Dil Mill Gaye(Premeer) -One Shot: Pg 1

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Here is a One -Shot FF on Premeer.

Prem and Heer were best friends, Heer shared every secret of hers with Prem and Prem shared every secret of his with her. They were best pals, buddies and friends. They had known each other since they were 1 year olds, went to the same daycares, same school and now the same college. One word to describe thier friendship was..."Eternal"...but was it also love? Prem believed there shouldn't be love in friendship but love should have friendship(Not mine, taken from an Ekta movie) Prem denied the fact of loving Heer, just as he disagreed with his dad Lalit, who wanted him to join business, but here, our Prem wanted to see the world...after all, it was his life.

Prem was sleeping on his front turning his head the other way. Heer quietly tip-toed inside the room, gave a big grin and slowly and steadily tip-toed beside Prem. She took a jar of water with ice from behind her back and poured it all on Prem's back. Prem woke with a scream "Ahhhhh" while Heer broke down laughing her head off. Prem took his blanket and started wiping his back. "What was this Heer? I don't like it!" Heer replied back saying "Uff...you say that every single day!" Heer started to run, and Prem ran after her, "Ahh...Prem, No! Dont!" Heer screamed and yelled while running before Prem while Prem tried to trap her. "Than why did you pour water over me?" asked Prem. "Well, it wasn't as bad as Holi!" Prem stopped running, and felt embarressed. Heer stopped running as well. Than a flashback of Prem sleeping and Heer coming in and putting "coloured" make -up on Prem showed. Prem woke up from bed that day, and went to the washroom and 1 minute later came out screaming..."Ahhhhh" and in another minute, everyone from the family was in Prem's room laughing. Prem was soo embarressed that day. Flashback stoped and this time Heer screamed. "Ahhhhhhhhhh PREMMM!"...Prem had just shoved a piece of ice behind Heer's back and now Heer couldnt even take it out. This time Prem broke out laughing.

The next day it was Prem's friend's engagement and he had to wear a traditional outfit. Prem wore a brown sherwani with a scarf. At the engagement party, Prem was busy talking with his friends when he heard a voice."Prem" He turned around to see Heer wearing a pink umbrella cut dress(Something like Additi wore at the SPA) and light make -up. She was looking beautiful, and Prem kept on staring at her. Heer walked over to him and waved her hand to get Prem back from his dream. "Kahaan ko gaye the?" "Nothing" replied Prem.

The engagement preperations was on full swing when the 2 people switched rings and all the guests looked in awww. Premeer were standing right beside each other. "Kaash I also get engaged like this" wispered Heer. Prem looked at Heer and kept staring at her. She looked amazingly beautiful. Thats what he liked about Heer, Heer didnt need some make -up to look pretty, she looked pretty just the way she was. That was her true beauty...her inner self. "Don't worry, you will get engaged like this...or even better" replied Prem. This time Heer looked at Prem, she knew he was cute and only he understood Heer. Only he knew what Heer's heart was saying and that's what she liked about him. He wasn't like those typical boys. Premeer gazed at each other, stared and kept staring while Bol Na Halke Halke played in the background.

The engagement party was over, and Premeer were walking on a random street (Much like yesterday's episode) It hadn't been this quiet since ages and when Heer was around...than barely never. But today was a little different...there was something in Heer's heart that she wanted to say...and he Prem knew it but still Heer stayed quiet. Heer started walking ahead of Prem and than stopped to find Prem stopping and turned back. "Are you coming?" asked Heer. Prem didn't know what to say or what to do. "I love You" replied Prem. Heer was shocked...and so was Prem...he didn't know how those words came out, but they just did. "I Love You...I don't know but whenever I see you, something happens to me...please don't leave me...please..." Heer couldn't take this and turned her back towards Prem and tears started running down her eyes. Prem continued "You were there whenever I needed you most, and now I am asking you, will you stand by me for the rest of my life?...Will you marry me?" Tears started running down both Premeer's eyes. Prem hoped for a reply from Heer, but she didn't. Prem started to turn back when he heard Heer say "I love you too.."

Prem turned back with a smile on his face and Heer ran and hugged Prem and both said "I Love You" Than Prem went on his knees and asked Heer "Will you marry me?" Heer was surprised and said "Yes, I will marry you" Prem got up and Premeer hugged again.

3 years later -

Premeer were happily married and also had a little baby girl named Pooja.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwhhsss cute FF! itss amaazzinggg!! 😉
aww haha, yay! they got marriedd!! wootttt!! ?
I wish they would get married in KDMHMD!!! 😭
anywaayysss, keep upp the greeatt worrkk
totaally awweesoommee!! 😊

- Deena 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I am speechless!!! 😲

*keeps on staring in shock and then drops dead*

Shifu, you didn't tell me you were such an awesome writer!! 🤗 Loved the FF...it was nice to see a talkative Heer for once...she is so quiet in the show! 😳 😆 I wish they would get married...one thing I loved about your FF is that this Taklu seems to have some brain atleast!! 😆 You are an amazing writer...you should start an FF!! 😃 Ok...since I am going to make you a siggy...I want you to write a one shot on Prem-Sonu love story! 😍 It better have a good ending! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sakeena

awwwwwhhsss cute FF! itss amaazzinggg!! 😉 Thanks D😳
aww haha, yay! they got marriedd!! wootttt!! ? Yes, they did get married...unlike this show😡😆
I wish they would get married in KDMHMD!!! 😭 As I said...Ekta mai needs some brains for that😆
anywaayysss, keep upp the greeatt worrkk Will try to😳
totaally awweesoommee!! 😊 Thanks again...

- Deena 😉

Thank you soooooo much for commenting D...*Hugs*😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: mumpet

I am speechless!!! 😲 Hawww...kab se?😆

*keeps on staring in shock and then drops dead* Nahinn....don't be dead, warna who will be Shabo's buddy??😆

Shifu, you didn't tell me you were such an awesome writer!! 🤗 Awww...really? I never knew that😳Loved the FF...it was nice to see a talkative Heer for once I know, ALL thanks to me...Yay me!😆...she is so quiet in the show! 😳 😆 Sometimes her being quite in the show ruins it!😡 I wish they would get married...one thing I loved about your FF is that this Taklu seems to have some brain atleast!! 😆Haha, or rather say Prem has a brain for disagreeing with Lallu😆 but on the other hand, Lallu did good by not objecting to the Premeer wedding here😆 You are an amazing writer*This time Shifu shocked, keeps staring and drops dead*😆...you should start an FF!! 😃I already did...2 of them...but left them hanging😆 Ok...since I am going to make you a siggy...I want you to write a one shot on Prem-Sonu love story! 😍Fine, but the sigg should say "Mrs. Shifali Harshad Chopra" than!😆 It better have a good ending! 😆

I will try not to burst your bubble😆

Thank you soooooooooooo much for commenting *Hugs*😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Shifali*

I will try not to burst your bubble😆

Thank you soooooooooooo much for commenting *Hugs*😳


Yeah, I think it's better if you don't burst my bubble!!😆

Aww, your welcome, Shifu🤗 *hugs back and then remembers she is hugging her soutan and instead pushes her away*

LOL, this reminds me of the time that Shabo and I fought over virtual hugs and chocolate!😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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AWW..shifu, that was sooo cutee!..loved how it was soo simple..simply fabulous!..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey so nice FF has gt evry thng so cute!!! 😃 😳
loved it muahuahah 😳
i want more just one day FF g8 idea dear mast hai!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwwwwwwww Shifaliiiiiiii! I loved itttttttt! Its just sooo A-D-O-R-A-B-L-E! 🤗 Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! I can go on "aww-ing" at this FF! 😳 😳 You should write more! 😃 😃 The ice part iss sooo funny! 😆 😆 😆 And the holi flashback! 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I LOVED IT MINDBLOWING AWWWWWWWW THEY GOT MARRIED AND LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER I HOPE THIS HAPPEN IN KDMHMD
ANYWAYS IT WAS AWESOME 👏

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