Pls read my 1st attempt on writin a scene

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Hey everybody I am sure most of us are still in la la land?.or enjoying ourselves in dreamland thinking about the most romantic, passion filled, warm, intense at the same time delicate 10th July fire escape scene DMG has given us so far??Well after watching it again and again I had weaved up a small scene of my own back in my mind which I thought will share with u?

After the most promising scene showcased so far?.Riddhima is still holding Armaan close to her as though wondering why did she keep herself away from this one person who loves her most in this world?..She raises her eyes which are filled with tears to look at Armaan, who is still in dazed by the magic that just took place?..There is a very brief moment of silence which is broken by Riddhima as she says to Armaan that She loves him?.All the emotions and feelings that he kept in herself just overflowed as her heart no longer had the strength to keep it away from her Mr. Right?..She confessed for the first time that how incomplete she felt with out him?..She told him how miserable and lonely she felt keeping him away from her?..She admitted that she missed him every second in spite him being there around her most of the time?.These words were like music to Armaan?s ears?.All he wanted to hear from the one girl he loves he most in the world , the love of his life was ?I LOVE YOU??..and here he was standing in front of her listening to every bit she was saying unable to sink in to the moment??He looked at her, his with eyes filled with tears of joy and all the love he had for her?.and placed his finger on her lips as to hush her down?..she looked at him not knowing what to say or do?..And there it came?.?I Love You??..sending shivers all along her spine?.even though she knew that he loved her she never thought that she could hear these words again from Armaan?her love her life her everything?..They wished that time would come to a stand still?.but nothing lasts forever the magic was broken when Riddhima?s Pager rang?..she dint want to leave?.she wanted to just be there in his arms, make up for all the time she kept him away from her?..With a heavy heart but happiness of all that happened she took her steps to the door?.all the way looking at Armaan?.and left??Armaan?s happiness knew no bound, everything was so unexpected and so hard to believe but his faith, his true love for Riddhima had finally been answered?..for the first time in so many days his smile radiated true happiness that he felt with in?..

Riddhima was in her room desperately trying to reach Armaan?..she sat near the window?..the light breeze caressing her cheek?.she smiled as she thought about that days events?.suddenly she felt as though somebody was staring at her?and it felt so familiar??she looked every where and there he was standing just gazing at her??She ran towards him?..asked him what are u doing here?..told him that Nani and Anjali dhi were down and Anjali dhi could come up any time?..he stood still?.his eyes still fixed on her?..and cut her off asking ? Yeh sab sapna tho nahi hai na?? She silently looked him for a few seconds knowing that this question if raised today was because of her, because of her indifference, because of the way she kept him away from her, hurt him?..she smiled so sweetly that Armaan just fell in love with her all over again?.she walked towards him and now stood just a few inches away from him?..she closed his eyes slowly with her hand and kissed his chest the same way she did earlier?and then whispered in his ears?..?Ab yakeen hua??.Armaan opened his eyes?.and gave the most boyish charm filled smile Riddhima had ever seen??She could not look at him?.his look was melting her inside?..he slowly kissed her forehead?.as she put her hands around his neck?..

The star studded sky and the moon looked upon them from above smiling at the wonders that love did?..

ps: This was actually my dream where i was there in place of Sukirti....the fire escape scene had me in it and so did this imagination of mine....i was giggling after i saw this.....i thought i will tell the part that it was me who was actually in the imagination at last.....i know but after all girls like me will never be able to stop thinking abt Karan aka Armaan😍

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very eloquently written 👏
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Awwww...that was so nice. Alas, you dun get everything in life. Aissa nahi hoga kal...uff!!! Hahah...but very well written 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwww!!!!!! chooooooo chweeeeet! i so wish this happens.. but its not.. u 4got abt the bus wala promo??? hated to break the romantic moment, but wat abt the bus promo???
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Dont know really what goona b happen..But very beautifully wrritten dear..God bless u> 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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waoh it was a cute and sweet prediction...hope this happens...but as we know creatives...they have always something different in store for us...they think beyond wat we think...welll hope for the best for tomorrow...and hope confession happens tomorrow...
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76 views and only 7 replies 😭
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Originally posted by: LadyMcbeth

Very eloquently written 👏

thankyou soooo much

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Originally posted by: armaans*basket*

Awwww...that was so nice. Alas, you dun get everything in life. Aissa nahi hoga kal...uff!!! Hahah...but very well written 👏

i know it would happen this way......but its a way to be happy

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: piya2025

Dont know really what goona b happen..But very beautifully wrritten dear..God bless u> 😊

i know kya kare....but sapne tho dekh sakthe hai

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