A TuHir FF: Never Your Wife Again!! Ch 7 on pg 13: Bees Din - Page 10

Garima timsy conversation was cute.I liked tulsi making Timsy understand that beauty doesn't depend on the colour.Mitali admitting that timsy prefers Tulsi's food was nice.glad that tulsi hasnt stopped loving Mihir. Tulsi talking to Baa was emotional. Tuhir knew that each other hadn't slept and there was silence.it was emotional.

Whenever you get time or early if possible ❤️

Originally posted by: ElitePerfumer

Hi all, when do you want the next chapter - let me tell you it’s a dhamaka chapter - a totally different tone from chapters 2 to 5!

I’m just asking because I’m very busy till 8th or 9th! So next (chapter 7) will be only on 10th probably! So you want a gap before chapter 6 or after?

Please tell me - when do I post it? chapter 6 is almost ready

I apologize if I forgot to tag some of my regular readers 🙏🏻

Originally posted by: ElitePerfumer

I apologize if I forgot to tag some of my regular readers 🙏🏻

Hey... I haven't been able to read the last two chapters yet. Was down with flu over the weekend which caused work to pile up. I was planning to catch up today... Apologies that I haven't been able to respond. Do continue with the updates

Originally posted by: TianaWrites

Hey... I haven't been able to read the last two chapters yet. Was down with flu over the weekend which caused work to pile up. I was planning to catch up today... Apologies that I haven't been able to respond. Do continue with the updates

oh I hope you are better now! Please take care of yourself!

and yes.. now I will be eagerly awaiting your reviews on last 2 chapters

Chapter 4

My favorite part was Mihir packing her lunch and the last part where he felt had he violated her privacy. It showed a man yearning and pining yet wasn't allowed to love openly. I felt the heaviness there. Beautifully written.

I still can't tolerate Mitali as the show has degraded her to a level beyond belief.

The kids are cute... I like Rithik here. Somehow he feels much more real to me.

Chapter 5

Beautiful beautiful beautiful... they just touched... it just happened and oh the beauty of it. Muscle memory stays for a long time and you captured it beautifully. I enjoyed it very much.

I loved the fair dark conversation and Tulsi explaining to the child. Mitali feeling insecure that her daughter likes Tulsi's food made me feel for her... Made her more human than the character we see on the show stuffing fast food to the kid... Good that atleast somewhere there's a little good in her in this story. You finally made me feel something for her too. Good writing.

Overall beautiful chapter... I think this is one of my favorites will re read this.

Chapter 5

Beautiful beautiful beautiful... they just touched... it just happened and oh the beauty of it. Muscle memory stays for a long time and you captured it beautifully. I enjoyed it very much.

I loved the fair dark conversation and Tulsi explaining to the child. Mitali feeling insecure that her daughter likes Tulsi's food made me feel for her... Made her more human than the character we see on the show stuffing fast food to the kid... Good that atleast somewhere there's a little good in her in this story. You finally made me feel something for her too. Good writing.

Overall beautiful chapter... I think this is one of my favorites will re read this.

Tiana, thank you for the lovely reviews!! Is it okay if i respond to them after 3-4 days?

chapter 6 is ready - just need some time to proofread it and will try to find it tomorrow some time. After I post the chapter I may be MIA for 2-3 days - busy with work!!

Originally posted by: TianaWrites

Chapter 4

My favorite part was Mihir packing her lunch and the last part where he felt had he violated her privacy. It showed a man yearning and pining yet wasn't allowed to love openly. I felt the heaviness there. Beautifully written.

I still can't tolerate Mitali as the show has degraded her to a level beyond belief.

The kids are cute... I like Rithik here. Somehow he feels much more real to me.

Unreserving:

Thank you so much for this beautiful review!

Did you see something? Tulsi earlier rejected the Tulsi plant offered by Mihir! But she accepted the lunch sent by him! Tiny weeny progress there or tulsi just being the practical woman she is? It was lunchtime so she shouldn’t skip lunch! Did she thaw 1% or just dint want to skip lunch? My readers’ interpretations - upto you all!

That tissue scene is my fave too - especially on a character who’s supposed to be around 65 years old! If he had just kissed the tissue, it could’ve have been cheesy but the fact that he questioned his act immediately- that made all the difference, dint it? The heaviness will only increase before it gets lighter!

I’m trying to do justice to all characters be it Ritik, Pari Angad etc. But it’s a really tough job! I have so much to write on TuHir! Another challenge for me is to write the kids dialogues - kids are way too innocent- so it takes really a lot of time to think what a kid can say in so and so situation!!

Mitali is a very complex character here! As you see in chapter 6!

thank you again