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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
she sat uprigth on her bed..eyes wide...

it seemed as if suddenly a bolt had struck her....


and then she repeated the words softly again...


"aaj mujhe jana hai....."


she turned to see rajveer standing there...coffee mug in hand...but now suddenly looking a little morose...


"sir??..."

"huh?!..naina..up quick...tumhari last minut packing baaki hai..u leave in twoand a half hours!!"

"yes sir!!...."

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"suriji!!..jaldi mer chai...plzz..."

"oye han naina puttar..."

"oye aa gayi tu!!..."

"han pooja...bahut jaldi mein hun..."

"aisa kya kaam hai phoolan??.."

"kuch last minute packing baaki haui..aur rajveer sir chchte hain ki mein nikalne se minimum aadhe ghante pehle ready rahun..."

"tere rajveer sir yeh kyun bhool jaate hain...ya phir yeh kahun...ki TU yeh kyun bhool jati hai ki tu apne doston ko bhi chod jaa rahi hai!!"

naina suddenly had a hollow feeling...

"oops!!....huda...pooja..aalekh ali..yudi...i m sorry!!!"

"eh ab jaane de...ab to thodi der theek se kha le tu...fir apun tereko bahar milenge hi..."


the friends took their time to chat and have their breakfast until naina looked at her watch...

"hell!!...byeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!11"


"lo phir bhaagi!!!...."

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"oh!...i m sorry sir!!..."

"very well ..aiye..."

"evrythng taken cadet singh??.."

"yes sir..."

it was a small backpack....the typical army gear...and had all essential stuff..

""€well..no..."

"huh??..sir???"

"aap yeh bhool gayi..."

"chocolates??..."

"u see meine yeh aise hi nahi khareede the...it wills erve as dry food in case of an emergency..."


"thank you sir...."

she was about to take the chocoalte..wen she had a sudden urge to hug him...


she silently put the chocolates in her back..and as she did so raj caught a look of the contents inside...

"naina...why have u put clothes inside???..."

"clothes nahi sir...one extra jacket..and a pair of t shirts...i MAY need them!!"

"naina??..."

"hmm??..."

"take care.."

she looke dup...


rajveer had a silent morosity and a little anxiety on his face...he was worried..this was her first mission..somehow he felt protective....and maybe a bit too much..


"naina..u still are immature..apne decisions soch samajh ke lena..be calm..u need to concentrate..."

it was fine till here but after that raj sounded more like a teacher than a friend..and naina was getting annoyed...

"tell me about each little possibility..evrythng...and.."

"sir..i will be fine..mein ek officer na sahi...ek cadet to hun.."i still am a soldier..."

"naina..i dint mean..."

"take care sir..."

she walked out of the room..

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They were all walking with her. In no time, all of them would be busy with their assignments. But they had their 15minutes to say a short farewell to heir friend.


"Naina, khayal rakhiyo apna!", Huda could no longer sustain his anxiety.


"Signal katna mat daiyyo humse, humare incoming tera wait karenge!"


"Haan Pooja….Huda, tum dono bekar main fikar kar rahe ho!"


"Nahin, yeh theek keh rahin hai, aap ko bohot alert rehna padega…."


Naina nodded.


Aalekh had a better idea.


"Yeh log teri aur Rajveer sir ki test le rahe hain, Tumhara kaam hum sab se zyaada mushkil hai….kuch to jhol hai!"


"Aisa kuch nahin hai, Aalekh. Hota to Rajveer sir mujhe zaroor batate!"


Aalekh nodded unconvinced.


They spotted Rajveer Sir walking towards them. Naina straightened up. She was feeling a bit embarrassed about being so touchy on his concerns.


"So, Cadet Singh, ready?"


"Yes sir!", Naina didn't look at him. He sensed this. He too was very worried, not that he doubted her capabilities, but he had never left her side….had been with her always….taken the blows targeted to her on his chest…..


Cadets knew it was time for them to leave.


"Chal Naina, apun sab chalte hain….", and they walked off giving her a hug each, as Naina nodded in agreement.


Naina held an envelope of guidelines she was given. She was to go to the bus station and take bus no.55, to she had to find out where. Major Rajveer had decieded to drive her to the stop. And she was in no mood to argue.


The jeep reached the station, the passengers maintained the silence. They both were facing a turmoil….fighting with an unknown feel…..


"Naina….", he called softly, as Naina was about to mount the bus.


"Sir?"

"W o h……uh….apna khayal rakhna!"


"Aap bhi sir!", he nodded, and she went to her seat.


They were staring at each other in silence, finding no words to express what went on in them…..as the busy started….and finally, till both were out of sight.


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Did it really happen yesterday……..What ever happened…….was it all a beautiful dream……or it did happen……..did she dance with a sheet around her…….she did that….once before……when…..when….Shantanu……no…..


Kishore Kumar…..that song…..his stare…..it all seemed so real….her heart was already beating faster than the bus's speed………


…..it cant be like that…..can it?……I mean Rajveer Sir could…..no….he'd never……..but his eyes………had spoken volumes………..was he there………no…..he cannot…..

…………but why did she blush, at the thought of it………….why did she allow such a dream to linger in her mind so long…………………..


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He threw himself on his couch in fatigue……….he hadn't slept all night yesterday………


His lips curled in a smile…..


How could he?


After what he saw…..he walked to the connecting door….and peeped as he did yesterday……smiling………….



"Phir Wohi, Raat hai….
Phir wohi raat hai kwaab ki….."



What was it? KK or what he saw…..he had never seen anything like that before….he had never seen her express herself like that…..alone……….in her room…….in moonlight……….with a sheet…..(he touched that sheet softly)………..around her………


What was he thinking………..she was Naina……..but she was different yesterday……..he never realized he was thinking about his student….instead…..about a girl…..beautiful…..innocent….sharp….and……….naughty…..Naina?…..his fiery…..brave….strong…..angry….Naina? (he never realized, when he got accustomed to think of her as 'his Naina')

He pulled himself out……of the thought……………..

As……….

'Knock-knock'

He opened the door.

"Aap?"

She smiled, "Bade khush lag rahe ho?"


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"oh hi!!..."

"abdar au??.."

"plzz!!...baitho.."

"hmm..."

"so...hw are u liking KMA..."

"jo sunne tha...waise hi dekh rahi hun...to..naina chali gayi??..."

"huh??....han...."

priya noticed the sudden seriousness..a concern on his face...

"she will be fine rajveer...."

"ya??...yes....yes..of course...i hope...i thnk so!!"

"i know so!!....we have all added precautions...kuch nahi hoga..!1its all planned..."

"yes!!..."


she waited for some thng else to be said but wen rajveer remained glum..she decided to leave..

"ok... i will be off then..."

"ya..."


she had reached the door..we suddenly..

"priya??..."

"huh??..."

"thnks!!"

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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
she smiled...and left..

her word..though had brought a calmness..but he was still worried..

they hadnt even said a proper goodbye....the little squabble...


she had looked back just once before boarding the bus....

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naina felt guilty...

but why was he so protective..after a mentor and prodigy...

or was it only a mentor and prodigy relation??...

how she wished they cud have atleast had a decent farewell...

and now she was headed ..all alone..to someplace unknown....

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"may i come in sir..."

"come in cadet...."

"cadet sharma reporting sir!!"

"baithiye cadet...aapke aapka pehla case hai mere paas..."

aalekh knew testing times were here as BC made a quick call....
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"cadet huda??..aap ke liye mesaage hai..."

"oye mere liye??..kiska..."

"major nair ka!!..."

"kya?????????????...."

"hey bro??!!.."

huda ran past yudi whi himself was all set to leave now...

"well guys..see u tonight!!..."

"bye yudi..."

"yudibhai..dhyan se!!"

"OYE ALI PUTTAR!!...."

"ja ali...tera bhi call aa gaya..."

"cadet ghai...aaj aap raat ki bhi zimmedaari lengi..any problems and u report directly to me...and yes...
mobile phones totally banned..u get me cadet??..."

"yes ma'am!!"

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"oye ali puttar..aaj ke drills ke liye hai na...armamenta..aur baaki ke jo zaroorat hogi..uski zimmewari teri...

aur koi bhi gal ho to mujhe bulana...aur han puttar..agar koi bhi gadbad hui na...to yeh suriji..teredo kaano ke beech sar kar denge...

major nair ke drills lt.nishant lenge..jaa ke unse mil lena!!"

"ji suriji!!"

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"cadet huda sir!!"$

"kahan the tum??..."

"sir woh..."

"useless absolutely...ab suno..mein vindhyanchal military academy pahuch gaya hun..and i willl begin my tenure from tomorow..."

"kal kyun sir..aaj kyun nahi..."

"shut up..jitna kaha jaye..utna karo...."

"yes sir!!"
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"cadet yudi...aaj ek hi casualty hai..not very serious..lekin hum area ko thoda sa search zaroor karenge..."

"yes ma'am..."

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naina's head rested against the handle of the seat...the journey was long..and boring..

and then she remembered something..

naina opened her back pack..and looked at the little box...

she wanted to open it..but remembered rajveer's words..



"jab bhi koi emergency ho...aur mujh tak pahuchne ka koi raasta na ho..use this!!"


she put the box back into her bag...and looke dout of the window...

after about half hour...she got down...

a man came up to her...he was dressd in an army uniform..

"cadet naina singh ahluwalia??...from kanchanjunga military academy??"

"yes.."

"follow me!!"

"well,cadet sharma..yeh hai case...."

aalekh takes the file..it contains the drill reports of a certain..nehal rai...

"cadet nehal rai..."

"yes cadt sharma....yeh ek first year cadet hain..aur inhone ab ta ke saare tests fail kiye hain...
humara personal opinion hai inhe expel karna...aur.."

"nahi sir..."

"cadet??"

"sir..apu....muje lagta hai..isse baat karni chahiye...reason dhoondhna hoga..."

{neelu's english lessons were having its effect after all..}

"reason??..."

"sir koi wajah to hogi..iske liye...."

"ok cadet..i will call dacet nehal rai..."

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"is mucchad ki to mein aisi ki taisi...."

"oye jat..kya hua??...."

"areh report mujhe banaani hai..aur agar mujhe uska kaha sunke banana pade..to yeh repot woh khud hi banaye...mucchad!!"

"hehe!!...chal mein to out of network ho rahi hun...security arrangements chck karni hai..girls hostel ki..."

"areh wah punjaban!!!"

"hudabhai..."

"oye kaidi....bol..."

"aapko kya lagta hai...agar mess me sab ko ek shaam lassi pilani pade...kitna doodh lagega..dahi kel iye..."

"kya???????????????????"

"woh suriji pooch rahe the...."

"dahi??????oye kaidi..itne bure din.,chal batata hun.....yehi kuch...."
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naina was taken to a remote location..where a base camp was set up...

"aap andar jaa ke humaare officer se mil lijiye..."

"ji!!..."

she weent up to the tent she was shown..

"may i come in?..."

"come in...."

it was a female voice...

"ma'am!!..cadet naina singh ahluwalia..kanchenjunga military academy..reporting!!"

"welcome cadet..pleas have a seat..."

"thnk you ma'am.."

"i m captain neha gupta....aur aap isi base camp se operate karengi...and...let me help u a little....

yeh jagah KMA se zyaada door nahi hai!!..."

naina smiled..

"are u supposed to tell me that..."

"uhmm...not really..but priya ma'am se..tumhaare baare mein bahut suna hai....well cadet..let me show u ur task..come..."

"cadet ali..."

"yes isr!!..."

"well aap to jante hi hain..ki first years ke jo drills hain..woh mein le raha hun..."

"sir!"

"aaj rifle drill hai..i need the rifles..."

"yes sir..aiye!!"

they went into the room..and nishant was abpout to pick the rifle wen..

"sir!!...woh...aap hume bata dijiye...hum de dete hain..."

nishant smiled..here ws a responsible cadet....

"of course..i need about 10 rifles..."

ali picked up the rifles..he was busy taking them out..wen nishant set out his task...

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"come in cadet..."

"sir!!"

aalekh vieed cadet nehal rai...
he wasnt really built for a soldier...his stature was that of some marketing executive..

attractive features..lean ..tall....

"well, hum to chahte the..aap expel kar diye jaye...but cadet sharma ap se milna chahte the..."

nehal looked at aalekh...as if thankful....

"sir..kya hum kahin akele..."

"ok cadet sharma..aap inhe apne room mein le jaiye..."

"sir!!"
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"cadet ghai..ye humaare security alarms hain....."

"agar ko inturder yahan ghus aaye.to yeh detect karta hai...."

"lekin ma'am yeh to kisi kaam ka nahin.,..."

"come again cadet..."

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"naina!!...can i call u that..??"

"of course ma'am..."

"good naina..ye tumhara map hai..."

the map was unfloded on the talbe...a light beneath it illuminated the areas..

"yes it is through the woods..."

"yahan pe kuch aur..army ke chote camps..which im sure..u know means ek hi tent..."

"yes ma;ma!!..haha!!"

"good naina!!...well..aur kuch enemyu tents bhi hai...aur yeh...pint 6945S...unka base camp hai....tumhe yehi se...ek red box retreive karna hai..."

naina looked up..."red box!!!!"

"yes..tum jaanti ho na red box kya hai..."

"bahut acchi tarah...."

naina became very serious....

"very good..filhaal tum itna hi jano..ki yeh particular red box...humare base capm ke liy necessary hai..."

"yes ma'am!!"

"very well...apke saath humare ek official honge..."

"official??..."

"yes...he is a fresh paas out..."

"right ma'am..."

"orderly...!!!...lt.aseem banerjee ko bulaiye..."

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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
nishant collected the rifles and was about to leave wen..

"sir!!...ek minute...!!"

"cadet begh..wat the hell..aap kuch zyadaa hi serious nahi ho rahein??..humare drill pe jana hai hume...!!"

"sir..hum serious nahi honge..to aap to woh pistol lekar hi jaenge..."

"huh??.."

ali was pointing towards nishants pocket...

"hahaahah!!..well ..well...well..good move!!!cadet begh...very good..."

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"andar aa....."

nehal stepped inside..scared...and stood by the sofa...

"eh!!..apun tereko BC lagta hai...baith na...!!apun sirf tera senior cadet hai...koi officer nahi..."

nehal managed a feeble smile..and sat down...

"ab apun ko bata...teri problem kya hai??..."

"woh....woh..."

"apun ke paas na..time nahi jasti wate karne ko....bol..nahi to BC tereko bahar fekega..."

"nahi please....woh..mere papa..army mein the..."

"to tu idhar aya..."

"han lekin...mujhe army join nahi krni thi..."

"kyun??"

"mujhe....mujhe....chef banna hai..."

"bawarchi???"
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"may i come in ma'am..."

"yes plzz..naina?...this is lt.aseem banerjee...yeh aapko accompany karenge...i dont suppose u have ur wireless...we have to provide it..

tum inke saath jao...i will get the devices ready fo u both..."

"yes ma'am.."

"well KMA cadet han??..."

"yes sir!.."

"aseem...or aseem ji.or aseem da..if u need to be very polite..."

"heeh..aseem da then....sounds cute..."

his eyebrows shot up...

"opps..sorry..."

"hahaha!!..no problem ..umm..naina..right??.."

"yes sir..."

"huh??.."

"aseem da.."

"right...so KMA??"

"yes aur aap??.."

"i m from the eastern front..."

"oh wow!!..."

"so all ready...??"

"well i am geared up..par abhi tak kuch pata nahi..exactly kya follow karna hai..."

"uske liye hum hai na..for all the help..."

"of course..."
naina looked back...this was the third time she was doing so...

"aap apne wireless ka besabri se intezaar kar rahin hain..."

"aap nahi ..tum..!!..aur han..kar rahi hun..woh khabar pahuchani hai..to..."

"kise??..."

"ji??.."

"kise khabar pahuchani hai??...."

"woh..woh...academy...!!!"

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"oye ali...puttar...woh aaj nishant ji ki drill thi na..to rifles wapas aa gaye..??"

"suriji..unhone wapas nahi kiye...10 rifles li thi..."

"oye khoteya...wapas nahi kiye..to pooch na..jaake.....oye ja...!!"

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"ma'am dekhiye mein theek hi keh rahi hun...."

"u mean security theek nahi??..."

"woh matlb nahi hai...mera matlab..koi bhi incoming ho sakti hai..."

"come again cadet.."

there were too many 'come -agains' in this group....

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rajveer adjusted his wireless for the tenth time..but in vain....

"oh hell !!naina....kahan ho??"

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"tereko bawarchi banne ka hai??.."

"bawarchi??..."

"abeh tere 'chef' ko
apni hindi main bawachi ich bolte hain...han ab bol..."

"bachpan se hi shouk tha...lekin papa chahte the ki army join karun to..."

"to apne baap ke khatir apne sapne ko maar dala....aur ab unke sapne ko bi tu khatam ich kar raha hai...

na ghar ka..na ghat ka..."

"par mein kya karun...??..mere papa nahi manenge..."

"hmm...tere baap ko KMA leke aa....apun ko milna hai...."

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"aseem da..hum kab niklenge yahan se...??"

"aaj raat nahi naina..its nearing evening..so not possible...kal subah...."

"well..u both are socialising then..plss..be seated....naina..heres' ur wireless..u can make ur first contact..."


naina's face lit up...she grabbed the wireless..and saying a quick..
"excuse me.."...rushed out of the tent....


"ZZZZZZ....ZZZ...naina to rajveer.....!!"

raj had dozed off..he had a tiring day today...but then..

"zzz....zz...naina...zzz...t...rajv..er...."

"huh??...naina???!!!"

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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
"yudiii!!1..carefull!!..."

"sorry ma'am...."

they had just returned to the academy..and both were pretty tired..after all..the case to be handled...

though make believe had been challenging...

{about four hours back....}

"yudi i need u here...!!"

"coming ma'am...yes??.."

"yudi..lt.sahay..ka case complicated hai...dekho mera kaam hai analysis dena..which i have submitted..but this is about teamwork...

ur test is about handling the patients mental status..."

"yes ma'am i know..."

"well, yudi..lt.sahay ke baare mein do baatein..critical.."

"yes??.."

firstly he thinks...nothing has happened to him...."

"right...which is absolutely.."

"wrong..yes...

and secondly he thinks..ek soldier ke liye hospital aake ilaaj karwana sharm ki baat hai..they have to..and need to fight out evrythng!!!"

"cool..what ideology...!!"

"yudi..no sarcasm...now!!...i need u to handle this!!!"

[present]

"phir tune kya kiya yudie...??"

"meine??...bro.."

"nai..zz..naina...??..."

"sir....mein pahuch gayi hun...and...zz...i...zz....am safe..."

the swishing of the winds....and the silence of the woods..were on naina's side...


the far away humdrum of the cadets..barely reaching his ears..and the cold winds..were on rajveer's side....

"i am safe...."
the words echoed in his ears....


""naina''zzz.....i.....m ...sorry.....zzz...naa.."

she cudnt respond....he was sorry???

for that one childish sulking of hers???

"me...zz..too...."

silence again....wat were thye to say...was there anythng else to say???..

no there wasnt..but they dint want to disconnect the call..

"naina???"

"huh???..."
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"oh dont aske me ...yeh aadmi to pagal hai.."

"ohye yudie aisa kya kiya...."

"kya kiya??..."

[3 1/2 hours back]

"AAP LOG SAMAJHTE KYA HAIN??..I CANNOT STAY HERE SOLDIRE HUN MEIN..."

"sir..plzz..we...cant.."

"HEY U..U R A CADET..EK SOLDIER KI PRIDE NAHI SAMAJH SAKTE...."

the pateint was struggling...and yudi and the nurse hald him down..

he was fighting..to get out of the bed...but the situation was such that he cudnt be allowed ot move...


little did yudi know..that lt.sahay had a samll earphone attache to his ear...

"MUJHE JAANE DO..i..."

"SHUT UP!!!"

yudi had lost his cool...

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[presen]

"huh??...assem da??.."

"aseem..zz..kaun..hai??..."

"sir?/..zz.woh..senoir...officer..zz...hepl..."

"naina!!..."

"han assem da??.."

"may i..??"

"yes of course..." she handed him the wireless...

"major rajveer??...lt.aseem banerjee here!!....zz...hello..zz..."

"yes..lt..zz...aap..help ..kar..zz"

"sir.,.zz..i will acoompany naina...zz...on the mission...dont worry...hum...theek thak hi rahen..zzge..."

"i...hope..so...zz...naina...is tough...zzz..."

"i wil...take care..zzz..of ...naina...sir...she i...uis ...a nice gal...zz.."


huh??....

"naina...zz..."

"yes..sir....zz..we leave tomorow..sir...over to naina..zz..."

"sir??..zz..."

"naina...zz...wireless..time..limited hai..zz...u..zzget..me..??"

"yes sir..zz.....i....need...to..z.z."

"hang up..zz..." he completed....

feeling empty...

"sir?/zz///???"

"take..care....zz..nain...zz."

"i..zz.will..zz..."

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[3 1/2 hrs back]

"SHUT UP...AAB SOLDIER HAIN...BHAGAWAN NAHI..U GET ME SIR??..U R NOT TO LEAVE THAT BED...

U R A SOLDIER..A PROUD ONE...

BUT NOT THE ALMIGHTY...!!"

"MEIN..."

"SHUT UP..AND LISTEN..."

yudi was red...this was the only way to handle such patients...

"AGAR HATH PAIR NAHI RAHENGE..TO JUNG KAIE LADENGE AAP?????..THUNK OVER IT..AND LET ME KNOW...GOODBYE!!"

he stormed out...

lt.sahay..tuoched the headset..

"hello??.."

"well done..and even he handled it well...wat do u thnk lt??.."

"9/10...."

[present]

"oye phir??..."

"then wat bro??...cool down..mein khud surprissed tha...phew..it was a bad day..."

""may be worse tomorow..."

"ma'am??..."

"sit..sit...yes..yudi maybe worse..so aap logon ke din kaise gaye??cadet aalekh??.."

"apun ka kya..woh nehal rai..first year..uska case tha..."

"han..i heard..meine suna..tumne uske parents ko bulwaya hai...BC..is happy wid ur decision..well done!!"

"han..woh apun ko laga ki khali pili..bechara ma-baap ke chaaker mein khud mar raha hai...aur yeh bhi pata chala
uski behen army mein ana chahti hai..lekin bbap nahi aane dega..."

"oye..yeh kahan ke usool hain..miss call kahin ka..."

"€wahi to apun bola...ki agar baap ko itna shouk hai..apne naam ko rakhne ka army mein..to beti ko bheje..is ko kyun pees rahe hain..apun kal koshish karega..samjhane ki..."

"good mave chief..."

"yes cadet aalekh..accha decision hai..and huda??..how is the major treating you..."

"poochiye mat ma'am...areh report kise banaani hai..woh mujhe situation nahi..analysis dete hain..ab aap hi kuch bataiye..

ab us mucch...mera matlab hai..major ka aur huda ka dimag ek jaisa hai kya??"

"hmm..i may be able to help u in this..."

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"gudnight sir...zz///"

"gudnight...zz..."

silence prevails again...
it seems to be omnipresent in these moments..

moments where even though two souls were seperated by distance...but bound by emotions...

the music flowed then..raj always found comfort in these melodies...

he felst happy he had said that tiny "sorry..."..if only she was in front of him then...

rooth ke humse kabhi....
jab chale jaoge tum..

rooth ke humse kabhi...
jab chale jaoge tum...

ye na socha tha kabhi...
itne yaad aoge tum...

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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
Hie...

I am slightly disappointed.

I am putting up this entire fic only for you all....par agar mujhe readers nahin mil rahe...I might as well not do it! Kyunki main specially aapke liye yeh kar rahi hoon....

"Waqt" is almost complete at its original place.




Cheers,
JIV

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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
Very well written dear.Thanks for updating.
Do continue soon.
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Thank u.
Wonderful update.Superb.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
hey jivora... this fic is just superb....
pls pls pls...do continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
hey plz do it plz zzzzzzzzz dont stop

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