I, YOU & FAMILY...FF-Part 4 updated pg8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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HI KDMHMSians......
After seeing many FFs in this forum...i thot to write a FF on our favourite jodi.......
Yeh kahani aisa hein ki.... jis main pyar hai... apna pan hai.... aur ek doosrey key liye dil mein dard bhi hai....
Actually this is my first FF in KDMHMD forum. and this story line i had taken from a movie, i have no idea if you all liked it or not.
I'm now posting the Introduction & Characters sketch.....

I, YOU & FAMILY

A FEEL GUD LUV-FAMILY ENTERTAINER

Prem (Prem Juneja) is the 2nd son of Lallit Juneja and Gayathri. Lallit Juneja is the M.D of a vast construction company. His family is a big one it consists of his wife, eldest son (Preet juneja) and his wife (Ashlesha), his daughter (Kuldeep) and her two kids, and his youngest daughter (Meher Juneja). Rampal is the domestic servant of the family and does all the house hold chores.

Prem is an engineering graduate and CAT aspirant and only wants two things from life:

a) A excellent career of his choice and

b) To find the right girl and fall in true love, which should ultimately culminate in

Marriage

But Lallit Junega is an over Jealous and caring father. He is the one, who finally decides what is good and bad for Prem. He does all these things without getting to know the opinions and feelings of others in the family. He chooses what shirts Prem will wear, what coins he will aim for on a game of caroms and even how big the piece he tears out of his chapathi to eat should be. It is he, who fixes the marriage of Prem with a girl, who is from a wealthy affluent family without taking into the consideration the view of Prem.All Prem does is nod his head at the decision taken by his father.

Heer is not your regular kind of girl. She loves all the simple things in life and is always full of vigor and verve. By nature, she is an ebullient and fun loving girl. The tricks, she plays in the college earn her the name of spoiled brat and quite popular with all the boys in the college. Slowly and steadily Prem is drawn towards her and expresses his feelings to her.

Heer is the only daughter to Balraaj Maan, who is a widowed and working in Endowrsement department. He loves his daughter and cares n fulfills whatever she asks. They are not like a father n daughter instead like friends.

By strange quirk of fate, Prem runs into Heer (Heer Maan) at a local temple and it is love at first sight. He is bowled over by her charm and her down-to-earth conduct.

Lallit junega comes to know of the affair and just wants Prem to back off, as his marriage preparations are already on.

What Prem will do now??? What happens next??? Will Lallit Juneja change his attitude and outlook towards life and his family members??? Will he say yes to the marriage proposal of the lovers in the end??? Will the father of Heer (Balraaj maan) agree to give away his daughter to Prem??

If you want to know the answers for the above questions'

Please give me your valuable comments'to continue this or not???

Any type of suggestions are welcome.......
Eagerly waiting for your comments......
With Love
Silpa...😊
INDEX

Part 1 - Page 3
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1024844&TPN=3
Part 2 - Page 4
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1024844&TPN=4
Part 3 - Page 7
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1024844&TPN=7
Part 4 - Page 8
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1024844&TPN=8

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naddiya26 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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when you will add first episode very nice i can not wait 👏 so i made you write a ff😉
please FOR GOD sake leave a comment . i want my friend to start a ff . HER idea is great and she can beat every one here so lets ask her to cont please
Edited by pisces26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey there.ok first of all your ff sounds intersting.for a change prem is not the eldest but preet is and is married to ashlesha.and lalit is a control freak when it comes to prem.i wonder does he make the same kind of decisions when it comes to preet or any other of his kids.and the backdrop of prem and heers love story is very intersting.do continue yaar coz i reallly would love to know the answers to the questions you pointed out.
oh and by the way the best part is rampal is the servant.now that is more like it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome start....you must continue .....it sound very interesting and vey different.....Lallu is again an ullu ...and the best part is rampal is juneja's servant.. lol........thats very funny...and no veera in your story....
we are waiting for your FF silpa....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sis very gud yaar....superb sis....mindblasting ff yaar....plz update sooonnnnnn ok....and tell when u ll update...waitingggggg
wid love
PARTH😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice do cont soon its very good
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i can not believe see added in after noon
silpa met with an accident this evening...she told me to mail you as were waiting for her...she is in hospital and major injury to her left leg and head....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nadi m sure waheguru will make her recover soon and then she will be back to continue this beautifull ff

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww omg Silpa... such a sweet girl, she wrote this in the afternoon and then met with an accident in the evening. 😔 but Inshallah she will get better soon. and the FF is awesome!
- Deena
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I hope your okay, Get better soon extremely soon!
And your FF sounds fantastic and im looking forward to it!
Get better soon!
Hope your feeling better then before. . . .
?xXx?
Sunayna

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