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Okay I will let the content decide the momentum without worrying about whether it's getting too heavy
Originally posted by: ElitePerfumer
Hey friends,
Next chapter is going to be very heavy - is that okay? Or should I add some more lighter moments?
But adding lighter moments can break the momentum of the story.
What do you all want - please do tell me asap
Hi, heavy is always welcome, let the current momentum be maintained please. 😃
Originally posted by: ABC_1234
This chapter genuinely stayed with me after I finished reading it. All three parts together felt like one long emotional unraveling, where every conversation seemed to carry years of things left unsaid.
Hey dear, thank you for this beautiful review! So glad this chapter stayed with you after reading.
The Mitali-Tulsi conversation in the garden was probably the part that hit me first. Mitali saying that there was never even a "possibility" because, from her side, there was never anything there in the first place - that was such a painful realization. And then learning exactly how Noina had used their marriage to systematically break Ritik down made her guilt feel even heavier. What I especially liked was that Tulsi didn't immediately try to solve everything for her. She listened, held her, and reminded her to talk to Ritik herself. That felt very true to where their relationship has reached.
Oh that whole scene was so difficult to write! I'm purposely making tulsi someone who doesn't have answers to everything, a solution to every problem! I hate this in show - they often portray tulsi as having immediate solutions! Here tulsi is totally confused (as you will also read in next chapter). She's even unable to fully process.
And then came that contrast downstairs with Timsy, Mihir, Tulsi and the strawberry shake. 😭 That entire sequence was such a warm little pocket of normalcy while everything was falling apart upstairs. Timsy declaring that Dadu should make the shake, Mihir having absolutely no idea what he was doing, and then getting praised as "chef Vikas" 😂. It was sweet, but knowing what was happening upstairs made it almost hurt more. The chapter kept doing that - giving us these tiny happy moments while quietly reminding us that something much heavier was happening underneath them.
That was the idea behind those undercutting corresponding scenes! The contrast between Timsy having the time of her life with her grandparents, while upstairs her parents are discussing something that could change her life - and not just that - her father not even letting her mother speak - just heaping one accusation after another on her! Glad that contrast came out well.
The confrontation between Ritik and Mitali was difficult to read, but I think that's exactly why it worked. Ritik's anger wasn't romanticized or conveniently softened. He was hurt, frightened and immediately convinced there had to be someone else. His insecurity about losing Timsy came through so strongly, especially when he interpreted Mitali's closeness with her as some kind of calculated plan. And that line about being trapped and then wanting an "exit" really showed how much of his old resentment was still sitting there.
that confrontation scene was another difficult one to actually write - sensitive people are like that, isn't it? They behave exactly as Ritik behaved here! Noina and Mitali literally stole his life!
But Mitali telling him she would leave Timsy with him was such an important moment. She wasn't trying to take his daughter away or punish him. She genuinely believed that freeing him might finally give him a chance at happiness. And ironically, that misunderstanding between them made the later conversation even more meaningful.
After suffering 5-6 years at her hands, it's naturally difficult for him to trust her one bit! So his mind genuinely twists everything she's saying.
The next morning with Tulsi and Mihir was another favorite for me. I really liked Tulsi refusing to break Mitali's confidence, even when Mihir was clearly uncomfortable being kept out of something important. Her explanation that sometimes parents can't make decisions for their children, and can only make themselves safe enough for their children to come to them, felt like one of the most mature conversations in the chapter. And then somehow Mihir immediately went from that serious conversation to being completely delighted about the World Textile Confluence invitation. 😂 His pride in Tulsi and Bandhej was so genuine. I loved that he refused to take credit for the opportunity and reminded her that he may have opened the door, but everything inside it was hers.
Glad TuHir morning conversation came out so well. It was one of the easier scenes to write and it came out well in the first draft itself!
Absolutely! He's a complete Tulsi-paglu! And now he's immensely proud of her professional success too!
The halwa scene was honestly adorable. The memories of the raw mango at 2 a.m. and the disastrous besan-in-shrikhand experiment were exactly the kind of details that make TuHir feel lived-in rather than simply "romantic." And him feeding her the halwa only for Shobha to walk in and immediately accuse them of "reverse dating" was perfect. 😂 There is something incredibly satisfying about watching these two slowly rediscover all these tiny pieces of familiarity that never completely disappeared.
I'm trying my best to reimagine a few flashbacks from what we are shown from their early married life (him making a shake or something in mixie for a pregnant tulsi, him cooking with all the men in s2 beginning - these show he's not exactly a novice in kitchen) - or what I remember from the show until AU was there! Glad I'm succeeding so far.
But the part that really brought everything together for me was Ritik and Mitali's second conversation.
Yes
The difference between the first confrontation and this one was huge. The first time, Ritik was reacting from fear. This time, he actually listened.
Hmm.. Tulsi ki baat ka Asar toh hona hi tha naa.
Mitali's explanation about Timsy, about not wanting her daughter to grow up believing that her parents stayed trapped together because of her, and especially the connection she made to Suchitra and Noina - that was the emotional core of the chapter for me. Suddenly, Mitali's decision wasn't just about escaping an unhappy marriage. It was about refusing to pass the same kind of inherited guilt and helplessness on to Timsy.
This was a new angle I thought up. Happy it resonates well
And I really appreciated that Ritik didn't suddenly become okay with divorce. He simply understood more. That's much more believable. His apology felt earned because it came after actually recognizing what he had refused to see.
Yeah - Ritik is always been a sensitive person- so this felt true to him
And then that final "Friends?" / "Friends." 😭
That was such a small ending, but after everything these two had just said, it felt enormous. Not reconciliation. Not a magical fixing of their marriage. Just the first honest step toward seeing each other as people rather than as the roles Noina's manipulation forced them into.
That was a loop I opened immediately after shareholders meeting - perhaps 20 chapters back. Closed it now
What I loved most about the chapter as a whole is the parallel running through it. Mitali and Ritik are finally breaking open something that has been built on lies, fear and obligation, while Tulsi and Mihir are quietly rebuilding something that was broken years ago. One relationship is being forced to confront what was never there; the other is slowly discovering what was still there all along.
Correct! That contrast between the eldest couple and the youngest couple of the family is stunning and heartbreaking- one couple got separated for 6.5 years at such a late stage in life when they had so much love between them and the other couple spent a chunk of their youth making each other miserable
The chapter was heavy, but it never became emotionally exhausting because those quieter family moments kept giving it breathing room. And honestly, that's probably what made the emotional scenes hit harder.
Glad to read this! Hopefully you will feel the same about the next chapter!
The "Kuch Tha Hi Nahi" title feels especially fitting after reading all three parts. For Mitali and Ritik, it isn't simply about there being no spark. It's about realizing how much of their relationship was constructed by someone else's plan - and how difficult it is to figure out what remains once that is stripped away.
Yeah - it's time now to see if something is even there in that relationship to even salvage!
Definitely one of those chapters where the real progress isn't in a big dramatic resolution, but in people finally saying the things they should have been able to say years ago.
This story never leans towards dramatic or magical resolutions to problems! Sometimes, in fact, more often than not, saying things openly is the first step in resolving life's problems
And now I really need to know where that "Friends" is going to take them. 🥹
Waiting for Chapter 41!!!!
Hope you like where 'friends' takes them
Next chapter- hopefully tomorrow
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Chapter 40 - Thank You
Thank you so much for yet again a beautiful chapter in the TuHir life.
The pleasure is mine! Thank you dear for this beautiful review!!
Parenting is not easy. Tulsi and Mihir, even at this stage of their lives, are still worried about their children and their lives. And children often feel that their parents love one sibling more than the other. But the protectiveness that parents have towards their children never really goes away-it stays with them for a lifetime.
Correct! They have to do parenting even at this age - any parent has to keep thinking and taking care of their kids at every age - only kaise care karni hai- that changes! As you rightly said, parenting is a lifetime job!
Mihir and Tulsi are now at a stage where they are trying to protect their children's relationships. They are helping them mend their bonds, understand what it means to be a couple, and evolve as individuals who have chosen commitment-not because they were forced to, but because they discovered that one common thing that keeps beating between two people.
Yes - first it was Gautam's relationship with them (as his parents)+ his relationship with Damini + with his siblings - that they managed - wahan ab bhi uska Karan ke saath ka relationship is still to be managed!
And now it's Ritik - they have to prevent him from going back into depression while untangling the mess his life is in wrt Munni and Mitali! He has given up on ever being able to have a love life.
Sometimes, relationships are about identifying that pulse-the one thing that connects two people-and then working around it, nurturing it, and protecting it so that it continues to pulsate with a healthy, normal rhythm.
Very well put!! 👏👏
And perhaps that is what Mihir and Tulsi are trying to teach their children: love is not about being perfect; it is about finding that shared heartbeat and choosing to keep it alive.
Exactly! No one is perfect and so no relationship can ever be perfect! It's finding what makes you click as a couple and keeping it alive - as you said- in a way they are also showing it by example!
Mittali and Rithik's conversation felt so natural and real. Rithik's accumulated frustration, the insults, helplessness, hatred, and the foolishness he feels about having married Mittali-all of it came out so naturally. And at the same time, there is a responsible father in him who just wants to give the best possible life to his child.
That was difficult to write - it's often difficult to write sensitive people who have been hurt tremendously
His words felt like the result of all the emotions he had been accumulating for years in a loveless relationship. Everything he had kept inside finally exploded like a volcano. You could feel the anger, pain, regret, helplessness, and even the love he has for his child, all coming out together.
I am glad this scene showed everything I wanted it to show so well. His words - maa bhi tumhe nahi badal paayi - shows he thinks the worst of her
Rithik chose this time to humiliate Mithali-a revenge to all her insults over the years which caused him enormous pain, he broke from inside at the same time the door to his heart for Mitali.
commendable the words chosen in anger , hatred and ego ,applause writer.
Thank you dear, so glad the words were apt.
Correct! He didn't really know what he was doing or saying. He was like she wants an exit so that she can live with someone else after trapping me and ruining my life - so now I won't let her have an easy exit! That actually shows the extent of his suffering.
TuHir balcony conversations around Mithali and Rithik continue, but Tulsi isn't in for long conversations. Mihir, on the other hand, is desperate to know what has happened. He is disappointed and feels helpless. He can neither ask Tulsi about it nor force her to share all the information she has. At the same time, he cannot simply step in, take matters into his own hands, and talk to Mithali and Rithik himself. Both TuHir on different tracks one knows the truth of Divorce the other is yet to know , however both are sitting with their worries and helplessness as a parent. Indian parents k liye Divorce ko lena itna aasan nhi hai. moreover TuHir has seen the repercussions of partying ways , which drains you emotionally , financially , mentally, it takes time to gather courage to rebuild a life, find a ne partner , trust your instinct and the person you found , then the fear always runs in your mind.
tulsi is seeing Mihir changing but she also knows the impulsive Mihir - the last she told him about him about Ritik Munni history, it resulted in a fight - jab ki tab toh tulsi wasn't even thinking about his divorce from Mitali. Now - because:
Mitali ne sirf usko bataya - kind of confidence me leke.
Mitali ne Abhi tak Ritik se baat nahi ki
She doesn't know what Ritik will doShe's thinking maybe Ritik denies the divorce and says he's willing to give her a chance
she thinks maybe divorce ki baat aage hi na badheSo she's unwilling to tell him now - especially knowing his fear of another divorce in the family.
Later the conversation of Mthali and Rithik took a different shape altogether, probably much lighter and calmer way, Rithik made himself to listen and understands Mithali's perspective. and he realized she has no personal agenda this time except that she started thinking as a human and a mother of Timsy. she do not want to make Rithik her scapegoat for the entire life.
Yes exactly!
SO strange Mithali's maturity, humanity and respect for others is something commendable here. She started valuing her relations not for monetary benefits or for societal status but for the first time as a human being, a mother and an ordinary woman who has no right to humiliate the other person , just because he is married to you, She cannot be the staircase for his growth but cannot be the reason for his downfall as a man, as professional and as an individual.
Yes Mitali is completely changed now.
This Mitali probably has started looking things differently because she couldl possibly observing Tulsi every moment, even the smallest gesture she shows for others, the care and warmth she spreads around her without any expectations. Sometimes , it is giving which brings the utmost satisfaction, She is not trying to fit in Tulsi's shoes, but probably learning what it takes to be a human being. Mithali is drawn by circumstances, influenced and instigated by one wrong person, preached wrong values, but then the reality stuck to her, "ye mere bhi ghar hai" (in chapter 1 or 2, probably that's out of law, ego) but today there is no compulsion , all she wants is a happy Rithik.
Yes actually jitna I saw her in the main show (I'm not watching the spinoff at all) I often felt ye kaisi insaan hai! But then I thought about her upbringing and thought what if she's never taught from childhood ki sahi Kya hai aur galat Kya hai? Isi se idea aaya mujhe iss story mein uske character ka..Exactly - in chapter 1 & 2, when Ritik tries to throw her out of the house, she forcibly stays - saying this is my house and you are my husband and Timsy is my daughter so you can't throw me out like that. But now she's willing to leave the house if that's the way to Ritik's happiness.
For the first time she felt that motherly fear of losing her child , felt that emptiness and at the same time as a woman , she is sad to loose Tulsi too, a new found friend, guide, and the one who adores her unconditionally. This positivity is welcome.
yes she knows the correct thing is to set Ritik free but the cost of it is she will lose Timsy and tulsi both!! Yeah correct - for the first time in life's she's found a guide and mother figure in tulsi - so naturally she's sad uske saath nahi reh paayegi.
Arre baba , Mihir ko kabhi bhi romance soojhta hai. Kyun na ho , he as a proud husband and true businessman , who admires a good work. he is a Johari of his field who knows the diamond's value, ussko parkhna janta hai. However, Tulsi still feels it's because of his efforts in publishing the book this could happen. Mihir is excited for her new phase , and extremely interested in lending his experience , knowledge and thoughts to prepare for this conference. However , Tulsi disappointed him stating her team and her will work on it, Mihir smile vanished , stilll he offered her his help any time. His ego didn't came in between , but Tulsi still has that hesitation and wants to prove herself without Mihir's help.Yes he's a hopeless romantic, utterly Tulsi-paglu and very proud of her achievements in her business,
Yes Mihir ke dimaag mein toh yeh baat bhi nahi aayi ki sab milke prepare nahi karenge. Families me aisa hi toh hota hai - one person gets an opportunity and everyone gets to work helping.
I actually think tulsi is wrong here - she's being stubbornArre Mihir ko mauke pe chuaka marna aata hai, he converted this threat to an opportunity , date chahiye. Tulsi bhi sahi hai, abhi Halwa se hi mana liya, Mihir koi opportunity choddta , distract karne ka( bechara idhar to obediently instructions hi follow karrha tha, par Tulsi khud uski charm me kho jaati hai 😉. Halwa khila bhi diva, carefully with another spoon, Tulsi is spared and Shobha kaha chodegi tease karne ka mauka, Mihir kuch bhi cover karne ke liye muh kholta hai to sach hi nikalta hai and Tulsi ko embarass hola hi hai. Thank god Mihir ki Halwa date ka Halwa nhi banana ke liye, Tulsi khogayi.
Bilkul aata hai mauke pe chauka maarna! Yes uska bas chale toh he wants a date daily - courtship jo shuru ki hai - that too forever (saat janam/har janam)
Tulsi knows exactly what will make him happy!! And he does know his way around the kitchen - jo show mein bhi dekha hai 1-2 times). And yes tulsi ko distract karna is his right😜🤣
Iss baar toh he didn't even try to cover up before Shobha - he's shamelessly accepting the accusation of reverse dating! Now he's comfortable even teasing her before their daughter.
Thank you writer in making me like Mitali as much as I disliked her being mean in the show, I loved her this transformation. Bollywoodiya Dosti se shuru. :P
Wow! This is truly a compliment. I made you like a hated character (in the show I hated her too).
Sorry woh friends?/friends. Scene Kuch filmy ho Gaya tha.
few things amused me: Ritik understanding POV of how Shuchu might listen to Noina, in order to survive and for her daughter's future. I know Ritik never takes Tulsi's advise lightly, he values her despite being in bad mood , he listened to her and tried to listen to Mitali calmly.
Yes this was a new aspect of Noina-suchitra relationship jo mujhe khayal Aaya - in the beginning so many times, she tried to steer Noina away from Mihir, so many times she said - chal di US wapas chalte hain.
Arre wah Chef Vikas(The handsome and adorable one in the planet
) Mihir n Tulsi handling Timsy, Mihir's confused state to make Strawberry and then he following Tulsi's advise then the compliment gave him confidence
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Chef Vikas 🤣🤣
Glad their scene with Timsy and the strawberry shake came out well- I had fun writing it
Best part is TuHir's banter in the kitchen how she was craving for mango in the midnight, he has made Srikhand with Besan mix
(now he was named Chef Vikas phewww) , Tulsi to Mihir ka Mann rakhne ke liye khayi thi. they were going back to their good old days, reminiscing their moments. They are opening up to each other naturally. Probably Mihir has digged down all his secured memory lane and presented it casually. They lived their moments in the past and reliving those again.
Correct I wanted to show the contrast - Ritik Mitali relationship has nothing to stand on while TuHir relationship is full of a lot of old memories about which they can still tease each other even after 4 Decades and 6 years separation! Also wanted ro portray the 'normalization' of their relationship
arre Halwa and reverse dating
Oh 🤣🤣🤣 thoroughly enjoyed writing these.
Beautiful part. The effort you have put in, the time you invested and the emotions you portrayed brilliantly. Thank you writer for allowing me read this beautiful part again.
My pleasure dear, and I'm really touched that you are appreciating my efforts and the time I put in.
I always feel short of words to express how brilliantly each and every scene is written. Kudos.
Thank you sooo much dear
This song dedication to TuHir:
आवाज़ दो हमको
आवाज़ दो हमको हम खो गए
कब नींद से जागे कब सो गए
मर जायेंगे हम अगर दूर तुम से हो गए
आवाज़ दो हमको हम खो गए
कब नींद से जागे कब सो गए
मर जायेंगे हम अगर दूर तुम से हो गए
आवाज़ दो हमको हम खो गए
आ आ
आ आ आ आ
तुम से निगाहें चार करने लगे
हम ज़िन्दगी से प्यार करने लगे
डरते ना थे मौत से अब मगर डरने लगे
आवाज़ दो हमको हम खो गए
कब नींद से जागे कब सो गए
मर जायेंगे हम अगर दूर तुम से हो गए
आवाज़ दो हमको हम खो गए
सावन की इस पहली बरसात में
सब देख ले सपनें एक रात में
कट जाए ना ज़िन्दगी एक ही मुलाकात में
आवाज़ दो हमको हम खो गए
कब नींद से जागे कब सो गए
मर जायेंगे हम अगर दूर तुम से हो गए
आवाज़ दो हमको हम खो गए
आ आ
आ आ
मेरे सामने रहना जाना नहीं
तुमसे है कुछ कहना जाना नहीं
मौसम कभी प्यार का लौटकर आना नहीं
आवाज़ दो हमको हम खो गए
कब नींद से जागे कब सो गए
मर जायेंगे हम अगर दूर तुम से हो गए
Hey this is a fave of mine! Kabhi socha nahi tha TuHir pe itna fit baithega. But it indeed feels so apt for TuHir
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Chapter 38:
I wonder and felt amazingly happy the way you narrated the entire part. It has so much sensitive, positive, heartfelt nuances and each of the emotion etched into readers mind.
Right from their Balcony argument, disagreement to, again building up the crack in their relationship, fear to loose their own companion, friend, soulmate.
How Tulsi was right at some point when Mihir took a decision to handover Rithik's work to Angad, somewhere it hurt Tulsi's ego, could be her fear as a mother. But genuinely i felt whatever Mihir had thought thru to keep Rithik n Munni away is not a bad step either. I know no one can control somethings, but can try preventing the year old method, out of site is out of mind😃.
But then Mihir to Mihir hai he has to carry on with his decisions and thoughts, without the need to consult anyone, and not ready for the consequences.
The chapter name kiska haq makes so much sense here, hum sab apna adhikar khud manle laggte hai - chahe materialistic ho ya fir insan. As a father, apne bacche ka bhala sochna Mihir ka haq hai, and usski bhalayi k liye growth ke liye jo ground set karna hai wo bhi usska haq hai, so when this comes to mind any responsible parent would do it from his own perspective keeping the good of the children. Mihir being protective and emotional father who acts more faster than the idea stuck to him, without considering the pros and cons of his decisions. Tulsi had to workaround to clear the mess created by him. So two different personality, still figuring out their equations even after years of being together.
Neither of them are wrong here, only thing is they are doing things on their own, both TuHir thinks that, they do good for their kids on their own. So somewhere Mihir felt that when Tulsi said "main handle karlungi", somewhere both of them treated the other as an outsider when they tried to solve some issue. Probably that superiority complex is inbuilt, confident on self speaks more.
PS: my review isn't complete i just posted the half text i found for a chapter in the drafts i saved. It's really disheartening to loose many pages of text i wrote. 🙄😟
Chapter 39:
The title is very beautiful in many ways. Your thought has been in this , Tulsi is seen by Mihir , while MIthali is unseen by Rithik or vice versa. One is gaining the accolades and the respect she deserves , while the other is caught with her own past dreadful behavior towards her own actions, while the partner has not noticed probably not acknowledging the changes ,bcoz his self esteem is broken into millions of pieces, his hatred will be genuine when someone whom you married disrespects you.
First things first, TuHir's balcony meet for chai and Kaadha , and the unread letter of Gayatri chachi, it brought so many unsaid , forgotten , unnoticed things to the table. Mihir surprisingly overwhelmed and proud of the fact that , he is some how connected this person. Tulsi's gestures may be small to help a neighbour in medical emergency crisis, help someone financially so that their child completes studies, provide food for the hungry individuals, be of any help if she can when she herself is busy with her household. Not everyone can be compassionate and human always, it's the rare quality one holds and treats the other human with humanity and contributes in any which way possible to help them come out of it. Mihir has witnessed this in the past , but then he has not seen the impact it created in others life. In fact he is of the opinion that , apna kaam karo, dusre ke jhamele me mat pado, he was unhappy and shouted when Tulsi was worried about the guy who took the blame on himself for the accident, or saved Vrinda from Suhas's ill treatment. But today he is standing with the facts, love, affection and gratitude paid by people whom Tulsi helped, it may be handful ,if not hundreds but still the gratitiude filled in their heart can never be earned and achieved without you devoting yourself wholeheartedly, without any material expectation, just pure humanity.
Mihir however agrees that Gayatri chachi has put lots of effort in connecting with the people whom Tulsi helped but he believes it's all praise worthy and earned by Tulsi unknowingly.
Gayatri Chachi n Tulsi's small talks , overwhelming gestures shows their strong bond.
Tulsi at work got distracted by Mihir ?? [LOL} , Mihir is so excited and enthusiastic to know which Shirt does she wants him to wear for the Date which he has setup 😉. She is surprised at the same time smiling at his antics between her discussion with Vandana and Vaishnavi, completely distracted and regained he conscious back. However, the girls are smart , they tease her "Waise aap Mumbai aake khush lagti hain." Vandana, pariwar aur Mumbai ke alawa ek aur bhi 'M' factor hai."(And this is mind blowing writer). Tulsi actually behaving like a teenager who wants to keep her newly found love Secret 😉.
Tumse baat karna hanikuarak hai , Tulsi kahi khogyi hai, her mock anger , Mihir's mischief and excitement call , beautifully written this lovely conversation of the two.
Then Tulsi's realization she has to look presentable at least if not to match him, her getting ready and then changing the open hair to braid with curls and her dilemma , hesitation , want it's just out of the world.
Mithali is now guilty and feeling sad for having mocked , insulted and humiliated Ritik in the past and his conversation with Tulsi about him being called Loser and how it did hurt him as an individual. However she wanted to talk to him about Tim's picnic, its always easy to text when things are not too good between people. Probably , the way Ritik expressed he will remember the word Loser whenever he sees Mithali, that's the reason she chose texting.
Good they are working out thru text for their kid.
I truly admire the writer here for contrasting texting , two couple completely in different tangent, thinks differently, responds and behaves differently , one couple is rediscovering their lost love while the other is finding it difficult to initiate conversations- conversations from heart vs conversations out of duty, communications to ease out Vs communication means fear, opening a door Vs finding whether the door still has a key.
Simple Texting but has different texture and meaning to it when we looked at TuHir and Mitali Rithik. One is mechanical and other is emotional built conversation.
Mihir Tulsi's office pick up and he noticing her curls and praising , Tulsi doesn't want to show her happiness instead divert saying she was busy working and might have come out on their own , then Mihir teasing her without your permission [LOL}-his lady love, and her mocking him , I am not free, tum mere bacchoan ko kaam de ke khud ladies ke peeche ye dekhte rehte ho and he answering his Lady Love, Tulsi is baffled at the same time happiy inside and has to go mute. I can imagine this scene. Now he wants same attention and her complimenting him openly, but Tulsi to Tulsi hai notice karegi but batayegi kyun??{LOL}. Mihir bhi nikalwake hi rahega , kabhi cute si face, kabhi sulking and kabhi saddened bachche ki tarah ki usski favourite tofee or toy cheen ne par. Charming self praise 😉 issme Mihir ko koi takkar nhi de sakte and Tulsi rolling eyes. It's visually spectacular moment.
Exactly he is right , they are visiting the cafe for the first time so its new for them, Tulsi ko issme aapatti kyun hai 😂 Coffee was overly sweet and Chai -he likes the one prepared by Tulsi so cute , kabhi kabhi pyar jatana bhi padta hai, Mihir ki fliriting nhi shayad exhnage of heart tha not just coffee. They are living it again. Husband ki flirting wife ko dikhti nhi hai , heheheh
In all these attentiveness he has seen her lost in something he questioned and when learnt its about Rithik , he said he is given him an assignment probably took responsibility of guiding Rithik prosper professionally. Tulsi admiring his thoughts and the decision he took for Ritik on his own.
Somewhere, Mihir is advancing at his romance lessons and Tulsi is still with her basics- math, while Mihir has learnt addition , multiplication and finding ways to weigh and gauge his feelings and bring it in action when he touched her curls affectionately.
Omg, kids these days are so stubborn its very difficult to handle and make them understand, of course parents know how to trick them , but this generation kids very much into what they want and gets upset if it is not served. Timsy is one such example, good that they could handle the situation by bribing her something else to compensate. Bacchoan ko wo ek hota hai na koi ghar ka bada bahar se kya leke aayega, usska wait , excitement and happiness when they get it so natural.
Tulsi noticed Mithali -sehmi hui, lowest pitch while talking and quiet. She started a conversation but couldn't reach the end point as Mithali was not in a mood to discuss this with Tulsi or any one yet.
Then comes the dining area , Gautam's silken face , angry and unhappy moods. Every one notices but had no courage but to live with it. Then Mihir assuring Tulsi he himself will handle , Tulsi worries for Mihir as well as Gautam. However , Mihir has conversed with his son like a friend , helped him ease out the frustration. Mihir shared his experience- life is all about accepting failures , owning and then rebuilding, get going, one failure is not the end of the world. There are thousands yet to explore and conquer. Good message.
Tulsi underestimated Mihir's negotiation capabilities as a father , but here Mihir passed in distinction to deal with Gautam and bring him back to normalcy.
Tulsi thinking on her new found relationship, her love for Mihir, though her stand was completely opposite when she entered SN, she has closed all the doors for him, But that one incident of Mihir collapsing , she hasn't witnessed but accidentally overheard Shibha and Chachi's conversation, how her heart is stuck at that and continued to calm him in anyways possible. Probably not as a wife technically but as a person whom she loved unconditionally, she is worried but not in a position to display it to the world or to her own self.
Mihir voluntarily solving most of the issues at home himself , Tulsi accused him of not being changed and for taking unilateral decisions, however here he looks more sorted and takes unilateral decisions if he can find a solution to it and the rest is shared and discussed with her. She hurt him during her emotional break down or pained by the issues her kids are going thru because of them. she knew it she shouted and accused unreasonably , at some point doubted his abilities. However she is falling for this even more every positive change he had brought to her life, his kids life and to the balcony as a couple. She is more satisfied with her life to have such a man as her partner-not perfect but accepted I'm with his flaws and she is fallen for his charms again undoubtedly.
Probably, they are actually living their time now as Chachi rightly said. They are doing things for each other now, Mihir pampering her more than ever, he values her now, she is liking it more than words could describe her happiness.
The two contrasting couple , one who has found love and the other who had closed doors for it. Its beautifully written Tulsi falling in love at this age and Rithik has no heart to find something called LOVE.
Mitali and Tulsi's conversation- Tulsi offering her help or suggesting her to go along Pari or Shobha "ki humein pata hai sahi raasta kya hai... lekin use lena itna difficult hota hai... kyunki humein pata hai hum akele ho jaayenge." Mitali has become sensitive and sensible here. She has a fear of being alone , loosing someone whom with she lived under the same roof for 5years.
(Mithali's change in tone, behavior , hesitation , worry , sadness is not seen by Ritik, while Tulsi witnessed changes in Mihir, or vice versa Mihir has seen Tulsi more closely than before , has seen her behaving with him naturally, beautiful comparison. )
After contemplating with her heart and mind many times , Mitali gathered courage to talk about setting Ritik free of this relationship, not to burden him. However saying it out to Tulsi is another challenge, Tulsi's reaction on hearing Divorce is of any normal Indian parent would do. Well cultured Indian parents support divorce only when either of the party is physically , mentally harassed and abused constantly. Otherwise , the thought is to have patience and get adjusted and accustomed to the person. Somewhere the elders advise both the couple to work out and resolve their differences.
Writer,
This chapter has been a great stuff, many logical and sensitive things were spoken. Aisa lag aha hai writer has hidden couple counselor capabilities too. I truly enjoyed reading this chapter, the perspectives, expectations and dynamics change couple to couple. Each live with their own problems , deal with their own routine and mental stress of losing the budding relationship.
Agar reader ki dil ki raftar har emotion ke saath jud jaata hai , uss emotion ko feel karpata, hai to ussko baar baar padhne ki iccha hoti hai to , wo emotion aapko baar baar sochne pe , uss bhav ko accept karne ke liye mazboor karta ho, uss story ki part aapke dimag me ghoomta resta ho to, ye kuch khaas hi hai. Awesome.
I know , how much you invested for each scene, I am speechless and overwhelmed by this fantastic piece of work.
I can only thank you, Many Thanks for letting me read this masterpiece of a story.
छाया है मन पे मेरे मदहोश रहना तेरा
मेरे ही तनको मिला तेरी बाहो का फ़ेरा
दूरी सही न जाये,
चैन कहीं ना आये
चलना है अब तो तेरी पलको के छाये छाये
बस ना चले रे काम सवेरे
लेके तेरा नाम दिल धड़कता है बार बार क्या कीजै
आ गया जो, किसी पे प्यार, क्या कीजै
दिल तो है दिल, दिल का ऐतबार, क्या कीजै
Chapter 39:
The title is very beautiful in many ways. Your thought has been in this , Tulsi is seen by Mihir , while MIthali is unseen by Rithik or vice versa. One is gaining the accolades and the respect she deserves , while the other is caught with her own past dreadful behavior towards her own actions, while the partner has not noticed probably not acknowledging the changes ,bcoz his self esteem is broken into millions of pieces, his hatred will be genuine when someone whom you married disrespects you.
Hey dear, firstly I am truly grateful to you for rewriting- after losing your draft - it's truly difficult to get over that frustration to rewrite! Thank you so much
I'm so over the moon that you understood the title in such depth and got exactly what I was trying to portray! Tulsi is finally seen not only by Mihir but by even people who don't really know her well!
First things first, TuHir's balcony meet for chai and Kaadha , and the unread letter of Gayatri chachi, it brought so many unsaid , forgotten , unnoticed things to the table. Mihir surprisingly overwhelmed and proud of the fact that , he is some how connected this person. Tulsi's gestures may be small to help a neighbour in medical emergency crisis, help someone financially so that their child completes studies, provide food for the hungry individuals, be of any help if she can when she herself is busy with her household. Not everyone can be compassionate and human always, it's the rare quality one holds and treats the other human with humanity and contributes in any which way possible to help them come out of it. Mihir has witnessed this in the past , but then he has not seen the impact it created in others life. In fact he is of the opinion that , apna kaam karo, dusre ke jhamele me mat pado, he was unhappy and shouted when Tulsi was worried about the guy who took the blame on himself for the accident, or saved Vrinda from Suhas's ill treatment. But today he is standing with the facts, love, affection and gratitude paid by people whom Tulsi helped, it may be handful ,if not hundreds but still the gratitiude filled in their heart can never be earned and achieved without you devoting yourself wholeheartedly, without any material expectation, just pure humanity.Exactly - it's not easy to think about others when you're totally engrossed in your own life and handling your own problems and home, families, the tantrums of your elders, husband and children. Iss sab ke beech kisi aur ki problems solve karna without even knowing them well- that's such a big deal!
Mihir however agrees that Gayatri chachi has put lots of effort in connecting with the people whom Tulsi helped but he believes it's all praise worthy and earned by Tulsi unknowingly.
Correct- gayatri really worked hard for many day to find and connect with these people to ask them to write these for tulsi. But it's all earned by tulsi through her selfless deeds
Gayatri Chachi n Tulsi's small talks , overwhelming gestures shows their strong bond.
In that scene words would have diluted the effect! Glad it came out well.
Tulsi at work got distracted by Mihir ?? [LOL} , Mihir is so excited and enthusiastic to know which Shirt does she wants him to wear for the Date which he has setup 😉. She is surprised at the same time smiling at his antics between her discussion with Vandana and Vaishnavi, completely distracted and regained he conscious back. However, the girls are smart , they tease her "Waise aap Mumbai aake khush lagti hain." Vandana, pariwar aur Mumbai ke alawa ek aur bhi 'M' factor hai."(And this is mind blowing writer). Tulsi actually behaving like a teenager who wants to keep her newly found love Secret 😉.
In the show, we saw Tulsi- paglu Mihir and Mihir-paglu tulsi at different times- yahan main dono ek saath dikha rahi hoon.
I had to get into the naughty minds of all these characters to write all these lines - the girls, Mihir and even tulsi.
Tumse baat karna hanikuarak hai
That line was funny haina? 🤣🤣🤣 and totally in character with tulsi. But iss line ke andar hi tulsi ki flirting bhi chhupi hui hai - neeche batati hoon about her whole flirting escalation - Aap ko lagta hai ki Mihir is leading the flirting but hai ulta hi..
Then Tulsi's realization she has to look presentable at least if not to match him, her getting ready and then changing the open hair to braid with curls and her dilemma , hesitation , want it's just out of the world.
Yes she only initially thought to remake her hair Kyunki Mihir is taking so many efforts to look good for her - normally anyone would have directly come from his office to her office to pick her up- ek tea/coffee hi toh hai! But Mihir went home, freshened up, dressed for her according to her choice. So tulsi ko laga kam se kam Baal toh theek kar doon. When she opened her hair she remembered how he likes her open hair but then keeping it open- he will know immediately it's for him!
And during this entire period she's operating on plausible deniabilitySo puts her hair back into a bun and then removes 2 strands - Kyunki Kuch toh karna bhi hai special - but something she can deny 🤣🤣
Mithali is now guilty and feeling sad for having mocked , insulted and humiliated Ritik in the past and his conversation with Tulsi about him being called Loser and how it did hurt him as an individual. However she wanted to talk to him about Tim's picnic, its always easy to text when things are not too good between people. Probably , the way Ritik expressed he will remember the word Loser whenever he sees Mithali, that's the reason she chose texting.
Haan - Wohi - she's trying Uski aawaz bhi sunai na de Ritik ko. She is speaking low in his vicinity, etc etc,Good they are working out thru text for their kid.
Kid ke sivay kuch hai hi nahi unke beech naa - even that kid was a strategy of Noina-Mitali
I truly admire the writer here for contrasting texting , two couple completely in different tangent, thinks differently, responds and behaves differently , one couple is rediscovering their lost love while the other is finding it difficult to initiate conversations- conversations from heart vs conversations out of duty, communications to ease out Vs communication means fear, opening a door Vs finding whether the door still has a key.
Correct! Seen and invisible- I tried to show it in diff ways _ so glad you could see through the layers. When a writer puts something underneath the layers and a reader is able to peel back the layers to find it, the feelings of the writer can't even be described in words ❤️❤️Simple Texting but has different texture and meaning to it when we looked at TuHir and Mitali Rithik. One is mechanical and other is emotional built conversation.
Exactly- the two texting are so completely different from each other - glad u caught it.
Mihir Tulsi's office pick up and he noticing her curls and praising , Tulsi doesn't want to show her happiness instead divert saying she was busy working and might have come out on their own , then Mihir teasing her without your permission [LOL}-his lady love, and her mocking him , I am not free, tum mere bacchoan ko kaam de ke khud ladies ke peeche ye dekhte rehte ho and he answering his Lady Love, Tulsi is baffled at the same time happiy inside and has to go mute. I can imagine this scene. Now he wants same attention and her complimenting him openly, but Tulsi to Tulsi hai notice karegi but batayegi kyun??{LOL}. Mihir bhi nikalwake hi rahega , kabhi cute si face, kabhi sulking and kabhi saddened bachche ki tarah ki usski favourite tofee or toy cheen ne par. Charming self praise 😉 issme Mihir ko koi takkar nhi de sakte and Tulsi rolling eyes. It's visually spectacular moment.You have seen everything almost as I wanted to show- but ab main tulsi ki flirting aur escalation ko explain karti hoon -
First he sends her the pics. it makes her laugh at his almost juvenile behavior in the middle of a serious discussion.
once she is alone in her cabin - essentially the flirting ball is in her court - she has a few options -1. Ignore him completely
2. Message / Say I am busy don't disturb
3. Simply message- grey one and don't disturb me now because I'm busy
4. Threaten him - zyaada disturb kiya toh date cancel and I am coming home with Ritik
But instead of all this she wants to engage with him and prolong the flirtation so she messages -
it's harmful for my image to read your messages in between my meetings!
On the face she's scolding him but underneath she's saying: what you're doing is affecting me so continue it.
Mihir isn't sure at first whether she's complaining or encouraging him - so he says : sorry - is your meeting over now?
Again she could have said - no or I have work or another meeting soon - but simply says instead - haanThat confirms that she's actually encouraging him. So he calls her and - again look at how she goes on about image- without any real scolding in it.
goes - Mihir! - Without any real scoldingThen purposely taunts his age to rile him up. Knowing he will defend.
Says a knowing "Acha?" But doesn't contradict him when he says he's still handsome!
then almost grudgingly chooses a shirt and says a mock exasperated- bas? Hoping he will continue the flirting - which he doesn't get because he's in a hurry to get ready and come to her.Leaving her hair strands open - that's obvious
In the car see -
1. When he tells her he likes the way the strands fall on ber ears, she says nikal gayi hongi - exactly the plausible deniability she's been operating on - except he knows and she knows he knows it 🤣🤣
And he teases her and she has no direct response to it so window is her rescue 🤣
She decides to scold him again- but not really!
2. Ladies ko.
Not: mujhe - or - kisi ko - or - apni wife ko
She accused him - u message random ladies🤣
It's an invitation to prolong it for him by saying- sirf tumhe or apni wife ko
But he goes a step further - apni lady love ko!
3. When he fishes for compliments, she absolutely dint need to touch him but she wants to/chooses to . Ek chhote se ordinary se compliment se hi kaam chalta - achi lag rahi hai shirt! But no she's still prolonging it and when she finally gives a tiny but specific compliment, it exactly has the effect she was aiming for!
Exactly he is right , they are visiting the cafe for the first time so its new for them, Tulsi ko issme aapatti kyun hai 😂 Coffee was overly sweet and Chai -he likes the one prepared by Tulsi so cute , kabhi kabhi pyar jatana bhi padta hai, Mihir ki fliriting nhi shayad exhnage of heart tha not just coffee. They are living it again. Husband ki flirting wife ko dikhti nhi hai , heheheh
Did you see? He deliberately chose a cafe she crosses daily twice - isse now onwards she will smile every time she crosses it. He's been actively working towards making her smile from her heart!
Mihir's lines about sweet coffee is obvious! But see what tulsi does - when he says his coffee is sweet because she tasted it first, she wants to sweeten her tea the same way and he instead delivers one of his most delicious lines - about 38+ years of her tea.
Ghar pe tulsi ke haath ki chai peeta hai roz - aaj bol bhi diya - tea i only like yours. Note he's having coffee not tea when outside.
In all these attentiveness he has seen her lost in something he questioned and when learnt its about Rithik , he said he is given him an assignment probably took responsibility of guiding Rithik prosper professionally. Tulsi admiring his thoughts and the decision he took for Ritik on his own.
Correct - Jab se tulsi ko kho ke paaya hai, even when she wasn't even acknowledging him but staying under the same roof- all his focus is on her only. He can guage her moods v v well!
Somewhere, Mihir is advancing at his romance lessons and Tulsi is still with her basics- math, while Mihir has learnt addition , multiplication and finding ways to weigh and gauge his feelings and bring it in action when he touched her curls affectionately.No madam, tulsi is a phd in flirting and leading him on - as I explained above🤣🤣
That - him tucking the curls behind her ear and his touch lingering - was a kind of closing the loop.. which started with her taking them out of her bun.. notice - she did something tiny for him and he made full use of it!
Omg, kids these days are so stubborn its very difficult to handle and make them understand, of course parents know how to trick them , but this generation kids very much into what they want and gets upset if it is not served. Timsy is one such example, good that they could handle the situation by bribing her something else to compensate. Bacchoan ko wo ek hota hai na koi ghar ka bada bahar se kya leke aayega, usska wait , excitement and happiness when they get it so natural.
Glad I could portray today's kids well through Timsy. Yes kids are too stubborn these days- Jo chahiye woh bas chahiye! Bribing, samjhana sab karna padta hai tab bhi grudgingly maante hain
Tulsi noticed Mithali -sehmi hui, lowest pitch while talking and quiet. She started a conversation but couldn't reach the end point as Mithali was not in a mood to discuss this with Tulsi or any one yet.
Kya bolegi woh tulsi koi that I overheard when you and Ritik were talking!
Then comes the dining area , Gautam's silken face , angry and unhappy moods. Every one notices but had no courage but to live with it. Then Mihir assuring Tulsi he himself will handle , Tulsi worries for Mihir as well as Gautam. However , Mihir has conversed with his son like a friend , helped him ease out the frustration. Mihir shared his experience- life is all about accepting failures , owning and then rebuilding, get going, one failure is not the end of the world. There are thousands yet to explore and conquer. Good message.
Correct! She was very surprised ki Mihir khud imitative le raha tha - Gautam ko itne bure mood mein sambhalne ka - she was scared ki woh aur na ukhad jaaye. But Mihir knew agar woh nahi karega toh tulsi will have to deal with Gautam like she's been dealing with every family member and even outsiders all her life while he was busy with his business and sometimes in his own world or ego. Now he's slowly lessening his work so mentally he's freer than tulsi who has her hands full with a growing business and running the home and mending the almost broken family so, he's trying to reduce her burden by doing as much as he can on his own.
Tulsi underestimated Mihir's negotiation capabilities as a father , but here Mihir passed in distinction to deal with Gautam and bring him back to normalcy.
Correct. She was pleasantly surprised when Mihir actually succeeded with Gautam.
Tulsi thinking on her new found relationship, her love for Mihir, though her stand was completely opposite when she entered SN, she has closed all the doors for him, But that one incident of Mihir collapsing , she hasn't witnessed but accidentally overheard Shibha and Chachi's conversation, how her heart is stuck at that and continued to calm him in anyways possible. Probably not as a wife technically but as a person whom she loved unconditionally, she is worried but not in a position to display it to the world or to her own self.
yes. Initially her intention was only to give some kind of her presence to him - after overhearing that talk between Shobha and gayatri that he needs her the most and can't even look at her even though she's under same roof. She hadn't meant to even talk to him. In fact if he had tried talking, she would have backed off. The fact that he respected the boundaries she set - that's what made her trust him again - as I wrote a few times, she never doubted his love - the problem was always respect and trust.
Mihir voluntarily solving most of the issues at home himself , Tulsi accused him of not being changed and for taking unilateral decisions, however here he looks more sorted and takes unilateral decisions if he can find a solution to it and the rest is shared and discussed with her. She hurt him during her emotional break down or pained by the issues her kids are going thru because of them. she knew it she shouted and accused unreasonably , at some point doubted his abilities. However she is falling for this even more every positive change he had brought to her life, his kids life and to the balcony as a couple. She is more satisfied with her life to have such a man as her partner-not perfect but accepted I'm with his flaws and she is fallen for his charms again undoubtedly.
Absolutely! 44 years ago bhi they fell in love but Abhi wala is very different - they are falling again - this time deeper and more mature form of love.
Probably, they are actually living their time now as Chachi rightly said. They are doing things for each other now, Mihir pampering her more than ever, he values her now, she is liking it more than words could describe her happiness.
Yes exactly as chachi said, this is the time they can actually enjoy their life together as a couple.
The two contrasting couple , one who has found love and the other who had closed doors for it. It's beautifully written Tulsi falling in love at this age and Rithik has no heart to find something called LOVE.
So glad that contrast came out well enough!
Mitali and Tulsi's conversation- Tulsi offering her help or suggesting her to go along Pari or Shobha "ki humein pata hai sahi raasta kya hai... lekin use lena itna difficult hota hai... kyunki humein pata hai hum akele ho jaayenge." Mitali has become sensitive and sensible here. She has a fear of being alone , loosing someone whom with she lived under the same roof for 5years.
More than losing Ritik, she is afraid of losing Timsy and Tulsi.
(Mithali's change in tone, behavior , hesitation , worry , sadness is not seen by Ritik, while Tulsi witnessed changes in Mihir, or vice versa Mihir has seen Tulsi more closely than before , has seen her behaving with him naturally, beautiful comparison. )
Ritik and Mitali had nothing between them except manipulation! In fact Mitali even refused to share a bed with him once Timsy was born.
on the other hand TuHir are not only finding what they always had between them but also building something better on top of it.After contemplating with her heart and mind many times , Mitali gathered courage to talk about setting Ritik free of this relationship, not to burden him. However saying it out to Tulsi is another challenge, Tulsi's reaction on hearing Divorce is of any normal Indian parent would do. Well cultured Indian parents support divorce only when either of the party is physically , mentally harassed and abused constantly. Otherwise , the thought is to have patience and get adjusted and accustomed to the person. Somewhere the elders advise both the couple to work out and resolve their differences.
Yes exactly, mushkil se Mitali has got the courage to do the right thing (but again considering Timsy, is that the right thing?) and tulsi bhi according to her own generation sahi hi hai. But note - woh apne opinions sirf bata rahi hai thop nahi rahi.
Writer,This chapter has been a great stuff, many logical and sensitive things were spoken. Aisa lag aha hai writer has hidden couple counselor capabilities too. I truly enjoyed reading this chapter, the perspectives, expectations and dynamics change couple to couple. Each live with their own problems , deal with their own routine and mental stress of losing the budding relationship.
@bold - 🤣🤣counselling se mera door door tak koi rishta nahi and couple - u know I'm not even married (already middle aged so ab sawaal bhi nahi 🤣🤣)
So happy to know u enjoyed this chapter and the different aspects and relationships!
Agar reader ki dil ki raftar har emotion ke saath jud jaata hai , uss emotion ko feel karpata, hai to ussko baar baar padhne ki iccha hoti hai to , wo emotion aapko baar baar sochne pe , uss bhav ko accept karne ke liye mazboor karta ho, uss story ki part aapke dimag me ghoomta resta ho to, ye kuch khaas hi hai. Awesome.
🥰 isse acha compliment ho hi nahi Sakta thankkkkl yoooouuuu❤️❤️
I know , how much you invested for each scene, I am speechless and overwhelmed by this fantastic piece of work.
Thank you dear, I am truly touched ki aapko mera hardwork and emotional investment dikh raha hai. You know how difficult it is to write when all I get is just 2 reviews some times. Just u both keeping me going.
I can only thank you, Many Thanks for letting me read this masterpiece of a story.
My pleasure dear ❤️
Thank you for making my efforts feel worth it.
छाया है मन पे मेरे मदहोश रहना तेरा
मेरे ही तनको मिला तेरी बाहो का फ़ेरा
दूरी सही न जाये,
चैन कहीं ना आये
चलना है अब तो तेरी पलको के छाये छाये
बस ना चले रे काम सवेरे
लेके तेरा नाम दिल धड़कता है बार बार क्या कीजै
आ गया जो, किसी पे प्यार, क्या कीजै
दिल तो है दिल, दिल का ऐतबार, क्या कीज
Wow I again rediscovered a beautiful song due to you.
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