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Posted: 4 months ago

Amazing words, love it! <3

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Posted: 4 months ago

A celebration of love

Edited by Sutapasima - 4 months ago
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Dream Weavers

Posted: 4 months ago

It looks like a desperate need for comfort that had been battling in the heart for a long time suddenly burst forth with happiness's powerful presence.

Nice poem Nibedita.smiley27

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Posted: 2 months ago

I touch what I shouldn't touch,

And I take your name.

I do what I shouldn't do,

And I take your name.

Love? No Dear, no.

I take no delight in you,

I take no delight in your name.


Who gave me to you

When I didn't even learn to

Utter a syllable?

Who had the right to?


You have not come,

You will not come,

You need not come,

You should not come;

I am too small in front of you.


I should not desire,

You are against desire,

I have learnt.

Yet desire rends me

From the core of my being

Seeing beautiful figures,

Beautiful voices, beautiful works.

I never wanted to be disloyal but

Every moment of my life

Desire mocks me

That I am disloyal to you.


As twilight smears my youth with red,

Today for the first time

And perhaps the last time

I take your name.

I open my lips,

I touch your name with my tongue,

I soak your name

With the very desire you are against.

I mark myself

With infidelity beyond redemption.


That is my revenge on you

For ruining my life,

You crooked lover of prosperity!

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Dream Weavers

Posted: 2 months ago

You expressed the desire, the reluctance, the love and the longing and finally the anger in a beautiful way. Each word you choose to express in your poem has multiple meanings, that always increases the inquisitiveness of every reader, Vyapti. smiley31

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Posted: 2 months ago

Thank you so much Dear Madhuri . đź’š

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