FF: 'Khamoshi' - Chapter 14: Pg. 82 {Jan. 2}

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Khamoshi

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Prem and Heer's marriage was decided when they were kids, and Lalit's family had to move to Canada, just like in KDMHMD. Except in here Balraaj is the one who insisted on Lalit to move to Canada, but he told him that he would come back to fulfill his promise. The two families always kept in touch, and there relationship had grown even when they were miles apart.

Daljeet never approved of Prem and Heer's marriage. She wanted Heer to get married to her sister's son Manmeet. One reason was probably because Heer had millions of dollars in her name. She wanted to break Prem and Heer's marriage, and she wasn't the only one. Ever since Manmeet had seen Heer, he wanted her too, and would stoop to any level to get her.

Balraaj hated Daljeet with all his guts. He knew she was a selfish, greedy, and wicked woman. He never wanted his brother, Balwant, to get married her. He tried hard to stop it too, but Balwant was blind in her love, he never saw anything but her. When she came in the house, something happened that Balraaj always expected. Balwant took his share of the money, which wasn't much, and moved into another house. But he would come every month or so asking for money. Balraaj being the older one could never say no.

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Entertainment Section

Since me and Rink have such entertaining conversations, we thought I would put the page numbers of our convo's on the first page. Now there not all off-topic, they have little tiny hints of whats gonna happen next in the story. So hope you get entertained by our conversations. And if you really want to know what happens next, just read them. You'll have a large amount of hints.

Pages

*editing*

The pages have been changed so i have to look through it all again. I can refresh memories. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜†

Songs

I'm going to put all the songs I've used so far right here. Some of you might not have heard of them, so makes peoples lives easier... I think. ๐Ÿ˜†

Shayad Yehi To Pyar Hai

Watch: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k5Y1dN26ds8

Listen: http://www.radioreloaded.com/tracks/?2730

Updates

Chapter 1:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1012244&PID=17832735&#17832735

Chapter 2:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1012244&PID=17863824&#17863824

Chapter 3:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1012244&PID=17931877&#17931877

Chapter 4: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1012244&PID=17972027&#17972027

Chapter 5: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1012244&PID=18045911&#18045911

Chapter 6:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1012244&PID=18114892&#18114892

Chapter 7:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1012244&PID=18281965&#18281965

Chapter 8: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1012244&PID=18375697&#18375697

Chapter 9: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1012244&PID=18476946&#18476946

Chapter 10a:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1012244&PID=18570808&#18570808

Chapter 10b: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1012244&PID=18584240&#18584240

Chapter 11: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1012244&PID=19269393&#19269393

Chapter 12:http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1012244&PID=19342063&#19342063

Chapter 13:http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1012244&PID=19426215&#19426215

Chapter 14: http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1012244&PID=19658349&#19658349

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~Rinki~ thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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okies now get ready for my comment!! *laugh evilly* lolz jk ๐Ÿ˜†

okay first of all since i already know its gonna be awesome...i'll just say this GO AND WRITE IT NOW!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜†
aww u dnt need to thank me at all!
besides i know you would help me too if i needed it ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰
am shooooo looking forward to prem being a majnu lolz
nd course him beat the ---- out of manmeet
now stop making me wait and hurry with the next part!!
am choooooo excited for it ๐Ÿ˜‰
jaldi jaldi se agla part post karo so i can read nd tell you its mindblowing! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

okies now get ready for my comment!! *laugh evilly* lolz jk ๐Ÿ˜† Haha now its like you in my position.. ๐Ÿ˜† Arrghh i liked it better when i could laugh evilly...

okay first of all since i already know its gonna be awesome...i'll just say this GO AND WRITE IT NOW!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜† Hawww someones demanding... ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
aww u dnt need to thank me at all! Aww.. no i do need to thank you.. you gave me a perfect title!
besides i know you would help me too if i needed it ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰
am shooooo looking forward to prem being a majnu lolz Haww.. prem majnu? no waaayy he's gonna be the angry dude sticking up for his lady...
nd course him beat the ---- out of manmeet I'm gonna love writing that lol..
now stop making me wait and hurry with the next part!!
am choooooo excited for it ๐Ÿ˜‰
jaldi jaldi se agla part post karo so i can read nd tell you its mindblowing! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
Okies, i'm gonna continue every wednesday and friday.. those are my free days.. where i'm not forced into a party...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sounds really good, can't wait till the next part!
and the storyline sounds interesting!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice storyline cont soon plz!!!!๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice written continue soon
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Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Sounds really good, can't wait till the next part!

and the storyline sounds interesting!
?xXx?
Sunayna



Thank you so much Sunayna! I'm glad you liked the beginning I'll post the first part on monday, hoping you'll like it.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

nice storyline cont soon plz!!!!๐Ÿ‘



Thank you so much, glad you liked it so far.. I'll continue on wednesday.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

haha now the power is in my hands!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ aww dnt wrry u can laugh evilly wen u leave us at a cliffhanger ๐Ÿ˜†
Omg rinki! Why didn't i think about that? Cliffhangers, thank you so much for given me the idea... I'm gonna try and end each part in a cliffhanger now... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
aw yesh me ijj sho demanding...now do as i demand! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
Haww... yesh mam! *acts scared*

aww i always wanted to read a fanfic by that title for some reason...and wen u told me the storyline, it was perfect for it na!
See, you found me and i found you! Hehe we both got something out of it... ๐Ÿ˜†
besides i know you would help me too if i needed it ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰ Hmm.. would i? lolz jk, yup i would def. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
aww yesh that also but he's gonna be a majnu no wait a ranjha for his heer...๐Ÿ˜‰ Yess Heer Ranjha, so much better! I still don't even know the Heer-ranjha story... ๐Ÿ˜†
and imma love reading that part! ๐Ÿ˜†
Hehe once again we both get something out of it.. ๐Ÿ˜†
okie will be waiting for those two days desperatly!! and today is friday so that mean you gonna post the first part today??? ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
Hey! Don't try to trick me young lady! Its gonna be posted on wednesday... You can wait till then right?

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