Dil Mill Gaye(Premeer) -One Shot: Pg 1

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Parth Garewal

@Parth Garewal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

hey shifu di... its gr8 yaar.. superb...its too gud... 👏

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Goth

@-Goth-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

so cute!!!...i wish premeer do the same in the serial.get married.

gr8 job!!!

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Shafaq

@shafaq92

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#13

That was absoloutley great Shifali...you're a great writer 😊 and should do
this more often....perhaps even start a fanfic of your own. That's just a
suggestion though. I loved this.....it was so cute 😳 and Premeer were so
adorable. I could actually imagine all the scenes taking place. Well done!
Keep it up 😉.

Shafaq 😃

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May1902

@May1902

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#14

That was such a sweet story 😳
Premeer are so adorable. You do write really well, which reminds me can u update ur Premeer Shaadi faanfic 😃 That was also really good 👏

May

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tanya

@tanyaaaa26

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#15

its very nice dear very nice
awesome mindblowing fantastik 👏 anything left to say? 😆

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Salma

@salma_786786

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

OMG Shifu.... when did you write this 😕 😕 i never saw it until now.....anyways.....
Shifu this was great hun.... One shot, straight, direct and to the point.... i lubbbb the way you used the ending of that specific episode and made it your own.... it would of been amazing if Premeer did actually say i love you in that episode.... oh well at least i got to read it here.....
sooo sweet a little girl called pooja....awwww im dreaming...... 😍

Great work!!!! what happened to your FF 😛 😃

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Payal

@-iPayal-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#17

awwwwwwwww!!! 😳
shifali that was soooooooooo amazing...if you were the one and only creative of this show..it would be so much better than it is rite now 😆 😆
*i wish the real thing went like that*

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#18

Shifu difu di!!!My fellow one-shot writer!! 😆

WOW! AMAZING! GREAT! WONDERFUL!

That was soooooo well written!! 👏 👏 The whole story was developed sooo well! You should be one of the creatives of the show!! The show would kick ass, and all the time it would be Premeer!! 😆 Great work! Do write some more!!

Shabz

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