Dr Kaira Chapter Discussions Thread - Page 2

Originally posted by: A_Star39

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I am enjoying it

I would say write it the way you want to because they are your characters

Dropping next part today.

If possible you can discuss this part in this thread

I am loving this harsh being silly with daksh, so on point with him. Especially his constant commentary about no tuntuna lol

Of course it's grief talking too and I hope it comes out someday. His bursting out would be good eye opener for abhir the nalla too.

Also ruhi is coming across like she is forced to spend time with harsh manjari. Its a bit odd.

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

I am loving this harsh being silly with daksh, so on point with him. Especially his constant commentary about no tuntuna lol

Of course it's grief talking too and I hope it comes out someday. His bursting out would be good eye opener for abhir the nalla too.

Also ruhi is coming across like she is forced to spend time with harsh manjari. Its a bit odd.

Like she knows her grand parents are annoying but she loves them.Since she was raised by goenkas

Aaryan's shade will be unraveling in coming chapters.

Also did a slight change in the dialogues of aaryan and kairas convo.

I forgot to change lol I used Gemini to write the FF in my busy schedule.

Originally posted by: A_Star39

working on abhir's character and ya ruhi's relation with her grandparents isn't over lovey dovey its kind of practical and real.Kind of different shade i see.Kaise bolu.

Like she knows her grand parents are annoying but she loves them.Since she was raised by goenkas

Aaryan's shade will be unraveling in coming chapters.

Also did a slight change in the dialogues of aaryan and kairas convo.

I forgot to change lol I used Gemini to write the FF in my busy schedule.

Yeah I understood how elders are sometimes too much so ruhi bracing herself and preparing daksh is practical

Oh gemini interesting. How do you use it like the complete ff is made by it or some parts? I think the description of dress jewellery house is ai right?

I really like your FF and please 🥺 don't separate Aryan and Kaira

The chapter was really good and keep up the good work. I must say your writing skills are good 👍 👍 😊