FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 6/19/2025 Chapter 44 Part2 - Page 34

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Posted: 20 days ago

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Arey check karo

Recent comment na? 2nd part? Maine kiya hai react.

Pata nahi fir. Notification nahi aga mujhe aur ye new phone hai na to samjhta nahi mujhe uska itna kuch

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Posted: 20 days ago

Originally posted by: manu_ak

Koi time nahi hai. July kab ka start ho gaya pure 8 days ho gaye start ho ke

arey haa

ab toh Dii ka climax wala comment padhke i am dying to read the next chapter

@Jahnu Dii .. update soon .. what climax it is?????

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Posted: 20 days ago

Originally posted by: manu_ak

Pata nahi fir. Notification nahi aga mujhe aur ye new phone hai na to samjhta nahi mujhe uska itna kuch

is it apple ? nahi samajh aa ra matlab apple hi hoga cuz android toh same hote hai

and yes notificationd kya issue chalra IF pe .. mujhe bhi kuch kuch nahi aa rhe h

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Posted: 19 days ago

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

is it apple ? nahi samajh aa ra matlab apple hi hoga cuz android toh same hote hai

and yes notificationd kya issue chalra IF pe .. mujhe bhi kuch kuch nahi aa rhe h

Hmmm Apple hai.
Ohh tabhi mujhe notifications nahi aa rahe

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Posted: 19 days ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

BTW, what was the scene that you were not able to include in the update which would have required another 10 days

>> Its the climax of the tour... I should have waited and posted after finishing it. Usually I have a pre-set finishing junctures to each part. The girls made me sappy with their anniversary posts and I rushed to post without the proper climax for part2... or may its bound to happen this way!

Now I'm stuck on how to blend the climax of this with the beginning of the new one! The things these girls make me do smiley7

Is she blaming us? smiley3 Hello Mam .. its not our fault smiley7

btw after reading this I am intrigued .. what is the climax? update the climax part soon please

Can't wait

When will u update? 18 Dinn ho gaye last update kiye

Please give us a date so we will trouble u accordingly

Edited by nushhkiee - 19 days ago
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Posted: 19 days ago

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Is she blaming us? smiley3 Hello Mam .. its not our fault smiley7

btw after reading this I am intrigued .. what is the climax? update the climax part soon please

Can't wait

When will u update? 18 Dinn ho gaye last update kiye

Please give us a date so we will trouble u accordingly

Ha ye bhi sahi hai give us a date

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Posted: 19 days ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

BTW, what was the scene that you were not able to include in the update which would have required another 10 days

>> Its the climax of the tour... I should have waited and posted after finishing it. Usually I have a pre-set finishing junctures to each part. The girls made me sappy with their anniversary posts and I rushed to post without the proper climax for part2... or may its bound to happen this way!

Now I'm stuck on how to blend the climax of this with the beginning of the new one! The things these girls make me do smiley7

>>Since everyone says its not the rendezvous they had envisioned, I'd love to hear from everyone their imaginations. That'd fill the time while I write next part too

Hmmm…... I would imagine Jalal reciprocating Jodha’s modes of persuasion in kind, with a medley of romantic songs of his own. Tit for tat!smiley2

Seeing as how Jodha was dressed, the Jaguar would have to be parked at a picturesque spot out of town and out of the prying eyes of homo sapiens. Since once again, Jodha’s attire prohibits anything outside the car, everything happens within the confines of the Jaguar.smiley4

Jalal would perform a parody of songs from Caravan ( Piya Tu Ab to Aaja ), Junglee (Yahoo…….Yahoo …Chahe Koi MujheJunglee Kahe) Teesri Manzil ( Aaja Aaja Main Hoon Pyar Tera ) and topping it off with a number from her lucky Don.smiley14

At the end of it, Jalal would give Jodha a bone-crushing hug and brand her with a staunch Jalal-esque kiss.smiley17

>>Glad you didn't find it boring

Trust me, Jahnu. Nothing you write can be boring. You could write a scientific theory in your mesmerising, inimitable style and we would all delightedly soak it up.smiley32

>>such beautiful words strewn together

Thank you.smiley31

>>Thanks to you for picking up PBD and giving it not only your time to read butto pen these heartfelt reviews. Couldn't ask for more

Indeed, we are the very, very fortunate ones to have found this gem of a story (and all your other works as well) written by such a gifted writer like you, Jahnu.smiley31

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Posted: 19 days ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Are you born in Malaysia? Looking forward to travel together with you on this PBD journeysmiley31

Born and bred in Malaysia, Jahnu.smiley1

11 years and counting. It has been a thrilling journey through and through thus far and it goes without saying that whatever lies ahead is bound to live up to our expectations and more.smiley31

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Posted: 19 days ago

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Is she blaming us? smiley3 Hello Mam .. its not our fault smiley7

btw after reading this I am intrigued .. what is the climax? update the climax part soon please

Can't wait

When will u update? 18 Dinn ho gaye last update kiye

Please give us a date so we will trouble u accordingly

smiley36smiley36smiley36

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Posted: 17 days ago

Areeeeeeeeee diiiiiiiiiiiiiii update dedo yaar kitna w8 karaoge smiley19

Pleaseeee update don’t do like this please its 10 tarik today . aap bas tarik pe tarik miss kiye ja rahe ho yaar


dedo update dedo plzzz🙏🙏

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