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Posted: 3 hours ago

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

Yeah that push pull would be interesting


I tried to write the same in veil wala story that Riya was angry cause she thought in that moment that arjun wanted her that injured so what's the point of working in etf. It was also very hyper with her being very alone in that physical condition


If Riya isn't that physically injured but she can be emotionally scarred that arjun sir was right I got injured my team could have been hurt. So she wants to work behind desk, Arjun and her fight where she says he shouldn't interfere he's not the boss and he says she proved him that she's weak. Lots of hurtful words and how they come back from that . And eventually riya feels ready enough - maybe arjun trains her again, and she is like I want to work in field

Riya shifting to Etf research desk job on 5th floor of etf building.. Arjun barging into her office, picking her up, putting on his shoulders, walking out to etf office like a king and whole etf building getting sadma for life... Rathore be like arjun in love is lethal to the world don't know how riya will handle this version of arjun and all....

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Posted: 3 hours ago

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

Both mentor training her will be nice comedy of error lol if someone wants to write comedy


Arjun was smitten by roshni so I think he would woo but for ariya riya fall first Arjun fall harder concept should come


Also if arjun is attentive towards Riya maybe they go to field together and he instructed her during field that would make Rathore realize arjun does care about other people. So the question is if that's mentor mentee relationship or arjun likes Riya. Then Rathore can have his "she's my junior my sister I won't allow you nearby" drama


Love being complicated yeah I think she was asking about her feelings for someone like Arjun. But what if she was having some volatile relationship offscreen lol that would have good chance of coming back. Maybe jealous psycho ex or someone manipulative

Haha exactly. Considering the friction between Arjun Rathore - there’s scope for good comedy in between the seriousness of their work.


I don’t remember Arjun Roshni flashbacks very well but that makes sense. I think Arjun was so emotionally constipated all the time that I remembered Roshni being the one to explain feelings to him lol. She fell first he fell harder is so fun to read. Riya knowing her feelings and being at peace with them but they’re like an old wound which hurts sometimes. Then Arjun realises he’s had feelings all this time but they’re overwhelming and now he’s unable to cope.

my only thing is that when Riya has a soft spot for Arjun, she often lets him get away with too much in some stories which frustrates me.


I need to read a good romance haha. All my recent reads have been bad.

I don’t think Arjun should like her or at least he doesn’t know that he likes her. It makes it more interesting if he thinks he’s just doing it as a favour or whatever XYZ reason he gives himself.
Makes his drama with Rathore more interesting too. Shee and Chotu thinking why only Riya in the corner but also glad they’re not in between Arjun Rathore’s fight lol.

Riya’s personal life was a blank slate in the show.
I think they had the dialogue because they wanted to hint about the Arjun Riya love story but I always thought it’d be more interesting if something else was going on. Complicated relationship, ex, bad divorce for herself/family member/ friend, etc, etc. There are so many reasons people have different perspectives on love. Everyone has something going on in their personal lives - good or bad. I like the stories where the FL has her own problems separate to the ML and he becomes a support rather than the hero to save her.

Sorry went on a tangent lol.

Also, what about a cat that hates Arjun? I’ve read stories with dogs but never a cat 😂
I want Riya to have a cat who isn’t affectionate apart from when he/she is with Riya in front of Arjun. Hissing at Arjun lol

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Posted: 2 hours ago

Originally posted by: Sam111

Riya shifting to Etf research desk job on 5th floor of etf building.. Arjun barging into her office, picking her up, putting on his shoulders, walking out to etf office like a king and whole etf building getting sadma for life... Rathore be like arjun in love is lethal to the world don't know how riya will handle this version of arjun and all....


Arjun bana caveman


Or Riya can go there cause he hurt her ego lol


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Posted: 2 hours ago

Originally posted by: Sam111

I always love the dynamics of ariya in all your stories.. And how arjun changed himself only for riya... In veil he wrote all his feelings in a diary.. Sexual tension between imperial ariya.... I look forward to read all your ariya stories.. And that ps I love you.. I cried a lot 😭😭... You wrote painfully beautiful ariya..


Thank you!


I think ml changing only for fl is a great trope + he behaves nicely with others. The whole appeal of bad boy stories lol


I was shocked that I wrote ps I love you 🤣🤣 yeah sometimes it comes out



I didn't mean to write sexual tension in imperial cause I suck at writing sex/kiss. But if it came like that hehe *patting myself in back*


Veil was like my closure for these 2 but yeah ideas come sometimes


For imperial s2 which I had promised to write but idk if I wil write or not I have ideas like Arjun Riya will develop , riya coming out of Neel thing, and probably very dreamy arjun lol. They watch movies and shit.

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Posted: 2 hours ago

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat


Thank you!


I think ml changing only for fl is a great trope + he behaves nicely with others. The whole appeal of bad boy stories lol


I was shocked that I wrote ps I love you 🤣🤣 yeah sometimes it comes out



I didn't mean to write sexual tension in imperial cause I suck at writing sex/kiss. But if it came like that hehe *patting myself in back*


Veil was like my closure for these 2 but yeah ideas come sometimes


For imperial s2 which I had promised to write but idk if I wil write or not I have ideas like Arjun Riya will develop , riya coming out of Neel thing, and probably very dreamy arjun lol. They watch movies and shit.

I'm cheering, rooting u for imperial season 2

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Posted: 2 hours ago

Originally posted by: stardust108

Haha exactly. Considering the friction between Arjun Rathore - there’s scope for good comedy in between the seriousness of their work.


I don’t remember Arjun Roshni flashbacks very well but that makes sense. I think Arjun was so emotionally constipated all the time that I remembered Roshni being the one to explain feelings to him lol. She fell first he fell harder is so fun to read. Riya knowing her feelings and being at peace with them but they’re like an old wound which hurts sometimes. Then Arjun realises he’s had feelings all this time but they’re overwhelming and now he’s unable to cope.

my only thing is that when Riya has a soft spot for Arjun, she often lets him get away with too much in some stories which frustrates me.


I need to read a good romance haha. All my recent reads have been bad.

I don’t think Arjun should like her or at least he doesn’t know that he likes her. It makes it more interesting if he thinks he’s just doing it as a favour or whatever XYZ reason he gives himself.
Makes his drama with Rathore more interesting too. Shee and Chotu thinking why only Riya in the corner but also glad they’re not in between Arjun Rathore’s fight lol.

Riya’s personal life was a blank slate in the show.
I think they had the dialogue because they wanted to hint about the Arjun Riya love story but I always thought it’d be more interesting if something else was going on. Complicated relationship, ex, bad divorce for herself/family member/ friend, etc, etc. There are so many reasons people have different perspectives on love. Everyone has something going on in their personal lives - good or bad. I like the stories where the FL has her own problems separate to the ML and he becomes a support rather than the hero to save her.

Sorry went on a tangent lol.

Also, what about a cat that hates Arjun? I’ve read stories with dogs but never a cat 😂
I want Riya to have a cat who isn’t affectionate apart from when he/she is with Riya in front of Arjun. Hissing at Arjun lol


Arjun was very nice to roshni so I guess thats how his hurt was also bigger. She and Rathore were his family and overnight it was gone


I don't see Rathore as villain too. His grief and we know Arjun can be so stubborn. So Rathore was probably like Arjun not giving any shit to his dead wife and Rathore got even more hurt and angry.

Mostly in stories Riya keeps her feeling hidden and slowly arjun loves her too but I think if she propose first and is like apko wapas ana hoga koi intezar kar raha hai, and arjun subconsciously also thinks someone is waiting for him.he gives that right slowly. I think when someone proposes as written many times in romantic novels there is a tension. I think a woman confessing love is so. Elite


Cats are in their own world and I think a dog will make riya very happy. But dog isn't realistic assuming she spends 12 hour in office


We both agree in love doesn't mean you let the woman be so doormat. Speaking up Riya and putting sense into arjun >>>> make a man out of that asshole lmao


Riya having a deep relationship maybe ex she really loved or cared about but it didn't go further would be good jealous. Maybe she had entire different life of modeling like Rathore had his racing thing.

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Posted: an hour ago

I want riya to be in navy who lost her bf in war. She becomes heartbroken and left armed forces... DIG sir sending riya as undercover to etf as sik case gonna come soon... Two broken people who lost their partners, and Riya's passion for water sports, horse riding, and the best thing she comes to office in her customized bullet. Riya is female version of Arjun Rawte.. I wanna see similar people falling in love.. Opposite attracts is common... I wanna see two similar people repel so much that they made a place forever in each other's minds. In second chance love Ariya bringing out their buried sides alive and being compatible with each other

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Posted: an hour ago

Originally posted by: Sam111

I want riya to be in navy who lost her bf in war. She becomes heartbroken and left armed forces... DIG sir sending riya as undercover to etf as sik case gonna come soon... Two broken people who lost their partners, and Riya's passion for water sports, horse riding, and the best thing she comes to office in her customized bullet. Riya is female version of Arjun Rawte.. I wanna see similar people falling in love.. Opposite attracts is common... I wanna see two similar people repel so much that they made a place forever in each other's minds. In second chance love Ariya bringing out their buried sides alive and being compatible with each other

That book already there minus horse and bullet part lol


Imagine Riya from raw /ib she's just a work freak no social life and she hated going to undercover in etf.maybe she's Raghu sir's family. So she calls him whines regarding etf. She really tries to be quiet etf it doesn't happen . She's just going through in etf crossing off days cause her intersted assignment maybe israel something will only happen if she completes etf


So when her mask is off imagine she being crying sad then suddenly her face changes is like yeah raw here what will you do now Arjun Rawte 🤣 i think the actors would have so much fun


If you watched vedalam and aparichit


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Vedalam is my all time fav movie lmao




Girls driving bike is so sexy but I am phattu I get scared.

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Posted: 54 minutes ago

Omg.... Yes... I think Riya's character has more depth and vision.. She is like salt in etf team. Invisible but without her everything is incomplete.. It's so great for itv to show woman working with 4 male officers and making her place... If written well Riya will be one of the best characters we ever witnessed

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Posted: 46 minutes ago

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat


Arjun was very nice to roshni so I guess thats how his hurt was also bigger. She and Rathore were his family and overnight it was gone


I don't see Rathore as villain too. His grief and we know Arjun can be so stubborn. So Rathore was probably like Arjun not giving any shit to his dead wife and Rathore got even more hurt and angry.

Mostly in stories Riya keeps her feeling hidden and slowly arjun loves her too but I think if she propose first and is like apko wapas ana hoga koi intezar kar raha hai, and arjun subconsciously also thinks someone is waiting for him.he gives that right slowly. I think when someone proposes as written many times in romantic novels there is a tension. I think a woman confessing love is so. Elite


Cats are in their own world and I think a dog will make riya very happy. But dog isn't realistic assuming she spends 12 hour in office


We both agree in love doesn't mean you let the woman be so doormat. Speaking up Riya and putting sense into arjun >>>> make a man out of that asshole lmao


Riya having a deep relationship maybe ex she really loved or cared about but it didn't go further would be good jealous. Maybe she had entire different life of modeling like Rathore had his racing thing.


That would be interesting. Though it depends on how Riya confesses too. Wasn’t he horrible to Sakshi when she confessed or am I thinking of some fanfic?

Lol that’s why I went with a cat. I read a book years ago with a ML who was similar to Arjun. The FL had a pet cat who was very hostile to the ML and the cat was basically the character who made the ML grovel. It was very satisfying to read.

Yes, we’ve had this discussion before lol. Riya in love but she calls him out.

Yeah, anything like that for Riya is always interesting



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