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A Rain-Soft Moment


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The sun, under the shadow of clouds, had barely lifted above the horizon when the royal couple set out, their breaths rising in pale wisps as the morning chill clung to the earth. The white horse stepped lightly over the dew-soaked grass, its reins loose in Bharat’s steady hand. Mandavi drew her shawl closer, stealing a glance at the winding path ahead—one that seemed to stretch into both promise and uncertainty. Behind them, the quiet of the palace grounds faded, replaced by the soft thud of hooves and the whisper of wind in the trees as their journey truly began.


Within few minutes, a gentle drizzle followed—tiny silver droplets stitching the earth and sky together,blurring the world into something tender,something magical,as though the heavens themselves wished to walk beside them.



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The first raindrop landed on Mandavi’s wrist like a tiny, cool kiss. She blinked up at the clouds, surprised, though the sky had been threatening a downpour since morning. Beside her, Bharat slowed the white horse he was leading, casting her a sideways glance that was equal parts worry and amusement.


“It seems the heavens couldn’t wait,” he murmured.


Mandavi smiled, adjusting the edge of her translucent veil that fluttered behind her like a long, gossamer ribbon. “Or perhaps,” she said softly, “they joined us to bless our little escape.”


Bharat chuckled, shaking his head as droplets clung to the ends of his loose hair. “If this is a blessing, it’s a very wet one.”


“And yet,” Mandavi teased, touching his arm lightly, “you don’t seem too eager to turn back.”


He looked at her then—really looked—and his expression softened as if something warm moved quietly through him. “Because,” he said, guiding her hand into his, “you’re smiling.”


Her cheeks flushed, heat blooming even under the cool drizzle. She shifted closer on the horse, her arms circling his waist. The embroidery on his dhoti and shawl glistened faintly as rain darkened the fabric. “You always say that,” she whispered against his shoulder. “As though my smile works miracles.”


“It does,” he replied without hesitation. “At least on me.”


The trail opened into a meadow, the tall grass bowing under the rain’s weight. Fireflies rose in little golden bursts, undeterred by the weather. Mandavi inhaled sharply, delight brightening her eyes.


“Look, Arya!” she exclaimed, leaning forward to see them better. “It’s like the stars came down to play.”


He smiled at her wonder. “I noticed this place yesterday on patrol,” he admitted. “Thought you might like it.”


“You brought me here just for that?” she asked, voice tinged with awe.


“No,” he said softly. “I brought you because I thought… spending a moment like this together might make you happy.”


Her hand tightened on his arm—not out of fear, but because her heart felt too full, too warm for words. Rain slid down her cheeks, mingling with the soft curve of her smile.


They stopped at the center of the meadow. Bharat held out his palm, letting a firefly land briefly before flickering away like a tiny lantern dancing in the mist.


Mandavi leaned into him, resting her head on his shoulder beneath the veil that trailed almost to the grass. “I love it,” she whispered. “And I love that you found beauty in a place most would overlook.”


He turned slightly, brushing his cheek against her hair. “It’s easy to notice beautiful things,” he said. “I married one, after all.”


Her laughter chimed softly through the rain, making him glance at her with unmistakable tenderness. She slipped her hand down to intertwine her fingers with his, the gold bangles on her wrist chiming like a quiet blessing.


For a while, they simply watched the fireflies rise around them, the rain falling in a gentle curtain. The world blurred into soft greens and golds, into warmth and closeness and unspoken affection.


“I’m happy,” she murmured after a long, peaceful silence.


Bharat raised her hand to his lips, kissing it lightly. Rain shimmered on his lashes like tiny crystals.


“So am I,” he said.


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The fireflies drifted around them like wandering sparks, tiny lanterns swaying in the breeze. Mandavi reached out, her fingers grazing the air just beneath a glowing cluster. Each time a light hovered close, she drew in a soft breath of wonder, as though seeing a miracle unfold again and again.


Bharat watched her more than the fireflies.


Her eyes gleamed with reflected gold, her smile small but real—the kind he cherished most. The rain had softened, falling now in a fine mist that clung to their clothes and eyelashes like dew.


“Do you think,” she whispered, her voice hushed with reverence, “that they glow brighter when it rains?”


“Maybe they’re happier,” Bharat mused, “because you’re watching them.”


Mandavi nudged him with her shoulder, though her blush betrayed her. “Always flattering me…” she murmured.


“I’m only telling the truth,” he said, and there was no teasing this time—just warmth.


A particularly bright firefly floated near her veil, settling on the edge of the translucent fabric where raindrops glimmered like beads. Mandavi stilled, hardly daring to breathe.


“Arya… look.”


He leaned closer, his hand gently brushing the small of her back for balance. “Seems it likes you,” he said, his voice dropping to a soft rumble.


For a heartbeat, they simply stared. The firefly’s glow pulsed, as if matching the quiet rise and fall of their breath. Mandavi smiled, tender and utterly captivated. “It’s beautiful.”


“So are you,” he replied, without thinking.


She turned her face toward him, eyes bright, lips parted slightly in surprise—yet not displeasure. The firefly lifted off her veil, spiraling into the air, trailing golden light like a blessing released.


Mandavi inhaled deeply, as though gathering the warmth of the moment. “Arya…”


He raised an eyebrow, waiting.


“You always find the loveliest corners of the world,” she said softly. “But somehow, standing in them with you makes them even better.”


He blinked once—slowly, as if her words had stolen a breath he hadn’t realized he was holding. His hand found hers, fingers threading through with ease, as though they belonged that way.


The fireflies kept rising, flickering around them like tiny stars learning how to shine.


Mandavi leaned her head on his shoulder again, her veil brushing his arm. “Let’s stay a little longer,” she whispered.


“Of course,” Bharat said. He wrapped an arm around her waist, steady and gentle. “We’ll stay as long as you want.”


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And so they lingered in the rain-soft meadow, surrounded by drifting light—two souls wrapped in a quiet, glowing peace, watching the fireflies dance like the sky had come down to earth just to keep them company.


Edited by cuteamanboy - 7 days ago
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exploring different scenes

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your views motivate me a lot

Posted: 6 days ago

The story was really nice

The beautiful pics of the skyline were icing on the cake

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Nice story and the pictures are great!

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Whispers Beneath the Jasmine Moon


The palace garden was unusually quiet that evening. Most of the attendants had drifted indoors as the breeze turned cooler, carrying the scent of night-blooming flowers. A soft twilight glow settled over the pathways, where tiny lamps flickered like scattered stars.

Shrutakirti wandered slowly along the stone path, her sari brushing the grass. She paused often—sometimes to look at a bud just beginning to open, other times to trail her fingers through the little fountain’s rippling water. She loved these quiet evenings. The world felt softer, kinder.

She didn’t hear the footsteps this time.

Because Shatrughna wasn’t walking—he was hiding.

From behind a tall rosebush, he peeked at her with the exaggerated stealth of a child attempting to catch a butterfly with bare hands. He waited until she kneeled beside a patch of jasmines, her expression glowing with quiet delight.

Now.

He stepped forward—

—and immediately stepped on a twig.

Crunch.

Shrutakirti looked up, amused before she even saw him. “Trying again, are we?”

Shatrughna sighed, surrendering his disguise behind the rosebush. “I swear the garden is conspiring against me.”

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“It’s not the garden,” she said, rising to her feet with a soft laugh. “You just have terrible timing.”

He stood in front of her now, pretending to sulk. “You could at least act surprised.”

Shrutakirti folded her arms. “Very well.” She widened her eyes dramatically, pressed a hand to her chest, and gasped. “Oh! Where did you come from?”

Shatrughna couldn’t help it—he burst into laughter. “That might be the worst acting I’ve seen in my life.”

“Well, perhaps you should give me a better entrance to react to.”

He stepped closer, closing the distance between them with slow, deliberate steps. Shrutakirti’s teasing smile softened as he gently took her hand.

“Alright,” he murmured, lifting her hand to his heart, “how about this? Is this a better entrance?”

Her breath caught for a moment. “Better,” she whispered, unable to hide the warmth in her voice.

They began walking together, the soft rustle of leaves accompanying their steps. Shatrughna kept her hand in his as they strolled beneath the archway of hanging blossoms. Every now and then, she glanced up at him, her eyes reflecting the fading gold of twilight.

“So,” she said, nudging him lightly, “what grand surprise were you planning this time?”

“I brought you something.” He looked almost shy as he stopped near a bench under a flowering tree. “But I wanted to give it to you when you weren’t expecting.”

“Well,” she said, sitting down gracefully, “you may give it to me now. I promise I will pretend to be shocked.”

He rolled his eyes playfully before pulling something from behind his back—a small, hand-carved wooden box.

Shrutakirti blinked. “Oh…”

“You don’t have to pretend now, do you?” he teased gently.

She shook her head, eyes softening as he placed the box in her palm. She opened it slowly. Inside lay a delicate anklet, silver with tiny charms shaped like jasmine flowers—her favourite.

“Oh, Arya…” Her voice was barely a whisper. “It’s beautiful.”

He knelt by her feet, not waiting for her to react. “May I?”

She nodded, her cheeks glowing. He clasped the anklet around her ankle, his touch gentle and reverent. When he looked up, she was watching him with an expression that made his heartbeat stumble.

“You thought I didn’t like surprises,” he said softly.

“I don’t,” she whispered, leaning closer, “except the ones that come from you.”

His smile deepened. “Then perhaps I should surprise you more often.”

She reached up, touching the side of his face with shy affection. “Perhaps you should.”

He covered her hand with his own, their fingers tangling naturally. The lamps around them flickered to life fully, bathing the garden in a golden glow. The night air grew cooler, but neither moved. They sat side by side, shoulders brushing, hearts quiet but full.

Shrutakirti rested her head on his shoulder, watching the soft moon rise between the treetops. “You know,” she murmured, “every moment with you feels like one long surprise.”

Shatrughna tilted his head to brush a kiss across her hair. “Then I hope our whole life is filled with them.”

They stayed like that long after the stars appeared, wrapped in warm silence and each other’s presence—content, peaceful, and impossibly happy.

Edited by cuteamanboy - 4 days ago
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Nice Story The Pictures Make The Story Even Better

Keep Writing

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