FF- Tuhjse Naraz Nahi- Last Update Pg 121 Enjoy =D

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"Ehem...Ehem.." Hello everyone! Guess who? Yup you guessed right! MooMoo! I know I know... you're all wondering... What is she doing here? That too with an ff. Ok guys so as most of you know I ended my previous ff.. But hey I did say I'd start one again..and yes... I am now! But... I was still serious about school and the fast month..right now i've got a week till school starts and for me the first day of school is the first day of the fasting month which means i will not update at all during that month... I simply can't... But right now i'll update when i get the chance this week...and oh one more thing... Remember in my old ff i always updated everyday...yea it aint working like that now.. 😳 Now i'll update when i get the chance..i hope you understand..

Ok So my New FF is called Tuhjse Naraz Nahi and some of you might of heard the song Tuhjse Naraz Nahi Zindagi which I am basing on this song. I am using the Amanat Ali version. Consider that the title song for my FanFic. Here's a link to it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fFFTDXaAo90. Please check it out. It is a very touching song. Anyways back to the ff. Right now I am giving you a little introduction and later on I'll try to update the first part so please be patient with me.
Intro: The Singh family consists of Amanat Singh, his wife Nadia Singh, their daughter, Sonia Singh, and their son Amar Singh. Amar ran away from home a while back. He was in love with this female but Amanat disapproved her because of her low status and because the female's parents were also consider scammers. Upon hearing that Amar ran away with her but then the female consider not hurting her parents feelings so she broke it off with Amar. Amar stayed away from home for three years but then returned after his friends explained to him and after he recieved news that his father became a heart patient. After coming back home Amar's behaivour was not the same with his parents. He hardly spoke to Amanat unless it involved work. His mother and him were quiet with each other as well. And his sister Sonia never spoke to him because she blamed Amar for all that happened in their house. So basically Amar went to work and came and sat in his room. One day Amanat couldn't take this anymore and decided to get Amar married. Of course that took a while for Amar to agree but at last he did. And besides he knew the girl. He decided to marry Amar to his friends daughter and his friend was Adesh Malhotra.
The Malhotra family consisted of Adesha Malhorta, his wife Soni Malhotra, their son Rahul Malhotra and their daughter Divya Malhotra. The Malhotra family was in much better condition than the Singhs. However Divya was a friendless girl. No one spoke to her and guys never teased her since she was the behenji type. Her brother always annoyed her and her mother always compared her to others saying that she should be like other girls but inside the whole family was in love with her. Their household was very lively and then came that one day when Amar's proposal came for her. Divya and Amar spoke to each other when they were little but with the growing days they separated. Rahul and Amar shared a somewhat relationship of friendship but it was not deep. And nor was Sonia and Divya's. When Amar found out he was marrying Divya he was ok with it and so was Divya. They went what their parents told them to do but on their wedding night they went with their hearts.
Ok guys I guess i gave you a very long intro. Sorry for boring you... I'll come up with first update soon. And I hope you like this story better than my old one. Oh and the first update will start with their wedding night. 😳 I hope you all are eagerly waiting. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ooo very interesting!!! CANT WAIT!!!! omg!!! omg!! so excited!!pleze update soon!!
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Moomoo that sounds very good I'm looking forward to read the first part! Looks like a very interesting lovestory between AD.
Love Charri<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Moomoo the intro seems intresting. I will wait for your first part.
Moomoo after introduction you have made me impatient. You have to write soon. I will be waiting for your next update.😊

Love S.Rina
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sounds really interesting and nice Can't wait to read the first part....Please update really soon
wish you all the best and luck in life
Take care and keep smiling
Reena
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg moomoo u started another ff =D
congrats yaar...
and sounds very interestng...continue soon hun =D
cant wait...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow momoo another ff greaaaaaaaaaaaat. I lost track of ur previous ff but surely will read this ff regularly. Please start it ASAP.
and yeah i love tht song too. its my one of favourite songs.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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This sounds really interesting...............
Please update it soon........eagerly waiting for it ............😊
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Hey gals! So I wrote my update and I must say it sucks! Seriously man... I'm upset with it... but since I said I was going to update I guess I have to. I hope you enjoy it.

Part 1:(Btw setting takes place in New York)

We start off with a room decorated beautifully. Starting from the door to all around the room there are candles lined up each with a flower stuck to the wall above it. A man dressed in a black suit opens the door and steps in. He closes the door and walks through the small hallway leading to the interior of the room. Through him we see a vanity, next to the vanity is a bathroom, next to the bathroom are two sofas with a plasma screen above it, next to the sofas is a closet, next to the closet is a door to the terrace and next to that is... He steps in and next to that is a rectangular bed draped with flowers above it. Underneath the draped flowers is a bride. She is dressed in a red bridal outfit with her knees folded up to her chest. This dulhan had something different than other dulhans. One her face wasn"t covered with a gungagat but with an upset and worried smile. She looked up to see the man in the black suit. Upon seeing him she stood up next to the bed. That man walked up to her and sighed. "Divya...You already know of my past life as I was told right?" Divya looked at him.

Divya: Yes Amar. I already know. Which also makes my life a whole lot easier.

Amar: I don"t understand.

Divya: Amar from the look of your face I can understand you still haven"t forgotten that girl. And I myself am not ready to get into a relationship. She walks past Amar towards the vanity.

Amar: Do you mean you like somebody else? He turns around. Divya also turns around.

Divya: No not at all. After all I am the behenji type and nobody falls for behenji type. She laughs.

Divya: No but the thing is I just wasn"t ready for marriage or a relationship when my parents spoke to me about your proposal.

Amar: Then why did you accept?

Divya: Because I saw the happiness it gave my parents. And I also considered the fact that you were already in love. So which means our relationship can remain platonic if I am correct? Amar was stunned.

Amar: Correct. I still haven"t gotten over her.

Divya: I figured.

Amar: So we could consider this a none husband wife relationship? Right.

Divya: Yep. Just infront of our parents I guess we can sort of act it but in privacy there is nothing between us.

Amar: And nor will there ever be anything. Amar walked to the bathroom and we see Divya blink. When she blinks black water falls out of her eyes and trickles down her cheeks causing her cover up to also turn black and fade. Scene fades away. We see Divya lying on the bed looking at the ceiling. She is dressed in black long dress or as most consider it a nighty. Her hair is let down and she has removed all make up and jewelry except one bracelet which she never takes off. She sits up and looks infront to see Amar asleep on the couch. She then remembers the conversation she had with Amar after he came out of the bathroom.(And just please keep in mind. Amar hardly smiles. Also the flashback will be in bold). Amar walked out of the bathroom and looked at Divya. For some reason he smiled and walked past her grabbing a pillow.

Divya: Aap kidar ja re hai? Amar looked at her. He kept his head down with this dull husk voice.

Amar: On the sofa. And with that he went to the sofa and lay down. Divya just stared at him for a good two minutes and then went to change.

She looked at Amar sleeping peacefully. Divya looked pretty tired so she lay back down and closed her eyes hoping to sleep just as peacefully as Amar is.

Next morning: Divya awoke with the noise of running water. She opened her eyes and sat up. She rubbed her eyes and tied her hair in pony. She realized Amar was in the shower. She got off the bed and fixed it. She then grabbed the pillow and blanket Amar had and put it back on the bed. As soon as she finished she went to her suitcase and unpacked everything. She opened the closet to hang her clothes but then she stepped back. Instead she placed her clothes in the drawers beneath. When she was done she wanted to place her suitcase above the closet. Realizing she couldn"t reach the closet she pulled up a chair and stood on it. She placed her suitcase there and stepped down but slipped on the other foot but before she could lose her balance her hands landed on a wet bare body. She let go and looked up to see Amar wrapped in a towel. She quickly looked away. However Amar needed to get through.

Amar: I need my clothes. Divya closed her eyes and stepped away. Amar took his clothes and went back to the bathroom. Divya just ignored the current situation and took the out the clothes she was going to wear today and placed them on the sofa. She then went over to the vanity and took out her jewelry and bangles she would wear with those clothes. She was done with picking her jewelry but Amar was still not out so she sat down on the sofa waiting. She played with her clothes admiring the work done on it. Her eyes then caught something on the floor. It seemed like a white paper so she bent down and picked it up. She was about to turn it over but a hand snatched it away. She saw Amar with fierce eyes looking at her. She just ignored it and took her clothes and walked to the bathroom. After she left Amar looked at the picture and smiled. He walked over to his drawer and took out a book. He placed the picture in the book and closed it. He put the book back locking the drawer. He then sighed and sat down on the bed. He looked at his watch and realized it was only 9 a.m.

Amar: Nobodies going to be awake right now. Seriously. He then sat back on the bed and turned the t.v. on. Divya came out. She saw him watching t.v. and smiled but then quickly removed the smile and went to the vanity. She got ready and then looked at Amar.

Divya: Amar? Amar looked at her.

Divya: I"m going to make breakfast. Amar stood up and walked over to her.

Amar: Look Divya. We discussed this last night.

Divya: What? We discussed us not being a normal husband wife type people. We never discussed me making breakfast. She rolled her eyes.

Amar: You told me you"re going to make breakfast right?

Divya: Yes.

Amar: A normal wife tells her husband where she is going why she is going and what she is doing.

Divya: Oh. She thinks for a while. She then looks at Amar again.

Amar: What?

Divya: So you don"t mind me going anywhere right?

Amar: No.

Divya: So then if I continued college you wouldn"t care.

Amar: I wouldn"t but I don"t know about my parents. Divya then got this worried look on her face.

Amar: You should talk to my dad.

Divya: Me? No way. I am too scared to talk to your dad.

Amar: Well then...

Divya: Can you?

Amar: Divya you know I haven"t spoken to my dad in a while and nor will I. He turned around. Divya sighed and walked infront of him.

Divya: I know you won't and I know why but Amar everybody thinks you've forgotten that girl of course except me so you have to make your dad realize it. Otherwise he'll think you and I are faking this and he can't figure this out. And the only way to do this is to at least talk your dad. And if you talk about me he will be so happy you don't even know it. So please if not for me but for your dad's happiness do it. That is the reason you married me. With that she walks away downstairs. Amar stands there thinking. He sighs. Scene fades away. Everyone is downstairs eating breakfast quietly. This was normal for the Sing family and Divya just had to deal with it. Amar looked at Divya who was sitting next to him and then at his dad who was eating quietly.

Amar: Papa... Everyone's spoons fell and jaws dropped. They all looked shocked at Amar but his dad had this smile on his face. The truth was ever since he came back he never called his dad papa. He would refer to him as Mr.Singh.

Amanat: Hain beta bolo.

Amar: Papa muhje aapse aik zaroori bat karni hai.

Precap: Amar and Divya's reception party. They are forced to dance with each other.

Edited by bmtd11 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great start......loved it Moomoo.....👏👏
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