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Posted: 17 years ago
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Read At Your Own Risk. Have not been re read…might have 100s of mistakes…This oneshot has NO plot… Still I hope you will like it (a bit foolish, nahi?)…Either way Please Comment…

No comments hurts (more than bad ones)

I dunno know if you all remember this, during the black gang era Yuvi (and somebody) was locked inside a room that was on fire… Ashi was outside howling that they let her go inside…in her panic she forgot all about pretending to hate Yuvi and had said "par Yuvi wahaan par hai" Considering (coz I don't remember) the guy who was there was Sid…it makes him wonder a few things. And I'm giving you the insight of his Those Thoughts…The ones that are stored in a room called:

They?

Oh man that was Scarry!! For a moment it seemed that Yuvi won't come out (and I hate that moment) Thank god he did…Oh man…no no oh no I never want to think of it again…never…

But what did Ashi say then? Yuvi wahaan par hai? Why was she so bothered? Might be cause she was telling ME that Yuvi is MY friend and how can I be so selfish and not try to go inside…but I was too scared to think straight then…oh I'm such a terrible friend…

STOP!

That chick looks quite hot, will check her out…Or maybe Ashi really likes Yuvi… but that is impossible…Shes not like the other girls here…Oh how can I forget my friends Charms? I just hope when they get together he doesn't hurt her. Or she doesn't hurt him…Both of them have the equal capacity to hurt people…Oh I'm thinking of The Impossible…they can never be together for more than five seconds without killing each other… The Incident seems to have made me dizzy…

It must have…coz I don't believe what I'm seeing…I don't believe my eyes … Did I… Did I just see Anvesha Banerjii Ray and Yuvraj Dev smiling while they talk? And from when did they start talking?

Oh man Ashi has a crush on Yuvi oh no Yuvi has too (its his "I'm honestly serious" expression)

No No No

NO NO no

No no no

Nonono

Thank god!

Its hatred! Its hatred written all over them.

No No No

NO NO no

No no no

Nonono

Crush+Hatred = Love…

Oh no! They LOVE each other? It can't be They POLES APART!!! And then they can't STAND eachother…I'm being paranoid (though they WOULD make a good couple)

Together and They? Ha!

No comments hurts (more than bad ones)

P.S Its small that why didn't make a new topic!

P.P.S PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE COMMENT!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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believe me yaar its too good yaar 👏 . u r justlike ur namesake with extraortinarily fantastic writing skills its just that her post r never short 😆 and don't think its a comment on u coz ur shot has exactly perfect length and what an Idea Sid on his feelings about relation nd in shot it feels like he too ha crush on Ashi 😉 and this is new 1 yaar. very well written
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Posted: 17 years ago
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look who is tlaking gunnnnnnn
you comparing her with my writing style why i remember osmeone called gun having an extraordinory style tooooo one she gave us all a real superb taste off and then left us all hungry mid way 😭 am starving fro more form your pen gunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn please ocntinue your ficcy gurllll
you know i am bribing you you want me to continue my fics then first you continue with your own 😆 😳 aaah yeaaaaaaaaah now i cuaght you didn't i gunnnnnn? 😃
but honestly am not as grt as my namesake whne it comes to all this i mean nayone cna write in more words and huge huge sentances but few people can express so well in so few words and she does this brilliantly i must say shes a total antithesis of muaaaa 😳 😳 kaahs i could learn the skill of being as short as oyu or shorter perhaps but arg i just have to tlak talk talk and talk without caring if its sense or just blabber 😆
as for this one it rocks and i wld be back with my proper comment tom on it
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Posted: 17 years ago
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dats soo cute nd sid lyk...dat ws damn gud .. 👏 👏 keep ryting
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ur plotless 😆 oneshot rocksssssss👍🏼👍🏼it ws niceeeeeeee 😳 😳 i think dis is da 2nd oneshot vich has been ritten frm sidz pov n seriouslyyyyyy its brillianttt😛😛uve dscribd da confusd sid vryyy vryyyy vellll 😳 it ws it ws cuuuteeee 😳 😳 22222 guuuuuuuud namooonzzzzzzz 😳 it ws quite diff frm da othrsssss n i luuuvd ittttt 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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idk...it was plotless...
but there was something abt it that i can't put my fingers on....something that was so true that it made it deeper then it was perhaphs meant to be. 🤓

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