Dareya OS: End Of Darkness

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Posted: 11 days ago
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Hi Friends,

My name is Ana. ‎Previously I was a writer but have left writing due to some personal reasons but Now Dareya forced me to go back and pen a little emotions which I so madly felt watching episode 49. Hope, you had felt these emotions too by watching that Epi.

Dareya OS: End OF Darkness

‎"Sachin" ACP sir called out loud, which make everyone gaze turned towards the door. A pitter patter of small steps could be heard along with the confident walk of Sachin's usual crisp shoe steps.


‎They saw two silluetes, among which one was surely of Sachin and other was of a female along with a child, holding Sachin's hand. As they were moving through the dark corridor, the anticipation of all standing in the room increased.


‎Till the Darkness shed and there entered, Sachin, with a cute little girl who was looking all around trying to absorb the surrounding and then entered Shreya.


‎"Shreya" the name left Daya's lips in a inaudible way of surprise and unbound happiness.


‎The name which has a strong connection with most of the people present there, but for one She was not just Shreya, A woman, but She was his Lifeline. His last love. His True Love.


Abhijeet couldnt help but smile at her presence as he knew, what she means to his brother in armor, Daya. Pankaj was still looking at his friend that he thought he would never see, Purvi was rejoicing to see that same similar face who used to be her partner in crime. How many laughs had they shared together, how many late nights, how many cases, how many roleplays. She was her best female friend in all her career till now. They had all hoped for her to be something more........someone more...


‎All known eyes of Pankaj, Purvi, Abhijeet and ACP sir turned towards Daya to capture his reaction while Avni, Kritika and Bhoomi stood confused.


Not to let the silence dwell any longer, ACP sir put his hand on Daya's shoulder, as if comforting him and said,


‎"Daya, tumne Shreya se wada kia tha k tum uski bachi ko wapis lao gay, par tumhare us waday ko, maine poora kar diya" ACP said, proud to be able to provide solace to one of his son, who has lost so much in his life. He never backed away from any mission, any sacrifice, any bullet to protect his country or his CID family but this time, ACP Pradhuman felt that some how, He was able to protect his son's heart.


‎Daya felt breathless, it felt like a dream to him. Those big eyes, that smiling lips, that innocent face was once again in front of him. Her eyes hold a contentment, her lips seemed to have stopped knowing how not to smile and that face was shining. All quiet opposite to theor previous encounter.


‎Shreya stood there with a feeling of jitter. She doesnt know why but meeting him after all these years has really affected her insides. She had met him before, two years after leaving CID, but at that time the worry for her daughter had made her senseless to think about anything, any emotion beside her safety. But tonight, after finding the solace in her daughter Mihika's presence, she could finally think about other things. She looked around on all known and unknown faces but at the end, that one face which was fixated on her, made her feel grounded. Those were the same eyes who always make her feel secure, protected and somewhere deep down, she knew it now too, Wanted.


‎She kept her hands on her daughter's shoulder making him divert his attention to the little girl, who seemed to be a perfect replica of her mother. Those same eyes, that dusky beauty.


‎His steps, unsteady at first but stable lateron took him towards her and her daughter. He bend down infront of her daughter, lifted his hand to touch her, to ensure himself that it was not a figment of his imagination. She was there, living, breathing, secure. He doesnt know how to explain, how much burden was lifted from his concious. He had dreams, better say nightmares of not being able to save Mihika. He could still envision those dreams where he could clearly see Shreya crying, shouting, telling him that Mihika was lost, blaming him for not fulfilling his promise. Asking him is this what he promised her.


‎But now, touching her, he could finally take a long breath. A breath of contentment.


‎He always had loved children but this one, this little girl, Mihika was so special cause she was HER daughter, her Ansh, her shadow. Once, he had imagined himself to be able to have THEIR CHILD in his arms. But nevertheless, she was still HERS.


‎He couldnt stop himself and just picked her up with a large smile. Surprisingly, Mihika didnt object and came to his arms with a smile.


‎"Aray......." He said smiling brightly at Mihika before turning to Shreya, trying to capture her in his gaze before uttering "Kaisi ho Shreya?"


‎She felt her mouth clogged with all the emotions she was feeling on seeing him, on feeling him so close to herself, on hearing him take her name in the same deep voice that she used to love.


‎"Abh main theek hoon", She finally uttered trying to gulp down her emotions and making her voice steady. "App sab ko dekh kar, apni bachi ko dekh kar". She said looking at him holding her daughter in his strong arms. How she had wished.......


‎Daya observed her gaze but smiling, diverted his attention to Mihika, "Bohut pyari bachi hai....Hai na....." He looked at her once again and found her deep penetrating large eyes, still looking at him intently.


‎How he wished to be alone with her right now. How he wished to turn the time back right now. How he wished to have a different present right now.....


‎But the present couldn't be changed so he did what he could do best right now. Not to make her embarassed, he turned his back to look at all and especially to ACP sir. He found them all looking at them, observing their every minute interaction.


Daya nodded his head in thanks to ACP, hoping his face could convey his feelings which he knew he couldnt utter right now. He was feeling too emotional.


‎ACP nodded back, acknowledging his gratitude and smiled. Finally, it seems like the black clouds from Daya life were about to be lifted.

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‎(The dialogues were the only thing taken from the OD but I have planned a pure original Dareya fic further on with a bit of other couples. If you like it, do comment so that I may continue this Fic. Otherwise it will remain titled it as OS.)

‎With the return of Shreya and Tarika, I so fell in love with Dareya and Abhirika once again that I cant help but read fics on them though I could hardly find any on IF. if you guys have any links to some good Dareya fics, do leave a link in comments. Will be Thankful.


‎Do give a LIKE and Comment.


‎Love,

‎Ana

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Posted: 10 days ago
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Bookmarked. Will read and review later

Posted: 10 days ago
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U actually put down in words our actual feeling

Posted: 9 days ago
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Oh my god this was so beautiful. Thanks for this fic , please continue this I would love to read the next chapter.

Posted: 4 days ago
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Please continue this story soonsmiley4

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Originally posted by: appisuri

U actually put down in words our actual feeling

Thank you so much dear for your review and encouragement...

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Originally posted by: CID-fan-394

Oh my god this was so beautiful. Thanks for this fic , please continue this I would love to read the next chapter.

Thanks alot dear for your encouragement and kind words. Next chap coming up.

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Part 2

"Tum aj poora din Shreya or Mihika k saath guzaro....jaoo" ACP sir patted his back and pushed him out of the bureou.


‎Daya felt a slight excitement, anxiousness and jitteriness in his stomach with just the thought of spending time with them.


‎They had never done this before.


‎He and Shreya.


‎They had never gone out alone to some place just for themselves. If they ever had, it was because of a case.


‎Ofcourse, he had thought about it million and Millions of time but his hesititation, his fears had always stopped him from acting on it.


‎"Abh or nahi" He thought as he left ACP sir office and moved to Visiting Room where Shreya was seated with Mihika. There was something light about his steps that day.


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‎The progression of case and reporting of details have caught up to the team due to which Shreya was led to Visiting Room of CID by Sachin.


‎She sat with Mihika holding her hands trying to divert her own attention from the moments that were about approach her.


‎Shreya Remembers ACP sir's advise to her which he gave her today while on the way to bureou.


Flashback


‎"Main chahta hoon k tum Daya se baat karo, Shreya. Us say apna experience or trauma share karo........ Tum Barbosa k saath ho.....uski madad kar rahi ho....Is baat ko us nay kabhi nahi mana.......Main chahta hoon tum usay ye vishwas dilao k uska yaqeen baymayne nahi " ACP sir sighed....as he looked ahead while his driver was driving the car.


‎It was just the two of them in car beside driver and Mihika, who was quietly sleeping in her lap enroute to CID building this morning.


‎"Mihika ko dhondnay, usay khojnay ko us nay apnay saray khabri laga diye....Apnay saray connections use kiye........Pichle 6 saalon se usay pal pal uski fikar karta dekha hai maine, bache....... Likin uski is fikar k peeche kia wajha hai....ye tum bhi khoob janti ho" Acp sir said in a fatherly tone, trying to guide her on a path of life. Path of heart.


‎"Janti hoon Sir, likin main...itni jaldi sab......" She moved her fingers in Mihika's hair in desperation, trying to find her comfort in it, before replying to ACP.


‎"Apnay app ko bari mushkil se akele rehna sikhaya hai sir....... Main....Main khud ko or Mihika ko time deyna chahti hoon"


‎"Janta main bhi hoon, k ye itna asaan nahi.....Zindagi main bohut se utar charhao, bohut si mushkilat dekhi hain tumne.....Darr bhi lagta hoga......Par beta, hamare profession main agar hum darr ko apnay uper havvi honay dain gay tau kuch nahi kar sakain gay........Or is darr ki wajha se zindagi jeena bhi tau nahi chor sakte na......Tumhain apnay liye or Mihika k liye... zindagi main agay bharna hi hoga........"


‎Shreya looked out of car for a minute before replying.


‎"Sir, Mujhpe gadari ka ilzaam hai........Pehle jo bhi kia, Mihika k liye kia......likin.......Jab se Mihika milli hai.....Main issi guilt main hoon k mera saath uski zindagi main ujala lanay ki bajaye, andheera na lay aye....Or app, app mujhe Daya Sir ki zindagi main bhi grehan ban-nay ko keh rahay hain..." Few tears slipped down from her eyes.


‎ACP turned to look at her before continuing.... "Tum kissi ki zindagi main grehan nahi ho, Shreya..... tum main aj bhi kahin na kahin mera wo ex-inspecter moujood hai jis nay desh ki khatir jaan deyne ki shapat li thi....or na janay kitnay hi mouqon pe us waday ko sabit bhi kia hai...... Gadari ka ilzaam just ilzaam hai......Proof koi nahi.....Barbosa k pass tumhare khilaf jo saboot thay, unhain main pehle hi jala chuka hoon..."


‎Shreya was shocked on hearing that...


‎"Higher Commissioner say main baat karoon ga or tum pe se is lagay ilzaaam ko bhi hatwa doon ga .........Tum bus, apni zindagi main abh or uljhanoon ko dakhil na honay do.......Kehta nahi hai, par main janta hoon, Daya aj bhi tumhara muntazir hai". ACP sir shared his views but Shreya remained quite. She had alot to think of.


‎FlashBack ends.


‎She wasnt the same girl anymore whose passion was to serve her country, do her duty and make her parents proud. The girl who didnt had any responsibilities beside her job.


‎Now, she is a Mother whose daughter depend on her. And for any mother, her child became her first priority...


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‎Daya brought the mother-daughter pair to the beach. It was just 4pm, a calm evening. Not many people were present being a weekday. Mihika got so excited seeing the water and waves........ That she ran to the sea and chased the waves just like a little girl of 7 years, that she was.


‎Daya and Shreya stood behind, keeping a watchful eye on her but feeling so content in hearing her laughter and shouts of joy. Shreya had only dreamed about these moments but now, she is living them. Her daughter was with her. She still couldnt believe it. "Zyada agay maat jana Mahi....." Shreya shouted but Mihika just turned at waved her hands at her before again enjoying her chase.


‎Daya too enjoyed her innocence but more than that he loved to see the calm and happiness on Shreya's face. "God, please isko hamesha aisay khush rakhna.....apnay bachi k liye bohut tarpi hai.....Shreya ko abh Mihika se door na honay deyna". He silently prayed and captured lot of pics in his mobile of Mihika and some (secretly) of Shreya.


‎Mihika spent some time jumping on waves before running back to Shreya.


‎"Mumma.....Mujhe bhook lagi hai", Mihika told Shreya who still gets teary-eyed whenever Mihika calls her Mumma.


‎Daya heard her request and looked around before speaking.


‎ "Hmmm.......Chalo wahan se bhelpuri khatay hain....apko pasand hai?"


‎Mihika looked confused before asking "Kia wo tasty hoti hai Uncle?......Agar haan tau theek hai" Daya was shocked hearing her reply and looked at Shreya in askance who was still having tears.


‎"Sir, uska abh tak ka jeevan char dewari main guzra hai......uske liye ye sab naya hai..........App lay ayiye" Daya too got tears on heaing Shreya's reply. What a gut-churning childhood this little girl got.


‎But he couldn't let the smiles turn to tears. He hid his emotions before picking up Mihika in his arms like a plane.


‎"Ye kia....hamari little princess ko abi tak bhelpuri, chole bhature, Pav bhajji wagaira ka patah nahi....ye tau galat baat hai.......hum aj hi milap karwain gay app se unka...." And making a sound of flying aeroplane, Daya rushed towards the Bhelpuri wala with a giggling plane, Mihika in arms and a smiling Shreya followed them behind.


‎Later on, Mihika enjoyed food from all stalls. Daya and Shreya made sure to get less and give her everything in moderate quantity.


‎Seeing her enjoying the taste of each new thing with wide-bright eyes really made their day. Mihika also enjoyed Camel ride on the beach and Daya helped her make sand castle on the wet sand near shore.


‎Shreya felt a calmness settle over her as she was sitting back on a dry place and watched them decide the number of windows and minarets of their castle. It seemed like a searious discussion.


‎ Looking at the orange backdrop of settling sun, which almost made Daya and Mihika look as a silluete on the front of sea, Shreya finally clicked a picture in her mobile. She looked at the display and smiled with content. This picture will be her most priced possession in her life.


‎Her two most favourite people in the world. Captured in one frame. Having smiles on their faces.


‎"Mumma, see .....Uncle or maine kitna accha castle banaya....." Mihika's excited voice brought her back from her thoughts. She stood up and smiling, went towards them.


‎Daya too turned to look at her as if asking, "Kaisa Laga?"


‎Shreya gave a thorough look at the slightly tilted trapazium shaped castle and Teasingly, didnt said anything, making Daya and Mihika look at eachother in question.


‎"Bolo na Mumma"....Mihika again asked but seeing her worried, Shreya could not keep her avatar anymore and bending down on her toes, hugged her.


‎"Bohut accha bana hai......but next time ap isko square bananay ki try karna tau or pyara banay ga" Shreya laughed making Daya and Mihika laugh too. Her smile was infectious.


‎But just then, a strong wave reached the castle, and infront of water's force couldnt stand on its foundation...


‎"Aww.........Ye tau gir gaya" Mihika loked disappointingly at the remains of their castle. Shreya was about to console her but Daya beat her to it ad gently cupped the little girl's face.


‎"Aik castle toot gaya tau kia howa.......Hum new castle banayein gay......or is bar pehle se bhi accha.......square shape main....kyun??" Mihika looked at him and then a smile bloomed on her place once again. "Haan, or is bar tau Mumma bhi hamari help karain gi.....Kyun Mumma?" Mihika inquired and Shreya nodded happily seeing her daughter so full of life for the first time. Right from the time (one week), Shreya got Mihika back, she never saw her this much relaxed with her. Her carefree smiles were a treasure for her which she experienced for the first time today.


‎Trio moved to a new place and stated building a castle and this time it was more huge and much better looking than the previous one. Shreya's deep attention and focus on symmetry, Daya's work on making a strong foundation and Mihika's funny details on decor with seashells really made it a joyful experience for them.


‎"Wow, ye tau pehle se bhi better hai" Mihika said, happiness was shimmering in her voice. Daya patted her head before saying.


‎"Kissi cheez k tootnay ka dukh nahi karte Mihika.......wo cheez dubara ban jati hai, mill jati hai, Khareedi ja sakti ha.....Bus ye koshish karni chahiye k tootnay wali cheez dil na ho...." Daya eyes moved from Mihika to Shreya who also felt his gaze on herself. She knew his words are pointing towards their situation but before coming to any conclusion, before making any decision, she needs to have a thorough discussion with him. And she had decided to have it today itself.


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‎Next: Shreya tell Daya about her life.


‎He has too much to ask, too much to know, too much to say. But I am moving this story slowly for now as there are so many aspects that I feel havent been explored by fic writers but I want to express those emotions and situations.


‎Do review and hit like.


‎Love,


‎Ana

Edited by ..oneOone.. - 3 days ago
Posted: 2 days ago
#9

I heard the lines in their voices , it was amazing I have no words.

Please post the next chapter soon

Posted: 2 days ago
#10

It was amazing

Got chills

Eagerly waiting for next chapter

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