Fiction: 'Waqt'...continues....

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I am sorry, we have to start Waqt again....

There were some reasons, we had to stop it last time....

But at its orginal place, Waqt is nearing completion.....

So here u are......

Story till here can be found at: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=716194


Cheers,
Rumela and Janki


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Posted: 17 years ago
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She was sitting near the fire......staring at it! Tears stained her face....not because of some grief! No. She had been staring at the fire a little too long......


"Tum main himmat thee Naina....", she muttered to herself, "....aur shayad mujh main nahin.....khone ke liye baha hi kya tha....par phir bhi.....", and she closed her eyes.





The door of the detention cell creaked open. And she walked in. She saw him sitting there.....in the worst possible scene she could imagine. She had seen his snaps....when he was a proud Captain....."Proud" thats the word....it radiated from him......even in this battered state.....


He looked up at her. And smiled. How did he manage to smile under the ordeal, she wondered. Her heart thumping fast she entered.


5days back, a case was thrown a case......a loosing battle. A case to save an accused traitor! His friend had begged for a lawyer.....and a senior govt. officer had obliged. She wondered why......she was a fresh....inexperienced.....armature....


But as she went through the files......she knew why......she could picture the man..........


She had never imagined him to be like this.....it was different....very different......


"Captain Priya Gill....."


"Hmmm....", he kept staring at her. As if peeping into her eyes, her conscious.....her intentions......


"Aap....."



"Huh!", he said, and continued staring at her....expressionless....


"....CAPTAIN Naveen Singh Ahluwalia...."


His eyes stirred.....as she stressed on the first word.....he winced and smiled at the same time....as the word hurt and soothed him together......


"...gaddar...."


"Nahin!", she didnt know why she exclaimed.


He snorted.


"Main aapki defence lawyer....aapke dost Captain Rajveer...."


"Raj?", as if he had forgotten all the pain, "....kaisa hai?"


".....theek....."


"Mili? Aap mili usse?"


"Jee...."


He nodded.


"Humare paas waqt kum hai, Captain. Kya aaj hum kuch baatein kar saktein hain?"


He looked at her again, and nodded.


She smiled.

He attempted to move aside on the stone bench he was sitting, to make space for her. Clearly, his every movement lead to immense pain.....


She was just staring at him.....a man, with his body full of injuries, cuts and bruises....heaven knows how many fractures......was moving to make space for a lady......


She sat besides him.


"Priya", he said, somehow it felt different from him, "....thanks!"


She nodded. Priya Gill was indeed very beautiful. Sharp features, fair and big blue eyes, rimmed in kohl. Her hair gleaming black, in a perfect sheet lay on her shoulder. Her well trained and fit body, in her Army Uniform, made her look extremely graceful, dignified and very beautiful. Her administrative jobs were easily done, thanks to this.


She raised her eyebrows.


"....Bharosa karne ke liye....", he said, sounding in terrible pain, ".....case nahin jeet sakta shayad....par kisine bharose se meri aur pichle kai mahino se nahin dekha.....yeh....sab seh leta hoon.....", his voice was changing, "....par unki nazrein nahin seh pata....toot jata hoon.....Do log is duniya main...jo har haal main bharosa karenge..........aur yahi, zinda rakhti hai......Raj aur Naina....."


"Naina?"


He took her hand and placed it on his heart. She could feel it beating!


"Yeh....", he smiled, love emitting from his eyes, "....aur Raj, saanse hai...."


Her eyes flickered open.


"Sach kaha tha....", she looked at a picture she held in her trembling hand, "....Raj tumhari saanse...aur Naina dhadkan.....dono....tumhe kabhi haarne nahin denge....zinda ho tum....Naveen....."


A tear fell on the smiling and proud face of Late Captain Naveen Singh Ahluwalia.


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"hmmm...mhh,..hmmm,,,,"

dr.shlini was humming as she worked around the infirmary untill yudi came bursting into it....


"NO...THIS IS NOT HAPPENING..."

"yudi??..wat??? r u ok???"

"this is not happening at all.....mein aur aap...waha...NOO!!"

HUH???..yudi??will u be a little clear..."

"yes!!..i mean ..noo......thats..thats....whacky....i cant do this wid u...i...."

"yudi??.."

"no..."

"yu..."

"NO..."

"YUDEEE!!!!...SHUT UP!!...."


yudi looke d...completely lost....out of focus....

"WAT......IS.....THE.......MATTER????????????????"

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"i am come in sir??..."

"may i come in cadet sharma...."

"sorry ..."

"come in..."


aalekh caem in and saluted BC...

"yes cadet??..."

"sir woh...ye letter....."

he held out an official note...

"oh...to aapko yeh note mil gaya hai???....good cadet please have a seat..."

pretty bemused at being offered one...aalekh took a seat...



"hum dono ek saath waha..camp mein..nooo...."

"wat do mean by 'hum dono ek saath ..noo.'.....yudi??!!!plzz..its a medical camp..."

"to mein kya karunga..."

he added on seeing shalini's expression...

"i mean..u r the doctor...wat am i there for???....woh bhi out of KMA...."

"fistly cadet yudi...it is NOT...OUT of KMA it in..ONLY... 10 kms from KMA....and secondly jitni zaroorat waha meri hogi ..utni hi tumhari hogi...."


"excuse me??"

"yes....tumhaari zarrorat waha hai....woundeds oldiers ki moral support ke liye.....i mean..tum unki emotional qoutient ko zyada samjhoge..so...."


"emotional qoutienrt...on being nearly dead???????????......."


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"cadet sharma..i am sure u have gone thru the letter...."

"lekin apun ko samjha nahi...."

"hmm...thik hai..to hum samjhate hain....baat aisi hai ki..."

knock!knock!

"come in..."

"good morning sir...."

"good morning Major Nair"

major nair stepped in and gave one nasty look at aalekh being 'seated' in front of BC!!....

"plz have a seat major....wat is it..."

"woh sir...uh..."
he looked sidewayus at aalekh but since BC dint comment he had to continue...

"siw mujhe aaj ye letter mila.....and i thnk i want an explanation"

""explanation?.."

"yes sir....mujhe is test ke liye KMA se bahar bheja ja raha hai... I m being sent out of KMA...."

aalekh cudnt hide his smile...and he dint believe his ears...."BC ka MC ...KMA se bahar??....."

[aalekh thought MC had been sacked....but wen he got to know it wast so..his smile did decrease but it dint vanish....]

"major nair...u mean aap is test ke liye KMA mein nahi honge??..."

"no sir..and i want ot know why..."

"well major yeh decision sirf humare invigilating oficers ka hai...and i have no hand in either taking the decision or changing it....."

"but sir....."

"i am sorry major...."

aalekh wanted to run out and yell it to the others..but he controlled hiumself wid much difficulty...

"yudi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....come to ur senses...aaakhir is camp se tumhari problem kya hai....???"

"its juat ma'am..i......i....."

"yes??....."

"i ....cant do it...."

some things never cahnge........

and some....change in a second like...............

"yes cadet sharma..baat aisi hai..ki aap ab meri advisory board hain..."

"sir apun to yaha cadet hai..........."


"yes cadet sharma...aap cadet hain...lekin as part of the programme aap humare aadvisor hain...."

aalekh still looked alittle cofused..how exactly was he supposed to 'advise'..BC???

"iska matlab hain.....ki for the programme ...
aane wale kuch dino mein..yaha KMA ki administration mein reh kar...kuch make believe aur kuch real situations ke baare mein hum ji decisions lenge...
usmein..aap hume advise karene...hume aapko decisions lene se pehle consult karenge.....do u get me cadet...?"

"YES SIR!!"

aalekh had never before felt so important....


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Posted: 17 years ago
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naina cudnt decifer rajveer's expression.....as he sat wid the letter...

"kya baat hai sir??..wats in the letter?...."


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"yudi...aakhir tumhaari problem kya hai??...do u want to say u r weak....???"

yudi flared up...

"AND DO UTHINK I AM WEAK.....????????"


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:"no yudi........"


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"sir apun aapko assist karega??..."

"yes cadet sharma...and ur decisions better be good...."

BC smiled and aalekh saluted him.....

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"sir??...kya baat hai??...."

"it our task naina......its for 10 to 15 days....."

"10 to 15 days???..."

"han...aur......"

"aur???...."

"hume.....alag rehkar operate karna hoga...."


"matlab??...."

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"areh yaar....hamesha humara call hi kyun busy rehta hai pata nahi...sab ko kuch na kuch mil gaya sirf hummm.."

"oye punjaban sab ko nahi...mujhe bhi abhi tak nahi pata ki mere aur mucchad ke saath yeh kya karne waale hain..."

"hmm..mein to is soch mein hun ki naina aur sharukh ko kya mila..."


"CADET HUDA..."

"aa gaya mucchad...YES SIR!!..COMING...!!"


HUDA WENT OUTSIDE THE MESS TO MEET MAJOR NAIR...

"yes sir?.."

"humari programme ki details aa gayi hain..aap thik 15 mins mein mujhe mere office mein milenge....aap ko yahan rehkar kya karna hai woh mein samjha dunga..."

"yaha rehkar mujhe??"

"yes cadet kyunki mujhe KMA ke bahar se operate karna hai..."

major nair left and huda stood still for 5 mins..and then....

"OYE PUNJAAABANNNN!!!!!!...OH CHAK DE!!!!!!"

he picked up pooja and spun her round!!!!!

"mujhe?..."

"han cadet singh..tumhe.."

"hmm..."

naina dint look up at him....rajveer understood she dint like the idea...

"sit down naina.."

naian went and sat on the sofa beside raj...and took the letter from him..rather snatched it...and was reading through...the frown still prevalent...

"naina..cmon...jis naina ko mein janta hun woh kisi challenge se peeche nahi hat ti..."

"aur aapse kisne kaha mein challenge se peeche hat rahi hun?...mein to soch rahi hun..humara plan kya hoga..."

rajveer smiled...

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"cadet sharma...yeh hai KMA ki rule book....mein chahta hun..aap ise ek baar dekhle..."

aalekh looked at the book...it was true that in the past year..with considerable help from neelu..and his friends aalekh cud write and read english as well as hindi...

but even then the thought of the humungous rule book scared him a little...

BC saw his expression and grinned..

"dont worry cadet yeh sirf ek brief written accoutn hai..not the full thing aur agar aapko kisi bhi tarah ka problem ho..let me know..."

aalekh smiled ...and BC looked on reassuringly..

''oye ali puttar..idhar aa oye.."

"ji suriji..."

"woh kya hai na..ki humaari hai na task aa gayi hain..."

"humaari?"

"oye tujhe mere saath hi to partner kiya hai na??.."

"ji..shayad..."

ali ha igven two compatability tests..one with suriji..and the other wid a recruit he dint know...
someone from outside KMA...

but later the idea of someone from outsie the academy being dropped he was grouped wid suriji...

"woh kya hai na..humaari task kaafi simple si hai..."

"kya karna hai suriji?"

"oye aane wale 15 dino ke liye jo jo kam mein akele academy mein karta tha...woh humein hai na saath karne hai.."

"ji matlab..."

"oya khoteya matlab yeh..ki saadi mess ki aur acdemu ke rooms aur lockers ki chaabiyon ka zimma ab dono ko milke lena hai 15 dino ke liye...aasaan hai puttar..."


but ali knew it wasnt that easy...as he went wid suriji to understand the daily work...he cud get the picture of wat the coming two weeks wud be...

they had to collectively take responsibilty and keep account of the supplies coming and being used in the mess...of the posts..packages..and the room including armaments..and at the end..presetn the 'clean and clear' account

as ali tried to gear up for his duties...pooja was calle dby lolita ma'am...

"i knew it..."

"ab aap batayenge bhi!!"

"okh..okh...dekho naina ab is letter se to tumhe pata hi chal gaya hai ki scenario kaisa hai..."

"hmm..yehi ki mujhe KMA se bahar..ek anjaan jagah bheja jaa raha hai..aur aap yahan KMA mein rahenge..."

"yes..aur is dauraan humare sirf ek contact rahega..aur woh hai..humare wireless devices...thats it..."

"is dauraan..mujhe kai make -believe khatarnaak situations face karne hai...and i will do so using mine as well as ur skills..."

"exactly...aisa is liye kyunki tumhe is dauraan ek hostage ya fir koi important document..ya fir koi aisi hi cheez recover karni hai..
jiske baare mein information...tumhe dono taraf se milkegi..."

"matlab..yeh ki mein jo bhi bahar dekhti hun...mujhe jo situations air clues milte hain..woh aur aapko KMA ke andar jo information milti hai ..woh..."

"yes aur yeh dono connected hain...ek se hi doosra deduce kiya ja sakta hai..."

"iska matlab..the only thing we have to do is completely trust each other..."

they looked at each..other.....

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"may i come in sir?.."

"come in cadet huda..."

they looked at each other for a few seconds...

yes testing times were here after all...it was common knowledge in the academy that ...
if there is one teacher and one cadet who will see each other..it was..

major rajveer singh sekhawat..and cadet naina singh ahluwalia

and now the time had come to prove it....

during this tenure..naina and raj had to completely rely on all the information they gave to each other through the wireless...

raj had to see through naina's eyes...and naina had to think through his mind...

only then cud they succeed...

'ALL CADETS AND FACULTY PLZ ASSEMBLE IN THE HALL..'

the eye contact broke....






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"oye huda itni khushi kyun???...."

"oye punjaban...apni to ash hai....!!"

"abeh e...bhao mat kha..ab bata de..."

"mucchad academy se bahar jaa raha hai...."


huda waitied expecting a roar...an applause from his frnds but instead...there was particularly no reaction except a few smiles....

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"oye???.....mein itni acchi khabar sunai aur??..."

"acchi nai..purana sms bheja hai...apna inbox edit kar..."

"matlab..."

"matlab yeh saale..ki apun ko yeh baat pata thi....aur isliye in sab ko bhi...."

"abeh kaidi..tune..mujhe nahi..."

"oye sharukh!!.....aur naina..."

"sir aap mujhe mess mein kyun lekar aaye hain..mujhe packing karni hai thodi si...sir???"

"islioye hi cadet sngh..aapko yaha laya gaya hai..."

"huh???.."


"SURIJI!...."

"oy han puttar....uh...sir!!...yes sir!!..."

raj smiled...suriji was habituated to the name 'raj puttar'...but it was duty hours now...


"woh jo mangaya tha ..aa gaya?..."

"ji..ek minute...."


the other five also crowded near naina and raj...

"GGOD MORNING SIR!!"

pooja and naina started whispering..

"naina..yeh sab kya hai..."

"mujhe pat pooch.mujhe khud nahi pata...."

"wazzup naina??..."yudi joined in....

"no idea..."


"aap logon bilkul patience nahi hai...hai na..cadets...."

"jab aapne mujhe kuch nahi batay to..."

"yes naina???...."

"nothing sir..."

suriji came back wid a box in hand.....

"ye lo sirji!!"

rajveer looked from the box then to naina....

"well naina...choose...." and he opened the box...

"CHOCOLATES?????????????????????????????"

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"rajveer si r??..chocolates???....."

"han...oh..by the way..in two days right..so packing karni hai na...come on..lets go...!!"

"han..sir..par chocolates..."

"YS!!1...NOW CHALO..."

"han..but..choc..sir....bye guys...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

rajveer hurried naina out of the mess and left evryone else wondering....

"chocolates???...."

"packing??..."

"shahrukh bhi ja raha hai..KMA se....nahi...ye connection kyun toda???.."

""chcoclates lekar jaa rahein hain??....."

"naina kyun packing karegi unki....."

"aalekh??..."

"apun nahi janta..."

"CADET HUDA!!"

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"SIRR....", Naina held his hand as she entered his room behind him....totally confused!


"Naina?"


"Bolo na Sir....."


"Kya?"


"Yeh chocolates kyun?"


"Kyun? Tumhein pasand nahin aayee?"


"Nahin....", she said blushing slightly, and looking into his eyes.


"Toh.....", he pulled out a piece from the pack, putting it into her mouth,"...Bas enjoy!"


She smiled. And hopped into her room, from that connecting door. That door was kept open, involunterily[excuse this spelling!]. Naina never felt the need, and Rajveer never thought it required. Their mutual trust was greater than it ever was!

He looked at her, hopping happily into her little room. She was to leave the next day, and he knew, that all the time his brave protegee had in the academy, he will make it special!


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"Ali puttar!"


"Jee Surijee."


"Ab dekh, next week da budgaat(I have misspelled it to give a 'Surijee' effect!) banana hai.....tu ek kaam kar.....o orderly se purani registry le aa.....main tenu samjha devanga!"


"Jee....", he left.


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"Cadet Huda reporting sir!"


"Cadet Huda, aap bevkoof aur battameez hain yeh is ek saal main hum jaan gaye the....magar aapke Major Rajveer aapko punctuality sikhana bhool gaye kya!!"


"Woh....sir....."


"Bahane", he frowned, ".....yahi hai, aapke paas, iss aarmy ko dene ke liye!"


"Woh Sir, main mess se pass ho raha tha", Huda tried his last weapon, his charm and wit together, with no other hope left, "....aur woh sadde Surijee wahan, yeh...yeh....parathe bana rahe the....."


"Toh?"


"Woh kuch nahin sir, maine unhe keh diya, ki yeh academy hai, aur yahan sab cadets sipahi banane ke liye aate hain, Major Nair saman....aur.....aur aapke liye parathe.........", Huda threw his worst ever googlee, hoping to survive somehow.


"Parathe?"

His friends, giggling outside, managed to seak a couple of parathas from the mess, and pushed in a passing Orderly to Huda's help.


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"Oye, aaj to tum sab ne bal bal bacha liya!", Huda leaned sighing on Yudi's shoulder.


"Bro! Mujhe to laga ki tum to gaye!"


"Ab mat bol yaar.....bardaash nahin hota!"


"Vaat to lagegi.........."


"Saade Muchhad so jo connection laga hai!"


"Waise Huda tumhe waqt pe pohonch jana chahiye tha."


"Ab tu bhi us MC ki tarah mat bol, Phoolan. Humain pata hai, teri to chaandi hai!"


Naina raised her brows.


"Shahrukh", Pooja sighed, somehow, her gesture annoyed Naina, "....chocolates deta hai, room main lene aata hai, purane photographs....hayee...."


Naina silently glared at her. Somehow, this wasnt missed by Aalekh, as his lips curled in a slight grin.


"Oye Phoolan, yeh Punjaban to baanvri ho gayee hai", Huda joked, "...ab kya karega Major! Yeh to ab inke peeche Kaargil tak chali jaayegi....apna talk time le ke...."


They laughed aloud. And Pooja made a sad and annoyed face.


"Ahem....ahem", someone coughed.


Everyone looked at Lt.Nishant Goenka, and Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat smiling at them.


"Meri Heer ko koi pareshaan kar raha hai?", he smiled, but this time, was looking at Naina.


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Both the officers enjoyed their dinner with the Cadets, catting about everything, from their academy days, to pranks, and their missions and girls......


After dinner they were walking down towards the main reception area.


"Cadets", Nishant faced them, "I am glad that you all of all the KMA cadets managed to pass the tests. This was indeed an achievement. These pairs, will always be preferred on missions in future, by the Army."


Aalekh smiled. Huda groaned. And Naina felt heat pass in her cheeks, as she felt a pair of eyes on her.


"So", he continued, "this is your last day of 'fun'. From tomorrow onwards, Yudi and Naina will depart for their assignments. And I am very sure, that none of you will even have time enough for speaking to each other, at least for the coming week."


Everyone nodded. They all had a strong and brave soldier in them, pouncing at the mention of a mission.


"Toh fir chalo", he said, "aaj raat ko ek chhota sa jam session karte hain....ek informal si party....let us enjoy enough for the coming week.....", he smiled.


"Yeh huyee na baat!", Huda cried.


"Wooooo! Lemme get those speakers....boy I must tell you...they are amazing...."


"O theek hai Yudiye....tere saare machine le aa! Chal Phoolan bhangda paa te hain!"


Naina smiled at him, as all of them walked towards Nishant's room. Aalekh wasnt sure, whether it was a wink that Nishant gave Rajveer before Major gave him a disguised 'thumbs-up'!!


They were all almost nearing the faculty quarters, when.....


"Err....Naina.....", But before Naina turned, she heard an uproar from her friends, and saw Huda, Aalekh and Yudi pounce at someone, in darkness.


"KARAN!!!!"


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"Huda....Aaleeeekh....kya?"


"Aye Phoolan tu door rahe, aaj main isse nahin chhodunga!"


"Tu phir aa gaya, nautanki sala!"


Naina stood there like a statue, staring at them. Nishant took charge and came ahead.


"Boys....boys....."


"Sir aap isse........"


"Iski to main...."


"Cadet Aalekh....choddo....choddo....."


Boys straightened up....


"Naina.....", Karan muttered.


"Oye teri to....", Huda rushed ahead....


"Huda ruk", Naina came forward, "Karan, kya baat hai?"


Karan smiled.

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"Bol Karan, kya baat hai?"


"Naina...woh tum kal kahin jaa rahi ho?"


"Haan...."


"Tumne mujhe bataya nahin?"


"Huh?", she was annoyed, "yeh mera kaam hai, Karan. Its just for me and Rajveer Sir."


"Phir bhi...."


He was eying Major Rajveer with some jealousy.


"Theek hai.....just take care...", he he bent to kiss her on her cheek.....


.....but before he could reach her.....someone held her collar by back.


"Cadet"


"Sir...."

He was holding Karan by back of his collar....not in the rude way.....it looked rather comical.....

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"Sir!", she whispered as everyone rushed past her into Nishant's room.


"Yes Naina...."


"Thank you!"


He smiled and kept a hand one her head....indicating, 'its-ok'!


And walked in.


Before Naina could lift her foot to go....an uproar greeted her from inside the room.


She walked in to see a super yummy Chocolate Cake and a perfect setting around a huge circular round table covered with white lenin.....

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thats the cake: http://www.theage.com.au/ffximage/2006/02/13/chocolate_narrowweb__300x435,0.jpg

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She was sitting in her room. Gazing at the photographs....Rajveer sir had gifted her something that was the most precious to her.....



She was looking at Naveen. She always did. Spoke to him....and always happened to find answers.....but today, she was looking at two faces....both with equal warmth and respect.....



Suddenly a tear tickled down her cheek. She was not sad....she was happy.


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Coming out of his bathroom, he settled himself on his bed...trying to sleep. Naina was to leave the next morning.....for such a long time....he was not scared....just anxious!



He couldnt sleep....all his attempts to put his mind at east failed....because it wasnt his mind that kept him awake tonight.....it was his heart.....



He got up, and walked up to the television, in his room. Wearing white cotton salwar kurta, he snuggled lazily into the couch. And turned the TV on.



Some bore daily soaps drooled by....idiotic hindi films......and late night english ones, which he could never make himself watch!


Damn!

He had no other choice.... and by instinct her put on his music....mild....soft....and amazing Kishore Kumar.....


"Phir wohi.....
Raat hai.....
Phir wohi...raat hai kwaab ki....

Raat bhar kwaab main, dekha karenga tumhe....
Phir wohi....raat hai...."



And stood near the window....looking at the sky.....enjoying every rhythm.....every word....as an innocent face smiled at him....in his heart.....



"Maasoom si neend main,
Jab koi sapana chale,
Hum ko bula lena tum,
Palkon ke parde tale,

Yeh raat hai kwaab ki.....kwaab ki raat hai......"




He walked upto the connecting door, he didnt know why. Maybe he wanted to see he sleep.....peacefully.


He peeped into her room....but she wasnt on the bed......



He was just going to enter the room, to find out where she was, when she entered.....from the balcony......



....in her cute nightie.....and she had wrapped herself in her white bedsheet....like a ballerina.....and she was on her toes.....going rounds.....dancing like a doll....



....the sheet sashing behind her like a saari....her hair loose......and eyes shining.....he felt his lips curl in an involuntary smile....he couldnt withdraw himself from that position......



.....She moved around in the room.....with the music.....in her dark room.....simply illuminated by the moonlight....



The song went on in his room.....



"Kaanch ke kwaab hai,
Ankhon main chubh jaayenge...
Palkon main lena inhe...
Aankhon main rukh jaayenge...

Yeh raat hai kwaab ki....
Kwab ki raat hai....

Phir wohii.....raat hai....."




He was looking at her.....everything around dissolving.....


It must have been minutes...when he saw her standing straight....fumbling to take off the sheet from all over her....pink in cheeks......looking down.....he wanted to kill himself for making her uncomfortable.....for spoiling her mood.....for....for......staring at him like an idiot......


"Sir!"


He stared at her. And then smiled.



"Naina...."



"Huh? Yeh to sir....main....yunhi.....neend nahin.....khush thee...."



He gave a little laugh. And then he walked straight into her room. He didnt know where he got all that confidence. All the cadet's suspicion, his own decisions.....all lay aside......


"Good!"



"Huh!"



"Haan.....tum khush ho yeh achhi baat hai Cadet Singh!", the formal address, he was trying to bring himself to senses.....but was constantly failing......



"Jee sir! Woh KK ka gana suna...."



"KK?"



"Kishore Kumar...."



"Ah....you like him?"



"Yea....love him!", she looked straight into his eyes. She didnt know what made her do that. Whatever it was, was very very passionate.


"So...I will leave...and put it on again....and you", he stepped closer, picking up the white sheet from her bed, ".....carry on!"



"Huh?", she felt dumb...there were too many 'huh's tonight!



".....Kabhi kabhi jo dil kehta hai woh kar lena chahiye, Cadet Singh."



"....Naina...", words left her lips before she could stop them.



He smiled and corrected himself,"...Naina.....go on.....", and he turned to go.


"Sir!"


"KK aapko bhi toh pasand hai.....", she said that....and as he tuned to looke at her, her eyes conveyed the rest.....


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OKAY EVERYONE!

I stop here for tonight!!

Kal aage update karti hoon....provided I get a good number of comments.

I am doing this speacilly for you all....cause at our community, "Waqt" ends on 28th July 2008.



Cheers,
JIV

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks dear!!it was absolutely mind blowing.Already read the previous parts of waqt.thanks for updating here.
please continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnx so much for continuing.it was fabulous👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#8
Too Good. nice see u back in action.
luv the entire update.plzzzzzzzzzz update soon , hope Raj n Naina confess their luv for each other.
waiting for next update......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#9
i am so happpyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
finally u continued this ff.... u know wht..i was quite angry tht u stopped updating... but now i'm no longer angry⭐️
thanks a lot for the superb ud...waiting for the next one
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he looked at those eyes...and there was just one thing he cud remember....

their dance....the mysterious moves of both as they glided under the masks...



the ambience was perfect for one more..naina thought...

rajveer took one step forward...

but naina retreated...


the ambience was perfect..if only she wasnt in her nightdress...


she took a step back...she knew he wud understand...but...

rajveer move forward another step..

naina was surprised...she retreated again..

he came forward...

she went back..

he advanced a little more..she was against the wall...

he came up to her...

his hand was moving up...

"nooo...." thought naina...

she closed her eys...

his hand was nearing her face...and then....

naina felt a hand brush against her shoulder....

she opened her eyes...only to look down at a little lady bug in rajveer's hand...

"mein nahi chahta tumhe koi disturb karein.."

"huh??...."{there we go again....}

he retreated..keeping the eye contact..slowly..she kept loookin on...

unblinking...motionless...heart thumping..

until the adjoining door was left half closed by rajveer.....

..

"naina??!!!"

"hhmmmm????...."

eyebrows raised....a smile spread over his face...

"naina?..."

"hmmm????????.....uh huh!!!"

she turned...the annoyance of a little child on her face..clutched the bedsheet and cuddled in....

the dream was beautiful.....he danced so well...

phir wahi...raat hai...
phir wahi....raat hai khwab ki...

"hmm...hmmm"

"huh??...phir wahi??...."

she was humming the tune...

he wud let her five more minutes of peace....
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"eh huda..teri to aaj se aish hai!!!..."

"oye pooch mat kaidi...mucchad academy se bahar aur kya chahiye!!!!"

"han mucchad bhi...aur naina bhi..."

"ohye han kaidi..mera to fir se battery down ho jaega...aur talktime pe talktime..store kaise karoongi??...."

"punjaban..tujeh agar saans lene ka waqt mile to apun ko batana..."

"kya matlab??..."

"ane wale ek ya do hafte jaie hone wale hain..waise to...."

"aalekh bhai aap to ab BC ke baraba hain..aap ko kya tension.."

"abeh usool..sabse zyada tension mujhe hi hai....wase naina kahan hai??.."

"naina??.."

this time she turned so that she was lying flat on her back..

rajveer was a little embarassed..

but as he saw her perfect smile...her peaceful slumber..
he felt a sudden balloon inflating in him...spreading a warmth...

"hmm??..."

"naina?..tumhe aaj jana hai..."

"hmm..jana hai...HAN???!!!...JANA HAI!!!!"

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