Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love) Veer Zara SS

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love)Part 1

Thank you my dearest friend Sydell for the beautiful cover page.



I dedicate this SS to mili_ai who wants me to write a story on AbhEsha.

Some college students were on picnic.

Zara and the gang were enjoying on the beach.

Her friend Madhu asked her:Zara,can I ask you something?We all have boyfriends.Why you don't have a boyfriend?

Zara:Because I don't want to have a name sake boyfriend.I want a man who has angelic qualities...who is handsome like an Angel.

Madhu giggled.

Madhu:How will you get such a nice guy in this century?

Zara:I believe that such rare guys too exist in this world.

Madhu just smiled.

Suddenly the waves brought something to Zara's feet.She looked at it as it touched her feet.She smiled as it was a wet wooden sculpture which looked beautiful.

Zara took it in her hand.

Madhu asked her:Why are you taking it Zara?This must be someone else's.

Zara:But it is abandoned by someone.How can they throw such a beautiful sculpture here?I can't ignore such a beautiful piece.

Madhu:So you are going to take it home?

Zara:Yes.

Madhu:You are mad.

Zara just smiled.

Zara thought:I don't know why I feel connected to this sculpture.



Zara went back home after the picnic.

She caressed the sculpture.Suddenly she noticed that it's back has an opening which has been closed.She opened it out of curiosity.Suddenly smoke came out of it.She was shocked.Slowly slowly the smoke disappeared and a handsome boy appeared.He was smiling at her.She was numb.

He:Hey!

She got scared.Her lips shivered:Who are you?Are you a thief?How did you enter my room?Get out.I will scream.

He:Please don't scream.I am not a thief.You only brought me here.

Zara:How did I bring you here?What nonsense are you saying?

He:I was inside the sculpture.You only released me by opening it.

Zara was shocked:What?Are you a ghost?Did I release a spirit unknowingly like we see in films?

He:Yes.But I am not a ghost like you think.I am an Angel.My name is Veer.

Zara started laughing.

Zara:You are an Angel?Are you kidding?

Veer:I am saying the truth.I am an Angel who came to visit earth.But an evil magician trapped me inside this sculpture and threw it in the sea saves.Because I saved the kids whose lives he was going to sacrifice for his devil.

Zara was shocked.

Zara:I can't believe it.It's too filmy.

Veer:Please believe me.I am an Angel.

Zara:Then prove it.

Veer:Okay.

He extended his hand towards her.Suddenly her dress changed.Her hair style got changed.

Zara was surprised.But she did not express it.

Zara:Still I cannot believe that you are an Angel.What if you are a magician?Do something else.

Suddenly the room got into a garden which was full of flowers.Zara got excited.

Zara looked at Veer:So you are really an Angel.

Veer nodded with a smile.

Zara:What else can you do?

Veer turned into a parrot.

Zara was surprised.

Zara:Veer,you take your normal form now.I believe you now.

Veer took his original form.

They both smiled at each other.

Veer:By the way what's the name of my saviour?

Zara replied with a smile:Zara.

He smiled.

Zara:Angel Veer..what's your plan?

Veer:I could not enjoy on the earth because of that evil magician.I want to stay on earth for some more days.

Zara:You stay in my house.

Veer:But will your family agree?

Zara:No way.But you take a pet dog's form.As my pet dog you can stay in my room itself.

Veer:That's a good idea.

She smiled.

Veer turned into a dog and started staying in Zara's room.



Zara was sleeping on the bed.A cockroach walked over her.Veer sat on her bed and removed the cockroach from her body.Suddenly Zara opened her eyes and got frightened seeing Veer on her bed.

Zara:What are you doing in my bed?Stay away from me.

Veer:Don't get scared Zara.I am an Angel.We Angels do not misbehave with a girl.I sat here to remove the cockroach which ran over you.

He showed the cockroach in his hand.Zara was relieved.

Zara:I am sorry and thank you for saving me from this creature.

Veer smiled.

Veer released the cockroach from his hand and it crawled away.

Zara:Why did you let it go?

Veer:Poor creature should not be harmed.We angels cannot hurt anyone.

Zara smiled.




Zara's mother Roshni asked her:What is this obsession for a dog Zara?Why is this dog always in your room?

Zara:Mom,you know that I love dogs since childhood.

Roshni:Yes.But no other dog stayed with you in your room always.

Zara:Because I love this dog the most.I have a special affection towards this dog.

Roshni:Madness!

Roshni walked out.Zara smiled.

Zara closed the door.The dog turned into Veer.

Veer:You told your mother that you have a special affection towards me.Is it only for the dog or for me also?

Zara blushed:Both.

They shared a sweet eye lock.

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Zara believes in true love so she will wait for the right person to come into her life.

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Posted: 5 months ago
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What? She got a genie out of the sculpture? With smoke and everything too. And good looking.

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Posted: 5 months ago
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She wanted someone angelic, she got an actual angel. But he will have to leave eventually.

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Posted: 5 months ago
#5

Oh I Love This Cute Story

I Watched Hero Also

Veer Is An Angel

Glad Zara Kept Him As Her Pet Dog

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Beautifully penned dear

Zara is really cute 🥰

Just loved it

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Nice and sweet fantasy story....waiting for some twistssmiley36

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Posted: 5 months ago
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thanks for the pm


Part 1

Wonderful update... greatly written

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Posted: 5 months ago
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My wish is the same as Zara. Zara finding a sculpture is so mysterious. Wish you would have shown the sculpture. Nice to see Yesha. Veer getting released from sculpture was such a nice scene. Him doing magic was lovely. Veer is so caring that he can't even think of hurting a cockroach. Here Zara's mother is Roshni who was Dua in Rabb se, surprising how you showed her Roshni and not Dua, it must be Aman opposite Roshni. Perfect pics, waiting for next

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Coderlady

Silverbell

Heavenlybliss

Salley

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khwaishfan

Thank u very much for the lovely comments



Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love)Part 2

When Zara got up from the bed her neck got sprained.

Zara:Ahh...my neck is paining.

Veer:Don't worry.I will erase your pain.

Veer caressed her neck romantically.Zara felt goosebumps as he touched her neck.

Her pain too vanished.

Veer:How do you feel now?

Zara:You are an Angel who removed my pain.Now I feel fine.

He smiled.




Zara went out with her pet dog.After stepping out of the house the dog turned into Veer.They smiled at each other.

Zara:Are you enjoying your stay on the earth?

Veer held her hand looking at her deeply:Very much with you.

She blushed.

Zara:I will take you somewhere which is there only on earth.To the dance pub.It is not there in the land of angels for sure.

Veer:I am excited now.

Zara smiled.

Zara noticed the dark sky.

Zara:Guess it's going to rain.I forgot to take the umbrella.What to do?

Veer smiled.Suddenly an umbrella appeared in his hand and he held it above her.She pulled him under the umbrella.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

It started raining.They broke the eye lock and smiled.

Suddenly Zara threw away the umbrella.

Veer:Zara...why did you throw the umbrella?

Zara:Let's dance in this beautiful rain.

Veer smiled happily.

They started dancing together romantically in the rain.

Chehre mein tere
Khud ko main dhoondhun
Aankhon ke darmiyaan
Tu ab hai iss tarah
Khwabon ko bhi jagah na mile

Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani
Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhoondhe
Yeh milne ki khwahish
Yeh khwahish puraani
Ho poori tujhi se
Meri yeh kahaani

Kabhi tujhme utrun
Toh saanson se guzrun
Toh aaye dil ko raahat

Main hoon bethikana
Panaah mujhko paana
Hai tujhme, de ijazat

Na koi darmiyaan
Hum dono hai yahan
Phir kyun hai tu bata
Faasley…


Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani
Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhoondhe
Yeh milne ki khwahish
Yeh khwahish puraani
Ho poori tujhi se
Meri yeh kahaani

Na na...

Parindon ki tarah
yeh dil hai safar mein
Tu mila de zindagi se

Bas itni ilteja
Tu aake ik dafa
Jo dil ne na kahaa
Jaan le…

Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani
Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhoondhe
Yeh milne ki khwahish
Yeh khwahish purani
Ho poori tujhi se
Meri yeh kahaani(Half girlfriend).



They went to the pub.Veer got excited seeing the disco lights and the dance atmosphere.

Zara held his hand and started dancing.

Veer enjoyed dancing with Zara.

Aankhon ke panno pe
Maine likha tha sau dafa
Lafzon mein jo ishq tha
Hua woh honton se bayaan
Khud se naraz hun
Kyun be-awaaz hun
Meri khamoshiyan hain saza

Dil hai yeh sochta
Phir bhi nahi pataa
Kis haq se kahun pata

Ke main hoon hero tera
Ke main hoon hero tera
Ke main hoon hero tera
Ke main hoon hero tera..

Main hoon hero hero tera

Raahon mein bhi har kadam
Main tere saath chala
Hathon mein thhe
Yeh haath magar
Phir bhi raha faasla
Seene mein hai chupe
Ehsaas pyar ke
Bin kahe tu sun le zara

Dil hai yeh soch tha
Phir bhi nahi pataa
Kis haq se kahun pataa

Ki main hoon hero tera..(4x)

Teri wajah se hai milli
Jeene ki sab khwahishein
Paa loon tere
Dil mein jagah
Hai yeh meri koshishein
Main bas tera banu
Bin tere na rahun
Maine toh maangi hai yeh duaa

Dil hai yeh sochta
Phir bhi nahi pata
Kis haq se kahun pata

Ke main hoon hero tera
Ke main hoon hero tera
Ke main hoon hero tera
Ke mein hoon hero tera.(Hero).

Veer was surprised to see their room beautifully decorated with lit candles.

Veer looked at Zara who was looking at her romantically.

Zara:I used to tell everyone that I will fall in love only if I find a person who has Angelic qualities.Finally I found an Angel himself for me.I fell in love with you Veer.

Veer became upset and emotional.


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