~' Together By Chance '~ ( Part XXVII ) page 23 - Page 21

Originally posted by: spln

hey bhoomi...so sorry me so delayed.....ive just not been able to login past three dayz only just caught up with ur updates....thanx a lot hun...loved the parts!!!great going....cant comment in detaiul for now, not online for long...but will wait eagerly for ur next update!!

PartXXV

Next day , Kinnari was dressed in a Saree and Asit could see the beautiful curve of her waist…

Asit: Why u wore Saree, U are looking so nice and I am feeling I should not go the rehersal… I want to get cosy with u, not wanting to go anywhere else now…

Kinnari: Stop looking at me... We have to wear traditional attire today for a party at my office… So felt Saree would be nice... On our marriage day, I had to wear the heavy embroidery Ghagra choli… I still can sense the burden I felt… Like someone had put me in a sack and I was waiting to come out of it…

Asit smiled and Kinnari was leaving…

Asit: Tomorrow is the Contest finale… our marriage anniversary a day after that... pray I win…

Kinnari: Why worry… The trophy isn't more beautiful than me right…? I will love u the same… u win or loose… Don't get emotional with the results, it's the performance that should be rocking…

Asit: It cannot be rocking, I lack a lot of energy.. (He winkled)

Kinnari understood what he wants to say… smiled feeling pity on him... she turned Saying

Kinnari: Fight against Global warming u see we need to keep the surrounding cool… and energy should be used to the minimum to save for future usage…

Asit laughed with her reply.

The grand finale of Dance reality show, Asit was a bit nervous but his nervousness doubled as he saw Kinnari's parents present…. Her dad came and shook hands didn't say a word. Asit knew her dad had wished him good luck… he went into the green room…. He was getting jittery... Feeling if he doesn't perform well today so many expectations of so many people will be shattered… Kinnari came,

Kinnari: Asit getting jiteery, feeling a tad nervous?

Asit: No No, not at all… (Wanting to show he can't be nervous like her for dancing on stage)

Kinnari: Really... (Laughing) Men want to show the world how strong they r.. sensitive to the limit they maybe from within.

Kinnari: Asit U Should not be nervous at all, as NO ONE IS EXPECTING… (she paused and Asit laughed hearing it… it chilled him… She continued…) NO ONE IS EXPECTING U TO WIN.. as all the deserving people usually don't win… in such reality show.. Moreover, u didn't cry on this show... getting votes is just impossible with that limitation …

Asit smiled and felt she can happlily go on saying against such shows…

Asit: Oh well, I HOPE no one expects… BUT WILL ONE DAY WAIT FOR U TO BE EXPECTING…. (Kinnari hit him on his back with her purse…and he screamed….)areey I meant.. U TO BE EXPECTING I HAVE TO WIN... now stop hitting me… OUCH u hurt my back…

Kinnari kissed his back and came close to kiss him on his lips… Asit felt too happy but he stopped her as he had used a lotof makeup and foundation on one side of the face and half lips … Kinnari later realised and when Asit said with disppointement that 'makeup hai'.. Kinnari could sense him feeling he can't get her kiss…she kissed him on half of his lips that was without makeup. Asit felt absolutely wonderful… he looked into her eyes..and told her to go..or else Green room will start giving warnings of Global warming…

Kinnari went away and Asit was focused on his act without any nervousness. The act started with first him and his poster as Ram the character with half of his face dipticng that time of his life… the adulation, the fans, the controversies, media hog with the song 'Chand tare todd lauu sari duniya parr main jhauu bas itna sa khwab hai'… Asit performed brilliantly with showing just one side of the face and movment of one hand and one leg'. Later the song changed as the segment came when the media were after him to know his girlfriend and he doing different stunts…...the secret meeting which the media captured… with the song played 'Tere mere beech mey kaisa hai yeh bandhan anjana, maine nahi jaana, tuney nahi jaana'. Asit looked at Kinnari and Kinnari smiled feelgin how romantically he is dancing with grace and smooth body movements… The segment later hcnaged to Asit getting burnt withfire.. the marks on his other face making him look ugly the scars which took tiem to heal, the fans, adulations fadin,g the hands which came forward for autographs ignored him and the shows producer taking soemoen else as the lead… the song played was, 'ang ang jakhmi hai tera, lamha lamha faryaadi haikhol jubaan abb khol abb bolane ki tujhko aazaadi haijo himaat na haare, woh jindagi sawaarechal dikhaade saari duniya ko tere saanson mein bhi hai aandhijab tak hai dum me dum dum dum me dum, aage badhaalo apane kadam

…' Asit used stunts to show the anger to jump and cry out... a lot of emotions were beauitufly played the anger in him was shown with heother side of face and black background… Everyone on the set were in tears.. lastly the image of Kinnari and his parents snap where they smiled and helped him to get back his confidence.. Asit used various skating stunts to show how he was ready to fly and make the wrorld know he isn't over… with the song sin background, '

Dil Kya Kehta Hai Mera Kya Main BataoonTum Ye Samjhoge Shayad Main Pagal Hoon

Dil Karta Hai Tv Tower Pe Main Chadd JaoonChilla Chilla Ke Main Ye Sabse Kehdoon

Rock On… Hai Ye Waqt Ka Ishaara Rock On… Har Lamha PukaaraRock On… Yuhin Dekhta Hai Kya Tu Rock On… Zindagi Millegi Na Dobaara..." Everyone clapped and stood. Once more was the voice heard all over. Asit could feel he has given his best performance…

Soon the results were announced and Asit was announced the winner. Asit was very happy and took the trphy while he took the mike in hand, he said, ' My wife Kinnari had told me not to get emotional wit the result and I can see her crying as I am announced the winner.. just wnt to tell her , "Kinnari don't get emotional" Kinnari smiled and wiped her tears. Kinnari's parents were also very proud. The media, newchannels everyone were on air with the flashing news that Asit won the much deserved trophy. Wihtin those few hours he not only became the hero talked about. His performance gave him many offers of acting in film and television. Asit was so busy taking all the adulations. He reached home around 2 am and Kinnari ws sleeping in the drawing room waiting for him from long time….he saw Kinnari sleeping and kissed her forhead… Kinnari opened her eyes and said, "Asit, My parents had waited for long…and' Asit didn't want to listen but kissed her on her cheeks, and said I love u… This trpophy is urs… lets celebrate I have brought champaine… Kinnari tried to tell him, 'Asit… listen talk softly..'and Asit tried to get into her bedsheet and Kinnari was about to say , 'what r u doing… Asit' , Kinnari's mom came out and said, Asit hasn't yet come. Call him and ask, u dad is fast asleep… how to wake him up..we shoud be gogin to our house… Kinnari replied, ' Maa, its ok, u sleep Asit will be coming in 10 minutes he called up just now. Kinnari's mom lef the drawing room and Asit who was hiding himself under her bedsheet came out taking a deep breathe…

Asit: Ur parents r here…?

Kinnari: Yes, they were waiting to congratulate and talk about our anniversary; they want to take us to some temple. They waited so long… I told them to wait we wil drop them home…but U didn't come…and they waited waited and dad fell asleep , he was too tired…

Asit: Mere romance ka band bajadiya… tomorrow they will be with us?

Kinnari: Yes…

Asit lied there with an expression of Oh No… and Kinnari smiled Asit looked irritated by her laughter and kinnari made him to sleep on her lap. Asit pulled her close, they kissed each other on the lips…a few seconds and they knew they need a honeymoon trip soon. Both slept with the same bedsheet both holding on to it…

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hehe..... 1st again😃😆........ now it's hatrick.........

as expected he won the prize.......... yippeeeeee🥳......... and also got many offers??😃......... now bhoomi darls, if i again see bakra thing na, jadu se maarogi😉😆................. hehe.......

vaise bechaara asit ka saara planning paani mein gaya🤣............. now that he finally got chance to romance with his wife his saas-sasur beech mein aa gaye............ hehhe....... poor him........

hey bhoomi i daily come online only to see the updates its so beautiful i loved this part the way u described hypocritical situations in a very different way is what i love to read gr8 job cont soon me waitin to read more

Originally posted by: rajeevskitu

hehe..... 1st again😃😆........ now it's hatrick.........

as expected he won the prize.......... yippeeeeee🥳......... and also got many offers??😃......... now bhoomi darls, if i again see bakra thing na, jadu se maarogi😉😆................. hehe.......

vaise bechaara asit ka saara planning paani mein gaya🤣............. now that he finally got chance to romance with his wife his saas-sasur beech mein aa gaye............ hehhe....... poor him........

anyways, will wait and see wot happens next.........

bye.......

cya........

take care

P.S.: hey i was just kidding abt the eariler updates........ just want to let u kno how eager i am to read the parts😉

I dont knw what to say ... i dont have da rite words to describe my feeling for this story..... i m jst wondrng how i manged to miss some fab parts of it in last few days...n i m glad that finally i read all of them n feeling grrrrrrrrrrrrr8....

Bhoomi, i dont need to say its my most fav story as u already knw it...u also knw how kidsh i bcme whn it cms to this one and i m so hplessly partial abt everything related to this story .... sab purani baatein ...but jo nayi baat mujhko satarahi hai ... wo hai ur talent..i mean in last 4,5 parts i kept asking asking myself ,''how can she writes so well? is she the same Bhoomi who i knw ..is she d same writer whs writtng i hve been following for so long?'' u srpssd my expectation with each n evry parts.. everytime i think, this time da beauty is missing... somthng lacks smwhere...she is nt hndlng the sensitivity ,the emotion prfectly, d magic is going to fade ..but NO... everytime u balnced so tactfully n briliantly... everytime i finish a part nd i just feel like hugging u... and one thing i hav eto tell u that till now its ur best creation n I jst hpe nd pray that whn i finish reading da last part i feel the same ...... lOVE U....

oh yay...loved the part.....they are so close to being together forever...if u dont get more twists of course!!!i wudnt mind that since the fic wud be longer but something abt ur writing style tells me we are approaching the end...a happy one of course so no cpmplaints!!!keep it rolling bhoomi!!

Originally posted by: spln

oh yay...loved the part.....they are so close to being together forever...if u dont get more twists of course!!!i wudnt mind that since the fic wud be longer but something abt ur writing style tells me we are approaching the end...a happy one of course so no cpmplaints!!!keep it rolling bhoomi!!

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

I dont knw what to say ... i dont have da rite words to describe my feeling for this story..... i m jst wondrng how i manged to miss some fab parts of it in last few days...n i m glad that finally i read all of them n feeling grrrrrrrrrrrrr8....

Bhoomi, i dont need to say its my most fav story as u already knw it...u also knw how kidsh i bcme whn it cms to this one and i m so hplessly partial abt everything related to this story .... sab purani baatein ...but jo nayi baat mujhko satarahi hai ... wo hai ur talent..i mean in last 4,5 parts i kept asking asking myself ,''how can she writes so well? is she the same Bhoomi who i knw ..is she d same writer whs writtng i hve been following for so long?'' u srpssd my expectation with each n evry parts.. everytime i think, this time da beauty is missing... somthng lacks smwhere...she is nt hndlng the sensitivity ,the emotion prfectly, d magic is going to fade ..but NO... everytime u balnced so tactfully n briliantly... everytime i finish a part nd i just feel like hugging u... and one thing i hav eto tell u that till now its ur best creation n I jst hpe nd pray that whn i finish reading da last part i feel the same ...... lOVE U....

Part XXVI

Early morning it's their wedding anniversary. Kinnari was talking with her mom and dad in the room while Asit was sleeping, as he was too tired with yesterday's performance and interviews. Kinnari was discussing with her Papa how her studies MBA admissions have gone through and her job is satisfactory. Her GMAT papers also went excellent. Kinnari's Dad was pretty happy listening to her and feeling she still gives importance to her education which he always wanted. Kinnari's mom asked them to get ready to go to the temple and to wake up Asit. Kinnari was insisting that Let Asit sleep he is really tired. While they were talking, Asit got up with a phone call. It was a well known Director's phone call who congratulated him and asked him to meet him he would like to discuss a film project with him. Asit told he will surely meet tomorrow today is his marriage anniversary and he has guest at home. Kinnari asked him he should go for the meeting, but Asit told her,

Asit: Aaj sirf tum aur hum… Aaj mujhe career se koi lagav nahi..main janta hun when u r with me everything is going to be beautiful in life for me…

Kinnari looked at him with tears in her eyes…

Asit: Hey, don't cry.. Why r u feeling emotional…?

Kinnari: When u were surrounded by so many people yesterday, ur fans, media so… I wanted to come and hug u, I was so excited… but I couldn't reach u pasing through the crowd... I felt for a second… Will u be the same... Will u be wanting to reach out to me, I felt… Is the love as deep as I feel from urside as well…

Asit: Oh ho.. Wow!! U felt I would give less time to u … U felt I sharing my glory with so many and not U my dear… Kinnari…I wanted to go and give U a tight hug but I was terrified that may be ur dad will not like that behaviour. So controlled my excitement, I think in order to do that I hugged the male anchor and today morning looking at the pics in the paper where I am hugging him I laugh looking at them… Hope nobody takes it otherwise or else female director only will start approaching me (he laughed along with Kinnari) I don't want to share the glory with U , I want to share my life with u my Wife… Lets come back from the temple... I have kept the contract paper to be torn… and that surprise as well… the papers I want to show u… Hope we will get some privacy for a while after the visit… or else…..

Kinnari: Or else?

Asit: Or else… In our house Saas Bahu Sazish nahi.. Sasur Damaad Dhishum Dhishum will happen…

Kinnari blushed and said she will surely give him some blows along with her Dad if that happens. Asit said, 'Oyee hoyee Iss Lioness ke panjhe dekhne ke liye to hum taras gaye'. Asit held her waist making her get close into his arms…Kinnari's parents were coming with their footsteps Kinnari warned Asit to behave himself and Asit whispered.. 'Agaye phirse mere romantic moment ke dushman..' Kinnari hit him on his back to Shut up…!

Kinnari's mom: Asit, happy Wedding Anniversary … (Asit took their blessings) I want to take u both to the Kali Mata Mandir near our house. I have much faith in the goddess and U need to get Devi's blessings…

Asit: Sure…

Kinnari's Dad: Asit .. u don't look happy with our presence in ur house…

Kinnari got a bit serious hearing it… and Asit replied,

Asit: Uncle... U think I am upset u r here? How can it be... the only time I can see Kinnari disciplined and sincerily cleaning the house, folding the bedsheets without been asked to do it, getting up early and making good tea is all due to ur stay here.. I am really happy for that…

Kinnari got angry with Asit… and embarrsed in front of her parents but the seriousness by which his dad had asked became a light moment with that answer.

Kinnari's Dad: Asit … After a lot of thinking I do feel I was pretty harsh on my daughter and feels really sad that I had called her up on her marriage day just to make her remind bitter memories talking to me.. Asit, I am not a bad person…. Not against giving her freedom… it's the dream unfulfilled within me, which I wanted to make it big through my daughter. Today she has achieved what she wants… and that should make me happy..but I guess When u become a father u will understand that when ur daughter chooses path on her own , someone else to hold importance in her life, in her decisions how suddenly u feel nothing in her life…

Asit whispered: I will understand when I become a father… but ur presence taking away time here and is just hampering that opportunity to make u grandparenst.s…

Kinnari looked at him saying shh… and Kinnari's father continued…

Kinnari's Dad: I was wrong… and I want to make this wedding anniversary special by taking u both to the temple, giving my heartfelt blessings…

Kinnari got ready to go…Asit was taking congratulatory calls, among them was Tanishka and She wished him and asked for a party… Kinnari had heard Tanishka's name while Asit was speaking with her, 'Hi Tanishka, hey u know what Kinnari & I were planning our second honeymoon trip... Which place is good u feel…? I heard u and Ronny had visited Paris together… Howz the place ?' Tansihka was shocked at the revelation that she was with Ronnny at Paris and what they were doing she knew better and Asit knew it as well. She kept the receiver. Asit smiled felt terrible how sick and cheap few women can get …. He had to someday show the level to which she has gone he isn't that naive to know that…

Kinnari's parents walked slowly towards the car, her Dad was looking a bit disturbed. Kinnari and Asit sat in the car with his inlaws in the backseat. They reached the place and the crowd made the whole situation out of control… It took them more than hour to take the blessing of the Goddess and after that, her parents along with Asit and Kinnari went to their house. Reaching the same building and the house where he had met Kinnari the first time Asit felt How together by chance they became..but together for life they want to be… Kinnari, Asit, Her Dad & mom were in the lift… Kinnari's dad asked Asit…

Kinnari's Dad: Asit R u sure u want to come along with us?

Asit a bit surprised: Uncle… why will I have any problem…

Kinnari Dad: I happened to see some papers while we were leaving ur house…

Asit and Kinnari looked at each other …

The lift stopped, Kinnari's parents entered the house…and Kinnari stopped in front of the house door… Kinnari's dad pulled her inside and said,

Kinnari's Dad: Asit U made my daughter to get contract marriage… what u thought she is a dumb girl who is alone and u can take advantage of her? I am still alive... she may be stupid, attracted to ur Star glamour image but she is MY daughter… I can't allow u to throw away after using her… like many other woman in media u may have used… Will u go urself or U will need some help…

Kinnari : Papa… Nothing like that….

Kinnari's mom: What contract? Whats that?

Kinnari's Dad: Enjoying the facilities of marriage for an year and then going their ways… I was feeling how nice as a person u r.. but I was wrong.. U uneducated media crazy people can stoop low not grow but make others fall to ur level.. like my daughter did by joining in ur cheap games..

Kinnari: Papa,... He loves me, I love him.. We r married… the contract we will tore it…

Kinnari's Dad looked at Kinnari feeling she has lost her mind, feeling terrible that the happiness he felt he had achieved by educating her and making her stand on her feet, knowing she married Asit and they both r happy with giving her studies and career also a push. But now it is nothing but foolishness left in her life… making her life a matter of shame in front of all.

Asit: Uncle… we both respect u and ur thoughts, give us some chance to tell u what and why we took this step…

Kinnari: Papa, I am happy that u still have love for me and u r worried about me. I really can't bear anything wrong said or thought about my husband. He is not using or taking advantage... he is such a gem of a person that I felt… U couldn't have found a better partner for me ever… U found him for me, as its only when u threw me out of the house I got a chance to be with him and God grace know him, be close to him… I love him to no lengths but I respect him more than how much I love him…

Asit was too touched by the words of Kinnari. He smiled looking at her. .

Asit whispered to Kinnari: Sasur Damaad Dishum Dishum… I loved the blows u gave me… lagta hai.. gaal tumhare main Chumlu….

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