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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks to all friends, sis's n bro's....for encouraging me to continue this FF...soon i will update Part 1....(hopefully sunday...ie: with help of nadia)...😊.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: silparavindar

Thanks to all friends, sis's n bro's....for encouraging me to continue this FF...soon i will update Part 1....(hopefully sunday...ie: with help of nadia)...😊.

i will help on one shart next time dont become heer a super woman only she can do that fly high and dont get a wound 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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come online nadiiii..waiting for you without sleeping
Edited by silparavindar - 17 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi KDMHMDians....

thankyou so much for your love and affection and i am fine becoz of ur prayers....
and coming to FF...here the concept of the story....

Concept: In a beach, a small child is trying to walk and his father is catching him. But that child wants to walk himself without support, but father wants to help him and he scares where he will fall.

In this whole world, this is the main problem between father & children relation.

See here in beach child wants to walk himself, but father wants to help him…here it is either son's or fathers fault. They love each other. But even that child got 24years and father still wants to walk as he told means………….

In this story, hero (our PREM) is travelling somewhere and telling his story to unknown persons...(its means total story is flashback😉)....

and here is......

Part - 1

One fine sunny morning; a handsome guy wearing a full hands denim T shirt with 6pocket cargo jeans, looking cute with his little beard in his chin. Walking on the roads talking himself….he is none other than our PREM.

Prem: In this world, all the fathers are Hitler's and……..suddenly in this anger he lifted his leg up to beat something and opposite a Milk man is coming in scooter carrying milk cans…and milk man was supposed to be fell down…..with prem's reaction…

Milkman: arey!!! kya hua thujhe…dimaak karaab hogaya kya???

Prem: he keep's his hand in his head and said "Problem"

Milk man: arey tujhe problem hein tho, kyun mera gadi ko tak ra raha ho…Kya problem hein tera???

Prem: My father…!!!

Milkman: tumara baap.....Usne kya kiya???

Prem: he will not give what I will ask…

Milk man: Ohhhhh!! ha yeh tho problem hein…

Prem: he will give more than what I am asking….

Milkman: Surprised!!! Arey isme problem kya hein…tumara dimaak karaab hein kya…aisa baap hona tumara kismath hein…..

Prem: with an angry expression!!! Tumhe samaj mein nehi aatha…kyun ki tum bhi ek baap ho na…. agar tujhe mera problem ko samajna hein tho Life style trial rooms mirrors se pooch…who bolegi tujhe…

"Scene shifting to life style trial room"….

Prem is trialling so many latest designs and he selected one full hands brown colour t-shirt & black Jeans and comes out….

There Lallit is talking with sales guy and asking him to show some international brands…

Sales man: ok sir…see this, he shows some latest designs like T-shirts and all…

Lallit: These all are out of fashion, I want latest generation brands…

Sales man: 1 min sir, I will show you…

Lallit: yup!

Sales man: show's him one blue short length shirt which is colourful and tell's him… see sir this looks gud…

Lallit: Seriously looked to sales man and said not for me, for my son…

Sales man: he sees prem and told to lallit that he already selected…where prem wears a full hands T-Shirt & jeans…

Lallit: Comes near to sales man, and asks him…see if you went outside and see him in this dress…what you will feel???

Sales man: This is latest fashion and youth style sir…

Lallit: Shows them one formal shirt and asks sales man….Now!!!!

Sales man: voooh…its looks royally & dignified sir…

Lallit: If we in shirt it neatly then….

Sales man: Voooh…!!!

Lallit: what you said before..??

Sales man: Youth!!!

Lallit: you are right! And gives prem that formal shirt and asks him to trial it…

Prem: nods his head and left to trail room…

In trial room, prem was anger and throw that t-shirt which he wears before down and wears that formal shirt… meanwhile he listens lallu is talking with someone in phone and saying that he came to select a shirt for Prem, what a designs yaar…in our time…these type of patterns were not there… you know infact to select a dress it takes 2 hours…

Prem comes out from trial room and lallit sees him and with huge smile says…

Lallit: Superbbb!!!!!!

Prem again went to trial room to change and he listens again lallu talking with some sales girl and asking him… beti idar… inner wears hein kya??

Sales girl: yes sir!! We have

Prem hits his head with his hand………….

"Scene shifts to actual…….."

Prem is travelling in local sharing auto with some others and telling them….all these….

Traveller (old man): its very difficult…but whatever it is…you father's character is very different beta

Prem: yeh kya dekhliya aapne…..aur bohot hein.........and started telling them his father's weird behaviour…..

"Scene shifts to men's saloon……."

Prem: he saw some new hair style and asks Barbour to do that….and he slept while he is cutting his hair…and suddenly he wokes up and saw his hair style and shouts on Barbour….hey!!! What's this???…

Suddenly barbour shows him Lallu, where he is sitting back to prem…..and tell him his hair style is perfect…..Prem gives a smile to his father….

"Scene shift to actual……"

Prem is asking for lift on the road…..and a lady gives him lift…and he is talking himself in anger and she asks him what happened and he tells her about his father….

listening all these....She laughs loudly…..

Prem: mera problem sunkar…aap has raha hein na…ah…

Lady: Sorry sorry…!!! Tell me…. then….

Prem: If I asked him Pencil…he will give me parker pen…

If I asked him cycle…he will give bike

Agar mein mom se thoda jaggery maange tho…un hone America se chocolates laatha hein…

Everything he do…what he likes only…..

Lady: then is problem ko solution nehi hein kya…..

Prem: Kyun nehi…that's why…I decided to get 2 things from my life from my own….

Lady: oh!! Then your problems are solved???

Prem: mmmm….no yaar…jyaada hogaya…

Lady: why???

Prem: again scolds…is duniye mein sabi baaps hein na……..(cut…cut…cut..hope u understand)

Lady: stop….stop…stop….oh god..tu itna gandi bath kyun boltha hein apne pitha ke baare mein…..

Prem: if you listen my story…you will not say like this……

"Flash back…..Rewind"

As this is my first FF...please excuse me if any mistakes...
Hope you all likes this....if not please tell me...i will stop....any type of suggestions or comments are welcome...
With Luv
Sillu😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee toogoodverynicepart waitingggggggggfor nextasap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great what to say .
i think is some way Prem is right as there are father who are Hitler's from out side
but they cry for their child these father cannot see pain in their child eyes even then the are Hitler's...
nice up date
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved the way you are presenting your story yaar,different.this lalit is just too much.even selects inner wears for prem.bechaara.but am looking forward to your update.flashbach will be great to read.thanks for the pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28

its awesome,too good yaar.....keepit up sillu waiting for next part..........

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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
hey its suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuperb.....fntastic sis....very vvvv gud...con sooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn


wid love
PARTH😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello Silpa..how r u?it was a nice beginning for the FF..pls continue..

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