FF: Jag soona soona laage re..

Hey Everybody, It's the first Fanfic I've made-don't know any rules or regulations so if anything is unreasonable or rude or whateva-APOLOGIES! Nonetheless, I hope you guys appreciate it….This fanfic is majorly based on a movie-keep reading and see if you can guess where its from the answer will be at the end anyway! Hope you love it! Please use the 'Thank you' button if you like it….
Many thanx x x


[Karan and Sukirti arrive at the railway station-the train horn blows warning there's only a few minutes left before the train departs, taking everyone aboard to a new world- Karan looks concerned and rushes towards the bustling train]

Karan (impatiently looking through the train windows): Shilpa... shilpa?..
Sukirti: Karan tum idhar dekho, main udhar dekh kar aati hoon..
Karan: Haan, tum udhar dekho. Shilpa? Shil--
(Karan sees Shilpa sitting at a seat at the window he just went by. Relieved, he sighs and rushes into the train compartment. Shilpa notices him and quickly wipes away her tears and starts to adjust her luggage to hide her face)
Karan: Kahan jaarahi ho tum?
Shilpa (hesitates): erm….wapas ghar.
Karan (chuckles): kya?
Shilpa: wo..Mom ki chitti ayi thi ..papa ki thabyat kuch teek nahi…aur naaye ghar mein bhi bauhaut kuch kam hai…(she proceeds to put her luggage on top of the storage rack)
Karan (unconvinced cuts her off): Uh huh, pagal hogayi ho tum (takes the luggage back down) chitti ayi aur tum chal pari? Kahin nahi jaarahi ho tum. Chalo (forcefully pulls the luggage out with him)
Shilpa: Karan mujhe jaana hai….(tries to take bag back off him)
Karan: arrey, shooting ko beech mein chodke kaise jaa sakti ho tum? Chalo.
Shilpa: Karan….please…please try to understand…
Karan: Is hafte ke episode ko khatam ho jaane do, phir weekend pe chali jaana tum.
Shilpa: par Karan its…mujhe jaaana…
Karan: weekend par chali jaana.
Shilpa: Karan---
Karan: weekend par…
Shilpa: Karan, shayad main weekend ke baad bhi phir wapas khabhi nahi aaon…
(Karan looks at her stunned)
Shilpa (grimly): Main wapas nahi aarahi hoon Karan…
Karan (annoyed): ooh….DMG chodke jaarahi ho tum?....(quietly) Mujhe chodke jaarahi ho…? (laughs) Mujhe bataaya bhi nahi…(shrugs shoulders)..okay…
Shilpa: Karan…
Karan (upset): I don't wanna know!...(leaves train)
Shilpa (follows him to the door): Karan, main jaarahi hoon.
Karan: Jao!
Shilpa (tries again): Karan I'm going…
Karan (adamantly keeps walking): go!
Shilpa: Karan main wapas nahi---
Karan: I don't care okay!
(Sukirti looks at Karan walking away and stares at Shilpa confused and sad…Shilpa has tears in her eyes…the horn blares, Karan stops in his tracks with his back towards Shilpa hurt)
*ishq leta hai kaise imtihaan background score plays*
(Shilpa contines to cry and while doing so takes her dupatta (pink confession one) and throws it to Sukirti who catches it…they look at each other-understanding the moment) (The horn blares a final time..Karan turns to see Shilpa and the train moving away slowly…)
Karan: Oh sh*t! (calls out) Shilpa!! (rushes to the moving train- Runs past Sukirti who looks on crying. Karan reaches Shilpa) Shilpa…Shilpa mat jao na…main shooting shooting aur… basketball kiske saath kheloonga?
Shilpa (smiles through tears): Roz to tum haarte the…
Karan (childishly asks): to tum kyun jaarahi ho?
Shilpa: Mom ko meri zaroorat hai Karan…
Karan: Aur mujhe nahi hai?
Shilpa (pauses):…Ab tum Sukirti ka sir kao na!….bauhaut tang karliya mujhe…
Karan: Main acting chod doon ga….
Shilpa (weeps): to chod do!
Karan: Heyy Shilp--
Shilpa: Ab to tum un stupid ladkiyon ke peeche bhagna band karo haan?
Karan: ai! (points at her)
Shilpa: ai….(does the same at him)
[ they laugh and look at each other for a while before brushing their hands against the others' as a final goodbye….Karan lets go of the rail by the door and the train moves on…]
Karan (shouts out to her): But….I'll miss you yaar…
Shilpa: I'll miss you too….(she blows a fly kiss too him and he gestures "catching" the flying kiss. She smiles at this and wipes away her unstoppable tears. The train finally leaves the station and Karan is left on his own still staring at the place it once was…he blinks away repeatedly as the tears form in his eyes... Sukriti silently watches him from behind)


I think many of you would have realised that it's a kuch kuch hota hai scene with a *few* adjustments!:) (took me a while though!) Thank you lots for reading!

****comments are also much appreciated!*****

Much love! X x

so many views? aur ek bhi comment nahi...itna bura laga?:(

dat was an amzng prt.... truly superb!!!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊

hey this was awesome i know its from the KKHH movie but on a serious note i don't mind if you follow the movie ...i just love that movie and seriously wanted to see karan and shilpa playing as mature adults ...always saw them bickering .... 😆 actually i would hope that you will write ffs taken directly from movies like DTPH,hum tum,DDLJ and many more..coz a lot of our members wanted to see them in movies playing the characters inside the movie which is hardly impossible but possible inside your FF..so pls fulfil this wish of mine...(i don't mind if you want to make some little amendments in the story to make it flow smoothly ...)
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WOW!!!!!! girl i love this FF already!! 😆 😆 i love KKHH 😳 😳 you better continue! 😃

This was really good.. please continue! 😊

Hey everybody-aw thank you soo much for the comments! It makes me feel sooo much better and definitely encourages me to write more(considering this was my first time). The idea for this scene crept in my mind a while ago when shilpa left and my mind is a blank canvas once again. If anyone has any specific requests please get in touch by sending a private message or something:D? It'll be incredibly helpful THANX AGAIN!:D x x