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Okay, here is something relating to the current story. This is my first fan fiction ever, so I hope you like it:
Sumit is pacing in his room back and forth, waiting for everyone to fall asleep so he can plan with Kumkum about what to do with Ratan and his mom. Everyone falls asleep. The whole house is dark as hell...Sumit quietly goes into Kumkum's room thinking she is still probably awake but, as lazy as kumkum is, she falls asleep... Sumit slowly goes into her room, making sure he is not making any noise... And is about to whisper Kumkum, coming to realize she is soundly sleeping in what used to be Sumit's bedroom... He just stands there near the bed and stares at her... All of sudden, Kumkum feels as if someone is in her room and opens her eyes to realize that Summit is by her bed looking at her lovingly... She gets shy and wakes up from the bed and says
Summit tum... tum yahaaaan kya kar rahe ho... and she tries to escape his eyes...
Summit: (still staring at her)tumhe kya lagta hai Kumkum?
Kumkum tries to walk away while talking...but Sumit blocks her....
Kumkum gets all nervous and plays with her dupatta while staring at the floor... Meanwhile, Sumit is still staring down at her....
Kumkum: (all nervous)mujhe, mujhe kya lagna hai?
the kumkum tune is playing in the back...
Summit starts to walk towards her... while starring down at her... Kumkum steps back slowly while fiddling with her dupata... Summit corners her to the wall....
and just stares at her passionately...
Kumkum nervously, looks here and there...
Kumkum sees an empty water jug on the table near by.. and tries to escape by saying...
Kumkum: are, me to bhul hi gayi, mujhe bahot pyaas lagi thi, mein pani pi kar aati hoon...
She takes the jug and starts to move away from Summit and walks toward the bedroom door....
Summit sort of blocks her, so she squishes herself to get out...
As she was about to open the door... Summit grabs her hand and comes and closes the door...
Kumkum is standing attached to the door, and Summit comes and puts both of his arms on the door, one on each side, completely blocking Kumkum...
Kumkum just wants to escape from his stare but, she is unable to...
She tries to speak but the words don't come out of her mouth
Kumkum: Summit, woh mujhe....
Summit: (starring at her) han kumkum, mujhe kya....
Kumkum: woh mujhe....
Summit: jaana chahti ho, jao...pushing her a bit... jao na mene kub roka he...(letting go of one of his hand, telling her to go)... jao
As Kumkum was about to leave, he grabs her hand and brings her closer to him
Summit: tum to jana chahti thi naa, to jati kyun nahin..
Kumum: (whispers) Chodo mujhe... chodo...
Everytime Kumkum tries to escape, Summit holds her even tighter and brings her even closer...not being able to escape, and Summit not letting her want to go, stare at each other
Summit: tumhe yaad hai kumkum, bachpan mein ham jab judaa hone wale the? Tub jate waqt mujhe ek cheeze karne kah bahot dil kar raha tha
Kumkum gets even more nervous and tries to escape even harder this time...
But Summit grips her harder and gives her a big kiss on her cheek... Kumkum all blushing and shy... pushes him away... and hides herself behind the curtain....
Summit: Kumkum, suno to....
and then
to be continued
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Sumit is pacing in his room back and forth, waiting for everyone to fall asleep so he can plan with Kumkum about what to do with Ratan and his mom. Everyone falls asleep. The whole house is dark as hell...Sumit quietly goes into Kumkum's room thinking she is still probably awake but, as lazy as kumkum is, she falls asleep... Sumit slowly goes into her room, making sure he is not making any noise... And is about to whisper Kumkum, coming to realize she is soundly sleeping in what used to be Sumit's bedroom... He just stands there near the bed and stares at her... All of sudden, Kumkum feels as if someone is in her room and opens her eyes to realize that Summit is by her bed looking at her lovingly... She gets shy and wakes up from the bed and says
Summit tum... tum yahaaaan kya kar rahe ho... and she tries to escape his eyes...
Summit: (still staring at her)tumhe kya lagta hai Kumkum?
Kumkum tries to walk away while talking...but Sumit blocks her....
Kumkum gets all nervous and plays with her dupatta while staring at the floor... Meanwhile, Sumit is still staring down at her....
Kumkum: (all nervous)mujhe, mujhe kya lagna hai?
the kumkum tune is playing in the back...
Summit starts to walk towards her... while starring down at her... Kumkum steps back slowly while fiddling with her dupata... Summit corners her to the wall....
and just stares at her passionately...
Kumkum nervously, looks here and there...
Kumkum sees an empty water jug on the table near by.. and tries to escape by saying...
Kumkum: are, me to bhul hi gayi, mujhe bahot pyaas lagi thi, mein pani pi kar aati hoon...
She takes the jug and starts to move away from Summit and walks toward the bedroom door....
Summit sort of blocks her, so she squishes herself to get out...
As she was about to open the door... Summit grabs her hand and comes and closes the door...
Kumkum is standing attached to the door, and Summit comes and puts both of his arms on the door, one on each side, completely blocking Kumkum...
Kumkum just wants to escape from his stare but, she is unable to...
She tries to speak but the words don't come out of her mouth
Kumkum: Summit, woh mujhe....
Summit: (starring at her) han kumkum, mujhe kya....
Kumkum: woh mujhe....
Summit: jaana chahti ho, jao...pushing her a bit... jao na mene kub roka he...(letting go of one of his hand, telling her to go)... jao
As Kumkum was about to leave, he grabs her hand and brings her closer to him
Summit: tum to jana chahti thi naa, to jati kyun nahin..
Kumum: (whispers) Chodo mujhe... chodo...
Everytime Kumkum tries to escape, Summit holds her even tighter and brings her even closer...not being able to escape, and Summit not letting her want to go, stare at each other
Summit: tumhe yaad hai kumkum, bachpan mein ham jab judaa hone wale the? Tub jate waqt mujhe ek cheeze karne kah bahot dil kar raha tha
Kumkum gets even more nervous and tries to escape even harder this time...
But Summit grips her harder and gives her a big kiss on her cheek... Kumkum all blushing and shy... pushes him away... and hides herself behind the curtain....
Summit: Kumkum, suno to....
and then
to be continued
Note: second part has been posted on page 2 or 3
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