Qarz E Jaan (HUM) #5 - Usama Khan, Nameer Khan, Yumna Zaidi - Page 23

Originally posted by: nightingale1234

Pressu,

Unfortunately I didn't note down the time stamp . I will have to revisit it once again n I really don't wish to watch it again.

I wish they had used better words and it didn't come out the way it seemed. Anyways, I think it's better to not discuss this as it could lead to fanwars n honestly, the show will end tomorrow. So, no point in discussing.

Coming to the show, as per writer herself she prefers open ending, so I think they will just end it with the court case , n I don't think anyone is dying. I hope ammar gets a life time prison as death would be too easy for a ra*ist n a murderer like him.I really hope maheen's case comes out n her murderer gets punished too.

It's fine.
I have a feeling that Ammar will either die or have some sort of life time painful punishment.
I feel that the writer put thought in different characters but at the same time script wise and character wise I feel that some things could have been better.

Originally posted by: nightingale1234

One thing I felt from her interview is that her focus was more on burhan n ammar. But ironically, it was nashwa, bade abbu, bisma n barkhat who carried this show all along. No wonder, saqib took two years to finalize this script. I think all credits should go to him for understanding the minute details n making changes accordingly.

I feel that she gave arcs to every character. She mentioned that she did not want to show all the characters' stories at the same time. First the focus was on Nashwa-Burhan, then Bisma-Asim then Nashwa-Amaar. Even Fariyal's character. Every character offered something to the story.

I watched the writer's both the interviews, most of the part. After listening to her I feel that she put thought into writing characters.

For Bisma, she told that her in-laws put a condition before her that if she wants to leave then she has to give Nashwa to them. Then Bisma thought and decided to stay at her in-laws place so that Nashwa gets to grow up in her own place.
And regarding Bakhtiyar and Bisma's dynamics, she wanted to show that when a girl who becomes widow at an early age and has to live at her in-laws place with her jet/devar then be aware that she might be facing difficulties there.
And regarding Burhan, she thought that if her father had a romantic side it would be like Burhan's and also she based him on Qaid-e-Azam and the lawyers she met in real life.
And regarding Faryal and mother, she wanted to show good cousins or something like that.
And for Ammar, she might have based him on her nephews or the younger generation who are choosing wrong paths.
And for Nashwa, she wanted to show a real life girl who thinks of doing things and making them right and realizing that she can't do that. She makes mistakes and gets up and makes mistakes and gets up.
I understand the process but regarding Ammar and Nashwa I felt that some more could have been explored.

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Originally posted by: nightingale1234

One thing I felt from her interview is that her focus was more on burhan n ammar. But ironically, it was nashwa, bade abbu, bisma n barkhat who carried this show all along. No wonder, saqib took two years to finalize this script. I think all credits should go to him for understanding the minute details n making changes accordingly.

Saqib mentioned in the caption that I will upload the original script I read in 2022 and the one I got fixed in 2024. It sounds like he who got rid of a lot of problematic things from the original version

Saqib Khan has uploaded that script-to-scene VM, and there’s a scene where:

Nashwa says to Burhan: ‘Mein nahi chahti humarey agley naslon mein koi aur Bisma ya Nashwa ka nuqsan ho jaaye.’

There are notes in the script that say: ‘Yeh sun kar Burhan ke ankhon mein aansu aa jaatey hain.’ Meanwhile, if you look at Usama’s expression before and after that line, it’s exactly the same. Usama is like 😐

I m really sad how just before the last episodes

There is unnecessary hatred towards the writer and yumna is too good for pak drama industry chants and she should quit chants

What the hell man

Originally posted by: blahblah131

Saqib Khan has uploaded that script-to-scene VM, and there’s a scene where:

Nashwa says to Burhan: ‘Mein nahi chahti humarey agley naslon mein koi aur Bisma ya Nashwa ka nuqsan ho jaaye.’

There are notes in the script that say: ‘Yeh sun kar Burhan ke ankhon mein aansu aa jaatey hain.’ Meanwhile, if you look at Usama’s expression before and after that line, it’s exactly the same. Usama is like 😐

Lmfao 🤣. Really? Where did he upload the script? I m curious to read the original book. I wanna understand the thought process of this writer n what was she smoking while justifying ra*ist , murderer n how does she feel that people would cry for him at the end?

Originally posted by: nightingale1234

Lmfao 🤣. Really? Where did he upload the script? I m curious to read the original book. I wanna understand the thought process of this writer n what was she smoking while justifying ra*ist , murderer n how does she feel that people would cry for him at the end?

It is on his IG, he has uploaded one screen with the script side by side, It is difficult to miss Usama's bland acting in that scene when the line on how he is supposed to act is staring right at you.

Now, I want Saqib to upload the second car scene where Nashwa rejects him, Usama had the same expression before and after the rejection. I want to know what Burhan was actually feeling

https://www.instagram.com/p/DIlcZBroY-M/

Originally posted by: nightingale1234

Lmfao 🤣. Really? Where did he upload the script? I m curious to read the original book. I wanna understand the thought process of this writer n what was she smoking while justifying ra*ist , murderer n how does she feel that people would cry for him at the end?

And also if we see , most of the writers have the explanation sort of thing that this exists in real life. I feel when we watch a drama we want some thing to change. For relating, it's fine that the characters are relatable but it is a drama and we want to see something different happening and it is not at the end of the drama.

Originally posted by: pressu

And also if we see , most of the writers have the explanation sort of thing that this exists in real life. I feel when we watch a drama we want some thing to change. For relating, it's fine that the characters are relatable but it is a drama and we want to see something different happening and it is not at the end of the drama.

I am ok with realism, but this show is not that. Some things do not add up.

- Nashwa's dialogues about fixing a rapist. Nashwa acting soft towards Ammar, sis he is a rapist. Even if he was not a rapist then you should still be repulsed by him, as this was a forced marriage and you like Burhan, remember ya apney soliloquy bhool gaiey ap

- Nashwa being rude towards Burhan as if she never loved him. The writer forgot what she wrote in the middle part of the show.

- Nashwa's friend Sana acting cool during the Rukhsati, like she wasn't friends with Maheen, and informed Nashwa about Ammar rape to Nashwa