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Posted: 17 years ago
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my space* damn! i was out all day and didnt get to be first๐Ÿ˜ก

Ok ab lambi comment shuru karu?

Winters Love: ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Kudos to You Sara! So nice and wonderful, Sweet, but extremely sad, it's interesting reminded me a little of Titanic element. I love that Fatemah Baji has a little boy! Sooo cute! Congrats Baji!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘ Now when I'm I meeting my nephew? lolz! Bravo Sara!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Muhaz Sara!

Kitten Love: All right! First of all Miss Juoty! Let me comment on your story, then I will give you a belan!๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜† Ok, Kitten Love?!๐Ÿ˜• So cutte๐Ÿ˜‰ I have a cat named Iris. And she means the world to me, so thank you soo much, also to Sara๐Ÿ‘ Thanks for the sweet kissing scene. Now for my Belan!

Ahem! I think you should love me forever! Yes, I guess In my story I was in the spotlight a little๐Ÿ˜• But, hey you end up killing me Juoty!๐Ÿ˜‰ So, I thought that was cool, and I can make it a sequel, where you and I have a karate fight, and I come back in another roop. Or something. And about your comment on

We all know Naina is the Devil (from all her muahahahas) Do you know the innocent ones are always the one to watch?๐Ÿ˜‰ And you know what I'm so happy for the Devil compliment because I really I'm glad to write my first thriller. It was hardas* work. Took me three hours. and I hope you like it Juoty because at first I had Micky kill me, but I thought it would be more dramatic if you did.๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Muhaz Juoty!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Roshni's Hero: Uhh! I loved it! Soo romantic! Soo cute! and true, because if ever in life, someone did anything to Sara, I would kick their as*. Well, at least run them over๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† But, don't except me to do that to everyone.๐Ÿ˜ƒ Muhaz Baji!

Comment to my sisters: Writing is like my new found talent, and thanx to all of you guys, I'm soo continuing it. Sara, Fatemah Baji, Juoty! My kick-ass bi*che* ! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ You guys are hardcore writers! If only I could physically give you guys a hug! D*mn! That sucks!๐Ÿ˜ก But Love You!! O and here is a picture of my cat.



O, and Juoty, mein Akashdeep ko kabhi nahin chorugi!๐Ÿ˜ˆ Muhahahaha! After all, I'm the Devil/villain! Muhahaha!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†




Edited by suganain - 17 years ago
dilkeroshni thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: suganain

my space* damn! i was out all day and didnt get to be first๐Ÿ˜ก i was online for you all day tere intezaar me

Ok ab lambi comment shuru karu? Yes ofcourse... I would expect nothing else from naina ji... or else i would make you come back and make it a long comment

Winters Love: ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Kudos to You Sara! Thank you soo much that means a lot So nice and wonderful, Sweet, but extremely sad, it's interesting reminded me a little of Titanic element.Actually i did not even think of titanic when i wrote it.... it was the furthest thing from my mind. I love that Fatemah Baji has a little boy! So do i, now i can't wait till she gets married and gives me a nephew that i can come and down and visit.. Sooo cute! Congrats Baji!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘ Now when I'm I meeting my nephew? lolz! Bravo Sara!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Muhaz Sara! Mwahz naina thank you once again

Kitten Love: All right! First of all Miss Juoty! Let me comment on your story, then I will give you a belan!๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜† Ok, Kitten Love?!๐Ÿ˜• So cutte๐Ÿ˜‰ I have a cat named Iris. And she means the world to me, so thank you soo much, also to Sara๐Ÿ‘ Thanks for the sweet kissing scene. Loll no problem dear... i know how much xiah ji loves yours kisses.... Iris aaww what an adorable name Kitten love i am glad u think the title is cute b/c otherwise it would have been Spring Love but i didn't want there to be two season Loves I am really glad u liked it and it came out well as though it was written by one person instead of two different people Now for my Belan!

Ahem! I think you should love me forever! Yes, I guess In my story I was in the spotlight a little๐Ÿ˜• But, hey you end up killing me Juoty!๐Ÿ˜‰ So, I thought that was cool, and I can make it a sequel, where you and I have a karate fight, and I come back in another roop. Or something. And about your comment on

We all know Naina is the Devil (from all her muahahahas) Do you know the innocent ones are always the one to watch?๐Ÿ˜‰ That is soo true..... it is those innocent ones you have to watch out for as i said... the devil's u kno they are gonna come after you but you don't expect the innocent so u get a bigger shock...And you know what I'm so happy for the Devil compliment because I really I'm glad to write my first thriller. It was hardas* work. Took me three hours. I am glad u liked the end result of your story and this surprise otherwise u would have come after me w/ belan and i would have gone and hid behind xiah.. and I hope you like it Juoty because at first I had Micky kill me, but I thought it would be more dramatic if you did.๐Ÿ˜ƒShe loves it yaar don't worry

Muhaz Juoty!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Roshni's Hero: Uhh! I loved it! Soo romantic! Soo cute! and true, because if ever in life, someone did anything to Sara, I would kick their as*. Thankx naina dear that is so sweet of you and the same goes for u Well, at least run them over๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† But, don't except me to do that to everyone.๐Ÿ˜ƒ better not do that to hero... Muhaz Baji!

Comment to my sisters: Writing is like my new found talent, and thanx to all of you guys, I'm soo continuing it. I am glad you will b/c you are an awesome writer dear and i don't want to miss out on your writings.. Sara, Fatemah Baji, Juoty! My kick-ass bi*che* ! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ You guys are hardcore writers! THank you dear If only I could physically give you guys a hug! D*mn! That sucks!๐Ÿ˜ก It does suck i wish i could give you guys a real hug too But Love You!! I love you tooo O and here is a picture of my cat.



Iris is adorable hi Iris.. does she have a bird in view?? Iris is most definitely planning something.... the eyes i can see it in the eyes....

O, and Juoty, mein Akashdeep ko kabhi nahin chorugi!๐Ÿ˜ˆ Muhahahaha! After all, I'm the Devil/villain! Muhahaha!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† I'll leave Jouty to comment on this....


whew done
Edited by dilkeroshni - 17 years ago
suganain thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
And Welcome Salma to the crazy sisterhood!


You will love us! I hope๐Ÿ˜†
PM me about yourself! Ok!
KC294 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: suganain

my space* damn! i was out all day and didnt get to be first๐Ÿ˜ก

Ok ab lambi comment shuru karu?

Winters Love: ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Kudos to You Sara! So nice and wonderful, Sweet, but extremely sad, it's interesting reminded me a little of Titanic element. I love that Fatemah Baji has a little boy! Sooo cute! Congrats Baji!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘ Now when I'm I meeting my nephew? lolz! Bravo Sara!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Muhaz Sara!

Kitten Love: All right! First of all Miss Juoty! Let me comment on your story, then I will give you a belan!๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜† Ok, Kitten Love?!๐Ÿ˜• So cutte๐Ÿ˜‰ I have a cat named Iris. And she means the world to me, so thank you soo much, also to Sara๐Ÿ‘ Thanks for the sweet kissing scene. Now for my Belan!

Ahem! I think you should love me forever! Yes, I guess In my story I was in the spotlight a little๐Ÿ˜• But, hey you end up killing me Juoty!๐Ÿ˜‰ So, I thought that was cool, and I can make it a sequel, where you and I have a karate fight, and I come back in another roop. Or something. And about your comment on

We all know Naina is the Devil (from all her muahahahas) Do you know the innocent ones are always the one to watch?๐Ÿ˜‰ And you know what I'm so happy for the Devil compliment because I really I'm glad to write my first thriller. It was hardas* work. Took me three hours. and I hope you like it Juoty because at first I had Micky kill me, but I thought it would be more dramatic if you did.๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Muhaz Juoty!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Roshni's Hero: Uhh! I loved it! Soo romantic! Soo cute! and true, because if ever in life, someone did anything to Sara, I would kick their as*. Well, at least run them over๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† But, don't except me to do that to everyone.๐Ÿ˜ƒ Muhaz Baji!

Comment to my sisters: Writing is like my new found talent, and thanx to all of you guys, I'm soo continuing it. Sara, Fatemah Baji, Juoty! My kick-ass bi*che* ! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ You guys are hardcore writers! If only I could physically give you guys a hug! D*mn! That sucks!๐Ÿ˜ก But Love You!! O and here is a picture of my cat.



O, and Juoty, mein Akashdeep ko kabhi nahin chorugi!๐Ÿ˜ˆ Muhahahaha! After all, I'm the Devil/villain! Muhahaha!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†




ur nephew... i don even know his name... sara why did u not give him a name?.... i think we would all do anything for each other... thats why we have such a stong bond...

thnx for the long comment...

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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
OMG, i loved all the 4 mini stories or one shots!
i loved how they were all unique and special and different from each other ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Each story brought a different emotion as i read it!
I loved how you guys wrote a story for each other! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Brilliant writing guys:)
COntinue writing more short stories like these ๐Ÿ‘
KC294 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
hey guys !!

all 4 stories were awesom ๐Ÿ‘ !!! there all really gud!!! u all are very gud writers!!!
dilkeroshni thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: stars_shine*

hey guys !!

all 4 stories were awesom ๐Ÿ‘ !!! there all really gud!!! u all are very gud writers!!!



thank you dear
suganain thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I wanted to know what Juoty thought of my comment?๐Ÿ˜•
dilkeroshni thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
Hey, Part 2 is up

Check it out HERE

Enjoy =]
Edited by dilkeroshni - 17 years ago

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