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Posted: a day ago

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

https://www.wattpad.com/story/405533052-pranbir-what-love-survived


Got another story and it's ❤️❤️🔥🔥 in case you want to check out

Thank you, will definitely read it! 😊

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Posted: a day ago

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

riya trained by arjun has lots of unresolved sexual tension lmaoooo its a good trope idk why people mostly use rathore. i guess thats the surprise element that secretly riya is equal now.


I agree. I don’t think I’ve read any where Arjun trains Riya. it’s funny since often ML trains FL In shows/movies/books. Maybe to show Rathore riya bond??

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Posted: 19 hours ago

It's like he sees her potential and wanna make her lethal to criminal world without making her kindness lost in all these... The image in my mind it's just so so beautiful.. And I want this training to be after xora.

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Posted: 16 hours ago

Originally posted by: stardust108


I agree. I don’t think I’ve read any where Arjun trains Riya. it’s funny since often ML trains FL In shows/movies/books. Maybe to show Rathore riya bond??

like I said surprise element for Arjun and audience that Riya is capable of being lethal


Also when they say Rathore is mentor to riya they need to show exactly how he's a mentor. Do they talk about work or personal life? Or Riya comes to Rathore before making any decision? We don't see it so there is Rathore training riya thing


Also arjun is so obsessed with Roshni case and spending all time in work it's hard to believe suddenly why he would care for Riya so much that he would want to train her. But it does make sense. Maybe Riya is completely broken by his taunts and shes like apko itni taklif hai to mujhe sikhaye kaise aap jaise bante hai. Then he would take it to heart and train her. But also slowly he's like I don't want to see your goodness vanishing cause world needs riya Mukherjee's kindness too

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Posted: 15 hours ago

Originally posted by: Sam111

It's like he sees her potential and wanna make her lethal to criminal world without making her kindness lost in all these... The image in my mind it's just so so beautiful.. And I want this training to be after xora.


I personally think it should be after her shooting thing and before xora


Xora needs to have some depth sone reason. Why it happened to riya and how it impacts her life. I said it in the wait thread too. If Riya has no relation with arjun and she has to suffer alone in this virus thing what's the point of slow burn? Arjun needs to show come concern for her.


If the ml of love story isn't there with the fl at her lowest point it's pointless to show this love story


Also often after xora there is no change in Riya. If she saw death and came back how it impacts her life? Does she still shoot people? Is her faith from God is gone? Is she more focused in work that no one else should suffer? Or she's scared to go to filed and wants to stay back in desk job. There should be some physical mental emotional change.


Its a virus which killed people.. impossible it don't impact a human life

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Posted: 15 hours ago

More than that i wanna see riya lost her old confident self and thought she is incapable after xora thing.. Decided to resign from etf and when arjun comes to know about it, a great confrontation between them, arjun is trying evrything in hand to bring old riya back and take back her resignation.. The angst the tension the fights.. Ufff.

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Posted: 9 hours ago

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

like I said surprise element for Arjun and audience that Riya is capable of being lethal


Also when they say Rathore is mentor to riya they need to show exactly how he's a mentor. Do they talk about work or personal life? Or Riya comes to Rathore before making any decision? We don't see it so there is Rathore training riya thing


Also arjun is so obsessed with Roshni case and spending all time in work it's hard to believe suddenly why he would care for Riya so much that he would want to train her. But it does make sense. Maybe Riya is completely broken by his taunts and shes like apko itni taklif hai to mujhe sikhaye kaise aap jaise bante hai. Then he would take it to heart and train her. But also slowly he's like I don't want to see your goodness vanishing cause world needs riya Mukherjee's kindness too

True. In the show Riya seems to like asking philosophical questions to her mentors too lol. She says something along the lines of love being complicated in one episode. And Arjun offers his philosophy on love without her asking lol.

If Rathore is a mentor along the lines of advice/talking, it would be interesting to see their relationship. Especially considering both of their individual relationships with Arjun and how they’re different.

I always imagine Roshni having taken the lead in Arjun’s relationship with her. I can’t remember what they showed in the show. I want to read a story where Arjun is clueless about what to do with his feelings for Riya because he’s never had to flirt/ woo a girl. Let him take training and Riya get a surprise haha.

Maybe Riya taunts him to train her if he has such a problem and he takes it seriously. Now Riya has 2 mentors who are training her differently. I want Rathore being possessive over his student and not wanting Arjun to train her. And Arjun is taunting him that she couldn’t even shoot until he ‘taught’ her. 😂

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Posted: 6 hours ago

Originally posted by: stardust108

True. In the show Riya seems to like asking philosophical questions to her mentors too lol. She says something along the lines of love being complicated in one episode. And Arjun offers his philosophy on love without her asking lol.

If Rathore is a mentor along the lines of advice/talking, it would be interesting to see their relationship. Especially considering both of their individual relationships with Arjun and how they’re different.

I always imagine Roshni having taken the lead in Arjun’s relationship with her. I can’t remember what they showed in the show. I want to read a story where Arjun is clueless about what to do with his feelings for Riya because he’s never had to flirt/ woo a girl. Let him take training and Riya get a surprise haha.

Maybe Riya taunts him to train her if he has such a problem and he takes it seriously. Now Riya has 2 mentors who are training her differently. I want Rathore being possessive over his student and not wanting Arjun to train her. And Arjun is taunting him that she couldn’t even shoot until he ‘taught’ her. 😂

Both mentor training her will be nice comedy of error lol if someone wants to write comedy


Arjun was smitten by roshni so I think he would woo but for ariya riya fall first Arjun fall harder concept should come


Also if arjun is attentive towards Riya maybe they go to field together and he instructed her during field that would make Rathore realize arjun does care about other people. So the question is if that's mentor mentee relationship or arjun likes Riya. Then Rathore can have his "she's my junior my sister I won't allow you nearby" drama


Love being complicated yeah I think she was asking about her feelings for someone like Arjun. But what if she was having some volatile relationship offscreen lol that would have good chance of coming back. Maybe jealous psycho ex or someone manipulative

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Posted: 6 hours ago

Originally posted by: Sam111

More than that i wanna see riya lost her old confident self and thought she is incapable after xora thing.. Decided to resign from etf and when arjun comes to know about it, a great confrontation between them, arjun is trying evrything in hand to bring old riya back and take back her resignation.. The angst the tension the fights.. Ufff.

Yeah that push pull would be interesting


I tried to write the same in veil wala story that Riya was angry cause she thought in that moment that arjun wanted her that injured so what's the point of working in etf. It was also very hyper with her being very alone in that physical condition


If Riya isn't that physically injured but she can be emotionally scarred that arjun sir was right I got injured my team could have been hurt. So she wants to work behind desk, Arjun and her fight where she says he shouldn't interfere he's not the boss and he says she proved him that she's weak. Lots of hurtful words and how they come back from that . And eventually riya feels ready enough - maybe arjun trains her again, and she is like I want to work in field

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Posted: 6 hours ago

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

Yeah that push pull would be interesting


I tried to write the same in veil wala story that Riya was angry cause she thought in that moment that arjun wanted her that injured so what's the point of working in etf. It was also very hyper with her being very alone in that physical condition


If Riya isn't that physically injured but she can be emotionally scarred that arjun sir was right I got injured my team could have been hurt. So she wants to work behind desk, Arjun and her fight where she says he shouldn't interfere he's not the boss and he says she proved him that she's weak. Lots of hurtful words and how they come back from that . And eventually riya feels ready enough - maybe arjun trains her again, and she is like I want to work in field

I always love the dynamics of ariya in all your stories.. And how arjun changed himself only for riya... In veil he wrote all his feelings in a diary.. Sexual tension between imperial ariya.... I look forward to read all your ariya stories.. And that ps I love you.. I cried a lot 😭😭... You wrote painfully beautiful ariya..

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