Do Dil Milaye!!!!(robie and kasturi F.F.)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I'm writing a fanfic about kasturi and robbie.its about when they first met and I add a little of my creation and imagintion!!!!hope u guys like it and please do comment!!!!😊

TWO PEOPLE MET A ONE PLACE AND IT WAS A TRAIN STATION.BOTH WERE GOING TO MUMBAI AND BOTH WERE GRADUATED COLLEGE STUDENT.DIDN'T KNOW EACHOTHER.THE TWO SAME PEOPLE WENT O N THE SAME TRAIN.WHEN THEY ARRIVED IN MUMBAI AND WENT TO THE SAME HOTEL.ONE CUTE GIRL WAS WALKING AND HER NAME WAS KASTURI.SHE BUMPED INTO A HOT GUY NAME ROBBIE.KASTURI'S BOOKS FELL,THAT SHE WAS HOLDING.SHE TELLS ROBBIE "DHEKE KE NAHI CHAL SAKTE".ROBBIE LOKS AT HER NAD TELLS HER THAT HE'S SORRY.KASTURI TELLS HIM "THEK HAI MAAF KAR DIYA,AB MERE RASTE SEI HATO." HE MOVES OUT OF KASTURI'S WAY.SHE GOES TO CHECK IN AND THE MANAGER TELS HER THAT THERE IS ONLY ONE ROOM LEFT.ROBBIE COMES AND ASKS FOR A ROOM.BUT, ONLY ONE ROOM WAS LEFT.KASTURI WANTED A ROOM TO HERSELF,THE MANAGER TELLS THEM THAT "TO PHIT APNE EK ROOM SHARE KARNA GO GA." BOTH ARE SHOCKED AND SAY "KIYA"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😕

TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!

I HOPE U GUYS LIKED THE FIRST PART OF MY FANFIC AND I WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT.I JUST NEED UR COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!THATS ALL!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Penzee2007

I'm writing a fanfic about kasturi and robbie.its about when they first met and I add a little of my creation and imagintion!!!!hope u guys like it and please do comment!!!!😊

TWO PEOPLE MET A ONE PLACE AND IT WAS A TRAIN STATION.BOTH WERE GOING TO MUMBAI AND BOTH WERE GRADUATED COLLEGE STUDENT.DIDN'T KNOW EACHOTHER.THE TWO SAME PEOPLE WENT O N THE SAME TRAIN.WHEN THEY ARRIVED IN MUMBAI AND WENT TO THE SAME HOTEL.ONE CUTE GIRL WAS WALKING AND HER NAME WAS KASTURI.SHE BUMPED INTO A HOT GUY NAME ROBBIE.KASTURI'S BOOKS FELL,THAT SHE WAS HOLDING.SHE TELLS ROBBIE "DHEKE KE NAHI CHAL SAKTE".ROBBIE LOKS AT HER NAD TELLS HER THAT HE'S SORRY.KASTURI TELLS HIM "THEK HAI MAAF KAR DIYA,AB MERE RASTE SEI HATO." HE MOVES OUT OF KASTURI'S WAY.SHE GOES TO CHECK IN AND THE MANAGER TELS HER THAT THERE IS ONLY ONE ROOM LEFT.ROBBIE COMES AND ASKS FOR A ROOM.BUT, ONLY ONE ROOM WAS LEFT.KASTURI WANTED A ROOM TO HERSELF,THE MANAGER TELLS THEM THAT "TO PHIT APNE EK ROOM SHARE KARNA GO GA." BOTH ARE SHOCKED AND SAY "KIYA"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😕

TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!

I HOPE U GUYS LIKED THE FIRST PART OF MY FANFIC AND I WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT.I JUST NEED UR COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!THATS ALL!!!!!!!

Really nice...keep writing more !

But lemme tell yaa that dont write in capital letters it's not allowed !

Otherwise u'll be banned ...take care !

Love u Aisho😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yah, Capital Letters indicate strong text. You can't be banned for it though. 😳

Love the FF, do continue... 👏

-Yams

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