Mmm, maybe an FF. . .||UPDATED 11th august| - Page 4

Originally posted by: blushpink13

hi sunayna..ur ff is great...just luved the character sketches..ur going great...plzzzzzzzz cont soon.i'll be waiting....if u need any help in finding the topic then do tell me...i am there for u. ok...

luv u for the ff.

luv iqra

Originally posted by: ranrags

Hey Sunayna..it's really good..pls do continue👍🏼..and we'll be waiting for it😍..can't wait to read about premeer scenes!!

Recap: Heer hadn't notice anything, she walked back up to the reception desk, when a hand tapped her on the shoulder. . . .

Chapter 2

Heer turned around; her black silky hair brushed the Mystery guys face. She pulled her hair back, and the air condition started, her hair fell back onto her face again. He felt a sudden urge to see her face, there was something about her that he couldn't stop thinking about. The way she had carefully pulled her hair away from her face, the way she just stood there. Jessica called Heer, Heer turned around to face Jessica with her back to the guy.

Jessica: The computer systems crashed again!

Heer: This has been happening for years, . . . why can't the snobby rich Juneja family just buy a new computer; we have to put up with this dumb thing.

Jessica: How do you know they're snobby??

Heer: All rich families are snobby, and I am sure they are like all the other typical rich families !

Jessica: I guess you have a good point.

Heer: Of course I do, they sit down and do nothing while we stand here working 9 hours and then we do a 4 hour shift at the restaurant down the road.

Prem walked up behind Heer and stood in front of the counter, he was now smiling. He had listened to their entire conversation and thought

"Talk about attitude, she seems like the quite girl".

Jessica asked Heer to fix it while she went to get them coffee and then walked away, Prem was still standing there. He stood, wondering what to say as he watched her try to fix the computer. Prem finally found the courage to talk to her. He leaned on the counter and said

Prem: Excuse me. . . .

In the most beautiful voice you could ever imagine, it was husky but also velvety at the same time. Was it possible to put velvety and husky together??

Heer jumped back in her seat, she held her hand up to her heart to make herself feel better. She hated being shocked like that; she stood up and looked into the mirror which stood behind the reception desk. She saw that the same guy who had tapped her on the shoulder was standing at the desk. She turned around suddenly realizing it was the same person and said

Heer: Yes?

Prem: Well, I just wanted to say I totally agree with you, those rich families can be so snobby sometimes, they can never be bothered thinking of anyone but themselves, who would think such people could exist!

Heer stood there looking confused; she didn't know what to say. Her cell phone rang; she looked at it and said

Heer: "Please excuse" with a small halfhearted smile.

Prem looked unhappy, but smiled gesturing her to pick it up, which she did without hesitating. It turned out it was her sister Ayesha.

Heer: Ayesha? . . . . . . Kya hua? . . . Tum tik to ho na? Tik hai.

They spoke for a few minutes; Heer was hoping Ayesha wouldn't put the phone down, which she did. Heer reluctantly turned around again.

Prem: you're Indian?

Heer: Ji, umm, I mean yes.

Prem laughed, "Same here, oh, I'm Prem by the way, Prem Juneja".

Heer thought "Prem, Juneja, OMG I just embarrassed myself in front of the C.E.O of this hotel ! "

Heer turned crimson, then she realized that all the hot guys were rich and snobby that meant he was one of them. She saw Jessica coming through the door, Heer carefully slid past Prem, making sure not to make eye contact and touch him, and went to help Jessica carry the coffee. While she was helping her she said

Heer: Please take over the counter for a bit, just for like 20 minutes,.

Jessica: Why?

Heer: Please I just need a bit of a break, I want to go to the. . . .the. . . . the Park.

Jessica: The park?

Heer: Umm, yes.

Jessica: Okay, but 20 minutes only. . . .okay.

Heer: sure.

Heer followed Jessica back to the counter; Prem was still standing there watching Heer. Jessica handed her the coffee and said

Jessica: Have fun at the park !

Heer was hoping she wouldn't say that. She frowned and said

Heer: "Yeah, I will! Bye." As quite as she could, Prem smiled goodbye. He wondered why he felt so attached to her; there was just something about her that he couldn't keep of his mind. She walked holding her coffee and walked out the front doors of the hotel, Prem thought," she's going to the park. . . . Maybe I should go to the park too!"

He walked out the doors, and he could see Heer about to cross the road. He followed her, it was 3 blocks to the park, and they finally arrived at the park, though Heer didn't know he had followed her.

She found a seat in the shade of the sun and sat down. Prem let her sit there for a while so it didn't seem like he had followed her.

Prem: Do you mind if I sit here?

Okay, that's it for today. . . . .

Hope you liked it,

Thanks everyone for commenting and please continue to comment!

?xXx?

Sunayna

There will be more Premeer scenes tommorow/ the day after tommorow!

Originally posted by: amanaranjan

omg ur FF is awesome pls continue

Originally posted by: fijiana

omg your ff is soooooooo good,loved every bit of the update.loved both prem and heer.please pleasee do update soon.it is just nice

Originally posted by: angel82

loved it .....plz update soon....cant wait to read their conversation....