I, YOU & FAMILY...FF-Part 4 updated pg8 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
Interesting....you have different style of narrating the story...looking forward to the next part...do continue soon....
BTW hows your health now?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Dear Friends,
thanks to all of you for your support and valuable comments...
My heartful thanks to sweta2005, fijiana, mireen19, parth bro, ranrags, angel82 & Pooji.....
here is the promo for Part 2.....
PROMO:
Lallit asks Prem to join with him in office, prem tolds him he is doing some course and it takes 3months to complete. Lallu looks seriously and tells him, do one thing instead of 3months to you-gimme 7days. Prem shocked and asked rampal, what's going on??? Rampal whispers, what his father is planning for him??.....after listening what rampal said, Prem was Shocked!!!!
with luv
sillu😊
Edited by silparavindar - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
great what he is planning now you tell me i can not wait 😉
Edited by pisces26 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
Silpa..promo looks good..now waiting to read the next part..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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silpa intersting promo.looking forward to the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part - 2

Prem is sleeping in his room…its 7'clock in the morning….Rampal enters into prems room by saying, paal…rampal…a gud servant (with half makeup in his face) saying god today I escaped…

Rampal: Premji bahut der hogaya…uto na…

Prem: (still in sleeping mood) Kitna time hue tho kya hein…kyun chillarahe ho…with a cute smile on his face,he says...atleast one second should start how I like…

Rampal: (with serious face) says… big boss already woke up…yehi hein tumara acha secondd….

Prem: he suddenly wokes from his bed and see's rampal's face and wondered…

Suddenly they hear's a lady voice calling Rampaalll……

Rampal: arey baapre… premji use bolo na mein idar nehi hein…

Prem: in sleeping mood…says he is not there…but rampal was there beside him

Do you all know who entered, ya its Meher…she is a beautician in this story.

Meher: ye rampal…kyun tu middle mein agaya idar….

Rampal: atleast my half salary should remain na meherji…aapka beautician course ke baare mein tho chod…aap ka practice se bachkar rehne keliye mein marja raha huin…

And rampal saying to prem….premji face ko mask rakhne keliye 50rs hein…

Meher: woh facial rampal….

Rampal: hair springs springs rakh kar aur nikhalne keliye 100rs hein….

Meher: woh curls hein….

Rampal: aakhir…nails cut kar 10rs leh raha hein….

Meher: woh manicure….

Rampal: salary udhar leh raha hein aur idar deraha huin…premji aap meherji se ek beauty parlour khulao…nehi tho bahar gate par…beauty parlour ka board laga do….

Meher: Shutup you rampal….

Bhayya tum aavo na…mein tujhe facial karthi huin…

Prem: Kitna hein…

Meher: Kya???

Prem: facial karne keliye…kitna…

Meher: 100rs

Prem: I will give you 100 more…rampal ke face par woh facial nikhal do….rampal smiles by hearing this…and prem told phir usko facial karo…

Rampal: Surprised!! And shouts..... Premjiiiii……..

In living room….

Preet and Aslesha are coming down with their kid..

Aslesha: with her kid…if u didn't eat your snacks na…see I will….

And she calls….. Re Preet…suddenly she saws prem is coming and preetji aap aapka mobile bhool gaya…preet sees prem and embraced…and takes his mobile…they left from there…

Prem smiles……

At hall…Kuldeep is talking with her husband, who is staying in US…and asking him with angry face…kyun ji aap kuch baath nehi kar raha hein…mujhse baath karne keliye baath hi nehi hein kya…suddenly with loud voice…she says…iska matlab aapko mujhse jyaada paiso hi pasand hein kya…suddenly her kid shouts mom….phone rakhlo…(he's waiting to get him ready to school)…she says…shut up…suddenly prem takes the cordless from her….hein prem…prem…mujhe phone…

Kid shows thumbsup to prem…kuldi cutely beat on his sons cheek and get him ready for his school….

Prem: (on phone with his jiju)…hello America… how are you?? Mmm…I am fine…fine…when r u coming here??? I know you will not come now…slowly he whispers…bring some gud drinks jiju…plzz…

Suddenly kuldeep takes the cordless….and…

Kuldeep: hello…what he is saying??? I know something he said…I heard…

Meanwhile Prem heard a voice from kitchen….singing a song….and he went to kitchen….

Gaya3: Arey…prem beta tu itni jaldi ready hogaya….

Prem nods his head…

Gaya3: gives him hot box said, pakdo… then prem says…

Prem: superb mom…

Gaya3: thot he is talking about tiffin and says…I only did it my son…

Prem: Not tiffin mom…am saying about your song…its really beautiful…

Gaya3: with a smile and sighs ummm…chalo….and she's moving from kitchen…

Prem: shouts…ma aap kyun nehi sun raha hein…listen ma….listen…

Gaya3: Kya beta....

Prem: you have a very gud future mom…u will become a gr8 singer…

Gaya3: embraced and said…chalo prem…

Prem: he pulled her hand and said, believe me mom…

Gaya3: acha…chal jaldi bathaa…

Prem: then… accept you are gr8 singer and u have gr8 future….

Gaya3: smiles and says…acha baba…chal teek hain…mein future mein bahut achi singer banungi aur mujhe future bhi hein….ok na

Prem: smiles and hugs her mother

Gaya3: gives a kiss on his forehead

Lallit comes down…

Suddenly he hears kuldeep talking with her husband asking atleast aap is summer mein aaraha hein na…ok..teek hein…ha childrens are readying for school…suddenly lallu asks her kaun damaadji hein kya…

Kuldeep: ha papa…

Lallit: Tell him not to drive car fast.

Kuldeep: ji papa…

Then they all gather in dining table for breakfast…..

Children's wishes gud mng to Lallu and he says back….

Lallit: Taking some sandwiche's in his plate looking at preet and says…..Preet beta!!!

Preet: ji papa

Lallit: woh…dam construction ka papers meine tumhe diyatha na….woh….

Preet: Mein study kar raha hu papa….

Lallit: Mein kal raath hi study kiya…aur woh tenders bhi ready kar diya….just you sign on it…ok…

Preet: lil embraced and said… ok papa

Prem: looks to preet and to himself thinks…ek cell phone aur ek car keliye poora life papa ko inaam kardiya…chi….(embraced)

Lallit: Prem…did you remind…what is today???

Prem: Suddenly looks to everyone and asks preet….is anyone's birthday??

Lallit: (asusual serious look) says… when I asked you to come to office, you said you need 6months time. With today your time is finished…

Prem: (with shocked face) Voooh…papa…vohh!!!…

Then suddenly…

Lallit: arey…yeh kya hein beta…tu itni chota chota pieces kyun letha hein chapathi se…chalo… lelo bada piece tear karo…bada vala...Prem tears big piece…and take that curry…ha…ab kaavo….haa.. aisaa….

Looking into gaya3 says…bolo gaya3…agar waisa kaane se hi…sehad keliye acha hotha hein…

Kuldeep's son said….dadaji mein aap hi ki taraf ka raha hoon…bada hokar aap hi jaisa banta huin….

Then Prem thinks in himself…looking into kuldeeps kid…if you become big then you will change your opinion…

Lallit: So prem….from today onwards you are coming to office na….

Prem: Voh….papa…voh…office…ki…papa I am doing CAT course…it takes 3more months…

Lallit: Prem!!!…you asked me 1year time…I had given….again you asked me 6months…I had….now 3months…

Prem: looking into Lallu's face embarrassingly….

Lallit: do one thing….for a change give me 7days of time…I will tell you.

Prem: whispering in rampal's ears…asking him….hey rampal…ye kya hai… everytime I am asking him time na… but this time why he's asking me…

Rampal: what to say??? Which I know or shall I ask them and tell you.

Prem: Tell me what you know??

Rampal: aapka shaadi karne keliye woh fix hogaya…

Prem: (Surprised & Shocked) what??? marriage??? Looking angrily at his father…

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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very funny part waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sillu its amazing.....sooooooooooooooooooooooo gud yaar...very nice....plz update asap....plz.....

wid love
PARTH😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
ha ha..it was very funny..it's nice to see KDMHMD names in this FF..it's going to be great..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
awesome .sorry 100 times for late reply i great reason is behind that
i was online but was not online .😳
it was Funny best is mr rr😡
prem is doing acca or a cat 😕 course .
and he wants bottle😲
Edited by pisces26 - 16 years ago

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