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Posted: 4 days ago
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Phir wahi sab huwa...Everything unfolded just as before...Part 5

Veer and Bani attended the puja.

After the puja They got inside the car to go back home.

Suddenly a bright golden light flashed before their eyes.

A different lifetime began returning to them as flashes of memories.

Flashback...

Years ago...

Ranveer and Ishani had been inseparable friends.

They laughed together...

studied together.But unknown to Ishani during the combined studies also Ranveer's eyes were fixed on her.

He loved her secretly.But he never confessed.

Her happiness mattered more to him than his own feelings.



One afternoon...

They sat beneath a large banyan tree.

Ishani laughed after losing another game of chess.

Ishani: I can never beat you.

Ranveer smiled.

Ranveer: Maybe one day.

Ishani playfully threw a flower at him.

Ranveer caught it

and smiled.She also smiled cutely.



Time passed.

One day...

Ishani met Chirag at a party.He was the one who initiated their conversation.

He was charming,confident and spoke sweetly.Ishani got impressed with him after talking to him.

Chirag:It's a pleasure meeting you.

Ishani:I am also happy to have met you.

Soon they fell in love.

Chirag held Ishani's hands.

Chirag: I promise to keep you happy forever.

Ishani smiled.

Ishani: I believe you.

They embraced each other.

From a distance Ranveer watched them silently.

Though his heart broke he smiled for her happiness.



Months later...

Ishani and Chirag got married.

Ranveer attended the wedding with a smile that hid unbearable pain.

He wished them a happy life.

Ranveer:I wish both of you a very happy married life.

They smiled.


But after the marriage everything changed.

Ishani slowly noticed strange financial documents,Property papers,forged signatures and suspicious transactions.

One night she confronted Chirag.

Ishani: Were you trying to take my property?

Chirag's smile disappeared.

Chirag: So...you finally figured it out.

Ishani: You never loved me...did you?

Chirag looked at her.

Chirag: I loved your wealth.Nothing else.

Ishani was shattered.

Ishani:You cheater!How dare you?I will not leave you.

With a smirk he held her shoulder tight.

Suddenly Chirag pushed her and locked the doors.

He set the curtains on fire.

Flames spread rapidly through the room.

Ishani screamed for help.

At that very moment, Ranveer arrived at the house to visit them.

Smoke poured from the windows.

Ranveer opened the door openly.

He looked at Ishani with horror.

Ishani was trapped inside the burning room.

Ranveer: Ishani!

He rushed toward her.

But the flames spread too quickly.

He tried to reach her.

Ishani looked at him through the fire.She was crying.

Their eyes met one last time.

Then the flames surrounded her completely.

Ranveer screamed...

Ranveer: No!

He turned toward Chirag angrily.

Ranveer:I will not spare you.

He attacked Chirag.

The two fought fiercely inside the burning house.

Chirag pushed Ranveer toward the flames.

As Ranveer fell he grabbed Chirag.

Ranveer: If innocent lives end today an evil person like you won't escape either.

Chirag was shocked.

Both men fell into the fire.

The burning house collapsed around them.


Present...

The visions ended.

Veer and Bani opened their eyes at the same time.

They stared at each other with a stunned expression.

Veer: Ranveer...I was Ranveer.

Bani nodded slowly, tears filling her eyes.

Bani: And I was Ishani.

They both remembered every moment.

The friendship,the unspoken love,the betrayal,the fire,the sacrifice.

Bani said tearfully:You sacrificed your life for me Ranveer.

Veer:I killed Chirag...I killed Jay in the previous life for killing you.

Bani nodded emotionally.

Bani: Chirag...

Veer finished her sentence.

Veer: ...is Jay.In the last life, he destroyed our lives through greed.

Bani looked toward the office building.

Bani: And in this life he is repeating the same thing.Like we thought Jay did not change suddenly due to greed.He was always like this.We just became late in seeing his true colour.

Veer looked at her with determination.

Veer: We couldn't stop him then.But we can stop him now.

Bani nodded.

Bani: We will expose every crime he has committed.Not for revenge,but to protect innocent people and ensure the truth comes to light.

Veer:Yes.

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Posted: 4 days ago
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Posted: 4 days ago
#23

Thanks for the pm and update


Part 5

Terrific update... pleasantly written

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Posted: 4 days ago
#24

The pattern repeats. How ill they expose Jay without getting hurt in the process?

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Posted: 2 days ago
#25

So I was right about the past

Now Jay should be punsihed

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Posted: 19 hours ago
#26

Phir wahi sab huwa...Everything unfolded just as before...Part 6

Thank you everyone for supporting this story.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scene,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.



Veer and Bani sat on a park bench after work.

Bani looked at Veer.

Bani: Do you think Jay remembers his previous life too?

Veer thought for a moment.

Veer: If he does...that would explain why he became our enemy again.

Bani: But we need proof.

Veer smiled.

Veer: Then let's make him reveal it himself.

The next day...

Veer deliberately walked past Jay's desk.

Veer casually said,

Veer: Strange...Sometimes I feel fire can follow a person across lifetimes.

Jay's fingers froze over the keyboard for a split second.

Veet enjoyed watching Jay panick.


Suddenly Jay said: You are talking nonsense.

Veer walked away with a smirk.



Later...

Bani met Jay in the cafeteria.

She intentionally said,

Bani: I had a strange dream.

A burning house...Someone named Chirag...

and someone named Ishani.

Jay accidentally dropped the coffee cup.

It shattered on the floor.Fear appeared in his eyes.

Bani noticed everything.

Jay thought:Why is Bani behaving as if nothing bad happened between us?I tried to kill her.Still...



That evening...

Veer and Bani confronted Jay in the empty conference room.

Veer: Stop pretending.You remember everything from the previous life.Our lives are connected to each other since our previous birth.

Jay: And if I do?

Bani: Then admit it.

Jay:You finally figured it out.Yes...

I remembered our previous birth from the very beginning.I remembered Ranveer.I remembered Ishani.I remembered the fire.And I also remembered that I lost because of both of you.

So this time I decided to win before either of you could stop me.

Bani looked at him in disbelief.

Bani: You ruined two lives in the past...

and you are repeating the same crimes.

Jay: History belongs to the winner.

Veer: Not this time.

Jay smirked.

Jay: You think you can defeat me?Go ahead.Try.

You Will never prove anything.

He walked away laughing.



The next morning...

Veer and Bani decided they needed someone they could trust.

They approached their colleague, Shikar.

Veer told him everything.

The leaked company secrets...the attempted murder and even the memories of their previous life.

Shikar listened quietly.

Shikar: Whether or not I understand your memories or not,I know one thing.

Jay has betrayed this company.So I will help you.

Veer and Bani smiled.


The three of them secretly worked together.Using audit records,security footage,emails,financial transactions and system logs they collected enough evidence to expose Jay's fraud.

The company arranged its annual anniversary.

Employees gathered in the decorated auditorium. Music...lights...and laughter filled the hall.

One of the performances was announced.

Host: Next...our colleagues Veer, Bani and Shikar present a dance drama.

The lights dimmed.

The song "Ek Haseena Thi" (Karzz)played in the auditorium.

Veer portrayed Ranveer.

Bani portrayed Ishani.

Shikar portrayed Chirag.


Ek hasina thi ek deewana tha

Kya umar kya sama kya zamana tha

Ek hasina thi hasina thi

Ek deewana tha deewana tha

Kya umar kya sama kya zamana tha


Without speaking a word their performance told the story.

Ranveer and Ishani's friendship.

Ranveer's silent love.

Ishani falling in love with Chirag.


Ek din woh mile roj milne lage

Ek din woh mile roj milne lage

Phir mohabbat huyi Bas kayamat huyi

Kho gaye tum kaha


Their marriage.

Chirag's greed.


Sunke yeh dastan Log hairan hain

Kyun ki anjan hain

Ishk ki woh gali baat jisaki chali

Uss gali me meraa aana jana tha

Ek hasina thi ek deewana tha

Kya umar thi kya sama

Tha kya zamana tha

Ek hasina thi ek deewana tha

Ishani confronting Chirag.

Chirag attacking her.

Uss deewane ne kaha

Uss deewane ne kaha

Suno janewafa

Yeh falak yeh jamin

Tere bin kuchh nahi

Tujhpe marta hu mai

Pyar karta hu mai

Baat kuchh aur thi

Woh najar chor thi

Usake dil me chhupi

Chah daulat ki thi

Pyar kaa woh fakat ek bahana tha

Ek hasina thi ek deewana tha

Kya umar thi kya sama Tha

kya zamana tha

Ek hasina thi ek deewana tha

Chirag burning Ishani alive.

The burning house.

Ranveer trying to save Ishani.

The final struggle in the flames.

Ranveer,Ishani and Chirag dying.

Bewafa yar ne apni

Mehbub se aisa dhoka kiya

Aisa dhoka kiya dhoka dhoka

Aisa dhoka kiya dhoka dhoka

Aisa dhoka kiya jaher usako diya

Dhoka dhoka dhoka Dhoka jaher usako diya

Mar gayi woh jawan

Mar gayi woh jawan

The audience watched in complete silence.

Then the second half of the performance began.

The backdrop changed to a modern office.

Veer became Veer.

Bani became Bani.

Shikar portrayed Jay.


Abb suno dastan Janm leke kahi phir

Woh pahuchi wahi

Shakl anjan thi akl hairan thi

Samna jab huwa Samna jab huwa

The dance showed Jay and Bani falling in love.

Jay stealing confidential files...

accepting illegal payments...betraying the company...

and attempting to kill Bani.


Phir wahi sab huwa

Usape yeh karj tha

Usaka yeh farj tha farj

Ko karj apna chukana tha

La la la la la la la la la la La la la la la la la la la la(Karzz).

The audience looked at one another in confusion.

Jay suddenly stood up from his seat.

Jay: Stop this!

The music stopped.

Everyone turned toward him.

Jay angrily walked onto the stage.

Jay: What are you trying to prove?

Veer calmly picked up a remote.

Veer: We are not proving anything.

We Are revealing the truth.

The projector screen lit up.

Security camera footage appeared.

Jay exchanging confidential pen drives.

Bank transfer records.

Emails containing stolen company data.

Audio recordings of his confession.

The attempted attack on Bani.

One piece of evidence after another filled the screen.

The entire auditorium was silent because of shock .

Jay's face turned pale.

The company owner slowly stood up.

Owner: Jay...I trusted you.I treated you like family.

And this is how you repaid that trust?

Jay had no answer.

Owner: Your greed has damaged this company and endangered innocent lives.

Security!

Two security officers entered immediately.

Soon after the police arrived.

Jay looked at Veer and Bani with hatred.

Jay:You both will repent.

Veer:Never Jay.

Bani:It's pathetic that even now you have no regrets.Once a Satan is always Satan.

Jay: This is not over.

Veer replied calmly,

Veer: It ended the moment you chose greed over humanity.

The police handcuffed Jay and took him away.




Months passed.

One pleasant evening...

Veer invited Bani to the lakeside where they often spent time together.

Veer smiled nervously.

Veer: There was something I couldn't say in my previous life.I couldn't say it as Ranveer

and I almost lost the chance again as Veer.

Bani...I have loved you for much longer than this lifetime.Will you give me the chance to spend the rest of this life with you?

Bani's eyes became teary.

She held his hands.

Bani: In my previous life,I never knew how deeply Ranveer loved Ishani.

I spent that life loving the wrong person.That mistake cost all of us everything. But this life gave me another chance.When everything became upside down in my lifeyou never left my side.You protected me.You respected me.You loved me without expecting anything in return.This time I don't want to repeat Ishani's mistake.I love you, Veer...always.

Veer's eyes filled with tears of happiness.

Veer: Really?

Bani smiled.

Bani: Really.

He embraced her tightly.

Days later...

They were sitting in a park.

Bani held his hand romantically as they watched the sunset.Bani looked at him with eyes full of love.

One evening...

Veer and Bani danced together.

They were simply happy to be together.

Veer and Bani got married.

The End.

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Posted: 16 hours ago
#27


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Posted: 7 hours ago
#28

Part 6

Marvellous update... finely written


Great end

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Posted: an hour ago
#29

They pulled together all the evidence and exposed Jay in front of everyone. Good one.

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