The Unbuttoned Look and Me

The Unbuttoned Look and Me

I know I am getting old, maybe I am already over the hill
'cos for me the unbuttoned shirt is no longer a thrill.

Or maybe I am turning into a prude
itching to scream, button up please, yo dude!

Let me say, before you think I am turning into a nun,
I was quite happy when only the top two buttons were undone.

But the count soon grew to four or more
And so much skin I could not ignore.

And so while others drooled and counted his chest hair,
I fought the urge to do up the buttons and clung to my chair.

Then came the blue sherwaani, this was the height!
A lone button at the navel has forced me these lines to write.

What is the reason for such outrageous flaunt?
Is it weather? Is it fashion or is this what the audience wants?

I know my dear friend Mehak on reading this verse,
will immediately give me an explaination terse.

Di!! Why don't you understand? she will say,
This is all to help sanjeevani its bills pay.
Treating girls who swoon at this chest display,
brings in at least 10 new patients each day!

To that I say, Dear Mehak, medicine is a profession more sedate,
and doctors cannot be held out as patient bait.
For if medicine were no different than flesh trade,
then why not have the female docs wear bikini's and rake in the moolah by the spade?

And if its the heat that bothers him so,
Then endurance he must learn from his fellow bro's.

And consider for once the appeal of subtlety,
The nuance of hidden magic vs outright blatant sexuality.

From women he should learn the art of being a tease,
a glimpse here, an aspect there, is also bound to appease.

For a little mystery and the intrigue of what may be
Are also up there in seductive degree.

So dear KSG, to the road side romeo look bid adieu,
Do them up now, one button or two.
Leave somethings to our imagination,
It won't, I promise you, dull our adulation.

P.S. - This poem has been written in fun, please take it in the right spirit. And have fun too. And I know most of you disagree with me and love his unbuttoned look but PLEASE don't make me feel like a naani maa with you replies. Be kind to me, folks.😆😆

Sona -

Brilliant girl!!!!

Neither are you too old nor too prude but too right you are!!!
To quote the perfect questions and suggestions from ur poem -

"What is the reason for such outrageous flaunt?
Is it weather? Is it fashion or is this what the audience wants?"

"And consider for once the appeal of subtlety,
The nuance of hidden magic vs outright blatant sexuality."

👏

@Notty - Thank you darling.
I know.... aaj ke zamaane mein subtlety ki koi value hi nahin hai yaar.

But the thing is this guy has the ability to seduce you with just a look, melt you with just a smile so he really does not need to expose so much.

Maybe its because when you are so Haaawt you feel more hot? 😆 😆

cute poem n fun post....of course i do disagree n love his unbuttoned look....but who cares hes gona stay that way with the amount he cribs about the number of layers they adorn him with lolzzzzz the point is the poem was awsome.... 👏

@spln - Thanks.

yes yes. every interview on sbs is about how hot the clothes are. You know after that comment of his about not having a wedding like this one...we have a joke going around in our friend circle that he will show up at his wedding in swimming trunks 😆 😆 , Now that should keep him cool enough. 😉 😉

BTW - just started reading you FF and I am enjoying it very much.

SOna

Being sooooo haaawt gets in the way of being cool doesnt it!Maybe we got our definition of cool wrong!!

And while we are at it..whats with Suks plunging necklines!Riddhima is supposed to be seedhi saadhi as she has sweetly reminded us over a thousand times...then why is she trying/or is made to do a BayWatch?????????????????????????????That is defitely not HAWWWWTTTTT 🤢

AWESOME poem, Sona!

"medicine is a profession more sedate,
and doctors cannot be held out as patient bait.
For if medicine were no different than flesh trade,
then why not have the female docs wear bikini's and rake in the moolah by the spade?"

Completely agree!

Sona: I disagree with below line
"And so while others drooled and counted his chest hair,".....where?? that is one waxed out place 😆 😆

But otherwise you hit bullseye....un-buttoned look, looks so sadak chhap!!!......and I feel any minute the last button will snap and he will start "woh haseena woh neelam pari" 😆 😆

Armaan: Button up dude, you are the suave,urbane,smart dude..... your eyes, your dimples, your mischievous smile, your manner of speaking (your passionate I love you in 4 different tones still ring clear in our ears) and more such subtle andaaz makes us gasp........
you don't need this skin exhibitionism, in your face blatant sexuality!!!!....Don't ruin the mysterious allure about you 😉

Originally posted by: sarn7

@spln - Thanks.

yes yes. every interview on sbs is about how hot the clothes are. You know after that comment of his about not having a wedding like this one...we have a joke going around in our friend circle that he will show up at his wedding in swimming trunks 😆 😆 , Now that should keep him cool enough. 😉 😉

BTW - just started reading you FF and I am enjoying it very much.

swimming trunks!!!lolzzz yeh um glad he aint gay or we wud see him in a bikini perhpas!!! oki i better keep my wild mind in check this forum has too many kids n teens....

so which fic did u start reading???glad u liking it whichever of the 2 u started....

I know what your talking about, just the other day my bro was asking me if my hero has run out of buttons for his shirts or is it just that we girls are so deprived of good looking men that we need to see them almost shirtless to admire their good looks, and i had nothing to say but that it's really warm out there.😳 😳 very good poem