kuch to hua hai(lrl 2 fan fic)update pg 3

Kuch to hua hai.........(left right left 2 fan fic)

hey!!!ive writen this fan fic the idea just came to my head yesterday while watching the last scene of lrl yesterday...its the first time im ever writing a fanfc.so itmight not be that great....hope ull like whatever ive writen of it.if youll like it ill update it.......

Part 1
Captian Randhawa was gliding past the corridor of k.m.a commando training center."Captian Chauhan inte laparwah kaise ho sakte hai........",he thought furiously clutching the file in his hand even harder than before.He had found more clues proving the fact that Shona Das was eagle."Now every one has to belive me....."he continued thinking increasing his speed of walking.Thankfully Major Sharma was the only person who shared his opinion.Captian Abhimanyu on the other hand didnt want to belive that Shona Das is Eagle ...for her beauty was startling enough to make him get blindfolded not to see the truth........
He reached Major sharmas cabin only to see it locked."Damn it!!!!"...he said banging the door in front of him.His head was throbing.He was just a step close towards reveaoling Eagles identity.......a step close to finish the mission he was on......his frustration was increasing every minute."Sir ",came an orderly from behind Gunny."Sir Major Sharma aur Captian Cahuhan ko town jana pada zaruri kaam ke liye.....issiliye academy ki responsiblity aap par chod di gayi hai",continued the orderly now saluting Captian Randhawa ,walking away leaving a frustrated captian Randhawa in the corridor.
Captian Randhawa was strinding past the dormatories to check weather all the cadets were asleep aparently still in a bad mood.Then suddenly he heard the sound of a few female cadets giggling loudly..........

A very interesting starting. Hmm Gunny in a foul mood listening to the girls gossip... Waiting to know what happens next. Update soon.

thanks a lot.didnt know weather youll will like it.will update soon!!

nice start....plzzz cont it soon

Part2
FIVE MINUTES AGO(IN THE GIRLS DORMITORY)
"Mujhe samajh nahi ata..."said Akriti looking up from the wash basin ,while washing the paint of her face."Yeh supermodel abhi bhi uss joker ki tarafdari kaise karleti hai.usne to iski life ki puri script kharab karke rakh diya..phir bhi...."she continued wiping her face,while Purvi sat in a corner looking pensive."Isiko to pyaar kehte hai.......tum nahi samjhogi Akriti......",Said Vidya looking up from her dairy."Isiko to pyar kehte hai.....",said Akriti imitating Vidya,"Isi pyaar naam ke director ne sabki life ki picture ki vaat laga di hai.....",she said while wiping her face with a towel."Woh bandmaster ne uski wajah se Kma chodna chahta tha,Rummy uski wajah se Purvi,Sameera,Shona Das ke saath Romantic song ka picturization karna chahta tha,uski wajah se hamari puri ki puri shot kharab ,uski vajah se hame Major Sharma se lecture sunna pada aur captian Abhimanyu se make up karwana pada.......",she continued wiping her face harder only to see her face still covered with a light coat of paint."Vaise Captian Abhimanyu ne acchi tarha se Akriti ka makeup kiya.......na??",said Sameera looking up from her novel,making the Vidya and Purvi burst out laughing."Haan bilkul.infact Akriti kisi supermodel se kam nahi lag rahi thi",continued Purvi laughing louder then before,only to get a fiery glare on akritis part after which Sameera changed the topic.........."Lagta hai Captian Abhimanyu ka dil to chura liya shona das ne... hai na.?....",said Sameera looking at her novel."Thank God....",said Vidya under her breath only to be heard by Akriti."Kya kaha Mother India??",said Akriti still trying to remove the paint of her face."Kuch nahi....bas Vidya soch rahi thi ki........hum...........errr"said Vidya looking thouroughly embaressed.".Antakshari kyun nahi khelte.......",blurting the first thing that came in her mouth cursing herself for not keeping her volume lower.........

hey its too good..pls update soon!!

great update. Post the next part soon

Good start with nice humour in your script , Akriti s style . will wait for more . 😃

Hey update soon pls. Waiting for the next part eagerly

thanks for the apriciation....heres the next part hope u like it.....
Part3
the girls dormitory was in a royal mess.....the pillows thrown all over the place, the beds unmade and the girls personal belongings lying all over the place.Vidya was sitting on the bed, getting up and dancing every
time her favorite song was sung, much to the amusement of her roommates specially Akriti.Akriti meanwhile was sitting on the floor hugging a pillow enjoying herself after a long time though she didn't want to admit it.Sameera was sitting by the window, singing along with Vidya.......feeling extremely pleased with her singing.Purvi mean while was sitting in front of her dressing table with a face pack on her face, curlers in her hair, and was humming along with Vidya and Sameera while filing her nails."Dum da dum da dum..........."..., said Sameeera finishing the last line of her song."M se gana gao abhi!!!!Tik tik one.tik tik two......."continued Sameera beginning the countdown for the next song." Mere khwabon main jo ayae........" began Vidya getting up for the umpteenth time to dance on her favorite song this time waltzing with her pillow. Simultaneously the door opened and a red faced captain randhawa stormed in.Exept for Vidya all her three roommates stood in attention feeling extremely stupid to have a senior officer storming in their room when they were at their messiest best."Ake mujhe ched jaye..........'',Vidya continued to sing, too involved in the song to actually realize what was going on."Usse kaho kabhi samne to aye....." she sung simultaneously twirling around only to trip on one of Purvis shoes and fall in Captain Randhawa's arms...........
For the next three minutes the room was in complete silence...each person in the room having a completely diffrent thought going through thier minds.Akriti was thinking about the lecture that Captian Randhawa was going to give them.Sameera was wondering weather captian Randhawa was going to report this to Major Sharma,while purvi was wondering when Captian Randhawa would leave so that she could remove her face pack.
Captian Randhawa and Vidya were staring at each other unknown to who were there around them and where they were.Captian Randhawa was staring at Vidya transfixed......loosing his temper completely within that one second to adorn a softer look on his face.Vidya was looking in Captian Randhawas eyes, a small smile lingering on her face which made her eyes sparkle like a million stars.Captian Randhawa was so transfixed looking at Vidya that he actually forgot the real reason of why he had entered."CRASHHH!!!!!",came the noise of a perfume bottle falling on the floor ,loud enough to make Captian Randhawa come into his senses."Lights off Cadets.....",said a flustered Captian Randhawa slowly walking back to the door of the dormitory."Chalo...........lagta hai hume aaj ka shoot yahi khatam karna padega...chalo..",said Akriti picking her pillow up from the floor simlutaneously hitting Vidya on her arm ,who hadnt moved from where she was standing.Vidya smiling to her self walked to her bed,then turned behind only to find Captian Randhawa looking at her through the window of the dormitory..........