A poem I wrote...Don't laugh

|Persephone| thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Life is hard, its unfair
It gives you no time to stand and stare
It has many twists n turns, ups n downs
Its full of pain, joys, smiles and frowns
You just gotta learn to deal with it
You just gotta get he feel of it
You win, you lose, its up to you
Just remember you gotta be you
But if you really can't get it still
And you feel things going down the hill
And the emptiness doesn't seem to fill
Then you just gotta chill...
Play the game, just play along
Do right what you got wrong
Don't run like a fool
Just take it cool
Life is full of fun
And the fun has just begun

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neelam8 thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago
#2

haha and you're always telling me that IIII am a good writer...

LOOK AT YOU! 😊

GOOD JOB!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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That is VERY good. That is just fab!
Nankri thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#4
Nice Poem..Fab job gunia..👏
Safiyah thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#5

Marvelous work.

My fav. lines are:-

"And you feel things going down the hill
And the emptiness doesn't seem to fill
Then you just gotta chill..."

"Life is full of fun
And the fun has just begun"

anitha.b thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#6
That is a good poem luvyaforever.

Keep them going....👏
|Persephone| thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thank u pple for appreciating my poem... 😭 😭 😭 it brings tears of happiness to my eyes...

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