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saivarsha

@*Rajeevian*

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Posted: 17 years ago

" AGARTUMMILJAO-hi guyz i read dis fic at orkut n really liked it.credit goes to writer PRIYANKA"

On a phone call...
Lady:hello Veer yeh main kya sun rahi hoon..... Naveen and Nandini?......
Veer I want to meet u....hello....hellooo....veer.... r u there?
Rajveer:haan...haan... maa main sun raha hoon....
maa main ek mission par hoon...I can't...can't meet u
Raj's Mom:par... ok tell me yeh sab kya hain...aur Naveen?...
I want to see Naveen for the last time, tell me where is he?
(and she started crying)
Raj:his body has been sent to his home now only...
I will send u his address...u go and see him...(and he also started crying)
Raj's Mom:don't...don't cry Veer...please Veer listen to me...don't cry...
( after this he disconnected his call and he started crying badly)

(Before this conversation Raj's Mom has heard in news that
"Naveen Singh Ahluwaliah, a traitor and a criminal who has murdered
Nandini Singh Rathod is no moreeee")

After the call, In Shekavat's house, Raj's Mom is remembering her past i.e last year only
Raj:hai Mom...how r u?
Raj's Mom:I'm fine beta and u?
Raj:I'm superb Mom aur ek kush kabri hai...we r promoted as captains...I'm so happy Mom...parso ceremony hai...Mom come here to attend ceremony
Raj's Mom:congrats beta...I'm proud of u...par beta main nahi aa sakthi...I'm leaving to Darjeeling tomorrow...I'm so sorry beta...aur "we" matlab...Naveen bhi...
Raj:haan maa...Naveen bhi promoted as captain and we r going to have holidays next week and I want to come to u but yeh Naveen bhi na...yeh keh raha hai ki...his sister is not at home and he will get bored at home without her so he wants to spend his holidays here only...I asked him to come alon with me but he is not at all listening to me...u only talk to him
Raj's Mom:ok give phone to him I will talk to him(and now Naveen takes phone)...hello...hello Naveen beta...How r u?
Naveen:aunty main theek hoon..
Raj's Mom:how many times I told u to call me as "maa" but u...
Naveen:ok ok sorry maa...and how r u?
Raj's Mom:main bhi theek hoon and congrats beta...aur yeh kya?u r not going to ur home...why? what happened?
Naveen:maa oh kya hai ki Naina is not coming in these holidays...she is busy with her exams...aur main akele wahaan kya karega? so I'm not going home...I will enjoy here only
Raj's Mom:but u can come along with Veer...u r like my son...until now I hav'nt seen u atleast once...I have seen u in photos only.....so no more discussions u r coming thats all and now I want to meet the person who is bearing Veer from all these days
(and they both laughed )
Naveen:ok maa I will come................................

(after a week Raj and Naveen came to Shekavat's house and Raj's mom also came back from Darjeeling)
In Shekavat's house

Raj:Mom...Mom...where r u? ( he is running here and there for his mother)
Raj's Mom:main yahaan hoon...tumhare piche...(Raj turns behind and hugs his mom and says)
Raj:I missed u a lot...
Raj's Mom:me too...arey Naveen tum wahaan kyun khade ho? andar aauo na ....
Naveen:haan maa...how r u? ( and he touches her feet then Raj's mom looks at Raj as if saying to learn something fron Naveen)
Raj's Mom:main theek hoon beta? ok ab tum andar jao? aur rest kar lo...
(Raj takes Naveen to his room, showed him the entire house and after sometime they have their dinner and Raj has gone to sleep but Naveen is doing some work with his laptop then Raj's mom comes there )

Raj's Mom:Naveen beta... kya kar rahe ho? why r u not sleeping? anything wrong ?
Naveen:no maa...I'm just sending mail to Naina that now I'm here with u people...and hostel mein cell phones r not allowed
(Naina Singh Ahluwaliah sister of Naveen Singh Ahluvaliah,doing her MBBS and she is staying in hostel. Naina and Naveen have lost their parent in an accident and so Naina is everything to Naveen and for Naina also.From childhood onwards they relatives have been gaurding them.This entire story is known to Raj's mom and so she is so conserned about Naveen)
Raj's Mom:Ok...Naveen can I ask u onething? ...Naina will complete her studies by next year then what r u planning for her future? I know u have already planned it...so tell me
Naveev:yes maa I have only 2 wishes in my life one is to see Naina as a doctor and second is to give her a good husband who loves her more than me...
Raj's Mom:Naveen, what do u think about our family? and Veer? are we ok for Naina ?
Naveen:maa...r u asking ?...
Raj's Mom:yes Naveev u r thinking correctly...kya Veer is not good for Naina?
Naveen:no maa.... I didn't think of it...I will be very happy if Raj will.........but until now u have not seen Naina...lekin maa u have taken this descision with out seeing her...
Raj's Mom:iski koi jarurath nahin hai...I have seen u so I'm sure how Naina will be...and I want ur desicion now
Naveen:yes...yes maa...I'm thinking of giving her a good husband but now I'm going to give her a mother...I'm so happy maa(and he hugs her)
Raj's Mom:but we should ask Naina also ...but don't ask her now let her complete her studies and ur first wish will also be...what say?
Naveen:haan... lekin we should also ask Raj...
Raj's Mom:let Naina complete her studies then we will ask both of them
Naveen:thanks a lot maa... Raj suites very much to Naina...I'm so happy maaaa....

Present:
(Raj' Mom has tears in her eyes and she got a message in her mobile.message is from Raj and it consists of Ahluwaliah's house address )

Edited by *Rajeevian* - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

awesome start.........loved it..........happy to se dis fic here too

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aarthi

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Posted: 17 years ago

varsha rockn sweety,

hmm contn sweety,

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Posted: 17 years ago

this fic is seriously rocking yaar its too good yaar ...........................

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pls pls pls continue

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Posted: 17 years ago

simply super!!!plz cont dis fic.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks Varsha for starting this fic here.
Continue soon.

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saivarsha

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part-2

She went to Ahluwaliah's house.Not many people were near the house.She went into the house n there she found Naveen...dead...she went near to him to see him for the last time,tears were flowing from her eyes now then she noticed a girl sitting beside Naveen.The girl was not at all crying,she was just sitting beside him and looking at him without blinking.The girl was taking an oath...an oath to prove her brother innocent and the girl is none other than Naina.After some time Raj's mom returned to her house.She kept on thinking how fast Raj's life had changed,last year only he enjoyed a lot with his friend here n now he was destroyed totally...yes destroyed in love n friendship,he lost both his love n friendship...yes his love Nandini and his friend Naveev.

Before 3 months,
when Raj's mom heard that Raj was in love with Nandini, she called Naveen
Raj's mom: hello...Naveen beta yeh Veer kya keh raha hai, he is in love with Nandini...who is this Nandini?...why she came in the middle now?...and what about Naina?
Naveen:maa...just relax maa...yes Raj is in love with her,he is crazy about her and she also loves him a lot.I swear she is very good girl, and Raj will be very happy with her in his life and about Naina... leave this issue now because its very nice that we did not ask them until now. Naina ke kismat mein koyi aur hogaa aur isiliye yeh sab huaa...so just relax and accept Nandini as ur daughter-in-law as soon as posible...ok bye maa...take care....

(Last year after spending their holidays in shekavat's house they returned to their respective duties, Raj was very much attracted to Nandini when he was newly posted there and he fell in love with her. This was all known to Naveen but he did not say anything to him instead he encouraged Raj. After this Raj was alone alloted a mission and for Nandini and Naveen another mission.Raj did not know what happened in their mission but he got a news that Nandini was dead and she was killed by none other than Naveen....)

Present,
After two weeks,Raj' mom went to meet his son.Raj after seeing his mom, hugged her and was crying badly and even more. Raj's mom understood that he was broken badly but she should give him all the strength to withstand this situation so she started a small conversation with him
Raj's mom:Veer suno beta..I can understand ur situation but u should be strong as u r an army officer...be strong what ever comes to ur way...I know that Naveev is innocent and u r the one who can prove his innocence...so do this for Naveen
Raj:maa...I'm sorry maa...sorry...
Raj's mom:no beta don't give up u can prove Naveen innocent and I'm sure Naveen...(she was cut in between by raj' words)
Raj:no maa I'm sorry I did hide something from you maa...sorry...
Raj's mom:what Veer? what did u hide from me...?
Raj:maa...maa...I killed Naveen maa...but listen to me maa..when I heard that Naveen killed Nandini, I did not believe in that and so I asked my superiors that I will take that mission.I thought that I could help Naveen by joining him...but before I could do something he was totally trapped maa...he escaped from custody and when I found him he was totally destroyed.....he asked me to shoot him...I could not see him like that begging and so...(before he completed his sentence his mother gave him a tight slap on his face and she was crying a lot)
Raj's mom: and so ...so .... u killed Naveen...u....(she went away from there unable to digest the words what she heard?)

Raj:maa listen to me...please maa don't misunderstand me maa...(but she did not turn)
Raj(to himself):maa this is a promise for u maa...i will prove Naveen innocent...definitely...

(Raj' mom did not call his son or she did not lift his calls any more and after a week she thought of meeting Naina and she went again to Ahluwaliah's house,but she found that house was closed. She enquired about them and got information that Naveen's badi maa and her husband who were guiding them left the house because they too felt that Naveen was a traitor and Naina went to Mumbai to complete her studies.So Raj's mom went to Mumbai also to meet Naina and when she enquired about her in college, they said that Naina was not coming to college from last 2 weeks, she was also not staying in the college hostel, she was staying some where in the outskirts of the city.Raj's mom got that address where Naina was staying and went to meet her)

Credits:Priyanka

Edited by *Rajeevian* - 17 years ago