FF: 'Romance of KS' My first Fan fiction - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Here is the second part everyone, I hope you like it:
Starting from where I left off last time:
Kumkum pushes Summit, runs and hides behind the curtain...
Summit: Suno to....Kumkum....
It is as dark as it can get in the room...the wind starts to blow and the Window where Kumkum is hiding bangs and opens....Summit spots Kumkum and just gazes in her direction...and slowly starts to move towards her....
Kumkum covers her face behind the curtain....
Summit as romantic as he is, starts to sing
Summit: Chand chupa badal mein, sharma ke meri jana...
The thunder strikes and Kumkum scared runs in the direction of Summit and bangs into him, hugging him ever so tightly...
Summit sings: Sine se lagja tu, balkha ke meri janaa...
realizing what she did, Kumkum lets go off Summit and walks away step by step...Summit walks in front of her and tries to kiss her... and Kumkum gets a bit nervous and uncomfortable and distances herself from him..
Before he could say anything to Kumkum....
Summit spots someone outside the room, and he goes out the window without Kumkum realizing he is not there....
Kumkum: Summit..... Summit... (She smiles to herself, and goes back to sleep)
Next morning, (continuation from today's Kumkum cutting onion scene)
Summit comes dressed up as Hasmukh...and was walking by the kitchen....
Bua spots Kumkum's teary eyes and tells Hasmukh... dekho Kumkum kitni dukhi hai.... Summit ko yaad kar ke ro Rahi hai...Woh kitna pyaar kari hai na Summit se...
Hasmukh/Summit gets an idea.... and tells Komal bua
Hasmukh/Summit: are Komal...ek kaam kar.... tu chahti hena ki is ghar ki khoosiyan vaapas aajaye... (Komal nods) to tu Kumkum ko mere kamre mein bhej... are bhoolna nahi... aur haan kuch khane ke liye bhi bhej dena...
Aur suun...woh kisi ko aane mat dena mere kamre me...me aur Kumkum tapasya Karenge... Summit ki vapsi ke liye
Kumkum enters Hasmukh mama's room...She looks around...and walks in a bit...
Kumkum: Dadu.... Dadu....
As soon as Kumkum reaches half way into the room, Summit dressed up as Hasmukh quickly closes the door behind her....
Kumkum just to tease Summit says
Kumkum: Dadu ye aap ne darvaza kyun bandh kiya???
Hasmukh/Summit: Dadu mat bulao....
Kumkum: Aap ko dadu naa bulau to kya bulaoo... Dadu...
Hasmukh/Summit: Mujhe Hasu bulao...
Kumkum: naa ba ba....Agar aap ko naam se bulaoongi to Summit mujse bahot naraaz hoga....
Hasmukh/Summit: Ye Summit kaun hota hai tumpe naraaz hone wala...jub mein keh raha hoon ke mujhe hasu bulao... to use kya problem hai???
Kumkum: naa baba... aap ko nahi pata... Summit hamesha muj pe nazaar rakhta hai... Kahin use pata chal gaya to.. Wo to mujhe bahot mare ga...
Summit in his thoughts, dramebaaz...Meine kub isko maraa ya data.... abhi theek karta hoon ise...
Hasmukh/Summit: Aur agar Summit kahe to??? (While removing his beard and his make up)
Kumkum: (facing away from Summit) aap ko nahin pata dadu... woh aapke samne to mujhe kahedenge pur, baad mein woh mujhe bahot satayenge...
Summit (now in his own attire, ready to fight): Oye Nautanki, mene tumhe kub data ya satayaa..
Kumkum (still pretending): Summit aap yahan...dadu kahaan gaye??? (while smiling)
Summit: Dadu ki chodo, aur batao....mene kab tumpe haath uthaya....
Kumkum( still teasing him): woh,.....
Summit: woh kya... bolo....Tumse badi dramebaaz aaj tak mene nahin dekhi... Tum bilkool apni chachi pe gayi ho
Kumkum: Aur, tum tumhara kya.... Aur khabardaar meri family ke bare mein kuch kaha to...
Summit (smirking): to kya haan??
Kumkum (whispering): khud ki family puri villain sai bhari padi hai or meri family ko kos raha hai
Summit: mujhe sunai nahin diya, zaara uncha bolo...
Kumkum: Mujhe tumse to baat hi nahin karni... mein jaa rahi hoon...
Summit blocks her... and
Summit: Acha baba... maaf karo....
Kumkum faces the other way and Summit puts his hands on her shoulders and she brushes it off...and starts to walk away
He grabs her hand and turns her towards him
Summit: acha suno, Bua keh rahi thi ki tum Summit ko bahot yaad kar rahi thi.... aur ro bhi rahi thi..
Kumkum: nahin to mein kab roh rahi thi...woh to mein pyaaz kat rahi thi...
Summit: Accha bahana hai... rone ke liye nahin...
Kumkum: Tum firse shooroo ho gaye??
Summit: Sach batao Kumkum, tum thoda bahot to mujhe miss kar rahi thi na...
Kumkum looks down while Summit stares at her...
Kumkum: mujhe jaana hai...kitchen mein bahot kaam hai...
He grabs her hand and pulls her towards him...
Summit: noker hai naa woh sab sambhal lenge...
Kumkum: Summit koi aajayega...
Summit: Koi nahin aayega... mene bua se keh diya hai ki ham dono mil ke yahan pe tapasya kar rahein hai summit ki vapsi ke liye or woh kisiko aandar aane na de...
Kumkum blushes....
Kumkum: to chalo tapasya suru kar do...
Summit pulling her even closer towards him: wohi to kar rahaa hoon..
Kumkum tries to escape his grip and walks toward the coffee table...
Kumkum: Summit chalo nasta karlo.
Summit: mein fresh hoke aata hoon...
Summit takes a shower while Kumkum waits for him while cleaning his room...
Summit comes out... His hair all wet and his shirt half done....
He sees Kumkum cleaning his room then his bed....
He walks behind her and grabs her from the back, wrapping his hand around her
Kumkum gets shocked....
Kumkum: Summit yeh kya kar rahe ho...
Summit: kya kar raha hoon... kuch bhi to nahin...
Kumkum: Summit please chodo mujhe....
Summit: iski ek kimat chokani padegi.....
Kumkum: what??? Kimat???
Summit: han keemat to chookani padegi...
Kumkum: toh kya karna hoga mujhe...
Summit comes closer to her and says ek kiss....He tries to kiss her
Kumkum distances herself from him

Kumkum: Summit yeh theek nahin hey....
Summit: kya matlab....
Kumkum: ham aisa nahin kar sakte...yeh sub theek nahin
Summit realizing that Kumkum is uncomfortable, lightens up the environment by saying:
Summit: tumhe kya lagta hai mein tum aur kiss??
Kumkum just staring at him
Summit: Duniya mein dusri ladkiyaan mar gayi hai ki mein tumhe kiss karoonga..
Kumkum: to yeh sab kya tha??
Summit: Woh to mein rehersal kar rahaa tha... waise bhi tum aur tumhari family achi nautanki kar leti hai... to mene socha meri rehersal ho jayegi.... (all this while he was still staring lovingly at KumKum)
Kumkum: Tum kabhi nahin sudharo ge and runs after him
Both have a pillow fight....
Summit, at the end wins and grabs Kumkum's hand and: I am sorry......
KumKum: Sorry kiss liye?
Summit: Tum dar gayi thi na, is liye...I promise....mein aisa kuch bhi nahin karoonga jisse hamara rishtaa daag dar ho.....mujh pe vishwaas rakho...
Kumkum: mujhe tumpe pura bharosa hai Summit
Summit: par Kumkum, kabhi kabhi kuch....thoda sa...
he tries to go towards her...
Kumkum: Summittt.......
Both hug passionately....and the time fades......
I hope you all like it.
luv
ridz
Edited by sweetchilly1234 - 17 years ago
Annie4Juhi thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
Oh great work this was great topic awesome u r too good👏🏻
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
gr8 story but it will seen on-air or not.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
Hey bhoomi...
No, i don't think it will be seen on air.. It is just my fiction... Though it would be interesting if the creatives visit IF and pick my story and show it on air.. It will be one hell of a day...
Thanks everyone for your comments
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
Sooooo Cute 🥰 Loved the update.
Edited by serialfreak - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was such a romantic part.............just loved it..............please continue soon with more romantic parts.........

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