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Chapter Eleven: The House She Left

Sunita was in the kitchen when they arrived, and she knew before anyone said a word - Geet watched it land on her aunt's face in real time, the particular fury of a woman who has just understood that a decision was made and finished entirely without her.

Maan and his manager stayed outside, at the gate, well beyond earshot. The documents had arrived that morning, forwarded from counsel the moment the registration cleared - the marriage triggering, quietly and automatically, the machinery neither of them had spoken about since the tea stall. His manager pulled the folder out from under his arm and opened it.

"Registration's certified. Trustee notification is already moving." A pause. "Do you want us to prepare the parcel documentation, in case the timing works in our favor once handover completes?"

"No," Maan said.

"Understood. Hold?"

"Hold the outreach."

"The documentation too?"

"No. Prepare it."

His manager looked up.

"Quietly," Maan said. "Valuation, structure, protections, everything. I'll talk to her when the handover is done."

His manager didn't ask why. He simply nodded, made a note, and left it there.

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Inside, it was going considerably worse.

Sunita's eyes went first to the sindoor, then to the mangalsutra at Geet's throat.

For a few seconds she simply stared.

"You got married?"

Geet swallowed. "Yes."

"Today?"

"Yes."

Sunita looked past her then, at Vikram. At Mehek.

Something changed in her face.

"You knew?"

Vikram didn't try to lie. "Yes."

Her eyes moved to Mehek.

Mehek's voice was much smaller than usual. "I knew."

"How long?"

Nobody answered quickly enough.

Sunita gave a short, disbelieving laugh. "Of course."

Then she looked at Geet again. "So everyone in my own house knew my niece was getting married except me."

The anger Geet had expected would have been easier. This wasn't only anger.

It was hurt.

"Aunty"

"Don't."

"Please."

"Thirteen years." Sunita's voice broke before it sharpened again. "Thirteen years I raised you. Whatever you think of me, whatever I did wrong, I raised you. And you couldn't even tell me you were getting married?"

Geet's throat tightened.

"I know...."

That answer stopped Sunita for half a second.

Geet looked down at her hands. "I know... I hurt you."

"Then why?"

"Because I knew you would try to stop me."

Sunita flinched.

Geet continued before courage deserted her. "And I had already decided."

"So you went behind my back."

"I.....I didn't know how to do both things," Geet said quietly. "Choose for myself and not hurt you."

Sunita stared at her.

"I'm sorry you had to find out after it was done," Geet said. "I mean that."

"But you're not sorry you married him."

Geet looked at her then.

"No."

Sunita's anger returned

"He's practically a stranger."

"I know what it looks like."

"Do you? You went and got married." It wasn't a question anymore. "Behind my back. In secret, like a thief, like you had something to be ashamed of."

Geet's eyes burned now, but she didn't look away. "I wanted him. I chose him."

Sunita shook her head, something bitter and frightened moving through her expression. "Then why are you here?"

"Uncle wants to take us to lunch."

Something in Sunita's face flickered - surprise, maybe, quickly buried beneath the anger, which she seemed to prefer as the more familiar ground. "Lunch." She said the word like an accusation. "You expect me to sit and smile at the man who-"

Geet went on, more softly. "We couldn't go without asking you."

"Why?"

Geet looked genuinely confused by the question.

"Because you're family."

Sunita said nothing.

"You raised me," Geet said. "I know we haven't always..." She stopped, because there wasn't a clean word for thirteen complicated years. "Whatever has happened between us, you were there. When I was sick. When I had exams. When I couldn't sleep after Mum and Papa..." Her voice caught slightly. "You're not my mother. But you've been the closest thing I've had to one for most of my life."

Sunita's face softens

Geet continues

"I want you there. Please"

Sunita didn't answer that directly. She turned back to the stove instead, her shoulders rigid, and said, to the wall rather than to Geet, "Go. Enjoy your grand life. Don't expect me to pretend this was done right."

Geet keeps looking at her aunt for a moment, when the older woman doesn't turn then she turns slowly to leave. She was almost at the door when Sunita spoke again, not turning around.

"Take a shawl. It'll get colder by evening." A pause, brittle and unwilling. "And call when you reach wherever you're sleeping tonight. I don't care how late."

It wasn't forgiveness. It wasn't even close to it. But Geet stood there a moment longer than she needed to, because some old, stubborn part of her recognized the shape of it anyway - the only kind of love Sunita had ever known how to hand over, wrapped inside something that sounded, on the surface, exactly like a complaint.

"I will," Geet said.

She didn't go straight back outside.

"I need five minutes," Geet said, and went upstairs.

The attic room looked exactly as it had that morning.

Her cardigan was still hanging from the back of the chair. A book lay open beside the bed. The framed photograph of her parents sat on the windowsill, angled slightly toward the light.

For thirteen years she had known where everything in this room belonged.

For the first time, she wasn't sure whether she did.

Mehek came in behind her and stopped when she saw Geet pull the larger bag from beneath the bed.

"Geet?"

"Just help me."

Mehek didn't ask with what.

They packed quietly at first.

Clothes. Toiletries. The few pieces of jewellery Geet actually wore. Her notebook. The old sweater she reached for when the evenings turned cold.

Mehek picked up another kurta and hesitated. "How much are you taking?"

Geet's hands stopped.

She looked around the room.

"I don't know."

That was the truth.

She didn't know whether she would be back tomorrow, next week, or whether coming back would now mean standing at the front door and wondering if she still had the right to walk upstairs without asking.

"Mum didn't say you can't come back," Mehek said quietly.

Geet gave her a small smile.

"She didn't have to."

"Geet-"

"I'm not angry."

That was almost true.

Hurt was closer.

"She thinks I've chosen another life," Geet said. "Maybe I have."

Mehek's face crumpled slightly. "That doesn't mean this stops being yours."

Geet looked at her.

"Maybe not to you."

Neither of them said the rest.

Vikram would open the door.

Mehek would drag her upstairs.

Sunita might not.

Geet's gaze settled on the framed photograph of her parents.

"That too," she said.

Mehek didn't comment. She only wrapped it carefully between two folded sweaters.

That hurt more than packing anything else.

Because the photograph had never moved.

Not once in thirteen years.

Mehek zipped the bag and then immediately unzipped it again because she'd forgotten Geet's comb.

Geet laughed despite herself.

"Excellent crisis management."

"I'm emotional, not incompetent."

"Debatable."

The joke lasted only a second, but it was enough.

When they were finished, Geet stood in the middle of the attic room and looked around once more.

She did not say goodbye to it.

She couldn't.

Downstairs, Sunita's radio was still playing.

Geet could hear dishes moving in the kitchen, the familiar sounds of the house continuing without her.

She picked up the bag.

Mehek took it from her.

"I'll carry it."

"You don't have to."

"I know."

Geet let her.

Then they went downstairs..

Maan stood the moment he saw them come out through the gate - Geet first, Vikram and Mehek a step behind - and read the verdict off her face before she'd said a word. She shook her head, once, and he didn't ask anything further.

"She's not coming," Geet said.

"I'm sorry."

Geet looked down at the bag for a second. "I knew she probably wouldn't."

That wasn't quite the same thing as being prepared for it.

Maan seemed to understand that. He didn't tell her it was all right, because clearly it wasn't. He only stepped closer.

"Are you all right?"

Geet gave a small, tired breath that might have been a laugh in another mood.

"Ask me tomorrow."

His mouth softened, but he didn't smile.

"All right."

For a moment neither of them moved.

Then Maan glanced at the bag in Mehek's hand.

"You packed."

Geet looked at it too, as though she'd almost forgotten about it.

"Yes."

He didn't ask how much. He didn't ask whether she was coming back.

He simply took it from her.

Vikram cleared his throat softly. "Lunch."

Geet looked at him, and for a second seemed to remember that there was still a wedding day happening around all of this.

"Lunch," she repeated.

Maan's manager took that as his cue to step back toward the other car.

"I'll leave you to it."

Geet looked over.

"You're not coming?"

He hesitated. "I don't think I should."

That was the first thing all morning absurd enough to pull her completely out of herself.

"You witnessed my wedding."

"Yes."

"And spent half the morning making sure it legally occurred."

A pause.

"Technically-"

"You're coming to lunch."

Vikram nodded immediately. "Of course he is."

The manager looked toward Maan, presumably for rescue.

Maan gave him none.

"Come."

The manager exhaled through his nose. "Apparently I'm coming."

They divided themselves between the cars and drove up along the ridge.

Vikram had chosen a restaurant high along the ridge, its tall French windows running almost the length of the dining room. The afternoon light poured through them, falling across polished tables and pale walls, while the valley opened beyond the glass in long green-blue folds. It was elegant without being ostentatious, the sort of place people came to when an ordinary lunch was meant to mark something.

Vikram, mercifully, filled the small silence that followed sitting down by summoning the waiter and ordering enough food for a table twice their size.

"You don't argue with him about food," Geet told Maan, some of the lightness returning to her voice. "Nobody does. It's a losing position."

For an hour it was simply the five of them, the valley spread out below the window, the manager included whether he still thought he belonged there or not.

It was ordinary and loud and entirely unremarkable to anyone else in the room: Mehek narrating an increasingly implausible account of the wedding photographs to anyone who'd listen, Vikram insisting Maan try three separate dishes he clearly didn't need convincing to eat, Geet watching her husband being fed by her uncle with a startled, growing tenderness she hadn't expected the day to hold this much of, underneath the ache of the conversation she'd had at Sunita's kitchen only an hour before.

"You're family now," Vikram said, still busy with the glass. "You understand that?"

"I'm beginning to," Maan said, and meant it more than the lightness in his voice let on.

When the bill finally came, Maan reached for it out of pure reflex and Vikram's hand closed over his before he'd even opened the folder.

"No. You are the groom," Vikram said, with a finality that left no room for argument. "This is the bride's family's lunch to give. You may pay for a great many things in this marriage. Not this one."

Maan started, "Sir-"

"And stop calling me sir." Vikram gave him a look. "I'm Geet's uncle. That makes me your uncle too."

Maan went unexpectedly quiet.

"All right... Uncle."

Vikram's expression softened. "Better."

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It was well past noon by the time Vikram finally stood, and this time there was nothing left to postpone.

Mehek hugged Geet twice more than strictly necessary. Vikram held her a beat longer than he had outside the registrar's office, and said nothing further, because there was nothing further that hadn't already been said.

"You know where I am," he told her. "For anything. Not just emergencies."

"I know."

"I mean it, Geet."

"I know that too." She kissed his cheek, quickly, before either of them could turn it into something more than either could bear. "I'll call. I promised Aunt Sunita I would, and apparently I keep my promises now. It's a whole new personality."

"God help the rest of us," Vikram said, and the joke did what it was meant to do, which was let them both say goodbye without either of them properly falling apart.

Then Vikram and Mehek left together, and Maan's manager, understanding without being told, made his own excuses and retreated toward the car with the discretion of a man who had worked for Maan long enough to recognize when he was no longer required.

Maan looked down at the bag by Geet's feet, and something in his face changed - not the pavement-stopping shock of the morning, when she'd appeared in her mother's blue silk and undone him completely, but something quieter and, in its own way, larger: the plain, unglamorous fact of his wife about to walk with him to a hotel room that had, until this morning, belonged to no one but him.

He picked the bag up before she could.

"Ready?" he said.

"No," Geet admitted. "Ask me again in an hour."

"Deal."

They drove to the hotel together, unhurried, in no particular rush to arrive anywhere at all. Somewhere during the short ride, her hand found his where it rested between them.

Neither of them remarked on it.

Neither let go.

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Sunita is miffed as expected. She never treated Geet right but maybe there is a little corner in her heart where she might keep some feelings.

Vikram and Mehek are truly family. They have stood by Geet as much as they could.

A new life starts now.

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sunita is shock but she dint shout but show her anger in few words which hurt geet more

sunita dint join them for lunch n ask geet to take her things n leave the house

vickram invite manager for lunch

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Beautiful update 😀

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Chapter 11

Maan needs to speak to Geet about the land issue

Not surprised with Sunita's reaction

Hate how she treated Geet

But she does care for Geet

Geet was naturally hurt

Feeling for Geet

Glad that she has Mehak and Vikram

She now has Maan as well

As expected Geet was overwhelmed

So Maan knew things didn't go well

His concern for Geet was justified

Geet was indeed adamant that Maan's manager join them for lunch

Well they went for lunch

At least Geet was happy

Glad that Vikram said Maan is family

Of cos Maan wanted to pay

Alas Vikram was insistent

Liked Geet and Vikram's bond

Now Geet and Maan are alone

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Chapter Twelve: The Hotel Room

The door closed behind them, and for a moment neither of them moved.

The suite was larger than the apartment of one of Geet's college friends, which seemed an unreasonable amount of space for two people who had spent the last hour barely knowing where to put their hands. A separate sitting room opened toward wide windows overlooking the slope below, the lights of Shimla only beginning to appear beneath the fading evening sky. Beyond it was the bedroom, all pale linen, dark wood, and quiet, expensive restraint. Thick carpet absorbed their footsteps. Someone had already turned down the bed, replenished the water beside it, drawn one set of curtains halfway against the approaching dusk - the discreet perfection of a hotel accustomed to wealthy people expecting things to happen before they had to ask.

Maan seemed not to notice any of it. Of course he didn't. This was simply where he was staying.

He put her bag beside his suitcase. Geet noticed that before anything else - her bag beside his, such a small thing, and it shouldn't have felt as intimate as it did. All day there had been other people between them: the registrar, Vikram, Mehek, his manager, waiters, strangers passing on pavements. Now there was no one, and without all those other bodies and voices around them, Maan seemed to fill the room differently. Closer now. Larger somehow, without actually doing anything.

She became conscious of him in pieces - his height when he straightened after setting down her bag, the breadth of his shoulders beneath the shirt he'd worn to the registry, the quiet weight of his steps across the carpet, his scent, faintly unfamiliar because she had never been close enough for long enough to separate it from rain or coffee or cold mountain air.

She was still wearing her mother's blue saree. The mangalsutra rested lightly against her throat; every now and then she could feel it move when she breathed.

She looked toward the bedroom. Maan followed her gaze.

"I should warn you about something." He indicated the bed. "There is only one." When she waited, he added, "I hadn't exactly planned for-" and stopped.

Geet's mouth began to curve.

"That sounded considerably worse out loud," he said, closing his eyes briefly.

"A little."

"I can take the sofa."

Her smile disappeared. "Maan."

"Yes?"

"You're my husband."

"That has been legally established, yes."

"You are not sleeping on that." She looked pointedly toward the elegant sofa in the sitting room, which appeared perfectly suitable for decorative cushions and considerably less suitable for a man his height.

"I've slept in worse places."

"That isn't the point."

"I was giving you an option."

She looked back at the bed, then at him, heat touching her face despite herself. "It's a large bed."

Something flickered in his expression. "Yes."

"We can share it."

He said nothing, and her blush deepened under his silence.

"Don't look at me like that."

"Like what?"

"Like I said something shocking."

"You told me to get into bed with you approximately six hours after marrying me."

"I said we could share a bed."

"Ah. Entirely different."

Her eyes narrowed, though she was smiling now. "You can still have the sofa."

"No," he said immediately. "I accept the original terms."

She laughed softly and turned away before he could see quite how nervous she actually was. Doing something seemed safer than standing in the middle of the suite being newly married at each other.

"I should probably change."

"Probably."

Neither of them moved. She looked down at the blue silk. "There is a slight problem."

"What?"

"I can take it off. Putting six yards of silk back into something resembling a respectable fold is another matter."

His mouth twitched. "I have no useful experience to offer."

"I assumed."

"Unnecessarily cruel."

She laughed softly, and before going to change, opened her bag to find what she needed - a few folded clothes, her toiletries, her notebook, the sweater Mehek had insisted she take. Underneath them, wrapped carefully between two pieces of clothing, was the photograph of her parents.

Her fingers stopped. For a second the kitchen returned to her - Sunita's rigid back, the instruction to take a shawl, the radio continuing to play as though nothing in the house had changed. She lifted the photograph out. Maan had moved toward the windows, giving her privacy without making a ceremony of doing so, and she appreciated him for that.

She placed the frame on the bedside table. Her parents looked almost absurdly cheerful there, her father leaning toward the camera, her mother caught halfway through laughing. Some knot inside her loosened.

When she turned, Maan was looking at the photograph rather than at her. "Your parents?"

She nodded. He didn't ask anything else. That helped too.

Geet disappeared into the bathroom with the clothes she'd chosen, and when she emerged later, dressed simply and comfortably now, her hair loosened from the careful arrangement Mehek had made that morning, she was carrying the blue saree in both arms, the silk slipping slowly through her fingers despite her best efforts to control it.

Maan looked up from his phone. "That appears difficult."

"Thank you. Very useful."

"I could call someone."

Her eyes widened. "Absolutely not."

"Housekeeping folds things professionally."

"I am not handing my mother's saree to a stranger because I can't manage six yards of fabric."

He put the phone down. "All right. What do I do?"

She stared at him. "You?"

"You appear to require additional manpower."

That made her laugh. She gave him one end. "Hold this."

He took the edge carefully between both hands. "Like this?"

"Straight."

"It is straight."

"Your side is lower."

He looked along the impossible stretch of blue silk suspended between them. "I dispute that."

"Your side is definitely lower."

He lifted it. "Too high."

"This is a hostile process."

"My mother could fold one of these in about thirty seconds."

The words came out before she'd quite thought about them, and for a moment Geet went quiet. He didn't rush to fill it. She ran her fingers carefully along the silk, smoothing an old crease. "She used to make it look easy."

"You remember?"

"Everything." There was no self-pity in it. Just fact.

Maan looked down at the fabric between them. "Then you'll have to supervise."

"I'm supervising already."

"Aggressively."

Her smile returned, and between them, slowly and badly at first, they began folding the saree. He held one end while she walked toward him, aligning the borders, then backed away again when she decided they'd done it incorrectly. He obeyed instructions with an amount of seriousness wholly disproportionate to the task, though every few seconds she caught the beginning of amusement around his mouth.

On their second attempt, the silk sagged dramatically in the middle. Both of them lunged, and their hands met beneath the fabric, and stopped. The blue silk hung between their arms, half-folded and momentarily forgotten. Geet looked up. Maan was very close now, and for one strange second she was aware of everything at once - his hands beneath hers, the warmth of his body just beyond the silk, the quiet suite around them, the fact that her mother's saree was stretched between her and the man she had married that morning. His eyes dropped briefly to her mouth, then returned to hers.

"We are very bad at this," he said softly.

Her smile came slowly. "You are."

"Interesting. I seem to remember doing most of the holding."

"Exactly."

She laughed, and the strange suspended moment loosened. They finished folding it together. It wasn't perfect. She looked at the slightly uneven rectangle of blue silk in their hands and decided she didn't care, and they laid it carefully across the back of an armchair.

Maan stepped away. Geet stayed beside it another moment, smoothing the top fold with her palm, and when she turned, he was watching her. Not the saree. Her. And suddenly the suite felt very quiet again.

His jacket was off now, his shirt sleeves pushed to his elbows, and her eyes caught there before she could stop them. His forearms. Ridiculous - she had seen the man sign documents worth amounts she didn't particularly want to contemplate, had watched him argue with contractors and conduct calls that changed the expression of everyone standing around him, and apparently what her newly married brain found interesting was his forearms.

He caught her looking. She looked immediately somewhere else.

"What?"

"Nothing."

"You were staring."

"I wasn't."

"Geet."

"I was thinking."

"About?"

"Nothing involving you."

"Convincing."

She bit back a smile, and then he came toward her - not quickly, which somehow made it worse. The space between them diminished until she could feel his presence before he touched her, the warmth of him, the shadow of his body partly across hers, the fact that she had to tip her head back slightly now to hold his gaze. The teasing disappeared from his expression.

"Can I kiss you?"

"You're asking me." She blinked. "After marrying me?"

"Yes."

Something about that answer touched her more deeply than she expected. Marriage had not become permission. Of course it hadn't. Not with him.

Her gaze dropped for one nervous second to his mouth and returned. "Yes."

His hand rose slowly to her face, warm palm against her cheek, thumb near her ear. Then his mouth touched hers.

She had imagined this. Not often. More often than she would ever admit. She had expected something dramatic simply because wanting it had become dramatic inside her head. Instead, the first thing she noticed was warmth. Then pressure. Then the strange, breathtaking fact that Maan - who seemed so certain about nearly everything - was being extraordinarily careful with her.

She smiled against his mouth without meaning to. He felt it. The second kiss changed - not wildly, not enough to frighten her, just warmer. Her fingers found the front of his shirt and curled lightly into the fabric; beneath it was the solid heat of his chest, so unmistakably male that awareness moved through her in one slow wave from fingertips to throat.

When they separated, neither moved very far. His forehead almost touched hers. She could feel his breath. Her own wasn't particularly steady either. For a second they simply looked at one another. Then, because embarrassment was beginning to catch up with her, she whispered, "Husband."

Maan's entire face changed. She stared.

"Oh." He recovered too late.

Her smile widened. "You liked that."

"I have no idea what you're talking about."

"You did."

"I didn't."

"Maan."

"You seem very pleased with yourself."

She was - quite suddenly, helplessly pleased. "Husband," she repeated.

He closed his eyes for half a second, and she laughed and slipped away from him before he could retaliate, the sound following her toward the window.

"This is going to become a problem," he said, behind her, and her smile stayed with her for several minutes.

Dinner was less an event than something they eventually remembered human beings were supposed to eat. They ordered almost without looking at the menu, and by the time it arrived Geet had curled one leg beneath herself in an armchair near the window while Maan stood by the desk finishing a call.

She had heard his work voice before - at the bookshop, or beside the road, it had belonged to another part of his life, something she watched him step into temporarily before returning to her. Now she heard it from six feet away while loosening her hair - short sentences, precise questions, numbers she didn't understand, a pause while somebody spoke rapidly on the other end.

"No," Maan said. "Don't move on that until counsel confirms the structure." Another pause. "Tomorrow is fine."

He looked over and found her watching him. Something softened instantly in his face. "I'll call you in the morning," he said, and disconnected.

She smiled.

"What?"

"Nothing."

"You've developed a concerning relationship with that word."

She tucked her hair behind one ear. "You sound very different when you're working."

"Better or worse?"

"Bossier."

He sat opposite her. "I prefer decisive."

"Of course you do."

His mouth curved, and there was no elaborate comedy around dinner after that. They ate because they were hungry. They talked. Sometimes they stopped talking, and Geet discovered that silence with him felt different when there was no expectation that one of them would eventually walk away. She noticed his watch lying beside his phone; he noticed the mangalsutra against her throat every time she leaned forward. Once she caught him looking, her fingers going unconsciously to the beads.

"What?"

"Nothing."

Now it was her turn to smile.

Halfway through eating, Geet remembered her phone charger and opened her bag. A textbook came out with it. She stared at the cover.

"What happened?" Maan asked.

"I have an exam tomorrow."

Silence.

"You have a what."

"An exam."

"Tomorrow."

"Nine o'clock."

His expression was extraordinary enough that she almost laughed. "You married me the day before an exam?"

"You proposed to me before an exam."

"That is an outrageous redistribution of responsibility."

Now she did laugh. He leaned back. "How many?"

"Two left. Tomorrow. And the last one the day after."

He stared at her. Her smile turned sheepish. "I've had other things happening."

"So I've noticed."

She pulled the book toward herself. He was quiet for several seconds, and then: "We're staying."

She looked up. "What?"

"In Shimla. Until you're finished."

"Maan, you were supposed to go back-"

"I was supposed to do several things this week. Apparently so were you."

"But your family-"

"Will survive two more days."

Something in her chest warmed. He said it without grandeur, as though two more days in Shimla were simply the obvious answer once he'd learned she needed them.

"You don't have to do that."

"I know." He held her gaze. "I want to."

There were moments when his confidence irritated her. Others when it made the whole world feel briefly less difficult. This was one of the latter.

"Okay," she said softly, and he nodded once, as though that settled it. Then he looked at the enormous molecular biology book.

"So."

She already disliked that tone. "What?"

"How bad is this exam?"

"Don't."

"I asked one question."

"You've already started planning."

"I have not."

"Your eyebrows did."

He seemed genuinely offended. "My eyebrows have never planned anything in their lives." She smiled and opened the book.

By eleven, Geet had read the same paragraph four times. Eventually she gave up and found Maan on the balcony.

Shimla had gone dark beneath them, lights scattered along the slopes, the night cool enough that she folded her arms instinctively against it. He moved aside when she joined him. He didn't touch her, but the space between their shoulders was narrow enough that she could feel his warmth anyway. For a while they looked outward. She liked that he didn't always make silence into something that needed fixing.

"I keep thinking someone's going to arrive," she said eventually, "and tell us there was some administrative mistake. Wrong signature. Wrong stamp. Wrong form."

"There wasn't."

"You sound very sure."

"I checked."

She turned her head. "You checked whether our marriage was valid?"

"Twice."

A laugh escaped her. "Why twice?"

"Once seemed irresponsible."

She shook her head, smiling, and the night settled again. "What did you think this would feel like?" she asked eventually.

He glanced at her. "Marriage?"

"Today."

He looked back toward the lights. "I don't think I really did."

"You proposed without thinking about it?"

"There was always another problem to solve."

"Like?"

His mouth shifted. "The major one? That Anil fellow arriving."

She turned completely toward him, then laughed. "So that spooked you."

"Wouldn't it? A man I'd never met was apparently arriving with everybody's approval to consider marrying you."

"He wasn't arriving with everybody's approval."

"He had your aunt's."

"That is not everybody."

"It was one person too many."

She laughed again, softer this time. "You'd known me two weeks."

"I was aware."

"And already terrified of Anil."

"I wouldn't say terrified."

"Spooked?"

He considered. "I disliked his existence."

She covered her smile with one hand. "He hadn't even arrived."

"Exactly. Highly suspicious."

There was something so boyish beneath the arrogance that she couldn't help it - she leaned her shoulder lightly against his arm. He went quiet. Not because he stiffened, exactly, but because he became very still. She stayed there, and after a moment his hand turned on the railing, palm upward. She slipped her fingers into it.

"What did it feel like?" she asked. "When I actually came toward you."

His expression changed. For once he didn't reach for a clever answer. "I don't know how to explain it."

"Try."

He looked down at their joined hands. "Like I'd spent days trying to get somewhere and only realized when I saw you that I'd already arrived."

Her heart stumbled. He looked faintly annoyed with himself. "That sounded better in my head."

"No." She squeezed his fingers. "It was nice."

He looked at her, and her voice softened. "I used to think getting married would just... happen to me. Aunt Sunita would find someone. Everyone would discuss whether he was suitable. Uncle would worry. I'd say yes eventually because saying no forever would become exhausting." Her thumb moved absently over his knuckle. "I never imagined the day itself."

"Why?"

"Because I didn't think it would really belong to me." The admission sat quietly between them. Then she looked up at him. "But today did. This morning was mine. Even the frightening parts. I chose it."

"You chose me."

"Yes."

That was enough. He bent and kissed her, and this time she met him halfway. The kiss deepened slowly, without the nervous carefulness of the first one - her hands found his chest, his settled at her waist, and the sensation of being held by him was startling in ways she had not anticipated. Not merely touch. Weight. Heat. Strength contained rather than used. His hand spanning the side of her waist, his body close enough that she could feel the rise of his breathing beneath her palms, the rougher texture of his jaw when her cheek brushed it. Something warm and unfamiliar gathered low in her stomach, and she kissed him again before she could become embarrassed by it. That seemed to undo part of Maan's restraint. Not all of it. Enough.

Somewhere between balcony and sofa she lost track of exactly how they'd moved there. She only knew that his mouth was against hers and one of her hands had found the back of his neck and everything in her felt beautifully, frighteningly awake.

Then Maan stopped. Not abruptly - he simply drew back enough to breathe.

"What?"

"You have an exam at nine."

She stared at him. "I just married you."

"Yes."

"And this is what you're thinking about?"

"Unfortunately."

She made a sound somewhere between a laugh and a protest. His thumb moved once against her waist. "We have time." His voice dropped slightly. "Tonight isn't going anywhere either. It's just going to involve considerably more sleep than I'd otherwise choose."

It took her half a second. Then heat swept all the way up her neck, and her eyes dropped immediately.

His mouth curved. "Don't."

"I didn't say anything."

"You're smiling."

"I am sitting here completely respectfully."

"That is not a respectful face."

His grin widened, and she pushed lightly at his shoulder, mortified and laughing at the same time. "You are horrible."

"Apparently you married me anyway."

She couldn't think of an answer to that which wouldn't make her blush worse, so she kissed him once, quickly, to shut him up. It did not work. But it helped.

The bed was much stranger than the sofa. Once the lights were off, Geet became acutely aware of every inch between them. Maan lay on his back on one side; she lay on hers on the other. There was perhaps a foot of empty mattress separating them, and it felt like an entire geographical region. Every time he shifted, the mattress moved beneath her. Every time he exhaled, she heard it.

She had never slept beside a man before - never heard the quiet rhythm of male breathing in darkness, never known how much heat another body could give off without touching hers, never been conscious of another person's size simply because the bed registered his weight.

"Maan?"

"Geet."

"Why are you whispering?"

"You whispered first."

"Oh."

Silence. Then: "Are you comfortable?"

"Yes."

"You don't sound comfortable."

"Neither do you."

"I have excellent posture under pressure."

She laughed into the pillow. "In bed too?"

"I walked into that."

"You did."

The silence after that was easier. They talked a little - nothing important enough to survive daylight. A teacher she'd hated in first year. Maan admitting he'd once been thrown out of a school debate for telling the moderator the format was inefficient. She laughed so hard at that she had to bury her face in the pillow.

Gradually the distance between them became less formal. Not because either planned it. She turned toward him sometime later; he turned too. Their hands met accidentally between them, and neither pulled away, his fingers closing loosely around hers. That was all.

When she woke once in the middle of the night, she was closer to him than she'd been when she fell asleep, her forehead near his shoulder, his hand resting lightly over hers on the mattress. She stayed exactly where she was.

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Author’s Note

Part 12 is up 💛

This chapter was one of those sections where I really wanted the emotional tension to sit quietly beneath everything rather than explode all at once, so I’m very curious to know what you felt while reading it.

Please comment and tell me:

  • What do you think of Maan at this point — romantic, reckless, suspicious, all three?

  • Do you trust him yet?

  • What do you think Geet is missing that the reader can already sense?

  • And most importantly: which moment in this chapter stayed with you after you finished reading?

I read every comment, and your reactions genuinely help me understand which moments are landing the way I intended. Even a one-line reaction helps, so don’t lurk quietly 😄

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Thank you for continuing to read The Girl in the Bookshop and for spending your time with Maan and Geet. ❤️

Now come tell me what you think of Part 12 because I have questions about some of you defending Maan already. 😂

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 hours ago
taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 4 hours ago
#88

Chapter 11

Beautiful and Emotional Chapter

Geet leaving her home and going with her husband

though aunt Sunita was miffed with Geet but I somehow felt she was hurt

as she was not told about the marriage

her small care comes out when she tells Geet to phone and to also take a shawl

Geet's uncle is truly an amazing person and stood strong by Geet's side

Mehek indeed will miss Geet a lot

Maan finally accepting Geet's uncle as his uncle too was a important factor

hopefully Maan speaks to Geet soon about the land and she understands him


taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 3 hours ago
#89

Chapter 12

Soft and Fabulous Chapter

Maan wanting to stay in Shimla because of Geet's exams already

shows that he would give her a fair chance in their life

and he is concerned about her which is good

Maan kissing Geet the first one might have been awkward but it did break

the ice between them.

I'm only hoping that Maan does not hurt Geet emotionally

and he does seem genuine at the moment

Maan and Geet speaking about their schooling brought back the comfortableness

between both

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