Tum se Tum tak episodes - EDT #3 - Page 27

hey everyone since kashmir episode many things were not consistent... i feel makera make a rush .... i wanted to change tge plot from their and have wriiten something please read it and let me know whether i should continue or not ...

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A GOODBYE

OR

BEGINNING OF SOMETHING NEW

evening 8pm , kashmir

anu is in her room , thinking of all the things happening around her ... she finally succeeded to rescue her arya sir .. he is back safe and sound resting in his room .. meera and jhende taken the charge leaving her alone ..

she is craving to sit with him . but knowing how meera will react she step back .. finally things are sorted down for her .. she wipe down her tears and started packing her bags as her seats are booked for next morning.

"itna to smjh gye hun sir ke ap bolenge nhe kbhe , aur main ab shayd isse zaade nhe handle kr paunge " . anu's eyes again shed some tears but she composed herself ...

meanwhile in another room arya's sleep got disturbed he wake up in the middle his body is extremely paining .. and one word utter from his mouth is

"Anu "

" mujhe aise kyu lga arya sir ko need hai mere .unhe shayd kuch chahiye ho" anu was restless now . dellima to see him once or stay back will not let her sleep

" ek baar dekh lete hun . ab pata nhe iske baad kbhe mil pau ya nhe " anu wrapped the shawl around her and locked her room and went towards arya's room .

his room was not locked maybe jhende and meera left it open so that they can see him . she slowly went near his room and open the door to see arya ... whether he is fine or not ..

arya was trying to get up from the bed but his right feet is bit swollen she hurriedly went near him and help him .

arya got shocked how every time anu sense his pain ..

" apko mujhe bula lena chahiya tha sir , apko akele aise nhe uthna chahiye tha " anu scolded him .

and arya smiled ..

" bulane ke zrurat nhe pdte anu . mere sukh mein tum ho ya na hoo , takleef mei sirf tum he hote ho " he replied admiringly and anu too raised his head ..

they look each other with moist eyes ... anu broke the eye contact later on

" chale mein apko leke chlte hun " anu mutterd . she helped him till the door and stand outside .

meanwhile she cleaned arya's bed and lay down the mattress properly ...

arya came back and anu helped him to settle down properly .. she arranged his pillows as per his comfort and was about to leave when

" kuch chaiye to call kr lena sir "

" anu .... mujhe bhook lge hai " arya mutters like a small kid ..

" main kuch laate hun sir .. " anu hurriedly went to the smal kitchen available at their side and search the things which are available..

" pata nhe itne din se kuch khaya hoga ya nhe . yaha pr zaada kuch hai bhe nhe ... ab kya bnau instant ......... " anu was busy talking to herself and her eyes looking at the packet food available to her ..unwilling to gave this to her arya sir ..

" ek kaam krte hun chay aur prataha bna lete hun .. pyaaj hai uske stuff ho jayenge .. helathy bhe hai and fulfilling bhe ... "

she started preparing her meals with all her love and care ....

after 15 minutes satisfied with what she makes she went to arya's room ... she entered the room and and arya's eyes instantly open after feeling the fresh food aroma .

anu put the tray on side table and settle in front of him . she gave hot cup ☕️ of tea to arya and started feeding the paratha .

" sorry sir zaada options available nhe the mere pass " anu said and feed him .

all this time arya is just witnessing her love and care ... he ate with her hands and silently thanking his stars for sending this angel to him ...

" Anu tum ghr pr kya bolkr aye ho ... tumhare parents ne kaise allow kr diya yaha ane pr " arya asked her

and anu just freeze ...

her eyes got locked with arya's ...

her pain , her helplessness is cleary seen by him ... but she remains silent ...

"sir abhe is sb ka time nhe hai ap rest kre please .... " she replied calmly and feed him the remaining bites .. arya sip his tea and got relaxed a bit ... not knowing that these moments he is sharing with his anu will not gonna repeat any time soon ...

their destiny is again testing their patience and whom he called his love ones are the reasons behind them ...

some uneasiness settled down in him when anu was about to leave and he hold her hand .

" thode der ruk jao " arya requested with all his heart and anu could not say no .. she sit back with his arya sir ....

" sir sone ke koshish kre , neend aa jayege " anu tried to calm him down

arya lay down not willing to leave anu's hand .. meanwhile anu start caressing his head to ease him down and soon sleep embraced him calmly ..

arya was sleeping peacefully and anu is sitting beside him ... recalling alll the moments she share with him . their first auto ride , their first delhi visit.. how kiddish she was . that she invited such a big tycoon to spend his day like a normal middle class people.. their tiffin box time ... ...

everything plays around her mind ....

" kbhe socha nhe tha ke mujhe bhe pyaar hoga , apne mere zindagi mein aaake ek alag se excitement bhar di. jo shayd main bata bhe nhe sakte .. jisse duniya baat krne ke liye mrte hai maine unhe ek saadi zindagi dikhadi ...

sahe kehte hai meera mam main apko deserve nhe krte pr haan ek baat zrur kehte hun ke pyar kra hai maine apse aur humesha krunge . pr haan ab apko aur takeef nhe dunge , aur force nhe krunge ke apne feelings btaye .. mere liye itna bohot hai ke ap mere care krte ho aur humesha mere takleef mein khde miloge.. maine jante hun jhende sir and meera mam mere bare mein kya sochte hai ... pr pehle bachpane mein ye cheeze notice nhe kr rhe the .... ab smjh paa rhe hun apne problems . isliye apke miss chandni chawk ab apse dur jaa rhe hai ...

don't worry Mr south delhi main ab aur takleef nhe dunge bye ..... ""

anu silently left the room after giving a last glance to her arya sir ....

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Originally posted by: mehak-5

hey everyone since kashmir episode many things were not consistent... i feel makera make a rush .... i wanted to change tge plot from their and have wriiten something please read it and let me know whether i should continue or not ...

************************************************************************************************

A GOODBYE

OR

BEGINNING OF SOMETHING NEW

evening 8pm , kashmir

anu is in her room , thinking of all the things happening around her ... she finally succeeded to rescue her arya sir .. he is back safe and sound resting in his room .. meera and jhende taken the charge leaving her alone ..

she is craving to sit with him . but knowing how meera will react she step back .. finally things are sorted down for her .. she wipe down her tears and started packing her bags as her seats are booked for next morning.

"itna to smjh gye hun sir ke ap bolenge nhe kbhe , aur main ab shayd isse zaade nhe handle kr paunge " . anu's eyes again shed some tears but she composed herself ...

meanwhile in another room arya's sleep got disturbed he wake up in the middle his body is extremely paining .. and one word utter from his mouth is

"Anu "

" mujhe aise kyu lga arya sir ko need hai mere .unhe shayd kuch chahiye ho" anu was restless now . dellima to see him once or stay back will not let her sleep

" ek baar dekh lete hun . ab pata nhe iske baad kbhe mil pau ya nhe " anu wrapped the shawl around her and locked her room and went towards arya's room .

his room was not locked maybe jhende and meera left it open so that they can see him . she slowly went near his room and open the door to see arya ... whether he is fine or not ..

arya was trying to get up from the bed but his right feet is bit swollen she hurriedly went near him and help him .

arya got shocked how every time anu sense his pain ..

" apko mujhe bula lena chahiya tha sir , apko akele aise nhe uthna chahiye tha " anu scolded him .

and arya smiled ..

" bulane ke zrurat nhe pdte anu . mere sukh mein tum ho ya na hoo , takleef mei sirf tum he hote ho " he replied admiringly and anu too raised his head ..

they look each other with moist eyes ... anu broke the eye contact later on

" chale mein apko leke chlte hun " anu mutterd . she helped him till the door and stand outside .

meanwhile she cleaned arya's bed and lay down the mattress properly ...

arya came back and anu helped him to settle down properly .. she arranged his pillows as per his comfort and was about to leave when

" kuch chaiye to call kr lena sir "

" anu .... mujhe bhook lge hai " arya mutters like a small kid ..

" main kuch laate hun sir .. " anu hurriedly went to the smal kitchen available at their side and search the things which are available..

" pata nhe itne din se kuch khaya hoga ya nhe . yaha pr zaada kuch hai bhe nhe ... ab kya bnau instant ......... " anu was busy talking to herself and her eyes looking at the packet food available to her ..unwilling to gave this to her arya sir ..

" ek kaam krte hun chay aur prataha bna lete hun .. pyaaj hai uske stuff ho jayenge .. helathy bhe hai and fulfilling bhe ... "

she started preparing her meals with all her love and care ....

after 15 minutes satisfied with what she makes she went to arya's room ... she entered the room and and arya's eyes instantly open after feeling the fresh food aroma .

anu put the tray on side table and settle in front of him . she gave hot cup ☕️ of tea to arya and started feeding the paratha .

" sorry sir zaada options available nhe the mere pass " anu said and feed him .

all this time arya is just witnessing her love and care ... he ate with her hands and silently thanking his stars for sending this angel to him ...

" Anu tum ghr pr kya bolkr aye ho ... tumhare parents ne kaise allow kr diya yaha ane pr " arya asked her

and anu just freeze ...

her eyes got locked with arya's ...

her pain , her helplessness is cleary seen by him ... but she remains silent ...

"sir abhe is sb ka time nhe hai ap rest kre please .... " she replied calmly and feed him the remaining bites .. arya sip his tea and got relaxed a bit ... not knowing that these moments he is sharing with his anu will not gonna repeat any time soon ...

their destiny is again testing their patience and whom he called his love ones are the reasons behind them ...

some uneasiness settled down in him when anu was about to leave and he hold her hand .

" thode der ruk jao " arya requested with all his heart and anu could not say no .. she sit back with his arya sir ....

" sir sone ke koshish kre , neend aa jayege " anu tried to calm him down

arya lay down not willing to leave anu's hand .. meanwhile anu start caressing his head to ease him down and soon sleep embraced him calmly ..

arya was sleeping peacefully and anu is sitting beside him ... recalling alll the moments she share with him . their first auto ride , their first delhi visit.. how kiddish she was . that she invited such a big tycoon to spend his day like a normal middle class people.. their tiffin box time ... ...

everything plays around her mind ....

" kbhe socha nhe tha ke mujhe bhe pyaar hoga , apne mere zindagi mein aaake ek alag se excitement bhar di. jo shayd main bata bhe nhe sakte .. jisse duniya baat krne ke liye mrte hai maine unhe ek saadi zindagi dikhadi ...

sahe kehte hai meera mam main apko deserve nhe krte pr haan ek baat zrur kehte hun ke pyar kra hai maine apse aur humesha krunge . pr haan ab apko aur takeef nhe dunge , aur force nhe krunge ke apne feelings btaye .. mere liye itna bohot hai ke ap mere care krte ho aur humesha mere takleef mein khde miloge.. maine jante hun jhende sir and meera mam mere bare mein kya sochte hai ... pr pehle bachpane mein ye cheeze notice nhe kr rhe the .... ab smjh paa rhe hun apne problems . isliye apke miss chandni chawk ab apse dur jaa rhe hai ...

don't worry Mr south delhi main ab aur takleef nhe dunge bye ..... ""

anu silently left the room after giving a last glance to her arya sir ....

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You should post this in a separate post

Originally posted by: mehak-5

agree that simran is truely amazing as a supportive freind ... no comparison with jhende ..

arya's anger is justified but when anu said "main kisko apne takleef sunau" it felt connected... i really wish after all this fuss makers gace these beautiful moments where anu can just sit back with arya and live her life a bit . no worries, no tensions where she can open her heart to the fullest...

and arya can share his deepest secrets , his fears , his feelings ..

when he realize that he needs to strike balance between personal and professional life.. and need to bit more guarded for anu ..

This is so true.

In between all the twists and turns makers often forget to add some moments of peace which is honestly quite frustrating to be jumping from problem to another. We don’t see Anu unburden herself to anyone apart from Simran ( who herself is a 20 year old so doesn’t hold much power to solve Anu’s problems) .

In the Marathi version, Isha actually has great parents that genuinely loved and supported their daughter through it all even when they didn’t agree with her. At the end of the serial after the death of Vikrant Isha’s parents took their pregnant daughter home and looked after her. That’s level of support they showed. Also Isha had Vikrant to confide in for the most part.

Whereas in the case of Anu she doesn’t have supportive parents. They are the kind that would rather burden her with their own problems and go even further by imposing their wishes on her and force her to give up her happiness. Not to mention the fact that her father is a misogynist

In such a situation for anu, it would actually be nice if Anu shares her problems with Arya and he becomes her support system of sorts. Cause anu seems pretty much alone for the most of the show.

ok any more suggestions ??

Originally posted by: mehak-5

ok any more suggestions ??

No dear I loved reading your one shot if possible pls do continue would love to read ahead

Yes but in a separate thread. Not in EDT

@mehak-5

what's in today's episode????

yaar i need some clarity.. in many of posts the upcoming track is posted where they are writing ✍️ that arya will ask jhande to know who makes the video ...

is arya know about the video .... mujhe to lga use nhe pta ... please clarify

Originally posted by: mehak-5

yaar i need some clarity.. in many of posts the upcoming track is posted where they are writing ✍️ that arya will ask jhande to know who makes the video ...

is arya know about the video .... mujhe to lga use nhe pta ... please clarify

Kal ke preview main Arya goes to Sharma house where Gopal insults him and asks him to leave saying you so should stop meeting Anu only then can she move on

Later any tries to talk to Arya at the office and he ignores her

Originally posted by: mehak-5

what's in today's episode????

Nothing much

1) Anu Arya end things

2) ma goes in front of “The room” and ask RN for Arya’s happiness( as in please let him be happy now kinda thing)

3)Anu’s parents tell anu about their meeting at Mohit’s house and in the meanwhile Mohit calls anu to talk to her and she basically is numb throughout the convo however her stupid parents look at her smiling and Gopal misogynist Sharma says ab Sab thik ho jayega