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The pledge scene was interesting. Sad that because of his pledge he cant accept Preesha. Kakoon and Preesha’s scene was expected. Preesha’s looks are so beautiful after the makeover. Rudra and Betty’s first meeting was cute. Rudra and Betty exploring India was nice. In the chocolate scene Preesha is easily recognizable, I did a blunder to not change her skin tone. Rudra saving Preesha from falling was romantic. Rudra’s imagination with Betty was sweet. Perfect pics. Waiting for next.
Thank you everyone for supporting this story.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scene,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.
The credit for the RuSha edits goes to lis Sulastri .
The credit for Tejasswi's edits goes to the unknown editor.
Kakoon was doing Preesha's make up.
Kakoon:I am glad that nobody recognized you.But why are you doing this?

Preesha:Just know that I am doing this for my love.

Kakoon:Anything is fair in love.So you will win your love.
Preesha smiled.
A few weeks passed by.
Rudraksh and Betty had become very close to each other.
One evening, they sat beside the resort lake watching the sunset.
Rudraksh looked nervous.
Betty noticed.
Betty: Why are you so quiet today?
Rudraksh: Because there is something I want to tell you.
Betty smiled.
Betty: Tell me.
Rudraksh held her hand.
Rudraksh: Betty, before you came into my life, I never believed I could fall in love.
I love you.
Betty's eyes filled with happy tears.
For months she had dreamed of hearing those words.
Betty: I love you too, Rudraksh.
Rudraksh smiled and hugged her tightly.
Slight rain beautified the location.
(Created by lis Sulastri and Salley with the help of AI).

A few days later...
Preesha was in her room removing her contact lenses and wig.
Suddenly the door opened.
Rudraksh walked in.
He froze after seeing the reality.
Instead of the blonde-haired foreign girl it was Preesha who was
standing before him.He remembered him rejecting Preesha's proposal.
Rudraksh stared at her in shock.
Rudraksh: Preesha?
Preesha closed her eyes.
She did not have the courage to look at him.
Rudraksh looked at the wig lying on the table.Then at the contact lenses.
Everything became clear to him.
Rudraksh: Betty... is Preesha?
Preesha nodded slowly.
Preesha: Yes.
Rudraksh was shattered in a second.
Rudraksh: You lied to me.
Preesha's eyes filled with tears.
Preesha: I did not intend to lie.My intention was not bad.I only wanted you to love me.
Rudraksh felt hurt and betrayed.
Rudraksh shouted at her: Everything was fake.You are also fake.

Preesha became upset.
Preesha: My disguise was fake.But my love was never fake.
Rudraksh:I don't want to hear anything.
He walked away angrily leaving Preesha crying alone.
For several days Rudraksh avoided her.
Yet everywhere he looked, he remembered her.
The way she smiled...
(Created by lis Sulastri and Salley with the help of AI).

The way she cared for him....
(Created by lis Sulastri and Salley with the help of AI).

One evening, Bunty visited him.
Rudraksh told him everythig.
Bunty: So according to your logic, every Indian woman is your sister?
Rudraksh nodded.
Bunty: Then how were your parents married?
Rudraksh was silent.
Bunty: And how are millions of Indians getting married every year?
Rudraksh kept silent giving him a confused expression.
Bunty: The pledge teaches respect and unity, not that every woman in the country is literally your sister.
You rejected the woman who genuinely loved you because you misunderstood one sentence from the Indian pledge.
Rudraksh became dull.
Bunty: Preesha became Betty because she loved you.
She was same.She did not change her character though she changed her hairstyle,skin complexion and speech accent.Don't lose the woman who loves you like crazy.

Rudraksh remembered the moments he spent with Betty/Preesha.
Rudraksh:The woman I loved was never Betty.It was always Preesha.Though I was attracted towards Betty,it was Betty's character which I loved.That character belonged to Preesha.So the woman I loved was Preesha.I am so foolish to reject Preesha.
The next day Rudraksh rushed to Preesha's house.
He found her sitting sadly in the garden.
She stood up immediately.
Preesha: Why are you here?
Rudraksh walked toward her.
Rudraksh: To apologize.
Preesha was stunned.
Rudraksh: I was angry because I felt betrayed.
But now I understand everything. Betty stole my heart.But Preesha owns it.
Tears rolled down her cheeks.Rudraksh wiped them softly.
Rudraksh: I finally realized that one Indian woman can become my wife while every other woman can be my sister.
Preesha laughed through her tears.
Preesha: Finally you got rid of her ridicolous thought that Indian women can only be your sisters.
Rudraksh was embarrassed.
They both laughed.
Then they embraced each other sweetly.

Rudraksh and Preesha went out for ice cream.
They both were enjoying their icecream.

Preesha intentionally took a bite from Rudraksh's ice cream.
Rudraksh: Thief!
Preesha giggled.
Preesha: What is yours is mine.
Rudraksh quickly stole her ice cream.
Preesha: Hey!What are you doing?
Rudraksh: What is yours is mine too.
They ended up laughing.
Rudraksh and Preesha were sipping tea in the beautiful resort.
Suddenly Rudraksh surprised Preesha by taking the guitar and singing.She was immersed in it.

Preesha:I fell in love with you hearing you sing.Though only occasionally you do stage shows for me you are the biggest Rock star.
Rudraksh smiled.
One evening they were walking when it suddenly started raining.
Preesha began enjoying the rain.
Rudraksh smiled.
He removed his jacket and placed it over her head.
Preesha: Then you'll get wet.
Rudraksh: I don't mind.
Preesha moved closer.
Preesha: Then we can both get wet.
She pulled him into the rain.
They laughed while splashing water at each other.
Then they danced together

Near the resort a cartoonist was making cartoons of every customer.Preesha also went there.The cartoonist made her cute cartoon painting.Rudraksh took the photograph of Preesha who was sitting near the cartoon painting as she posed for him.

In the resort kitchen one morning Preesha was kneading the dough.Rudraksh entered the kitchen quietly.He took wheat flour and pasted it on her face.

Preesha looked at him:Rudraksh!You are a prankster.
He laughed.
She smiled.
Rudraksh rested his chin on her shoulder.
Rudraksh: Smells good.
Preesha: The food or me?
Rudraksh pretended to think.
Rudraksh: Difficult choice.
Preesha lightly hit his arm.
They both laughed.
After a bike ride they sat together on the bike.
Rudraksh gave a red rose to Preesha.

Rudraksh: You know something?
Preesha: What?
Rudraksh smiled.
Rudraksh: Whether you are Preesha or Betty...
You are still the most beautiful woman I have ever met.
Preesha blushed.
Preesha: And you are still the most foolish man I have ever met.
Rudraksh laughed.
Rudraksh and Preesha were standing in the beautiful garden.
Preesha was holding a flower bouquet in her hand.
Preesha:Rudraksh,once my proposal to you got flopped.But now I want to propose to you again.
Will you marry me?
Rudraksh:If I don't marry you,whom will I marry as you are not my sister anymore?
They both laughed.
A stronger breeze swept across the meadow.
The petals danced in the air like tiny butterflies.
Flower petals got blown in the air and fell on Rudraksh's palm.
Preesha: Look, even the flowers want to be part of our story.
Rudraksh chuckled.
Rudraksh: Or maybe they are jealous because they are no not able to closer to me like you are closer to me.
Preesha rolled her eyes playfully.
Preesha: So now these flower petals are trying to touch you.
Rudraksh looked at Preesha mischievously.
Rudraksh:You are so possessive about me that you don't even want the flower petals to touch me.
Preesha smiled.
Rudraksh: Don't worry.I will drive away these petals from my body.
She smiled.
Both leaned forward and gently blew air at the petals resting on Rudraksh's palm.

But more flower petals rained down around them.One fell on Preesha's palm.
Preesha blew air at it.

One petal landed in Preesha's hair.
Rudraksh:Guess this flower petal has a huge crush on you.
Preesha:So you are also jealous?
They both laughed.
Rudraksh carefully tucked the petal behind her ear.She smiled.
They simply gazed into each other's eyes while the petals continued floating around them like a blessing from nature itself.
The petals were flying in the air making the atmosphere more romantic.Rudraksh took the flower bouquet from Preesha with a sweet smile.
Kakoon dressed up Preesha as a bride.
Kakoon:I am very happy that you got your love.Happy married life!

Preesha smiled:Thank you.
Rudraksh and Preesha got married happily.

They had a grand reception party in the ship.Rudraksh and Preesha enjoyed having wine together.

After some months...
An open café….
Preesha sat at a small outdoor table.She was flipping through a magazine. A cup of coffee was on the table which was untouched.
She smiled at him.
Rudraksh stood behind her with a smile.He placed an arm around her shoulders.
Preesha smiled.

Preesha:You are late.
Rudraksh pulled a chair closer and sat beside her.
Rudraksh:I am sorry.I was busy with the people at the resort.
Preesha:I understand.
Rudraksh:Why did’nt you have your coffee?
Preesha:I was waiting for you to come.I wanted to have coffee with you.That’s a different fun.
He smiled.
The waiter arrived with another coffee.
Rudraksh and Preesha picked up the cups and took a sip.
Preesha:Nice coffee.Right?
Rudraksh:Yes.But nothing can beat your coffee.
Preesha smiled.
Rudraksh held her hand across the table.
Preesha looked at him.
Preesha:Why are you staring at me?
Rudraksh:Because I like looking at you.
She was blushing.
Preesha:You are impossible.
Rudraksh: I'm your impossible.
Preesha laughed.
She rested her head lightly against his shoulder.
Rudraksh:You know what my favorite place is?
Preesha:Where?
Rudraksh:Right here.
Preesha smiled:This café?
Rudraksh:No.Wherever you you are sitting.
They shared a romantic eye lock.
They sat together watching the star lit sky with moonlight falling over them.They are grateful that love had finally taught Rudraksh that love is beyond the school pledge.

The end
I really liked all the edits. I find it funny when Preesha got exposed to Rudraksh. Haha. Poor Rudraksh felt betrayed but he is blinded by his pledge. Glad that Bunty gave him a good advice and explained things logically. Good that Rudraksh went to her house and apologized to Preesha and his embarrassing joke was hilarious. Haha. Their scenes are very nice. You could have added YHC song in rain dance. Surprising that Betty is their makeup artist for wedding. Preesha is grateful for her. Preesha proposing again to Rudraksh was cute but Rudraksh somehow made it funny. Their post wedding scenes are lovely.
My favourite character is Bunty as he is the reason for Rusha's union.
Favorite scene is Rudraksh going to her house and tell her that except her, all Indian girls are hix sisters. Haha. Proposal scene was nice too.
Thanks for the pm
Part 2
Majestic update... well written
Bunty knocked some sense into his friend. he showed him the error in his logic.
Sorry.I did'nt think about adding songs.
You mean kakoon as the make up artist.right?
Thanks a lot.
I really liked all the edits. I find it funny when Preesha got exposed to Rudraksh. Haha. Poor Rudraksh felt betrayed but he is blinded by his pledge. Glad that Bunty gave him a good advice and explained things logically. Good that Rudraksh went to her house and apologized to Preesha and his embarrassing joke was hilarious. Haha. Their scenes are very nice. You could have added YHC song in rain dance. Surprising that Betty is their makeup artist for wedding. Preesha is grateful for her. Preesha proposing again to Rudraksh was cute but Rudraksh somehow made it funny. Their post wedding scenes are lovely.
My favourite character is Bunty as he is the reason for Rusha's union.
Favorite scene is Rudraksh going to her house and tell her that except her, all Indian girls are hix sisters. Haha. Proposal scene was nice too.
Common sense finally ruled and Preesha got her love after all.
This story was too short...But I loved Rudrakh's friend though he had the smallest but most impactful role and he put sense into Rudraksh and brought them together.
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