Life’s lifeline!!!..part 2 updated..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey evry1 …im writing this fanfic on AR..

So hopefully evry1 likes it

.............PART 1........................................................... .....

..."riddhima!!!!!"....no response...."RIDDHIMAAAAAAA....

where is this girl il swear il kill her one day....should have sent her off to some freakin boarding school whin i married RAJ....hell...maya wat the hell were u thinkin.....

"RIDDHIMAAAAA".....as v move through the house v see a medium sizeed room...where v see a girl sprawled over the carpet her her resting on the laptop..n um looked like she ws in deep sleep...more like droolin on it!!...

the constant baging on the door made her wake up...riddhima woke up with a start n realised what was goin on lookin at the clock..the fact dawned upon her that she's late today...

7..shit..im so dead....*bang*...*bang...*.....

RIDDHMIAAA....im comin mother...oh shoot...im so late mather is gonna kill me...man....rahul...crap...i 4gt 2 wake him up...helll...

oh man...i just hate my life....

after half an hour ridhima made her way downstairs ...quickly...

n started makin the breakfast n now that she had cleaned up the whole house...watered the plants n most of the house chors done ...she looked at the clock ....gazing at the clock that showed 9..she rememberd that today was the day her life changed 7 years ago...

*****flashback********

11th july 20001....

daddddyyyy....daddyyy where r u...i got some great news....

riddhima came home now marely in the 6th std...she returned home from school with her step sisters anjali and payal...she had a big news for her dearest daddy today...today she was going to prove that the is the best daughter n was sure that he was goin to be proud ov his "princess"...ya...thats what she ws called by him...she had topped her class n today the guidance councellor had also said that she should think about becoming a doctor...jus like her daddy...but where is he....today was his off...he was supposed to b at home...dadddyyyyyy....now ridhima becomin pretty tensed not findin him nor his mother at home...tears stated brimmin in her eyes....anjali was trying to pacify her thopugh she to ws deeply disturbed...yes even though anjali ws her step sisters the actually got along pretty wel..anjie a yr older than her ws her moms 1st born...unlike payal who hated riddhima.....ridzi dont worry mayb they have gone out...

as soon as she said that they herd the car in the driveway n maya came n took the mto the hospital....

riddhima vagely rembered the latter as she ws deeply shocked all she could rememberr was seing her daddy in the icu...covered in blood..."princess"...were his last words to her!!!....

*****end of flashback*****

hopefully u all liked it..plz tell me if i shoul cont or not..

plz forgive me for my mistakes n if i should improve plz let me knw..

thank u!!

luv ayesha😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey i'm 1st 2 comment! wow dis is sooooo emotional 😭 loved it...plzz cont asap wud really love to read on 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really emotional but realy nice 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wooow very emotional bt amazizn
updte soon plzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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too emotional 😭 and nice tooo plzzz cont soon and plzz pm me whn u will cont. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PAR T 2

...The honking of a car in the driveway brought her back her to the present...wiping the tears she ran 2 open the door....
RAHUL!!!!....im soory that i dint wake u up...
oh...so u dint wake me up i thought u would kill me cuz my phone ws switched off....anyways as it is v r late lets get goin...
umm rahul-.. ya..i knw u have 2 go 2 the mandir 2dy...lets go ....how do u knw that i had 2 go the temple...
she sweetheart im your best friend cum brother so i knw wats goin on in that head ov yours...
lets gooo....im gettin late...
umm y the hell r u in such a hurry....as far as i rembr theez no football match 2dy nor is muskaan in town...wats goin on...asked ridzi serving the table n finally fetchin her bag...ready to leave...
RIDHHIMAAAAA...boomin came payalz voice....
wheres mom....n have u finished my homework??
ya...mothers gone out...donno where like she ever tells me..n ya ive done ur homework...read it 1ce cuz if the teacher asks u what its about ul get embarresed...
oh shut up...jus cuz ur stinky saviour is here dont act smart with me....
PAYAl...came anjie's voice...shut up n get ready n how many time have i told u not 2 talk 2 ridzi like that....
there u go another "ridzie" fan....huh!!
freaks!!
im sorry said anjie...its ohk di...nyways im goin 2 the mindir ..u comin..
ridzie u knw i dont believe in god after dad.....anyways u carry on...bye...bye rahul...
seein them off...anjie had some breakfast n left 4 college....
meanwhile in the car...
guess wat ridz...there a new guy comin 2 college n guess wat hez gonna b in the team...oh gosh im sooo exited...im sure he rokz!!!
ridzi..makin a face at him..😔..u knw what rahul i sometimes doubt if ur really straight...2 b on a safer side i must warn muski wat say...
uhh...was that supposed 2 b a joke cuz it ws the worst till date..😔.u proved 2dy that u riddhima gupta have no sense ov humor wat so ever...
n here ur temple u go...il cum in 15 minz...have some work...
fine!!!...jus tell me u dont wanna cum in...gosh....god knws wats wrong with u n anjie!!😔

ridhima climbed up2 a temple n prayed for her family n her papa...but never asked anything for herself...
as she ws gettin down she bumped in 2 sum1...n jus as she said sorry she saw rahul callin 4 her so she quickly made her way down n offered the prashad which he dint take so she forced it down his mouth...n sumthin made her look back n see the guy she bumped in2...for some vague reason he seemed very dear 2 her!!! like she had known him throughout her life..like he was family!!...
ridzy..u comin or wat...
ya sorry!!!


thats it..
thank u for commentin on the previous part hope u like this one ....if there r errors plz 4give me...


Edited by aynee - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome part 👏
Continue soon

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