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Let me try predicting the future. I wish it could be without any twists or turns but it cannot happen as the sory has to move further. I have thought about two twists in the future of KAA.
My story starts after the Brain Tumor part ends - Samar cured due to operation or it was a Fake One.

START -

Well Bussiness Meeting is going on before Foreign Clients

During the Discussion Dhruv tries to tell something. Samar stops him. They get the contract. Dhruv feels bad for being given any importance in Bussiness.
After meeting Samar gets a call. He gets tensed and goesn from there. Reaches Home. Sees a doctor leave the house. Everyone there tensed.

Samar : Kyaa Hua.
No one answers.
Dada : Hone Ko Koi Nahi Taal Sakta Beta.
Aastha : Haan Bhaiya Jo Hona Tha Voh To Ho Gaya.
Samar : ( confused and more Tensed ) Kyaa Matlab. Kyaa Hua. Doctor Kyon Aayee They.
Shyla Chachi : Beta Woh Gauri ...
Samar : Gauri, Kyaa Hua Gauri Ko.
Chachi : Gauri Ke Paas Sirf Saath Maheeney Hain.
Samar : (in tears)
Ayush : Haan Sabh Tere Wajai Se Hua Hain.
Dadi : Saath Meheney Baad Gauri MAA Banegee.
Samar is happy. Everyone hugs him.
Dada : Haan Bhai Humne Kabhi Samar Ka Bachapan Nahi Dekha. Abh Dekhenge.
Samar goes in. Gauri blushes and they both hug each other.

After few days Dhruv is still feeling insecure in Business and is asking for some money to start his own bussiness from dada. Samar Gauri also there. Dada refuses and Argument starts

Dada :Yeh Tum Kyaa Keh Rahey Ho Beta. Jab Family Business Hain To Alag Karney Ke Kya Jaroorat Hain.
Samar : Haan Dhruv, Tumhey Kis Baat Ki Kami Hain.
Dhruv : Mujhe Har Baar Aap Ke Samne Haath Pehlana Achaa Nahi Lagta. Aur Waise Bhi Yeh Business To Aapka Hain Samar Bhaiya.
Dada : Dhruv Yeh Tum Kyaa Keh Rahey Ho.
Dhruv : Mujhe Apne Bachey Bunty Ke Chinta Hain. Kal Ko Woh Bada Hoga . To Uske Bhavishya Ka Kyaa. Kyaa Woh Bhi Shiv Bhaiya Ke Bachoon Ke Samne Bhek Mangta Rahega.

Gauri : Dhruv, Kaise Baatey Kar Rahey Ho. Sabhe Bachee Ek Jaise Hain. Kya Farak Hain Sabh Mein.
Dhruv : (angry and irritated ) Bhabhi Chinta Sirf Mujhe Nahi Aap Ko Bhi Honi Chaheyee. Abh Jab Samar Ke Apne Aulaad Aane Wale Hain. To Woh Shiv Bhaiya Ke Bachoon Ko Kabh Tak Pyaar Karenga. AISA NA HO AAPKE AANE WALI AULAAD APKE BAKE BACHOON KA HAQ CHEEN LEY.

Gauri is STUNNED. Samar holds Dhruvs collar and is about to hit him. Dada is trying to contol them. Gauri Faints.

Next Scene

Doctor : Ghabaraney Ki Koi Baat Nahi. Maa Aur Bacha Dono Thek Hain. Bas Gauri ko Aaram Ki Jaroorat Hain , Koi Stress Mat Lene Deejeeyee.

Gauri is unable to sleep whole night think about what Dhruv said.

Next Morning

Samar getting ready for office.
Samar : Gauri , Appointment Kabh Hain Tumhara Doctor Ke Saath.
Gauri : Friday Ko.
Samar : Friday. Arey Us Din To Mere Meeting Hain.
Gauri : Koi Baat Nahi Samar, Main Khud Chali Jaaongi.
Samar: Nahi, Nahi Aisa Kaise Ho Sakta Hain.
Calls Up his Secreatory
Samar : Cancel Fridays Meeting.
Sec : Sir, Woh Meeting to Bahut Jaroore Hain. Agar woh Deal Nahi Huee to bahut Nuksaan Ho jaaeea.
Samar : Ho jaane Do Nuksaan. Mere Biwi Aur MERE BACHAYE Ki liyee main koi Bhi Nuksaan Otha Sakta Hoon.

Bye Gauri and leaves for office.

Gauri is thinking FLASH BACK.

Ohm had got hurt while playing.
Gauri : Yeh Kyaa Hain Ohm. Dekh Kar nahi Khel Saktey. Kitna Khoon Aa Raha Hain.
Ohm: Mummy Mein thek Hoon.
Samar : Haan Yeh To Bahadur Bacha Hain.
Gauri : Lagta Hain Tetenus Ka injection Dena Hoga. Samar chaleyee Doctor Ke Paas.
Samar : Haan Gauri chalo.
Phone rings. Samar Picks up.
Sec : Sir Woh Clients Aapse Aaj Abhi Milna Chahatey Hain.
Samar : Very Good. Main Abhi Aata Hoon. Gauri Mujhe Jaroore Meeting Ke Liye Jaana Hain. Tumh Gopal ya Ayush Chachu Ko Apne Saath Ley Jaao. Yeah Meeting Bahut Jaroore Hain. Varna Bahut Nuksaan Hoga.

Flash Back ends and Gauri is thinking about the difference in Samar's behavior.

After few days Gauri sees some body a young boy looking for job desperately and women gossip about him.

Woman 1 : Arey Yeh To Singh Ka Bada Beta Hain Na.
Woman 2 : Haan Yeh Wohi Hain, Par Esee NAukari Ke Kyaa JAroorat. Singh Sahab Ke Paas Kya Kame Hain. Acha Khasa Business Hain Na.
Woman 1 : Haan Par Woh sabh to Unke Apne Bete Ke Liyee Hain Na.
Woman 1 : Kya Matlab
Woman 2 : Arey Yeh To Unke Patni Ke Pehle Pati Ka Beta Hain. Pehle To Esse Bahut Pyaar Kartey They Lekin Jab Apna Bacha hua to ..
Woman 1 : Haan Akhir Apne To Apne Hote Hain.

Gauri hears all this and is feeling bad for her kids.

Next Scene

Samar sees Shanti playing with an ELECTRIC WIRE ( is about to get shock, Samar pulls the wire far and SLAPS SHANTI ) Gauri just reaches home to see him slap Shanti not the wire in her hand.
Samar : ( angrily ) Khabardar Jo Aaj Ke Baad Aisa Kiyaa To. Mijhse Bura Koi Nahi Hoga.
Shanti : ( crying ) Sorry papa.
Samar : Abh Jaao Yahaan Se.
Shanti runs from there crying.

Gauri also in tears.

Night.

Samar goes to Shanti's room . She is faast asleep. He covers her with Blanket and Kisses on her Forhead. As he is above to leave Shanti holds his hand. She was awake.

Shanti : Sorry papa, Aap Abhi Tak Naaraz Hain.
Samar : Nahi Beta. Lekin Aage Se Aise Khatarnak cheejon Se Nahi Khelna. Agar Tumhe Shock Lag Jaata To.
Shanti : Sorry papa, Aage Se Main Kabhi Aisa Nahi Karoongi.
Samar : Good girl. Good Night.
Shanti : Good Night Papa.

but Gauri has not seen all this. She still is misundertanding. This misunderstanding goes on for few days and is cleared after some time. Then Samar Gauri reunite and start living happily ... till the next twist.

My next prediction - next twist ( after sometime )

Next Twist after this.

Well the misunderstanding of Gauri is cleared. They all are happy. Samar-Gauri come home from out. Everyone looks tensed and worried.
Both ask : Kyaa Hua ?
Dada : Beta Aaj Bhagawaan Ne Humare Khushiyan Phir Se Lauta De.
Gauri : Kyaa Matlab ?
A Voice is heard " GAURI " Samar-Gauri turn to see and are shocked to see SHIV standing there.'

Shiv comes and hugs Gauri, She feels odd and moves aside.

Samar : Choto Tu ...
Shiv : Haan Bhaiya . Main Vaapas Aa gaya Hoon. Aap Logon Ke Pyaar Aur Duaoon Ne Mujhe Marne Nahi Diya.
Dada : Lekin Beta Us Din Tumhare Aatma To .....
Shiv : Haan dadaji , Mere Aatma Jaa Rahe They. Lekin Us Bhagawaan ne Kahan Ke Mera Waqat Abhi Poora Nahi Hua. Esliyee Mujhe Mere Zindagi waapas Dey De.
Mahen : Tum Etney Saalon tak Kyon Nahi Aayee.
Shiv : Wapas Aate Hi Main Bhagkar Yaahah Aa Raha Tha. Ki Shashank Ki Kuch goondon ne Mujhe Agwah Kar Liyaa. 6 saal tak Un Loogon Ne Mujhe Bandi banakar rakha. Abh Main Akhir Kar Wahah Se bhagakar aa gaaya.

Goes to Samar and hugs.
Shiv : Bhaiya , Aapne mere Gauri Ka Khayal Rakha. Thank You so much.
Samar is too stunned to say anything.

Kids come from Summer Camp next day. They were not at home. They run towards Samar saying PAPA PAPA PAPA. Shiv also comes there and are stunned to see their real Papa. Shiv hugs them saying: Kitney Bade Ho Gayee Hain . Ankhen Taras Gayee They Enhey Dekhne Ke Liyee.

In the Dinning Table Shiv sits next to Gauri before Samar. And Samar-Gauri are feeling uneasy and uncomfortable.

Shiv: Gauri aaj Apne Hatoon Se Nahi Khilaogee. Aaj tumhare Haaton se Khane Ka Bahut Man Kar Raha Hain.

Gauri feeds him. Sam is seeing and feeling jealous. Someone at the door step . Its Kaya. everyone pleasently Surprised.

Gauri: Kaya Tum Yaahan. Achanak. Sabh Theek Hain Na.
Kaya : didi, Shahank Ki Maut ek Accident Mein Ho Gayee. Abh Mera Koi Nahi Hai Es Duniya Mein. Esliyee Main Wapas Aa Gayee.
Dadi : Acha Kiya Beta , yeah bhi to tumhara ghar hain. Abh Tum Yehi Rehna.

Alok has come.
Alok : Main Kaya Ko Apne Saath Le jaana Chahata hoon.
Mahen : Theek Hain.
shiv : Nahi, Nahi Yeh Aap Kya Keh Rahey Hain. Yeah bhi to Kaya Ka Hi Ghar Hain. Yahah Hum Sabh Hain , Khayal Rakhenge Kaya ka. USe Yahee Rehne Deegeeye. Kyun Samar Bhaiya.
Samar ; Haan Theek Kahan , Choto.

Now Samar feels bad seeing Shiv going closer to Gauri ( who is also uncomfortable ) and Kaya is renewing her friendship with Samar.

After few days of all this then one day.

Shiv suggests before everyone to get Samar- Kaya married. Everyone stunned.

Samaar walks off from there so does Kaya.
Shiv : Abh To Samar Bhaiya Ko Bhi Ghar Basa Lena chaheeyee. Kyun Gauri ? Tumhara Kyaa Khayal Hain.
Gauri also Walks off.

Later rest of the family are discussing.

Dadi : Shiv Theek Keh Raha Hain. Samar aur Kaya Ke Shaadi.
Dada : Tumh Hosh Mein To Hoon.
Dadi : Lekin Abh Shiv Ke Vaapas Aa Jaane Se Sabh Halaat Badal Gayee Hain.To Kyun Na Samar Ka Ghar Basaya Jaayee.
shyla chachi: Main Ma Se Sehmat Hoon. Akhir Samar Kaya Se Pyaar Karta Tha.
Ayush : Yeah Nahi Ho Sakta.
Mahen : Kyaa Karoon Kuch Samajh Mein Nahi Aa Raha.

Samar - Gauri meet outside. See each other with tearful eyes and then hug crying.

Gauri : Samar Yeah Sabh Kyaa Ho raha Hain.
Samar : Gauri, Agar Humare Takdeer Mein Milna Nahi Likha To Us Upar Wale Ne Humare Dil Mein Pyaar Kyun Jagaaya.
Gauri : Bas Samar. Hume Shiv Ko Sabh Kuch Bata Dena Hoga.
Samar : Main Bhi Yehi chahta Hoon.

Suddenly they see someone seeing them its KAYA.

Gauri : Kaya , Main .
Kaya : Maine Sabh Sun liyaa didi.
Gauri : Lekin Kaya,
Kaya : Main Aap dono ki beech Kabhi Nahi Aaongi.

Samar gets a call from office. He goes and finds out that Shiv had transferred some properties to some private Company. He is shocked and surprised. He goes back to house. Night Shiv-Samar are alone

Samar : Chotu , Us Factory Ko Kholne Ki Bare Mein Kyaa Soocha. Woh Jo humne 6 saal pehle lagane ke bare main socha tha. Kyaa Tum Bhool gayee es baat ko ki hum Chocolate factory kholne waley they saath main .
Shiv : Nahi nahi bhaiya, Main Kaise Bhool Sakta Hoon. Mujhe Achee Tarah se yaad hain.
Samar : (gets up and yells ) Jhoot. Choto aur maine koi aisa factory kholne ki baat nahi kee they. Tum Choto Nahi Ho. Kyun ho Tumh ?

Shiv starts GRINNING and laughs aakhir tumne mujhe pakad hi liya Samar.

Samar : Kaun Ho Tum ?

Kaya - Gauri enter.
Shiv : Main Shashank hoon.
All are surprised.
Samar : Shashak
Shiv (Shashank ) : Haan Cosmetic Surgery Ne Mujhe Tumhare Shiv Ka Chera diya. Aur Shashank Ki saare Gair Kannone Kaamon Se Mukti. Abh To Main Tum SabKo Sadak Par le aaoga.
Samar: Tu Aisa Kuch Nahi Kar Sakta.
Gauri : Main Tumhe Aisa Karne Nahi Doongi.
Shiv : (laughs ) Pehle tum yeh Saabit Karon Ki Main Shiv Nahi Hoon.

Samar had recorded everything. Next day he and Gauri try telling everyone the TRUTH but no one beleive them.

Dada : Yeh Tum Kyaa Keh Rahe Ho.
Mahen : Bas Samar Bahut Ho gaya. Hum vaise he bahut pareyshaan hain.
Dadi: Hum Tumhare halat samajh sakte hain hain beta lekin ....

Shiv comes there grinning but on seeing the rest of family has tears in his eyes.
Shiv : Bhaiya aapko mujhse kyaa problem hain. Kyun aaisa kar rahe hain aap .
Gauri : Eski Batoon Main Mat aayeeye.
Shiv : Baas Abh Main Aur Nahi Sah Sakta.
Samar: Mere Paas Saboot hain. Kal Jo Kuch Bhi Esne Kahan maine Sab record kiya tha. Main abhi sunatha hoon.

He gets the tape and plays it. Samar - Gauri happy. Shiv tensed.

But the tape is bank ..... nothing is recorded. Everyone angry. Samar-Gauri shocked. Shiv grinning.

Dada: Bas Samar bahut ho gaya.
Gauri : Ek min dadaji. Us waqt Kaya bhi humare saath they. Aap ussese pooch leegeeye.

Kaya comes
Gauri : Batao Kaya, In Sabko batao ... kal raat ko kyaa hua tha.
Kaya : ( surprised ) Kyaa hua tha didi ? Kuch bhi to nahi ?
Samar-Gauri shocked.
Samar : Yeh tum kyaa keh rahe ho Kaya.
Kaya : Kal Raat Aapne mujhse Kahan ki main Samar se Shaadi karne se Inkaar kar do , phir uske baad main to so gayee.
Gauri yells and is about to slap Kaya.

Everyone get angry and leave from there. When only 4 then Kaya also starts laughing. Sam-Gauri shocked.

Shashank: Thankx Kaya , agar tumne woh tape nahi Badlee Hoti to Mera Khel Aaj Khatam Ho Jaata.
Kaya: Humara Khel Shashank.
She gives the tape to Shashank and he burns it.


Howz this twist. Now after some time Samar - Gauri prove the true colors of Shashank and Kaya before the rest. Till then this twist of KAA acc to me will keep us busy.

ohhhhhhhhh godddddd peeeepooooo u r gr8 yaar , i think u should hav been the creative head of KAA

well done so far peeeeepooooo!!! keep it up!!! buh dah closin date is 5th july. i'll decide dah winner afta dat. so good luck 2 all u ppl... keep writin ur views n comments tnx.

Originally posted by: pals_sneh

ohhhhhhhhh godddddd peeeepooooo u r gr8 yaar , i think u should hav been the creative head of KAA

agree wid u di yaarr payal di u r fabbbb yaarr fabb 👏 👏 👏 i m speechless 😲 😲 😲

Wow Peepo! Too good yaar....if only these tracks could take life and actually happen in KAA!👏👏👏