!!!

Originally posted by: sarajee123

nahi maray gi nivi, neha .. itna pershana na ho .. 😃 ... marna tu kisis aur ko hai kal 😭

Originally posted by: nehamehra

mera dil bohot ghabra raha hai jaise bhimu ne aachanak exit li uske baad to aur bhi darr lag raha hai!!

Originally posted by: nehamehra

ok one by one ok:

1.siver, i knw dat u also thnk dat 2de 1 % to sia ko support kia hai !!! & yeh sab shayad base (created by saagars)hai to make veer hate dharam varna socha same situation mei ek hi insaan do tarah kaise behave karr sakta hai!!??? & when dh loves veer so much ek baar to sia ko rokh na hi chahiye tha!!! hai naa??? (maana k dh veer se rootha hua hai & vice versa fir bhi??)naa yaar, dharam is not at all influenced by sia........... if he had seen sia doing all those things to those shramiks, he wld have stopped her.. but when dharam came all he saw was, sia in the kichadn sia telling him that veer pushed her... so he scolded veer that he has also become like a kid n veer or any of the shramiks never said anything abt what happened there..... it was just like the situation, where sia fights with those shramiks cos they said ill abt dharam.. n when veer comes, all he sees is sia hitting them.

2." shramik o pe dabao dalo " agar sia nehi kehti shayad dh doosre tarike se sochta hai naa!!!???

situation to yatra se pehle issi battar tha tab agar dh stayed so cool den now???? boss sia to instigate karr rahi hai!!! compelling dh to hate veer (in every scene its clear) hai naa???

situation was different bfore yatra, cos till then veer was not doing anything hiding from dharam... so dharam supported veer..b ut the day he saw that veer is also involved in the stealing of money.. n he knows that veer will wage a war against aryanagar sena, dharam has started becomming suspicious.. n is following veer. n trying to find out... n tillnow he has not yet been able to find out.. so he will now use anyway possible to find it... even if sia was not there int he yatra, dharam wld have behaved int he same way

3 shera was abt to tek dh s life but she didnt insult him & i knw that sia is diff moofat hai but veer ko kabhi dh, k khilaf nehi kia & dint try also after knwing everything

shera didn't insult dharam cos, that was nothte reason sor her to come near dharm-veer........she wanted to kill dharam........ if that time JV had given her supari to create misunderstanding between D-V,s he wld have done that too............ as for sia, she wants dharam for herself... n she considers herself above the shramiks.... thats why she is behaving like that

4. woh scene jaha dh veer se rooth ke ooth jata hai i felt dh still feels for veer but d nxt moment!!!!

dnt get angry silver but influence to dikh rahi hai!!! someway or other!!

dharam was not feeling sorry for veer at that time.. he was angry at veer, that inspite of him doing so much for shramiks, veer is planning something behind his back.. thats why when veer looked , he got angry n went away

& PLS PLS PLS dnt kill nivs we all love her!!!

Originally posted by: nehamehra

mera dil bohot ghabra raha hai jaise bhimu ne aachanak exit li uske baad to aur bhi darr lag raha hai!!

Originally posted by: nehamehra

i knw frnds now d story is taking good shape but i have something to say!!! as always criticisms 1st my style!!!

1.how can we say now dat dh. is not influenced bu sia???

dh. thot of torturing shramiks after sia approved? sory i didnt get a good word & in same situation which happened when sia came to aryanagar!!! dis time dh. supported sia??

are saagars making dh.s character -ve

or de r making base dat when veer ret, 2 aryanagar & sees P&S killed he suspects DH. & den dh has nothing to say!!!

2.frm 2 des epi. i thnk sia is not +ve at all i personally didnt like so much rift betw DV

3.but atleat dh felt something for veer for a sec but dat was also crushed by Sia

now somewat compliments:

4.4 a moment i thot saakshi was changed

5.nivs as always was good for few sec also

6.sheras & veers eye expressive looks were fab. it was understood both of dem felt something 4 each other

7.veer was happy with sheras wit infront of dh

may be:

8.nivs gets killed by Jai (chances r 1000%)

a. if pari sends nivs for aarti

b.todays dialogue(ek ma to uske paas rahegi)

c. if nivs comes 2 knw abt jai plan she wiil go & save pari!!

wat say????

Originally posted by: lakshmim_84

again dharam suporting sia...........what else shld he done seeing her in t he keechad.. n veer laughing at her...........shld he too join veer n laugh at her......... thats why he got angry.....n he rightfully has........ but atleast when she was cursing veer as a shramik thoda to bol ta??

n abt pressuring the shramiks to know his truth........ what else shld he do.....he has to find the truth........ he has to protect his kingdom........ he cannot lsten to all the whims of veer... esp now, that he knows veer is upto something........ n he has taken help of a daku for that........

if dharam wld have ignored all these.. n allowed veer to take the weapons.. n then let his kingdom gone down the drain, then he is doing the right thing.... right? then heis a perfect king... right? mai woh nehi bol rahi hu but atlest when sia says veer chhote log tab dh kuch bol sakta tha!!! aare dono bhai hai???

veer left the people who cared for him, just to fulfill his duty as the masiha.. dharam is fulfilling his duty as a king.. n trying to get the people close to him back........